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Offline Atolm-Rising

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Something I haven't done too much of....
« on: April 17, 2008, 07:36:25 pm »
 Jaffa Bra'Tak-class starship:
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #1 on: April 17, 2008, 09:00:19 pm »
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2008, 09:51:38 pm »
Cool design. Has nice intimidation factor!
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #3 on: April 17, 2008, 10:39:42 pm »
the neck thing seems a bit over the top. Yea you got anubis's fanboyish flowering superweapon and such things, and the Ori and Hataks have alot of open space in them but it just seems like the neck has pushed it too far just from a logical shipbuilding perspective, much like Tom Paris's fins on the flyer. Unessecary extras. Maybe something about half the size would make it look like a more likely ship design for the SG universe...
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2008, 09:57:07 am »
well how about making the neck shorter? The idea of it looking like a zat is wierd, maybe more like a jaffa "head" sucha s a horse gaurd or snake but keep the top even with the "nacelles" in the rear?
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2008, 10:21:44 am »
Quote from: Starforce2 on April 18, 2008, 09:57:07 am
well how about making the neck shorter? The idea of it looking like a zat is wierd, maybe more like a jaffa "head" sucha s a horse gaurd or snake but keep the top even with the "nacelles" in the rear?


I don't know, I like it as it is personally.. gives it a more swan-like appearance.  And if you've ever seen pictures of Ancient Egyptian boats, they tended to have a huge bow and prow going down into a smaller hull.. good example is here:


If he just goes with the one raised head, this'd still be quite in keeping with that idea.. so I wouldn't make it much shorter.  YMMV though..
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2008, 05:58:28 pm »
It looks like a chariot to me... either way i say leave it, its fine just the way it is.
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2008, 06:41:10 pm »
lol. I don't mind. I can always go bother Raven... :angel:
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2008, 11:26:09 pm »
Totaly sweet  :thumbsup: Whats the size of it ? This a big ship or one small enough to land ?
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #9 on: April 19, 2008, 02:28:23 pm »
I like it, love SG.. Any chance of more views?
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #10 on: April 20, 2008, 06:57:49 pm »
probably not, sorry mate
I am however working on a few other ideas for SG1
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #11 on: April 21, 2008, 11:38:02 am »
Awsome news, really looking forward to what you come up with
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Re: Something I haven't done too much of....
« Reply #12 on: April 22, 2008, 10:56:32 pm »
Quote from: Starforce2 on April 18, 2008, 06:41:10 pm
lol. I don't mind. I can always go bother Raven... :angel:

Oh god...(quickly hides the E-7 model and sneaks out the back  :P )

I personally think this design is fantastic, but thats not anything out of the ordinary for Atolm's talent and imagination.
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