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Re: Dirt
« Reply #20 on: February 09, 2008, 10:32:29 pm »
Thank you much. Hopefully the ending does not fall short of expectations. I remain doubtful whenever it takes me a full year to finish a story. Too many starts and stops, too many frames of mind behind the writing of one tale.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #21 on: February 12, 2008, 10:19:04 am »
Really cool story. I agree with Rommie in enjoying seeing a "warrior only" crew deal with a distinctly civilian-style mission without Larry's Enlightened/Renaissance Klingon attitudes.  ;D (Didn't stop me really enjoying his own farming mission, though.)

Love this line:
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He wondered if Starfleet briefings followed this retinue… With each officer hanging on the science specialist’s every word…
Though I don't think you meant to use retinue: "a group of retainers or attendants". Doesn't seem to quite fit. I almost know the word I'm thinking you mean, it's another 're...' word but I can't bring it into my frontal lobes. Maybe 'template', 'pattern', or such would do in the mean time

Minor spelling mistakes: "Repercussions" and again "capital".

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #22 on: February 12, 2008, 01:18:59 pm »

Love this line:
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He wondered if Starfleet briefings followed this retinue… With each officer hanging on the science specialist’s every word…
Though I don't think you meant to use retinue: "a group of retainers or attendants". Doesn't seem to quite fit. I almost know the word I'm thinking you mean, it's another 're...' word but I can't bring it into my frontal lobes. Maybe 'template', 'pattern', or such would do in the mean time



Routine, maybe? Ritual? Repertoire (long shot)? The Guv's wonderful story again falling victim to his not so nice auto corrections subroutine? That there is most likely the case, IMHO.  When reading the Guv's work, I take it on faith that he knows what he meant. Its enough for me ;)

Guv- Don't be so hard on yourself with the "one year to write this" stuff. So it took you some time. So what? Sometimes, quality takes time. In this case, it took a year or so. Big deal. It'll work itself out in the end, and hopefully we'll see your one eyed monster take up a hoe and sow some seeds (I might need to reword that later... :P)

I really do enjoy reading your works. Grimmy already said, and with much different words, what I would have said, but it is true.  :notworthy: :notworthy: This isn't a warrior story in the typical sense. But, in typical Klingon fashion, they are battling the elements, some dead worms, and time. While it may not be as action packed as the Pang decimating and desecrating the last of the Ya'Weenies, they're still locked in battle, and the Empire is at stake if they fail. Pretty good, if you ask me.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #23 on: February 12, 2008, 07:20:37 pm »
Replaced retinue with itinerary. Not sure what exact word I was trying for at the time. As Andy said...some re-word.

As to spelling mistakes...I need not worry. I have Andy.

Glad the unusual mission is apprieciated. The warrior is not well suited to such a task, and Dath'mar thinks almost only in military terms. Thus the solution he brings about.

I think the Enlightened/Renaissance discription is among the best for Larry's Klingon bunch. The ideals of Commander La'ra certainly affect his crew and thus they are very much different from Klingons seen in any film/series. This is why his tales stand out so well.

Dath'mar is in some ways very much the typical Klingon you see in Trek, but I work very hard to take all the stereotypical failings of Trek Klinks out of his make up. He has flaws, but not because he's an idiot brought in to be the story's bad guy. He may be someone's badguy, but he believes he's the good guy so long as he carries out the will of the Empire.

Of course, there are some things even Dath'mar won't do...

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #24 on: February 12, 2008, 07:25:12 pm »
Here's y'all some more.

CH. 5





Two briefings in one day. The main briefing room had gone from being unused to being quite popular. This minor piece of irony was not lost on Captain Dath’mar as he seated himself at the far head of the table, furthest from the door.  At his left sat Kurvis, who still looked bored with this mission and ready for more manly pursuit. To his right, before the computer access terminal was Commander I’rell.

The science officer was positively beaming. She evidently found delight in research, or at the very least found pleasure in making use of the olds ship’s extensive memory banks. One of the few things emulated of the Federation’s Starfleet was their propensity to record every bit of trivial detail and keep it in their computers. One never knew when the fate of an entire battlecruiser might rely on knowledge of the atomic weight of a neutron or some other blasted bit of irrelevant information.

Dath’mar cast his one eye over his officers and let it come to rest on his science chief.

“You called us here.” He told her, his voice a tired sounding drone. “Speak.”

I’rell nodded deeply and keyed on the computer screen. Having learned from her previous attempts with this ancient interface, the lieutenant commander had placed it on standby so she wouldn’t have to delay the briefing while she waited for the machine to warm up. “I have researched the worlds of the Empire which possess rich veins of sodium nitrate, suitable to our needs.”

The ship’s surgeon glanced up from his own access monitor to question her. This was the first mission briefing he’d attended on this ship during Dath’mar’s command. It was likely that he possessed little information about their current assignment. “Sodium nitrate. Is that not a commonly found on nearly every world?”

“Yes, Surgeon.” I’rell answered. She shot at him a short eye that told of her displeasure at his interruption. The fat man did little more than shrug at the dark look on her face. “But not in such quantities that it can be mined and shipped to other worlds. Worlds with such an abundance are rare. At least in our Quadrant. I have found two which are within range to meet our mission parameters.”

This was what Dath’mar wanted to hear.

“The first?”

“Ordella II. A Class N world. Minor life forms, limited vegetation. The House of Tor maintains a small prospecting outpost there, marking tracts for future mining. Some mining has already begun there, though since the destruction of Praxis, little has been accomplished, as the minerals there are not used in starship construction. The prospecting teams located a rich vein of sodium nitrate two years ago and marked it for extraction.”

The cruiser captain sat back in his cheep chair and studied I’rell as she paused.

“I take it there is a reason we won’t be getting our fertilizer from this world.”

The science officer nodded again, pressing a key on her control pad to activate a wall mounted viewer. The red tinted monitor displayed every asset the planet possessed. There was little there. Not even an Imperial escort ship was maintained in orbit. Only a few disruptor cannon pointed to space provided defense for the worthless lump of rock. Dath’mar scowled as he read over the listed progress of the teams living there. I’rell looked at them all and settled again on her CO. “If we want any nitrate from this world, we will have to dig it out ourselves. Sodium nitrate is not needed in battlecruiser construction, and therefor, like every other mineral on this planet, has not been mined. No attempt whatsoever has been made to extract more than a sample of anything on Ordella.”

Kurvis growled at the setback.

“Can we not blast our own mining shaft and beam out the mineral?”

“Even at their lowest settings, our weaponry would vaporize most of the material in question, and spread the rest to the four winds. Whatever was left would be irradiated.” I’rell answered. She was indeed thorough.

Dath’mar found himself looking searchingly at his science officer.

“You mentioned a second world.”

“Yes.” The commander replied simply. She made an adjustment on her control panel and another planet became pictured on the wall viewer. “Chetell III.”

Kurvis pounded the table with a gloved fist. Dath’mar remained silent but mentally echoed the reaction of his First Officer. Kurvis thundered as he pointed in accusation at the revolving green world.

“Chetell III is in Gorn space!”

Dath’mar held up his own leather clad hand to silence the chorus of groans and complaints rounding the table. He looked over to his science officer, glaring through bored-looking miasma as he studied her. “Do you expect us to fly in there and ask nicely for their dirt?”

“No, my lord.” I’rell answered, lowering her eyes in obeisance. Dath’mar continued to look her over. She did not avert her eyes out of fear, but embarrassment at her comrades’ reactions. The captain looked back to the planet on the viewer.

“Can we not open negotiations with the Gorn?” Asked the surgeon. “Surely they’d sell fertilizer.”

Kurvis practically snarled at the doctor.

“Should we go crawling to the lizards on our knees, asking for dirt for our farms?” The First Officer was normally so much more reserved. Dath’mar found it telling that his exec’s patience did not extend to missions such as this. He was somewhat young for his advanced rank.

“I do not suggest begging!” Retorted the doctor. “There is a such a thing as trading!”

Hekk got in on the loud bickering as Dath’mar watched it blossom before him. He found their near-yelling oddly soothing… “And what might the Gorn accept of us? We have approached them, years in the past. They would take nothing for their possessions and chased away our trade ships under fire! They are more territorial, even than us! They will not barter with us.”

Kurvis showed a grin full of sharp fangs.

“Then we will take it by force!”

The captain held up another staying hand to quiet his officers. He looked to I’rell.

“But acquiring our dirt isn’t the only problem, is it, Science Officer?”

I’rell looked up from her screens.

“No, my lord. The main problem is in transporting it. The Pang has space for four hundred and seventy metric tons of ore. IF…we empty our bay of our supplies. The Galt colony requires a minimum of three thousand metric tons of sodium nitrate to yield enough crop to meet the lowest requirements demanded of them.”

This news sounded among them as a death knell for their hopes. The mission may not have been one made for glory, but no warrior could stomach failing even a task such as this. Dath’mar looked to Hekk. The engineer saw the unvoiced question and shook his head. No more cargo could be crammed aboard this ship. 470 metric tons was all a D-7 was built to carry. What they needed was a cargo ship.

“Are there any cargo vessels in the area we can commandeer?” He asked.

It was Kurvis who replied, having most of the sector’s strategic information memorized.

“Goesa’vaina has several cargo ships. But they are all of low warp capabilities. They would just be getting to Chetell when the farmers needed their fertilizer. We would be weeks late.”

Dath’mar glanced again to Hekk.

“Can we tow a cargo ship any faster with three thousand metric tons of ore?”

“No. And our structure couldn’t take it even if we tried.” Was the engineer’s reply.

The new chief gunner also added her voice.

“Even if we could tow a cargo ship to Chetell with us, the Gorn would chew it to pieces.”

Dath’mar nodded. The young woman would make a fine officer. No, cargo ships were out of the question. Pang must do this herself, even if she only had a fraction of the necessary space. He would find a way to accomplish this task. He looked again to his right, to I’rell.

“Tactical information on Chetell.”

“One frigate on constant patrol in and around the system. The planet serves as a necessary breeding grounds for stock animals which they feed on. They farm plants for those animals to eat. No ground defenses have ever been observed, but as the planet has no strategic value, the Empire has not expended many resources looking. We would have to make our own scans for more current and useful intelligence.”

The captain nodded to her. The fat surgeon was jostling about as though he was about to speak. Dath’mar looked his way. “Should we not at least speak with the Gorn? Perhaps they will sell us what we need. Risking the crew of this cruiser in an unworthy battle, to claim a load of dirt is…dishonorable.”

Dath’mar cracked the side of his face open with a smirk.

“I doubt any attempt at contacting the reclusive Gorn would yield much fruit. They would ignore our hails as they often have. Should they be curious enough to listen to our broadcasts, they will assuredly turn us down as any destabilizing factor in our Empire makes their own Hegemony that much safer.” The captain looked again to the small green planet on the viewer before them. The surgeon clenched his lips shut in silent anger. “Also…any hail would only serve to warn them that we are coming. We cannot get our dirt from an Imperial world, so we must take it from the Gorn. The First Officer and Science Officer will go to the main observation chamber and direct our tactical sensors to Chetell III to gain all strategic knowledge we need for this attempt. Engineer Hekk will join me on the bridge. All other officers will resume their duties. Stations!”

As the other officers stood and began to slowly file out the main exit into the corridor beyond, Dath’mar halted I’rell with a look. She was shutting down the aged science computer and her lips parted a bit when he looked at her. He slowly stood from his small chair and looked down from his towering height over her. “Very good, science officer.”

Other scientists might not have included information on worlds outside the Empire in their briefings. Their captains would have to venture the idea on their own and then made the science officer scramble to get him the intel he needed. I’rell had practically suggested the raid. Dath’mar admired skill.

“Thank you, sir.” She said back. She held his gaze a second longer, then made to leave behind the First Officer.

Captain Dath’mar repaired to the bridge.




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Re: Dirt
« Reply #25 on: February 12, 2008, 07:29:39 pm »
CH. 5 [part 2]

“Course change, Captain?”

Dath’mar looked up as his navigations chief, Lieutenant Ger’shall, spoke out from the pilot stations. Ger’shall had been present at the briefing and followed him back to the bridge. From the general conversation during the briefing, she’d taken her captain to mean that they were now going to Chetell.

“No. Maintain course for Galt.”

Ger’shall seemed momentarily confused, but nodded back and bent to her astrogation panels. The helmsman looked from her to the captain, but said nothing. Dath’mar crossed the expanse of the bridge deck and leaned close to his chief engineer. Hekk looked back up to him from the master control position.

“Draw up Pang’s schematics.” He told the chief.

Hekk nodded, his long, flowing grey locks bobbling with the motion.

An image of the Pang’s exterior appeared on his primary monitor. Hekk opened the basic deck outlines and displayed them to the captain. Dath’mar studied the cargo section on Engineering Hull Level Nine. “These partition bulkheads are collapsible, yes?”

“Yes, Captain.”

“Do we gain any space in deleting them?”

Hekk’s brows bobbled as he input the storage parameters into the computer.

“About one metric ton.”

The captain growled beneath his breath. He reached down and began to scroll through other red lit deck plans. He paused on Level Seven. “What of filling the Sparring Room, Fitness Chamber, and the Weapons Proficiency Room?”

Now Hekk looked up to his commander as though the man had lost his mind.

“You know how long it would take to clean out all the dust from our equipment were we to bring nitrates above the cargo deck?”

Dath’mar chuckled gruffly, still staring at the deck plans, arms crossed.

“We’ll have a planet full of grateful farmers to help us sweep. Run the figures.”

Hekk returned his hands to the glowing keys. Again he shook his head.

“That gives us roughly nine hundred twenty metric tons of space. Still insufficient.”

Dath’mar tapped another key, bringing up Deck Eight. Hekk’s face blanched. Would the captain fill the entire ship up with dirt? “The assault transporter section and the staging area. Add those figures.”

Hekk felt like weeping. Those transporters would take weeks to get running right again. It was hard to keep the old things running as it was…

“One thousand, six hundred metric tons.”

Another key, another schematic. Hekk moaned.

“Deck Five, Qas Dev’ Quarters.”

“Where will our marines sleep?!”

“On Galt. Add the figures!”

Hekk tapped the math into the computer and read the results. Perhaps when the captain saw they could not possibly do this, he’d stop thinking on filling the ship with foul minerals. “Two thousand, four hundred and fifty metric tons.”

This was close to the three thousand needed by the farmers. But three thousand had been a minimum figure… Dath’mar pressed another key. “Science labs.”

“Science labs!”

“You feel like running any extra experiments today?”

Hekk returned to plying the control panel. Exasperation filled his voice. “No, Captain.” Another figure appeared on the screen in sharp Klingon numericals. “Two thousand, six hundred and eighty tons.”

Shaking his own head, Dath’mar called up one final deck outline.

“Hanger Deck.”

“Three thousand, four hundred tons.”

The captain at last seemed satisfied. He turned away from the engineering station, casting his final instructions over his shoulder. “Make the final preparations and do what you can to prevent unnecessary equipment damage. And bring me accurate figures on how long sight to sight transport of the ore will take using all transporters under cloak.”

Hekk turned his seat fully about to look upon his CO in amazement. The captain would go to every length to ensure this mission’s success. He found an incredulous grin creeping onto his face. “That will take a great amount of power. We’ll be sitting targ for the Gorn, cloaked or not.”

“Just bring me the figures.” Dath’mar cast back to the engineer as he settled lazily into the command chair. His single eye burned a hole into the image of stars shooting across his main viewer. The end of this ordeal could not come soon enough.
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The mess hall on Deck Six was full of the ship’s hands. The division between officers and enlisted was not so defined on most of the Empire’s cruisers. Pang was no exception, and her many long, oaken tables were packed with warriors of various rank and posting. The ship’s galleys had been ordered to turn out a great meal for her crew. In part, it was celebration for a long and successful deployment in enemy space. It was also, many said, in consolation for the mission they were currently embarked on.

The majority of the crew seemed to care little for the reason. The food was heaped upon the wooden planks and the barrels of bloodwine continued to roll out of the ship’s stores to lubricate their mood. The general consensus among the ship’s compliment was that their enigmatic, vengeful captain set a good table and brought them much glory.

The noise level in the great hall was unequalled when the third shift, including most of the medical staff, arrived. Songs drifted amid the sounds of loud conversation. The smell of meat, both roasted and raw, filled the musky air and gave the entire room a ravenous humor. The newly arriving off-shift quickly set about securing themselves utensils, platters, tankards and seats amid the great throng packed into the room. There abounded so much fresh meat that the crew estimated at least half of the live targs on board must have met the butcher’s blade.

The crew was entirely festive.

Save for one, brooding man freshly relieved of his shift on the bridge.

Lieutenant Second Motek allowed his tall bulk to crash down on the back-less bench seat of one of the outlying tables of reveling warriors and threw his wooden plate out before him in sullen disgust. His face was dark with anger and he joined in none of the conversation or song that passed about the mess. But no where in this room could he escape his fellow crew, and he did not feel like carting his meal conspicuously down the corridors to his own cabin to eat. He also did not feel like enduring further questioning from his bunkmate, Hodis.

For some minutes, Motek allowed himself to believe he might actually get to spend his time eating without words. The arrival of the ship’s surgeon altered that faulty perception. The great oaf bulled his way amid lower ranking crew to make himself a place at Motek’s table and plopped down a great platter rounded over with food. The fat doctor’s hunger apparently knew no bounds. He had piled on generous helpings of targ flank, heart of targ, ipious claw, keldad squid and hammer crab. All of this was set to motion by the writhing mass of gagh that had been thrown atop all of the rest. With great glee in his eyes, the surgeon speared a hunk of bloody, gravy coated targ with his prong-fork and held it up before his chubby cheeks. The meat was quickly shoveled in with one mighty motion and then chewed with great gusto and much sloppy, wet smacking. Blood and grease ran unchecked, and likely unnoticed down the fat doctor’s hairless chin and into his long-handled mustache. Motek had seen some men with manners approaching the Surgeon’s, but thankfully he’d seen few of them. The fat man looked up to his fellow shipmates.

“Our captain certainly sets a fine table!”

Motek scoffed, looking away. It’d been a mistake. Now the doctor had noticed him.

“You do not think so, Motek? Don’t tell me your pride still aches over your little wound.” There was slight mockery in the way the Surgeon looked across the table to the now junior weapons officer. The lieutenant glared back with heated passion.

“Our captain is an inglorious coward.” He growled back. Several of those nearest him looked upon him warily. There was no known Imperial Security presence here aboard the Pang, but then, one never knew. Such statements and opinions in a public venue could be dangerous. Motek went on, unafraid. “He took advantage of a man who was seated and not expecting an attack.”

“You were dangerously insubordinate in a combat environment!” The Surgeon thundered back, his blood rising. He reached up with the back of a gloved hand to wipe targ drizzle from his round, knobby chin. “I’ve served on cruisers where the captain would have simply shot you at your first outburst.”

“He should have!” Motek returned. “A warrior would have responded to my threat at the time it was made, not wait for my guard to be down!”

There was a silence growing amid those closest to the weapons officer. It went unnoticed by Motek. He continued to stare down the doctor. The Surgeon could not be set back or put off.

“A lesser man might have endangered his ship that way. Dath’mar did not!”

“There was no danger from that ship. It was defenseless prey.”

The chubby man’s eyes narrowed.

“Short lived is the fool that underestimates his prey.”

Motek cocked his head at the intolerable chief medic.

“You seem very full of love for our gallant captain, Surgeon. I wonder how many here would join you in your sentiment should they learn why we are enjoying such a repast today.” Only now did the gunner pause to take in the view of all those about him that were listening. He had the attention of all those within a table’s length of him. Still others were closing in, platters in hand. Most of the hall still busied itself with food and song. Motek leered at all those he saw looking back. “He’s clearing room. He is going to have to make up enough space aboard ship to fill her with dirt. Our storage sections, cargo bays, practice rooms, equipment sections and quarters… He’s going to fill them all to capacity with fertilizer!”

“sh*t?” Asked a nearby Bekk. The Surgeon shot the boy a glance.

“Sodium nitrate. Little more than coarse salt.”

“Whatever!” The irate gunner spat. “It does not belong outside the cargo bay! Our captain offers his ship to assist foolish farmers who are letting their crops die so he can alleviate himself of further combat against his enemy!”

The Surgeon’s eyes narrowed darkly.

“Our commanding officer has sought out more combat than any previous captain of the Pang… He follows the orders of the Empire. Which is more than I’d say of you. You are little more than an insolent to’pah, who questions his masters without cause. I now see why the captain stabbed you.”

Motek could only glare back in response. He could see that the majority of the officers and men around him agreed with the doctor. Let them all rot in the pits of Grethor! The captain was a cowardly hunter and his tactics were without focus against the enemy. He attacked many things, targets without challenge, and they ultimately had done little to the Ya’wenn. Fifteen crew had died in this campaign, and there were few gains from their deaths.

At last the second gunner stood and snatched his platter from the wooden tabletop. He no longer cared what Hodis asked. Eating in seclusion in his own cabin was preferable to this rabble.




The medical officer watched the young lieutenant go, stalking away in defeat. The boy was dangerous. He’d be more dangerous should he convince others to follow his ideas. This was what led to gross and bloody mutinies. Dissention among the ranks was nothing new, but this boy believed himself smarter than all his superiors. And he wanted to prove it.

Questions of how to cure this problem circled about in the Surgeon’s mind as he again turned to shoveling food into his hungry mouth. The men about him were laughing nervously now that the child was gone and the doors closed once more. They would soon be thinking of better things, their encounter with Motek forgotten. What to do? He could approach the captain. He didn’t want the young man dead, but he’d eventually get there on his own if he continued to follow his present path. There was Kurvis, the First Officer. Kurvis was discrete in most matters. He wondered how the commander might fare in turning the boy’s aggression to wiser pursuits.

After a few minutes, though, the Surgeon abandoned this line of thought. The food before him was far too good to drown his enjoyment with such thoughts. Let the boy stew for now. There was as great a repast to be had as ever there had been aboard this mighty cruiser. The doctor was determined to enjoy it to the utmost.


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Re: Dirt
« Reply #26 on: February 14, 2008, 10:08:27 pm »
I think the Enlightened/Renaissance discription is among the best for Larry's Klingon bunch. The ideals of Commander La'ra certainly affect his crew and thus they are very much different from Klingons seen in any film/series. This is why his tales stand out so well.

Thank you. ;)

I'm not sure I'd have picked the word 'enlightened', but it fits in a way.  I sort of imagine La'ra and crew are cultural fringers, in a way.  They're far removed from the 'core' of the Empire, on the borders where their upbringing becomes less practical than the here and now.  As Sisko grew more aggressive, less 'principled' in such a situation on DS9, La'ra and crew end up seeming more mellow than your typical Klink.

I don't think any of that should be applied to how intelligent they seem, however.  As you said, dumb Klinks are bad writing, and I discard such nonsense as I see fit.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #27 on: February 19, 2008, 03:06:02 pm »
Uh-oh! Trouble brewing with that boy for sure. We actually got to see that the doctor is not just an affable fat fool - he actually has a brain in there, even if it is crowded out dinosaur-style after glutting himself...  ;D

I was having an issue with the  paltry cargo capacity of the D7, but then I remembered: dirt is bulky! it literally is not a matter of weight as space. Fooled me there, but I caught up!  :D

I can see Dath'mar's future wife at divorce hearings...

"How was I to know he was a ruthless sadist with a grudge? He seemed like such a good man. He was fond of his targ... "  :D

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #28 on: February 19, 2008, 08:21:25 pm »


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Here's y'all some more unmemorable work to read  ;)





CH. 6





Lieutenant Hekk tried to stand as tall and straight as his aged tendons would allow before the captain’s scrutiny. Dath’mar did not look pleased with the figures he’d just outlined. For now the younger man simply sat there at the desk, looking back at him with that one, piercing eye. The small, garish light that illuminated the CO’s anteroom shone off the unpolished steel plate that covered the other orb. Dath’mar was unnerving enough with just the one eye.

At last the captain adjusted his position in his seat and grunted. He looked away.

“Two hours… Beaming in dirt.”

“You asked for the figures of how long it would take to beam it up while under cloak. I also have the figures for time while decloaked.” Hekk offered. Dath’mar returned his eye to the engineer.

“And?”

“Twenty minutes.”

Dath’mar rolled his eye and went back to staring at the dark bulkhead.

“Twenty minutes, unshielded under the guns of a Gorn warship. Pang would be destroyed.”

Hekk shrugged. He was relatively secure he had a better idea on how to proceed.

“We would be far more vulnerable trying this under cloak. The Gorn would not take much time to locate us on their scanners once we activated all our transporters. Site to site transport costs a great deal of energy. Such expenditure will bleed through the best cloak. Uncloaked, we can return fire and even deploy our dorsal and aft shields.”

The captain looked back to the engineer. There was a hint of surprise upon his normally impassive face. “Our shields will not slow the transport cycle?”

“All transporter nodes are built into ventral facing positions aboard the latest refit of the D-7. Were we to lower only the ventral facing, we would add only another ten minutes to the total time.”

Dath’mar listened to the engineer’s explanation and nodded. 

“I will take your data into consideration when I devise the plan.” This was as close to praise as many Klingon commanders ever came. Hekk was satisfied. “You are due back in Engineering?”

“Yes.”

“Station.”

Hekk saluted, bringing his withered, clenched fist to his breast and shooting it forth before him. Dath’mar returned the gesture before the engineer turned and removed himself from the captain’s cabin. This new captain was much different than any other the old engineer had served with. He was approachable in matters dealing with duty or the ship. He kept to himself during meal times, a habit different from many but not unheard of. He was reserved and quiet. One might have labeled him moody, but he seemed to only have variations of one particular, dark mood. Hekk pondered the man and their unusual mission as he entered the close by lift and set it for the engineering deck.
***




Commander Kurvis squinted in the gloom of his quarters at the fat Surgeon who sat before him. Like his captain, Kurvis took care of most administration matters in the comfort of his cabin’s small anteroom office. He did not favor the doctor’s visit, nor did he enjoy what was being relayed to him.

“You want me to…talk to the Second Gunner?”

“His disgruntled outbursts amid the crew are bad for morale…” The Surgeon warned forcefully, leaning over the short desk and pointing to a blank spot of the plastic surface. “And very dangerous should he find those he can convert to his way of thinking!”

“You believe him capable of leading a mutiny?”

Doubt tugged at the doctor’s features. He obviously did not think he should take things that far just yet. But, then, he’d already broached the subject. “Perhaps. But I do not know.”

Kurvis stood up to his full height behind his desk. A light played in the Surgeon’s eyes. There was doubt and worry there. He did not know what sort of box he had just opened on the unsuspecting Second Gunner. The First Officer pegged the fat man with an iron stare. “Surgeon, if a member of this crew is openly taking a stance against his captain, then it must be dealt with. Harshly. What has he done so far?”

“He has merely voiced his opinions…loudly.”

“He spouts dissention?”

“He is dissatisfied!”

“Then perhaps I can arrange for his satisfaction.” The doctor shook his wildly maned head. He hadn’t bargained for such a heavy-handed solution to the matter. Still yet, he had no idea what Kurvis had in mind. The First took some measure of amusement out of the unsettled expression now shining upon the fat Klingon’s face. “You have done your duty and brought this to my attention. I will now do mine and inform the Captain. I will make my own recommendation…then the Captain will decide what to do.”

“The last time he dealt with Motek, the captain damned near killed him!”

“And he may yet finish the job, Surgeon.” Kurvis told him resolutely. “This is a Klingon warship, not a pleasure liner. We don’t issue demerits for poor behavior. If a man crosses the wrong line, he may pay the ultimate price for his failure.”

Now the surgeon’s lips took on a sullen twist.

“He does not deserve death for being angry! Motek may become a fine officer. He is an excellent gunner, and the Empire would do well to keep a man of his skill in a position where he might still do good—“

Kurvis slid his black service gloves on and turned back to the irate doctor.

“Enough, Doctor. The decision belongs to the Captain. Not you or I. I’m headed to the bridge.”
***





The drone of the mighty engines dulled and dropped almost below the frequency of hearing as the IKS Pang slowed to sublight speed and settled in above the brown and green farming world of Galt. The Pang eased in to a close orbit to better facilitate the transport of the bulk of her crew to the surface. The cruiser’s mission still lay before her, and this stop over would allow her to better complete that task.

Captain Dath’mar materialized in the midst of a small, open pasture. A wide expanse of fenced in dirt surrounded him and his science officer as they surveyed the area around them. The captain had worn his field cloak, but it soon proved unnecessary in the damp heat of this forested world.

The governor of Galt was quick to appear before them from within the confines of a low, wide trussed barn full of Keddek. He wore riding leathers and long armed gloves for handling the biting, long legged Keddek riding beasts. On his lined, fat face, he bore a happy grin. “Ah, Captain! Lieutenant Commander! I am happy you have arrived.”

“You are informed of my plans?” Dath’mar asked of him. I’rell said nothing, watching passively.

“Yes, Captain. A wide area is ready for the encampment of your men, and a sector of the forest has been cordoned off for their military and hunting exercises. Will they need no further supply?”

Dath’mar looked off over the close horizon. With all of the trees and the tall hills of the terrain, this planet did not appear so big. But after months of confinement on a cruiser, it felt…alien. There was so much space. The smell of dirt and manure differed so greatly from the stale smell of recycled air, the musk of warriors and the sweet taint of leather. Time on this world would not be unpleasant.

“Our men will have ample supply from ship’s stores. The rest I expect them to acquire on their own. You will keep a detailed log of all transgressions precipitated by the men. I will review them on my return.”

“Do you expect trouble, Captain?”

“I expect them to behave as men who have been cooped u on a battlecruiser for half a year.” The captain replied to the farmer. Governor Legat smiled in that knowing way, belonging to the old and wise.

“Of course, Captain. They are starved for activity…of the kind not belonging aboard ship.”

Dath’mar studied them for a time, then nodded. The farmer understood. The captain nodded once. “Indeed.”

“I don’t believe there will be any problem.” The governor told him with confidence. “We have had cruisers lay over for shore leave before.”

Dath’mar turned away from the older man and studied the flow of the land. The hills drew his eye. They reminded him of his home in the midlands of Qo’noS. He had not seen the homeworld in some decades. Perhaps when his vengeance was sated.

Commander I’rell stepped up as the captain pondered the future, her tricorder raised in question. The captain gave her a nod and stepped away. The old governor studied the young science officer appreciatively. “Governor. We have located a source of sodium nitrate of level one purity. We have ascertained that Pang can extract and carry thirty-four hundred tons of raw nitrate. This will meet your requirements?”

Legat smiled gratefully as he nodded.

“Oh yes, Lieutenant Commander. We would require much more bulk in fertilized soil, but that amount of raw nitrate will more than suffice. How have you come by such an amount?”

“We are going to borrow it from our neighbors.” I’rell told him simply. Legat studied her for a moment. His face bloomed with understanding. He knew exactly what these warriors were about to risk for his colony’s success. He seemed to sober considerably and slouched a bit more. Dath’mar said nothing as usual. He continued to ponder the roll of the lands and the height of the trees.

I’rell glanced to her captain and watched him. He was stoic, like the warriors from tales of old. He said little, and when he bothered to speak, there were no excess words. He spoke only of the matters of immediate concern. She wondered if he had any friends. Likely not, given most of his former crew was dead, or spread out in assignments with the far-flung Klingon Fleet. None of his previous officers had followed him to this assignment. The science officer did not know whether it had been their choice, Dath’mar’s or the Fleet’s. After all, the captain never spoke of it.

Standing there, silhouetted against the brilliance of the horizon, the setting sun of to his left, Captain Dath’mar looked the very picture of loneliness.

Governor Legat stepped in closer to the slim young science officer. “While the captain enjoys the sunset, my dear, let’s go and look at the area set aside for your Qas Dev’. There will be plenty of game for them to stalk, and varied terrain for exercise. Will you be beaming down your ground skimmers?”

I’rell glanced to the old farmer in surprise.

“Yes. The captain wants all the space in our bays. That included the two armored cars. Why?”

“I was once a marine myself. I was assigned to an assault battalion specializing in armored vehicles.” The leader told her as they passed over the rough, rocky ground, headed for the thick forest.

“You were a marine?”

Legat looked back to her, amusement in his small eyes.

“You seem surprised.”

“You do not seem a warrior.”

Legat nodded as he looked back ahead of them. For a man of his height, he cleared a lot of territory with his fast gait. I’rell was already beginning to sweat in the humid air. “I joined the Imperial Fleet to bring honor to my family. My father had done the same, and was proud. He’d been maimed in the Mirak wars. My service made his years waiting to die more tolerable. He enjoyed stories of my adventures, especially tales of battles against the Mirak. I think he died a happier man for my efforts. I never rose to officer ranks, but my tenure among the Qas Dev’ was a good one.”

They began to near a collection of supply sheds and heavier buildings. A long, barbed fence of wire divided the flatter land from the hilly, wooded parts beyond. Legat pointed to a section of the fence where the posts were set in pairs. “The fencing can be dismantled at that point to access the rest of the settlement. Should your Qas DevwI' wish to include the colony’s towns in his exercises, we will cooperate. All bear arms, including the Ulder’ni and the Anarians.”

“You have subject races here?” I’rell asked. She’d yet to see any evidence of any but Klingons here since beam-down. The farmer nodded.

“Oh, yes. A farming colony cannot get along without them. Most work the lower lands where our machines cannot go for fear of becoming stuck in the mud. They will be returning before nightfall.”

I’rell thought of how much different life must be out here amid the frontier…on a colony… One hardly noticed aliens from other worlds on Qo’noS. They kept to themselves and seldom stayed on the homeworld any longer than their business demanded. But out here, work and the demands of a thriving and essential colony brought Klingons and the races they protected and governed together on a daily basis. Compared to life aboard a cruiser, the thought of this seemed fascinating and a little repulsive to the science officer.

The governor also brought forth interest from the commander. He had been in the fleet, been a marine… Now he planted crops and lived the life of an Imperial Subject. He’d traded his disruptor for a trowel. The most confusing part of this enigma to the officer was the fact that Legat seemed unbothered by the difference. The larger man halted at the fence line. The sizzle of Pang’s transporters came to their ears as a group of nine warriors laden with gear faded into view. The Qas DevwI' had brought his command party down and was about to prepare for the transport of the rest of his marines. I’rell watched on as Commander Kel’dann began to bark orders to his subordinates. The lower officers began to drop their packs to the thick grass and drag out the items they’d need first. Soon, they had rudimentary field communications and sensors in operation.

“So you left the Imperial Service to become the governor of a farm?” I’rell asked Legat as they watched the marines do their work. Another squad beamed in before them and began to fan out into the first three search/recon parties.

Legat smirked and glanced aside at her.

“Not exactly. I used my training as a Petty Officer to land a job in management and administration back on the homeworld. This led me to the Agriculture and Colonization Bureau. They propelled me to my current standing, and when Galt became available as a posting, I took it!”

“I don’t understand how such a posting would appeal after a tour in the Fleet.” I’rell said, deciding to get right to the crux of her confusion. “Surely your warrior’s heart led you to become a warrior.”

“Yes.”

“And you willingly left the Fleet…” She probed. He offered no argument, so she went on. “To become the leader of a farm.”

Legat nodded grandly. Pride showed on his face.

“The governor of the biggest farm planet in three sectors!”

I’rell could feel the man’s pride in his accomplishments here. Was he as proud of his former life as a soldier? She wondered whether or not to question him further. But she had duties to attend to. Hers was the responsibility of taking the Qas DevwI’s first report and detailing his further needs for this deployment. The captain seemed to be a reasonably patient man, but she did not wish to test him by delaying her report.

With a motion to the gate, she prompted the farm governor to dismantle the fence for them to enter. They made their way down the gentle slope to the burgeoning campsite.
***





Captain Dath’mar was leaning on a fence, still looking to where the sun had sank in the west when his science officer returned, tricorder in hand. He knew her by the sound of her approach and did not need to look at her. She drew to a halt and awaited his acknowledgement of her existence. When he said nothing for nearly a minute, she coughed slightly and scuffed the ground with her armored boots. He hid his amusement and looked back to her.

“Learn anything useful, science officer?”

“The Qas DevwI’ states that he will initiate a surprise attack drill tonight with the shuttlecraft we are leaving behind. He wishes to test his marines’ response times in unfamiliar terrain after all their work in setting up base camp—“

“I did not mean about our men and how they’re going to play around while we are gone.”

I’rell stopped and stared a moment. Her face showed the thought processing in her mind.

“The Governor?”

“Yes.”

“He is proficient, more so than I thought a farmer might be. He was once a warrior.”

“I thought as much. Qas Dev?”

“Yes, he was a marine.”

“And yet he chose to live a life amid dirt and plants and barnyard animals…” Dath’mar’s statement might have denoted confusion, but he did not feel any. He could see the appeal in this life. It was…peaceful. This was not a notion that had ever called out to him before. He was a born warrior, a soldier of the Empire. But the idea of spending his life on this ball of dirt did not seem so bad. Perhaps if death did not find him in service, perhaps he would wait for it on a world such as this one. He’d still prefer to meet his end in battle, though.

“Will the marines require further supply?” He asked finally.

“No. Commander Kel’dann states that he has all that he needs. I suspect he has intentionally left his camp short in some supplies to further test the resolve of his troops.”
The captain nodded and abandoned his prop against the aged wooden fence. He faced his science officer. “Then we leave.”

I’rell nodded, handing her captain a chip containing her report. She drew out her communicator and keyed it on. “I’rell to Pang. The captain and I are coming up.”
And so they left Galt and its fresh air.
***

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« Reply #30 on: February 20, 2008, 03:52:25 pm »
Well, now we get to see the contemplative side of the Burning One. A nice little introspective piece. I like and dislike I'rell's puzzlement at the same time. The attitude is good, but seems kinda wrong on her somehow.

Legat's attitude is pretty cool too. Klingon psychology differs from author to author, but I too am puzzled why a Klingon marine would be happy on a farming planet. He is informative about events, but not motivations. I am wanting to know the same as I'rell.

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« Reply #31 on: February 20, 2008, 04:42:01 pm »
I hope to present Dath'mar as a 3-Dimensional character. He has martial prowess, but I do not simply want to present him as 'the brooding badass'. His dark and silent demeanor is, in many ways...just an act. And he admits it to himself, and strangely allows the Surgeon to see past this. His persona has been changed a lot by his 10 years of being a prisoner/rebel on Kovarn. He doesn't relish wanton, unnecessary death among his people any more. He is actually beginning to learn that death in battle might not be the only way for his life to end.

I'rell, on another hand, is a very good scientist. This does not, however, mean that she is not a pure warrior. In the future I may have opertunity to show her more martial side, which only peeks out in this episode. I toyed with a scene in this story that would certainly have showed her capacity for melee, but I have thus far axed it. I may still write it to show as an alternate scene... She is genuinely confused about colony life, and like you, does not understand how a marine would go back to live on a farm world.

As to the Governor, I wanted to show that side of Klingon life barely hinted at. The Klink who's life's ambition was not to be a warrior. He joined because it was his family's tradition to do so, but never intended to make it his sole route in life. Much like a person in RL joining the Reserves, he did it for the experience, and for the tools it gave him for his future. Don't expect to see that placed in the story verbatum, however. The story really isn't about the Governor. He's just there for flavor.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #32 on: February 20, 2008, 06:05:48 pm »
Here's y'all some more unmemorable work to read

Hehe... Just so you know, I have been reading this and enjoying it very much!  I agree with what Rommie said earlier: best Klingon mission ever.   :D
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« Reply #33 on: February 20, 2008, 10:45:09 pm »
*bows graciously*

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« Reply #34 on: February 21, 2008, 12:30:45 am »
And this from a man who had Rommie singing 'Sexyback', so he knows 'memorable'!
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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« Reply #35 on: February 21, 2008, 03:25:08 pm »
And this from a man who had Rommie singing 'Sexyback', so he knows 'memorable'!

LOL!  Rommie isn't the one that I had singing Sexyback... but I should have.   ;)

Still waiting for more of this excellent adventure, btw.  I'm also wondering why no one has brought up the option of simply taking out the patrolling destroyer and then grabbing the ferilizer before reinforcements can arrive.
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« Reply #36 on: February 21, 2008, 07:49:37 pm »
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LOL!  Rommie isn't the one that I had singing Sexyback... but I should have.   ;)

I was trying to implant the suggestion subliminally.
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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« Reply #37 on: February 21, 2008, 10:04:11 pm »
  I'm also wondering why no one has brought up the option of simply taking out the patrolling destroyer and then grabbing the ferilizer before reinforcements can arrive.

You shall see soon...

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« Reply #38 on: February 22, 2008, 02:38:25 pm »
I was trying to implant the suggestion subliminally.


Hmmm... how about something along the lines of Rommie as a green orion slave girl singing "I'm bringing sexy back," eh?

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I bet I could throw together a kickin' song parody to go with that if anyone wanted me to...   ;)

You shall see soon...


Excellent!  I very much look forward to it.
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« Reply #39 on: February 28, 2008, 04:09:20 pm »







CH. 7






Dath’mar’s single remaining eye opened in a mixture of shock and rage as he stared blades at the Brigadier pictured on his monitor. No one witnessed this conversation. The Captain was speaking with his commanding officer, Brigadier La’ra, in the dark privacy of his cabin. The other stared back, unmoved.

“You are ordered to complete this mission without Gorn casualties, Captain,” The regional tactical commander told his subordinate once again. A wave of static washed across the viewer. Dath’mar wished it had wiped out the signal entirely.

Captain Dath’mar sat back, eye still locked on the Brigadier as he fought to retain his control. His blood boiled as the order repeated over and over within his mind. No Gorn casualties. He could not attack them, not in the traditional sense. Nor could he bring his ship’s full might to bear in defense of his own vessel and crew. He was effectively being sent into this mission with his hands tied.

“Are we the Federation now, that we go into battle to stun our enemy and leave them to attack us another day!” The captain growled back. He’d almost shouted, but such was no longer Dath’mar’s way. Shouting and railing had never gained him anything.

“The Gorn are not our enemy, Captain. And our Empire can ill afford them to be. Praxis—“

“Praxis! Every difficulty I hear is laid upon the altar of Praxis!” The captain returned. His firsts were clenched to either side of the comm screen. He glowered most impressively. La’ra stared back defiantly, secure in the light years separating them.

“The Empire cannot afford another war. We already battle the Mirak over the Juramik Stretch and are only now beginning to get political support for the effort from the Federation.”

“And for that we throw them back the territories surrounding Goesa’vaina!” Dath’mar resisted the urge to growl and hurl curses. The lengths his government was going to appease the weaklings in among their former enemy disgusted him. “Have we not given them enough?”

“The Mirak, for now, remain their allies, and they wish to remain friendly with the Gorn as well. We would find their ecological assistance on Qo’noS…lessened should we being initiating broad scale hostilities against ALL their neighbors. I support your plan to steal what we need. The Gorn indeed will NOT barter with us for anything. And asking them now would only give them fore knowledge that you are coming. This seems our only recourse. But you cannot anger the lizards enough that they mobilize against us. Find a way to avoid combat with their ship and ground defenses.”

“And how do you believe I should proceed?” There was vehement accusation in his retort. Dath’mar looked back with consternation. He was being asked the impossible. La’ra merely looked back with put on innocence, passive and smug-seeming. There was the hint of a smile when he replied.

“Do you believe yourself incapable of the task?”

Pride arose within the Captain’s chest and threatened to burst forth in a childish tirade of boasting. Brigadier La’ra dared much. He was intentionally goading Dath’mar into this. And it was working. The captain held back his response for a time, then declined his face in anger. His eye remained locked on his commanding officer.

“I will do for the Empire as I must. If we now fear war against inferior creatures, then I will find a way to combat them without drawing blood.”

La’ra nodded back, then killed the connection. Dath’mar’s fists slammed down in futile rage. He almost wished he hadn’t transmitted his battle plan to the Brigadier’s ship. But all major operations in the Goesa’vaina-Juramik Stretch Theater of Operations was under La’ra’s review. Withholding vital information from him would be paramount to treason.

The captain was not a blind man, nor was he necessarily shortsighted. He knew the economic state of his Empire. La’ra had been quite correct in his assessment. It made his orders no less bitter a pill to swallow, but he agreed with the reasoning behind them.

If the Empire required Dath’mar to complete this mission without making an enemy of the Gorn Hegemony, then he would do just that. But how? Dath’mar reactivated the computer screen before him and waited for it to reheat, its startup images rolling and fizzling. He would need to review the tactical assets that this starsystem boasted and its navigational anomalies. The Pang would not fail in her task.
***






The Pang traveled invisible to eyes and sensors through the chill silence of space, carrying her skeleton crew of determined warriors out and away from Klingon space. The ship was quiet with all of its work crews gone. Of the compliment of three hundred ninety, only one hundred four remained.

Captain Dath’mar had again called his command staff into the briefing chamber and packed them around the confines of the cheep little plastic table. The captain remained standing as he regarded them all in stern silence. The monitor on the wall behind him and the small screen in the center of the conference table both showed the configuration of the Chetell starsystem. It possessed ten planetary bodies, each with at least one small satellite. Its star was of the common yellow variety. Chetell III, their destination, was highlighted near the center of the slowly revolving map.

“This is our destination.” He told them, his voice dull and subdued. He wasn’t looking forward to any of this. “Brigadier La’ra has ordered us to curtail enemy casualties to prevent the start of war between us and the…Gorn.” He’d only barely avoided using the term ‘enemy’. He waited for his crew to take this in. Commander Kurvis was the first to stir near the head of the table.

“Speak.” Dath’mar told him with a small nod.

“By curtail…you mean…”

“No Gorn deaths will be tolerated. We are forbidden to destroy their on-station frigate or shore defenses.” The captain again paused to allow them the time to curse. To his mild surprise, they merely looked back and forth amid themselves and gaped. His crew was a disciplined band. Pride in them awoke deep inside him, and not for the first time since taking this command. Kurvis looked back to him.

“You must be…” The First Officer halted before insinuating anything he’d immediately regret. “How can he expect us to complete this mission without destroying Gorn defenses! We cannot simply begin beaming in their minerals and not expect to be attacked. Their planetside guns are arrayed all about the mining sites. They also have terrestrial shielding. And that escort is not going to simply let us have our way. She may be small, but she poses a great risk to us if we do not eliminate her!”

Once the First had had his say, the captain calmly nodded.

“This mission is onerous and inglorious. But it will be done. The planet’s defenses are formidable,” he began the meat of his briefing, turning to the wall mounted viewer and pointing to the highlighted spheroid. The image enhanced and depicted an aerial view of the main continent where resided the largest nitrate mining complex. The ground was torn and scared from the Gorn’s efforts and massive installations dotted the surroundings. “However, there is one fatal flaw. It is civilian built, and not built to defend against cloaked vessels with Klingon transporters. They have no idea we can use our beams while cloaked, unlike the Romulans. Their entire defense network is powered by a single warp reactor…” He pointed to a rounded building with peripheral hubs. “Here. Once disabled, the Gorn’s defenses should crumble.”

“Should?” Asked Shenna. As First Gunner, hers was much of the responsibility in combating their enemy. The prospect of undergoing this mission under no-fire orders frightened her to no end.

“We have no intelligence as to their backup capacity. It is suspected their guns will have some kind of battery system.” Dath’mar answered.

From the left side of the flimsy table, Hekk sat back with a smirk. “No one builds energy weapons to charge directly from a reactor. We must expect them to be able to continue to fire even without their reactors.”

“Indeed.” The captain nodded once more. “Our ground units will not only strike the reactor, but also their hard connections at two other points to further complicate their repairs. Without primary power, their shields will fail quickly and their guns will speak only sporadically.”

Kurvis sat forth, squinting as he scrutinized the images before them.

“Removing primary power will not be enough. We must also ensure the few shots they are able to hurl at us do not disable us. I suggest beaming in strike forces to disable their guns.”

The fat surgeon made a noise.

“We barely have the manpower for that. The Gorn are strong—“

“We are Klingons!” Kurvis spat back. “Caught by surprise, they will be overwhelmed!”

Dath’mar studied his First and nodded. Kurvis might loathe this mission and the limitations emplace on them by Command, but, like the captain, he carried out the Empire’s will. The First was now looking up to Dath’mar.

“But what of the escort? How do we dispatch it without attacking it directly?”

Before the captain could formulate an answer, the navigator spoke up.

“Could we not lure it away?”

The assembled officers stared back to Lieutenant Ger’shall. The young woman seemed to sink a bit under the weight of their sudden attention. Dath’mar could not help but smile a tiny, dark grin at the sight and over her suggestion. The crew noticed his smile. Soon they too were shrinking before its ire. The captain did not smile. To see it now…was unsettling.

“Lure it away…” He repeated.

Ger’shall looked up at the captain with uncertainty bordering on meekness.

“If the escort is not present, it cannot be a threat to us.”

“A distress call?” Suggested the surgeon after some time of silence.

Kurvis shook his maned head.

“The Gorn know where each of their ships is at any given time. Civilian or otherwise. They will not be fooled. Pirates have tried similar on them before and failed.”

“What can we lure them away with, then?” Asked the doctor further.

Sudden realization dawned upon the captain. His smile had not yet faded.

“Something they hate more than us.”

The officers looked up at Dath’mar in question. Hekk matched the CO’s grin.

“Romulans.”

The animosity between the Gorn and the far away Romulans was quite renown. The expansionist cousins of the Vulcans had once tried to conquer the Gorn when their designs on the Klingon Empire had failed to yield fruit. The reptilian recluses had quite savagely shown the pointed-eared devils which way their home star lay. Repeated conflicts had marked history as time and again the two races’ forces had found one another and clashed.

“We can simulate the energy emissions of a scanning Romulan Warbird with an ECM package.” Hekk thought aloud. “A probe won’t do. To small, too limited. It would not provide a convincing rouse.”

“A shuttle.” Dath’mar provided, matching the engineer’s thought process.

“That means a pilot.” Added their Surgeon. “A pilot in a near defenseless shuttle craft, bobbing about out there and trying to draw the attention of a much larger ship. He’d be a dead man.”

Kurvis bore teeth in an animalistic leer.

“A glorious death!”

The surgeon did not appear to agree with the warriorly sentiments of death in battle. He rolled his eyes and looked away. None noticed but Dath’mar. The captain already knew where his doctor’s convictions lay, and was not bothered. The captain sat slowly into the small chair near the head of the table and allowed the small smile to fade away. The countenance of stone again reigned.

“Who do we send off on this glorious, one way mission?”

The First Officer drew to his full height within his chair and seemed to take on a look of satisfaction. “I know just the man…”
***





“So! The captain wishes me to volunteer for my death!”

Commander Kurvis smiled grimly back to Lieutenant Motek. The former first gunner’s outburst had been fully expected. The shorter man fumed and raged behind his own eyes as he glared bloody holes through the executive officer.

“No. I am offering you the chance to redeem yourself before the captain.” The First told him. “The captain ordered me to pick the man I thought best.”

“Then you offer me nothing!” Motek hurled back, stalking to the far end of his shared cabin. Thankfully, the other junior officers assigned to this berth were on duty. There were none present, other than the two of them. None would hear the disgrace the lieutenant would likely begin to rail. “I have no desire to redeem myself before that cowardly to’pah!”

“You believe he has treated with you unjustly?” Kurvis asked in a voice far calmer than the boy deserved. Motek snapped his face back to glare once more at the First.

“He stabbed a man unable to defend himself! Would you have done the same, Kurvis?”

“No. I’d have shot you before the attack began. As your particulate matter settled onto the deck, I’d have assumed the guns myself and done your job for you. You got off lucky.” Kurvis was again grinning, this time with pronounced malice as the former gunner’s face fell into a long look of shock. “If you have a grudge against your captain, seek to settle the matter in the in an honor duel. Till then, do your duty and stop your infantile tirade against him. Word of your fit in the mess has reached me. It has likely reached the captain’s ear also. Do not test his patience…or mine.”

Motek continued to stare back, standing still as a post before his bunk. His fists were no longer clenched. His hands hung limp at his sides. Kurvis had stopped smiling and was looking at the whelp in challenge. Before the boy decided to look away, the First Officer took a menacing step in.

“Now, do you have the gomptu’ to accept this mission? Or will you sulk in your cabin and continue to whine like a child?”
***


To Hsta: I'm hoping that the idea of destroying the Gorn frigate, at least prior to this CH., was implied as a given...and therefor not brought up for discussion. Just thought I might clear that one up...

Anyway...about halfway through the chapters here. There are 8 more...any comments?

--thu guv!!
'It's a lot of hard work being a mean bastard...' --Captain Eric Finlander, CO USS Bedford (The Bedford Incident)

'Jaken...are you pretending to be dead?' --Lord Sesshomaru, Inuyasha.