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Dirt
« on: January 25, 2008, 12:05:37 am »
I can't resist the urge to post this one. It may be rough. Some editing has been done, but its been a while. I keep getting stuck on it and unlike all of my Ford stories...this one is not yet finished prior to posting...

Here's the first CH. Let me know what ya think!

Dirt
CH. 1





Dath’mar leaned heavily upon the frame of his attack periscope as he zeroed his ship’s manual targeting array onto the engine section of the lonely little ship ahead. The unsuspecting craft was a tiny Ya’wenn escort ship, less than half his own vessel’s size and not nearly a tenth her complexity. This would be an easy kill. The alien ship was at a dead stop, almost powered down where it perched high above the plasma storms that marked the Kovarn Reach. It’s little sensors, dim and ill powered as they were, were directed toward the Federation Starbase seven light years away. They were spying. Watching ship movements and the operations of the base itself.

The captain knew that Ya’wenn scanners were barely able to reach out that distance. They had to kill nearly all their own equipment emissions and direct most of their power to the forward array. And even then, they would get at best a grainy subspace image that would take them days to glean real facts from. His own sensors could reach out there in a matter of seconds and tell him just how many ships were docked there and what their status was. The Ya’wenn had to work very hard indeed to gather such intelligence.

And doing so made their ships very vulnerable.

With all of their attention directed forward, to a base light years away, they were ill prepared to detect a cloaked Klingon battlecruiser slipping up from behind. This was not the most honorable way to hunt prey, but it did feel more like hunting. Stalking. Lying in ambush. Yes, while this was not the most glorious way to dispatch a foe, it held a great deal of satisfaction.

They wouldn’t even know what hit them.

“Range?” The one-eyed captain barked.

“Four thousand kelicams, closing.” Replied I’rell. She was his science officer. Very proficient. She was an attractive woman who sported sleeveless uniforms. Despite what this might suggest, her duty drew near all her attention.

“Weapons hot and ready.” Came an additional report from his First Officer. Commander Kurvis was leaning over the engineering console to the port side of the bridge. He, like the thin captain at the scope, was sweating profusely in the stifling air of the command deck.

Running cloaked, under full stealth protocol made life miserable after long periods of time. Like every other, unnecessary shipboard system, the ventilators and primary air conditioning systems were disengaged till ordered back on. The fewer systems running, the harder your ship was to detect.

The captain pressed his right eye closer still to a metal viewfinder that had been designed for two eyes. He eased the target reticule up onto the engineering section of the small, spearhead of a ship. His thumb ached to press the firing studs. ‘With a single torpedo, I could end them,’ he thought. But the IKS Pang could not fire her fore torpedo launcher. It had been rendered inoperative some time ago in a previous action against the Ya’wenn. His engineer had been able to cobble it back into working order just before they’d detected the USS Tenseiga weeks earlier. But while supporting that ship, the Pang had taken another hit to the command pod. Engineer Hekk’s repairs had come undone. Try as he might, the old man could not get the launcher up and running again.

The captain would have to use the primary and secondary disruptors only. His hands tightened on the controls. He was mentally preparing for the shot, half remembering a time when he’d conducted a similar attack on a Romulan Warbird nearly twenty years ago. He hadn’t needed a cloaking device in those days. He finalized his lock and was about to fire.

“I have had enough of this inglorious farce!”

Dath’mar mentally paused, tough he did not move a muscle. Outwardly, he seemed not to have heard the outburst. He knew which station it had come from. The main gunner’s station. Chief Gunnery Officer Motek. It had definitely been his growl. The captain could hear the creak of the warrior’s leather as he slid up out of his post to face the command dais.

There would be a confrontation. Dath’mar considered opening fire anyway, to see what reaction the gunner would have. Would he sit back down once battle was joined? Or was he a true fool? Dath’mar had yet to order the engineers to drop cloak, however.

Dath’mar continued to observe the enemy through the scope, growing more and more angry, still not stirring. A heavy step came from beyond Motek. About ten seconds had passed, maybe less. The masculine voice of the First Officer shot out from behind the engineers’ seats.

“Lieutenant! Sit down you fool! Do not dare to question the captain during an attack!”

At this, Captain Dath’mar took his eye from the scope’s screen and leaned his right shoulder into the extended module. His polished metal eye-patch gleamed in the crimson battle lamps. His right smoldered in anger and promised retribution. “What do you want, Gunner?”

He did not hide the obvious contempt in his voice.

The younger man, a senior lieutenant with a few years under his sash, stared blades back at him. His hands were clenched fists and Dath’mar saw how his left hand hovered near to his disruptor. Dath’mar’s own was holstered on his right hip, blocked by the girth of the copper painted periscope, kelicams away from use…

The youth took an aggressive step forward, facing off with the lazy looking commanding officer. “I tire of watching my scarred captain take every scrap of what little glory and honor this mission offers by always manning his damned command scope! I am a Gunner! A warrior! A soldier of the Empire! I refuse to side idly by while target after target is blasted away while I sit in my seat…a spectator!”

Dath’mar kept his face impassive, indifferent. His black eye bored through the other’s countenance. He was standing up for himself well. He showed bravery, willing to buck both the captain and First Officer at once. He’d give the boy that. Still emoting an aura of laziness and uncaring, Dath’mar backed away from the scope, slamming its heavy shoulder braces shut and slapping it into motion, back up into the overhead.

“Then take you shot Gunner.”

Dath’mar sauntered in unhurried fashion down the step leading to his broad command chair and stood before the wayward weapon’s officer. Distrust and disbelief washed over the uncertain young man. He eyed his black-clad captain warily. Dath’mar waved to the empty chair before the boy finally was convinced to retake his station.

Dath’mar ignored the confused look of his First and looked back to I’rell.

“Range?”

“Two thousand kelicams. Helm is slowing.”

The captain looked past Kurvis to the engineers who went on about their duty, trying not to look as though they were hanging on every action being taken in this tense situation. “Prepare to attack!”

Kurvis finally turned his back on the captain and gunner, turning once again to tend to the two noncoms working the ship’s engine and power controls. Dath’mar listened to him bark quietly to them. He also looked down to where the chief gunner was preparing to make his shot. He was wisely not trying to establish an active systems lock. The boy hadn’t been truly rattled by his confrontation. He could still think.

Dath’mar leaned in close, almost whispering his orders.

“Target drive core only.”

“Understood, sir!”

“Main disruptors!”

“Yes!”

With a flick of an eye toward Kurvis, again looking back to the captain, Dath’mar signaled the attack. “Drop cloak!”

Kurvis delivered a chopping motion between his charges. They began pressing controls. The lights flashed three times in time with the bark of the combat alarm. A whoosh of cool air swept through the bridge, chilling the sweat on the back of their necks and their rough foreheads. The main lights came up to full level.

“Field disengaged!” Kurvis shouted over the alarm’s din.

Dath’mar’s hand squeezed the gunner’s shoulder.

“Fire!”

The scream of the main disruptors mounted on the undersides of the command pod, the fore section of the shoulders and the bow of either nacelle opened up together. They fired in banks of two, sending six blinding, emerald bolts in pairs into the unprotected, soft underbelly of the Ya’wenn ship’s tail. The enemy’s fantail crumpled in on itself even as fire and debris blasted free. The small vessel heaved up on its nose and began a slow flip. Its over burdened maneuvering jets could not control its wayward flight. Dath’mar could imagine the unprepared chaos that was even now sweeping the ship.

Alien soldiers, if such he could label them, would be flying about through the air. The lucky ones might grab hold of something and hang on. But the majority of them were looking forward to injuries, and all would be in frantic panic. Dath’mar could not help but smile an acid smirk beneath this thin mustaches.

Lieutenant Motek, showing the marks of a good officer, kept up the fire. He laid into the escort craft with another lash of main cannon and also added to the Ya’wenn misery with an onslaught of secondary weaponry. Thin green beams supplemented the larger, more powerful blasts. The interior of the aliens’ engine section spilled to space.

Dath’mar had to grind his one eye closed as the ship erupted into a blossoming shower of flame, gas and debris. The enemy had been dispatched. Now, on to discipline.
“Very good, Lieutenant.” Even Dath’mar’s voice feigned lethargy these days. He turned the gunner’s seat about to face him. The captain was almost smiling. The weapon’s officer’s face fell flaxen.

“You are a proficient weapon’s officer. This is why I will let you live.”

Dath’mar’s hand moved like lightning. His long, curved Levath blade left its scabbard and was protruding from the seated gunner’s sternum before the lieutenant could even begin to defend himself. Dath’mar leaned into the stab, twisted, and pulled it free. He stepped back from the shaking, bleeding officer as blood began already to pool on the bare deck.

The captain studied the young officer as he fought for consciousness. He’d struck the Gukt’a, the primary artery running the trunk of the body. Fed by the Klingon eight chamber heart, it could pump out seven liters per minute when severed fully. He very much doubted his blade had done much more than nick the vein, but the effects were telling. Motek tried to fight his way to his feet as officers abandoned the façade of not looking and stared in open interest. The gunner drew his pistol, which his captain batted away like a spear from a small child’s hand. Motek’s eyes rolled up into the back of his wide skull and he clattered to the deck like a rag doll.

Dath’mar wiped blood from his blade onto his left sleeve. His eye glared off to the communications console and the junior bekk there. “Have that taken to the surgeon, and if it survives, it may resume its post with a reduction in rank as the Second Gunner!” He then looked to the starboard side gunnery post. The slim young woman there all but swallowed under his sudden, fierce scrutiny. Like a hel’ath scorpion, Dath’mar had gone from emotionless and lazy-seeming to enraged and dangerous in a second. “You are the second in line, yes?”

“Y-yes, my lord!” She stammered. She was a Lieutenant Second Rank.

“You are now First Gunner! Call maintenance to clean your post and then take it.” Dath’mar pointed down to the draining officer now being borne away by low ranking enlisted men. “Don’t follow his example…Lieutenant First!”

The new gunner nodded deeply and then activated her intercom control. Dath’mar turned his single eye back to the viewer and the swirl of blazing junk floating out there. He hadn’t even gotten to savor the kill. Too bad. His vision drifted to his First Officer. Commander Kurvis looked back at him with a mix of wonder and disapproval. He might have handled things differently, but this was not his ship. Pang belonged to Dath’mar.

“Captain!” Came a call from the ensign manning the comm station. “Now receiving intercepted distress signals. Numerous calls. Ya’wenn frequencies.”

“From what, Bekk?”

It was I’rell who provided that clarification.

“Now scanning six life pods drifting away from the escort’s remains. I read…seventeen life signs.” The science officer looked back at him expectantly, and with more than a little bit of malicious intent. She knew what he would do with them. But Dath’mar was not in the mood. He hurled a quick look to Kurvis.

“First Officer, bring three prisoners in from the escape pods. Make sure at least one is female. Dispatch the rest and resume cloak. The bridge is yours.”







***

This story is actually a rewrite of a La'ra story I did early on before I knew how serious Larry was about writing his La'ra tales. My version was significantly different from his, but I bowed out gracefully given that La'ra is Larry's character after all. I'm juast glad that cameo he had in the first Sharp story spurred Larry into taking up the Klingon mantle and running with it. Larry has since drawn out some of the best Klingon fiction I've ever seen. The folk who actuallt get paid to write Klingon fiction should take a look at his stuff now and again.

I took the original idea for the scrapped La'ra story, also titled Dirt and came up with a longer, perhaps better version using Dath'mar. I threw in some elements I'd used before. The Gunner throwing his fit on the bridge and paying for it. This came from the old Sharp story. La'ra didn't kill his gunner [Ron'jar did] and niether does Dath'mar in this one.

This tale also differs significantly in that the original version I wrote was just an action story. This one dealves more into life aboard a Klingon Ship. La'ra said he liked that fascet. Maybe yall will too.

I'll post this one slowly as I continue to write on it. Gimme all the feed back you can. This one is a work in progress.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2008, 07:52:16 am »
I love it. I love the grimy smells darkness and tension you portrait, I love the stalking, I even love the way you handled the breach of the chain of command. I love the way you make feasible that the Ya' wenn are using a grainy subspace image to get intell from.

So GIMME MORE.

btw: I agree on Larry's Klingon stories but I'd add yours as well
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« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2008, 07:52:54 am »
And before I forget, I love that's a KLINGON story :D
Snickers@DND: If there is one straight answer in that bent little head of yours, you'd better start spillin' it pretty damn quick, or I'm gonna take a large, blunt object, roughly the size of Kallae AND his hat and shove it lengthwise up a crevice of your being so seldomly cleaned that even the denizens of the nine hells would not touch it with a 10-feet rusty pole

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #3 on: January 25, 2008, 09:55:20 am »
I liked this, it is very TOS Klingon. I never got the impression that the TNGers are serious enough - despite all their d'takh-waving - to go for this level of maiming their own crew in the interests of discipline. I know Dath'mar is a more extreme example, but it's cool to see him in action.

Though I automatically dislike any FASA references *grin* I do like your stealth approach routines, and the reminder that sensors aren't all powerful. They only search where and for what you tell them to. They can't pick up what they're not designed to.

The scene itself is well done and believable, and I'm looking forward to more Imperialistic Klingon antics. ;D
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #4 on: January 25, 2008, 08:13:50 pm »
FASA references?  Where?

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #5 on: January 26, 2008, 09:44:53 pm »
Torpedos and disrupters.  In SFB and SFC Klingons use phasers and disrupters are the torpedoes.  In FASA, the disrupters are the phaser equivalent and they use photon torpedoes.  This does in some ways make more sense.  Especially if disrupter pistols are the equivalent of hand phasers.

This was fun to read.  I have to say I'm now inspired to write a Kadh story.
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #6 on: January 26, 2008, 10:38:53 pm »
Without going into the rant I just deleted...

My stuff isn't based on any of the games. You want references...watch Star Trek: TOS Season One- ENT Season Four+Movies 1-9.

'Nuff Said.

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« Reply #7 on: January 30, 2008, 12:33:00 pm »
Ya, sorry Guv. Just had a quick re-read and there isn't really any FASA references. I was probably thinking of the more 'Klingon Academy'-stule weapons loadout and the positions of the disruptors in the hull. I think I was remembering your first posted Dath'mar story that you reference, where you say missiles in that (funny what you remember). Torpedoes are canon for K't'inga's, I have no probs with them. Besides, I was just tweakin' ya.  :P

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #8 on: January 30, 2008, 08:00:29 pm »
This is great, Guv. You know me, you write it I'll read it. You want to say, "Fire the Futon Torpedoes and make the ship go that way!", then I'll buy it.

Besides, I didn't see anything FASA about this. Just Guv writin' his new(ish) tale. *shrug*

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #9 on: January 30, 2008, 09:34:50 pm »
Torpedoes are canon for K't'inga's, I have no probs with them.

Torpedoes are canon for D-7s as well...watch more VOY [the scene where a 100 year old+ D-7 gives an Intrepid-Class a run for her money].  And you can kinda mention ENT...but I won't go there too far...

Glad you are all enjoying this, those of you that have replied already. I can thank the gracious La'ra for helping me figure out a decent ending for it, though it remains a work in progress even though I already slapped 'END' on it. Hope the depths of 'cruiser-life' that I tried to build is not missed and hope it is liked.

Now to post CH. 2
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« Reply #10 on: January 30, 2008, 09:41:42 pm »


CH. 2





Dath’mar stalked off the command deck and followed the zigzag trail of the former main gunner’s blood to the main turbo elevator that serviced this level. The bridge compartment of this newer ship was larger than that of his old Gro’mokh, making the trip from the hatch to the lift shorter. He remembered having seen the original layout of his old bridge when the ship had been given to him. He’d laughed at its inefficient design and had it torn out and altered while on a shakedown cruise. Former commanders and yardmen had done similar to the Pang, but her alterations had been even more lavish than his own. Pang’s bridge was huge for a Klingon warship. The removal of dated equipment had freed up much space on this forty-year-old cruiser. Only half of the original security foyer leading to the turbolift still remained.

The captain entered the elevator car that waited, jabbing a button for the lower decks. This car’s floor showed no sign of fresh blood. Another must have carried his gunner to the infirmary. Dath’mar did not relish killing or injuring crew just to make a point. He was loath to slay another Klingon. His imprisonment on Kovarn had shown him far too many of his own kind dead. Many had died by his own order, desperately attacking the enemy. He knew, though, that leaving Motek alive would also leave him an enemy at his back. But he would deal with it. And should Motek one day gain the upper hand over him and slay him, then the better man would have shown himself, wouldn’t he?

The lift car dropped down the length of shaft that descended into the main body of the Pang’s command pod. Halting at Deck 6, it lurched back into motion, racing laterally down the long run of tube that connected the forward pod to the stardrive section of the ship. The trip was not long, but Dath’mar’s nails bit into the palms of his hands with impatient pressure. The lift halted again and went back up two more levels. It deposited him on the engineering level.

The bark of the cloaking alarm sounded as the captain made his way down the wide, spacious corridors. His prisoners had been collected then, and the rest floated dead in space. The lighting dimmed, making the CO blend into the shadows thanks to the ash he’d ground into the leather of his uniforms. The enjoyable flow of cool air ended as, once again, the ventilators shut down. They wouldn’t start up again till the dioxide levels rose or till the ship decloaked. The doors to engineering parted with a high-pitched drone.

Working officers and men looked up from their busy tasks as the captain strode among them, stalking like a wolf on the prowl. They were wary of him. Likely the story of Motek had already reached the engine room. No matter how big the ship, rumor spread faster than fire. Dath’mar found the man he sought standing between the intermix core and the portside impulse reactor.

“Hekk!” The captain hailed the old man. There was no fondness or friendly content to his voice. Nor did he intentionally let on irritation. That bled out on its own. “The fore torpedo launcher remains out of action.”

Lieutenant Hekk was a tall, grizzled old man. His hair spilled from his crest like a wide river of whitewater. His hazel eyes showed years of experience. The captain had yet to push him very far. There was no need. The man had been an engineer for longer than most had served the Fleet.

“Yes, Captain. The structural mainframe beneath the loader mechanism and the accelerator both buckled when we were hit. My attempts at shoring the deck and sealing the gap have failed.”

Dath’mar took a moment to consider in silence.

“Why?”

“The internal blast ripped away most of the surrounding frame work that holds the compartment together. The entire level is a hazard. When I shore up one area, every other falls out of alignment.”

“Your plan?”

“I am fabricating new internal braces to shore up the rigidity of the compartment. Before this, I can do nothing further.” The ancient man’s withered voice explained. He was a concise man, at least when speaking of his business.

“How long?”

“Another thirteen hours to brace up the framework. Then we can evaluate the remainder of the work ahead.”

The captain nodded his understanding. He did not like being without one of his most substantial weapons while so close to enemy territory. The Ya’wenn would reinforce the area soon, again flushing him away or forcing him to fight at a disadvantage. The Pang had taken a beating over the last few months. Vengeance did not come without price.

“What of the other systems?”

“The shield generators are requiring constant supervision. During our combat alert, I had two teams standing by just in case they failed. Thankfully, they came up when ordered…this time. The plasma transfer coils to the main disruptors are near to fused; you fired them so much. They need replacing; a job that will take the better part of two days out on our own. And both impulse reactors are beginning to try my patience. Added to all the minor inconveniences, our capacity is becoming sub-par.”

The Whitehair did not hold back. Dath’mar respected him for that. The ‘minor inconveniences’ he mentioned were the other devices and machinery that was damaged or out of action aboard ship. The main sensor array atop the bridge was in shambles from the structural shift caused by the torpedo detonation in the launcher. Dath’mar had caused this damage himself by ordering the weapons officer to over load their weapons past 200% while fighting the Ya’wenn. Other things ranged from the grav plating being damaged to the main life support generators being offline. The outer hull was patched reasonably well and structural integrity as a whole remained near to 92%.
But this ship needed much repair.

The commanding officer considered his options. Returning to Goesa’vaina would take nearly a week. Admiral Sharp had gotten the Starfleet Command to allow his ship and others the freedom to pass through Federation territory between Ya’wenn space and home base, but it still took time. He did not know how long he would be tied up there with his ship under going refit. It might take him months to get back here to exact further revenge.

How much of the work could be done out in space, were they to retreat to safer areas?

“Can you get our systems back up on your own?” Dath’mar inquired, looking the Whitehair in the eyes. Hekk chewed on something and looked distant.

“I might, were we to come to a halt so I could get to the outer hull with work-sleds. Then I could access and handle the heavier modules.”

“Then it will be done. Prepare your teams for the first duty shift tomorrow.”

“Yes, Captain.”

Hekk called him ‘Captain’, never ‘Lord’. He liked that about the man. The captain turned and stalked back out of the engine room. Now he had to consider where to take his ship so that the engineer could pull her apart. He knew their general location very well. But so many weeks inside that damned, whirling plasma phenomena had befuddled his direction sense. He’d have to consult charts. Once into the elevator again, he set it toward the officer’s quarters and then opened the intercom circuit.

“First Officer! Pull the charts on this immediate area of space and send them down to my cabin. I will review our position.”

“Yes, my lord!”

“Status?”

“We have our specimens in the brig, Captain. Two male Ya’wenn and a female. Highest was the ship’s third officer, so the Qas DevwI’ claims. We are back under cloak and under way on course 377 mark 121 at one half thrust. Impulse drive operating on warp power, auxiliary reactors shutting down. No contacts in immediate viscinity.”

Dath’mar killed the comm link and was silent the rest of the trip back to the command pod. The lift dropped a deck and practically opened right before his cabin doors. He ignored the maintenance hands on duty as they worked on an open access panel near the life support junction. He knew what they were doing. The air conditioning on this level was dead. It was hot or cold on the entire deck depending on the ambient temperature outside the hull. Right now, it was frigid. He ignored that too.

Dath’mar activated the main light in his cabin’s antechamber and sat down at the round dining table that dominated the main body of the room. He picked up a bottle of Warnog from the low cabinet to his right and pulled its cork. After a long pull from its contents, he picked up a waiting data pad and addressed his assistant’s list of pressing details needing his attention.

He was not at it long before the door’s buzzer went off. He didn’t look up. He knew that the two sentries posted at all times outside his quarters would deal with any trouble.

“Come.”

The door opened to allow the chief navigator entry to his room. Lieutenant Ger’shall was a shapely woman. Her hair and scent reminded him of Li’hoela… He tried to ignore that fact as he did many other things. At least he pretended to ignore…

“I have the charts of this section, Captain.” Ger’shall told him.

At this, Dath’mar looked up to meet her gaze. Her long, wavy, light brown hair was almost exactly like his late science officer’s. Her face was rounder, her eyes lighter and wider. Her hair, though… It was the same. In her thick arms she carried three heavy data pads. He pointed for her to lay them atop his table.

“Leave.”

“Yes, my lord.” She sounded dejected. What had she expected of him? Small talk? Invitation to shirk her duties and imbibe Warnog with him?

The door opened to the corridor beyond, framing the wide, heavy frame of the ship’s surgeon. The huge man grinned leeringly at the shapely navigator as he stepped aside for her to pass. He left her only enough room to squeeze past, thus rubbing her assets against him along the way. Finished with his minor acts of lechery, he waddled uninvited into the anteroom.

“You have an office for this, you know.” The surgeon prodded.

“Your point?”

The doctor sat down far too close for Dath’mar’s comfort. He glared up at the indolent man as he and his bulk smiled that intolerable, smug smile. He was always testing, prodding. “Point? Oh, I have no point. Merely suggesting you might find your office better suited to dealing with business. One’s quarters might actually be seen as a refuge from such bothers…”

“My service to the Empire is no ‘bother’, Surgeon. And where I conduct my business is none of yours. What did you come down here for?”

“Your shining smile and gracious company.” The fat soldier grinned back up till he saw the stone glare he’d earned. His countenance faltered all of a moment. “I came to tell you that our esteemed guest down in security has expired. His time with the mind-sifter was most draining.”

“Commander Banks is dead?”

“His real name was—“

“He deserves no Klingon name. It is as well he died with that ridiculous human face intact. Did he offer more intelligence before his passage to Grethor?”

“You left him with no intelligence at all after seventy hours in that chair. I found it quite interesting as a study case. I have never observed a subject that had experienced Force Five invasion.”

“Study the corpse as long as you will, then blow it out the nearest lock.”

“Had ‘Commander Banks’ been working for Fleet Intelligence or Internal Security rather than the Kla’davin, would you still hold him in such regard?”

“He was a traitor. Nothing more.”

“His assignment began before the Praxis explosion. It is likely—“

Dath’mar looked up from the data module he was activating and shot the surgeon a deadly stare. “Enough, Surgeon. State your real purpose. You could have filed Banks’ death in a report and not wasted your fat breath to get here.”

The surgeon issued his own glare.

“I came to remind the captain that he was ordered into this area of space to fight the Ya’wenn, not his gunner.”

“You come here to question my disciplinary measures?”

“You nearly killed a fine officer! It was luck that his blood pooled in his limbs when pressure from the heart was lost. Otherwise I would not have gotten enough into him in time to save his life!”

“He was blatantly insubordinate!”

“Motek is a skilled officer and an asset to the ship!”

“That is the only reason I didn’t vaporize him!”

“You could still have handled it differently! We have a brig! Broken bones are easier to deal with than severed arteries!”

Dath’mar’s pistol appeared from the depths of his leather holster and plopped onto the tabletop. The captain took a long, exasperated breath and measured the shiver of fear showing in the doctor’s eyes. “I am near to dispensing with another key officer…” He warned.

The pistol was wide and stubbier than any Klingon issue weapon. Its huge barrel glowed with a soft blue light from inside when activated. A red tracer light twinkled at its top. The power module was heavy and robust. The surgeon stared at it for a second. But still he did not back down.

He wisely changed track, however.

“Motek can be back at his station in two days time. I’m ordering no training or activity beyond manning a station till I’m satisfied the vascular graft has set. You’ll be interested to know that I am also now treating him for a Ya’wenn virus. You should clean your blade more thoroughly.”

Dath’mar found a small amount of dark humor in dealing with this man. This alone kept the doctor alive at times. Were he not to entertain the captain, Dath’mar would surely have killed him by now.

“I hear we have more guests.” The surgeon went on with a new topic. Dath’mar did not respond. He merely looked over the long list of stellar hazards in this section. Then he correlated them on the star map included in the pad’s memory. There was plenty of open space, but he also wanted some interference to confuse scanners at long range. He saw where he would likely send the Pang.

“What have you in mind for the Ya’wenn prisoners?”

The surgeon would not relent. He continued to probe for conversation.

Dath’mar dropped the data module with a loud clatter and jabbed his angry eye into the doctor’s face. “Do you ever cease your prattle?”

“Not till I’m done.”

“For now, they sit. They know we have each of the others. If the Qas Dev did their duty right, they can’t see one another, nor can they speak back and forth. When I am ready for them, I will question them. Till then, they sit.”

The surgeon merely nodded. Psychological warfare was a required subject for Imperial Medics. Cutting off the prisoner’s communications with the outside world left them vulnerable. This pressure could be used, guided.

“They’ll be fed?”

“Sparingly.”

For whatever reason, that answer seemed to set the huge man at ease. He finally resigned himself to silence and allowed the captain the leisure of getting back to his work. Dath’mar stood after a few moments and traveled to the comm panel on the far wall.

“Bridge.”

“Kurvis.”

“Set course for coordinates 113705 by 27716. We will take advantage of Starfleet’s generosity and conceal ourselves among them while we make our repairs.”

“Yes, my lord. Speed?”

“Standard.”

“At once!”

When Dath’mar turned back to the table, he found the Surgeon aiming his own pistol at him. The captain lowered his hands level on either side, ready to respond. Was there to be a fight here? Or was the doctor just trying to get even with him with a moment of pause?

It turned out to be the later. This became obvious when the large Klingon twirled the gun on a finger and presented its handle to his commanding officer. The doctor’s wide spaced eyes were gleaming smiles. “Why do you carry such a weapon, Captain? It is not Klingon.”

Dath’mar took the weapon slowly and replaced it in his holster. Both the weapon and its leather holster had been fashioned on Kovarn. “I like it.”

“A trophy?”

“A reminder.”
***


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Re: Dirt
« Reply #11 on: February 02, 2008, 11:53:24 pm »
No replies whatsoever?

Maybe I shouldn't write Klingon...

CH. 3





A day later found the D-7 battlecruiser in more friendly skies.

The IKS Pang floated without course in the deep black, well within the space of its former enemy. Her holds and hanger bay stood open to space while work pods and shuttles flitted about the outer hull and tended to a lengthy list of necessary repairs. Pressure suited Klingons walked and bobbed across the tarnished silver hull, uneasy of the great nothingness they operated within. Klingons did not react well to zero-G environments. Gravity plating was a definite necessity aboard Imperial ships. As a species, Klingons made superb warriors, but lousy acrobats.

The inner operations of the ship had scaled down to a more leisurely pace. This was as close to shore leave as they could expect for some time. Duty shifts were shortened. Works loads lessened unless one was on a repair schedule for the day. An officer travelling from compartment to compartment saw more smiling warriors than had been about in the last month. The crew was proud of their victories and accomplishments. But they were tired. Tired men and women grew to hate even the good things.

As dour and malicious as he was, Dath’mar understood this. He could sympathize. He had once been a young Bekk.

The captain was traversing the corridor outside the engine room, once again having spoken with Hekk and gathering the Whitehair’s report. He held a detailed work list and progress report in his gloved hand as he moved along at a slow pace, reading. He turned the last corner that would take him to the fore lift.

The one-eyed officer looked up suddenly. He could have sworn he’d heard a…cry. A squeal, perhaps? Where had it come from?

The elevator doors ahead of his hissed open, depositing the lift’s sole occupant out onto the deck before him. The four-legged beast looked up at him and squealed loudly. In its all-consuming fright, it dashed toward him as the lift doors hissed closed. Dath’mar’s eye widened as he reached for his pistol.

The targ charged him headlong, not altering its course as it squealed all the way. The doors behind it opened once again. One of the ship’s cooks was in hot pursuit, raised cleaver in hand as he chased down his quarry. Dath’mar removed his hand from the grip of his weapon as details became more evident. The targ skidded of the expanded-metal deck, sluing to a halt behind the captain and looking back at the running cook from between Dath’mar’s legs. Its beady eyes dazzled in fear at the cook’s approach and it shook its stubby tusks back and forth. The captain watched this display, then nudged it with a boot.

“Still.”

The beast stopped moving and looked up at him expectantly.

Dath’mar held up a hand before the cook.

“Stop.”

The sergeant slowed, stomping to a heavy halt before his CO and snapped off a weary salute. Dath’mar did not bother to return the salute. He glared across at the galley hand. “What are you doing, Sergeant?”

“That devious little petaq escaped my larders and has led me on a deck by deck chase all through out the ship!” The cook huffed. He was red in the face with more than just embarrassment. The targ looked from the captain to the cook, hopeful he had found his champion. Dath’mar looked down at the besieged animal, then back to the cook.

“Leave it.”

“My lord?”

“Can you not tell a domesticated targ from a game animal, sergeant?”

“All galley provision targ are domestically bred—“

“But they have the pronounced tusks of targ in the wild. Not the short, blunted teeth of a pet. This animal was discarded from someone’s home. It was not intended for the crew’s meal.”

“But it’s here…” The cook looked disappointed and confused.

“A pet targ has never tasted bloody flesh. It will taste like canned meat, Sergeant. Draw another targ from the stores to butcher. This one is now mine.” Dath’mar stared steadily back to the man. The galley hand seemed to catch onto something as understanding formed on his face.

“Ah, I see. The stone faced captain does have a heart!”

Dath’mar struck the man squarely across the jaw, dropping him in one lightning quick stroke. The targ looked on in triumph. The cook smiled where he lay and rubbed his jaw. He tucked his cleaver into the brown leather apron he wore.

“And a solid fist, I might add.”

Dath’mar clicked to the targ and stepped past the sergeant. The little beast followed obediently, its hooves chattering on the deck as it came. The captain continued on his way to the lift, wondering just how the targ has been able to trigger the elevator controls...
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #12 on: February 02, 2008, 11:54:18 pm »

Commander Kurvis watched over the engineering officers that manned the bridge console. They were earnestly at work, monitoring and guiding the work of the men moving about on the exterior of the ship. Thus far, in the forty-eight hours they had been at rest here in Federation space, much had been accomplished. The impulse reactors had been disassembled and work was undergoing to revamp them. The ancient fusion cores were among the oldest surviving pieces of equipment aboard ship. Outside, the cowling to the upper sensor module had been pulled and two men from the science division were in the process of replacing severed and burned power conduits. The lower maw of the command module had been opened up to space at several locations while Lieutenant Hekk and his teams lent themselves to getting their forward torpedo launcher back up and running.

Work was progressing all over the ship at a fantastic pace. And all of this was being accomplished by men standing reduced watches. Kurvis would not have thought this outcome possible till today. Perhaps the captain knew something about command that he did not. While moody and asocial, Captain Dath’mar did indeed seem to know how to take care of his men.

When he wasn’t running them through at their stations…

Kurvis left his engineers to their duty and turned to look toward the center of the Pang’s fully lit bridge. Lieutenant First Shenna was there at the Gunner One position, her newly acquired post. She was a slight figure, though very fit. She had long, straight black hair like to their captain’s. She didn’t look like a gunner. She didn’t look much like a warrior at all. But she was proficient. The First Officer had taken the time to re-familiarize himself with her file jacket after her impromptu promotion. Her skills were admirable and her devotion to duty outstanding. Most females were simply out-competed when it came to becoming weapons officers. One almost never saw the fairer sex in the gunnery post. The fact that she’d even made Second Gunner was astounding. Now, due to a bad decision on Motek’s part, Shenna was enjoying the first post in her division.

The First Officer chuckled. What a ship this was turning out to be.

“Contact report.” Lieutenant Commander I’rell called out from the science station. There was no alarm in her voice. She manned the station by herself this shift. The closest body of traffic was the group of Federation convoy ships making for the next sector with their escort ship. “Starfleet vessel, Miranda-Class battlecruiser. USS Comanche. She’s turning our direction.”

“Keep her under surveillance.” Kurvis said back. They’d be receiving a hail in the next few minutes. ‘Two days, and they’re only just now noticing us…’ He thought with amusement. After dropping the cloak, Pang had powered down to a minimal standby mode. So they weren’t the easiest vessel to spot. But he’d have thought all those local patrols would have noticed them long before now…

The main hatch to the compartment growled open. Clad in another of his dark uniforms, the captain strode in, looking everywhere with his one eye, but at no one. Kurvis turned to face him and saluted. The one-eyed man saw him despite not looking at him, and returned the salute. Only then did he bother to meet Kurvis’s gaze. “Report.”

Kurvis tried not to show any amusement.

“Repairs continue. Torpedo repair crew states that they’ll have the hull rebuilt within the hour and that bracing will be complete by 1700 hours. The impulse reactors remain down. Sensor repairs are about half finished.”

“Main life support?”

“Not scheduled till first shift tomorrow. Both backup systems remain optimal. Stores are good. Fabrication reports a shortage in duranium. Bekk Torg advises that he will begin fashioning further parts made from HY 2000 steel till our supplies are replenished.”

Dath’mar merely nodded. The First wondered if he truly cared for all the details or whether he simply asked for them out of rote. In the end, it did not matter. He’d give the report no matter what. The captain passed a final glance over the smoothly running bridge and went over to stand near the science console. “Contacts?”

“One Federation battlecruiser. Inbound to our position at warp five. She scanned us a few minutes ago.” I’rell reported to him. Kurvis came to stand behind the captain and science officer. Dath’mar leaned in and looked the contact information over, then straightened. He didn’t seem concerned.

“At last. They notice us.” He muttered.

“Yes.” Kurvis agreed.

“Return their scan. Let them know we see them as well.”

I’rell nodded and turned her chair back to front. Her small hands went over the illuminated controls, buttons and toggles of her station. A powerful, short burst of subspace energy washed forth from their lateral scanner array and returned off the hull of the approaching starship. Information began to fill monitors and banks of displays on the particulars of the alien craft. Its wide saucer, underslung nacelles and high torpedo pod were soon depicted on a screen, revolving to show a 3-D image. The Miranda-Class cruiser seemed built to emulate Klingon design. They were a tough ship to fight. With their extensive weapons arrays, it took scant seconds for them to slice through even the toughest battlecruiser’s shields…

“Incoming hail, Captain.” Called out the communications officer. Dath’mar frowned a bit more than usual and began to turn away. Kurvis watched him head toward the communications control room starboard of the bridge compartment.

“First Officer, deal with the humans. I have had my fill of speaking with them.”

“Yes, my lord.”

Commander Kurvis made for the upraised chair in the center of the room and stood before it. Ready, he pointed to the comm officer as Dath’mar faded into the other chamber. Likely he would monitor the broadcast from within.

The elongated, hexagonal viewscreen flickered to the image of a shiny, much-too-bright Starfleet bridge filled with flat console boards and flashing, light generated controls. A lone, tall figure sat in a soft, pale blue chair. His skin coloring was like to that of a Klingon, but his smooth, round head and short-cropped hair belied any other similarities. Kurvis saw jovial lines etched into the human’s face. This was no warrior. He bore the rank of captain on that bright red uniform. He wasn’t to be underestimated, but Kurvis figured him to be soft.

“This is Captain Hiruul Ramses of the Comanche. State the reason behind your presence in Federation space.” He came off strong. A few words did not make a man, though.

Kurvis smiled pleasantly.

“Your Starfleet Command recently issued permission for Klingon ships to traverse this area of space to get to the Kovarn Reach. We are not in violation of any agreement.”
“That permission was for you to ‘traverse’ the region. Not bob around out there. Are you the captain of that ship?” The human looked as though he might have liked to clothesline Kurvis where he stood. He had a more violent side than the First Officer might have guessed.

“I am Commander Kurvis, First Officer of the Pang.”

“Where is your captain?”

“He has more pressing business to attend to. I was free to speak with you…”

A long, curving brow arched steeply over the Terran’s left eye.

“So he’s too busy to speak with me? Fine, I’ll speak with you. State your purpose.”

“We have taken a great deal of damage from Ya’wenn weaponry in the months we’ve been battling them. We required repairs and a safe place to implement them.” Kurvis smiled an icy smile once more. “I trust we present no inconvenience to you or your fleet, so far removed from the traffic zones?”

A sarcastic light played in the human captain’s eye. He cocked a wide smirk and leaned back into his command chair. “Well, so long as you’re crippled, I guess not. But I’ve noticed that your transponder isn’t on. That does present a hazard to traffic. Make sure you get that back on. After that, you’ve got another twelve hours to be on your way. Comanche out.”

The viewer immediately snapped to an image of black night beyond the ship. Kurvis’s temper flared with a loud growl just as the door to the comm room opened again. Dath’mar glared at him reproachfully, disliking his unbecoming display before the officers. Kurvis stifled the heat in his chest and stepped down before his commander.

“You saw?”

“Yes.”

“He dares to order us away!”

“This is his space. He does his duty.” Dath’mar ascended to his chair dispassionately and sat down. He sat lightly but still seemed to emulate a tree falling. “As do we. Order the transponder activated, but at a low power level. I don’t want the Ya’wenn finding us before we are ready. Get Hekk to gather up his remaining teams and begin repairs to the main life support generators.”

Kurvis saluted and stalked away. He burned with pent up rage at being dismissed so easily by the Federation captain. He could not bear to be still. He would deliver the captain’s orders to the engineer personally and then assist with repairs. The comm officer could take care of the damned transponder. She’d heard the command.



Dath’mar watched his First go, storming off the bridge. Kurvis was skilled, an affable leader. But he allowed anger to guide his actions too easily. ‘Who am I to judge,’ thought the captain wryly. ‘I lead an entire crew on my mission of vengeance…’ The difference being that his anger was driven, controlled. His action against the Ya’wenn jailer was premeditated. Not piece-meal. He’d been planning what he’d do to the people on Kovarn for ten years.

The captain noted that the communications officer was looking after where Kurvis had fled, uncertain. Dath’mar looked her way with a nod and signaled for her to activate the transponder circuit. Now the diligent young Starfleet captain would have nothing to worry about. Hopefully the Ya’wenn would not be looking for it.

“Captain,” came the comm officer yet again. “I have an incoming message from Goesa’vaina. Command Priority.”

The captain raised an eyebrow over his metal patch and glanced slowly to the right, to the comm station. He hadn’t expected anything more than strategic updates from his command base for the next several months. His ship was, for all intents and purposes, on a prolonged ‘dark mission’. So long as he adhered to his original, and rather loose, operational criteria, he could do pretty much as he pleased.

The captain arose from his chair and made for the aft hatch.

“Prepare to patch it to my quarters, Bekk.” He paused as he reached the door’s threshold. Kurvis was below. He wanted an experienced officer at the chair. Of the current duty officers on deck, I’rell was the most experienced. She had little command time, however. “Science officer!”

I’rell whipped her chair about at the captain’s bark and looked up his direction.

“Yes, my lord?”

“You have the bridge.”

“Yes, my lord!”

Dath’mar left the bridge quickly to hide his chuckle at the officer’s reaction. She’d acted as though she’d believed he was about to order her to blow herself out an airlock. Then there had been relief and elation at his order. She was indeed young for her rank…

The turbo elevator ride to the senior officer’s deck was a short one. Dath’mar stepped over a pile of disorganized air conditioning machinery that littered the floor near the lift exit. Technicians and repairmen babbled apologies and excuses as he made for his cabin. He chose the second door to his rooms, entering the central living chamber. He swatted at his targ, shooing him away from the small square table in the far corner of the room. He sat quickly and activated the press toggle on the computer interface that served his cabin.

The computer buzzed on and its screen flickered to life. He tapped in his security clearance codes and waited for the monitor’s maladjusted hash to disappear. This ship’s computer banks were old and worn. They served their purpose, and there had never been a need to enhance them.

The broad, dark colored face of Governor Ron’jar stared back at the captain when the screen cleared up. The Governor seemed mildly pleased over something. “Captain Dath’mar. I did not expect so prompt a response.”

“We have been outside the Kovarn Plasma Region for nearly two days, making repairs to the ship.” The cruiser’s commander explained. Equally ranked, Ron’jar had no more seniority than Dath’mar. But the title of military governor leant Ron’jar the capacity to dictate Commands orders to him. Dath’mar’s actual divisional commander was Colonel La’ra.

“The Pang fairs well?”

“She does. She is a grand battlecruiser and a steady warrior.”

“Indeed.” The governor agreed. Dath’mar knew Ron’jar well enough already to know that this, thankfully, would be the extent of the small talk. The broad shouldered soldier adjusted his stance in his own chair, light years away and spoke further. “You have new orders. The farming planet of Galt has reported an ecological disaster. They request the presence of an Imperial cruiser to assist them.”

“An ecological disaster!” Dath’mar exclaimed. His eye widened and his teeth gnashed. He nearly knocked the computer terminal from it’s desk mount. “We are not a relief ship!”

“I know. No capable ship is close enough to lend assistance in time to avert further damage. Yours is the nearest cruiser sized vessel.” Ron’jar’s expression did not change at all. He had known how the captain would react. He’d likely have guessed Dath’mar’s next words as well.

“What of your cruiser?”

This did draw a slight, angry expression.

“Reassigned…by Imperial Command. With no new ships being launched within the foreseeable future, Command has reallocated all unengaged capitol vessels to the Juramik Stretch to bring about a quick end to the reclamation of our territory. I retain only three Birds of Prey and cannot respond to the distress call. This leaves you.”

“Are these your orders?” Dath’mar demanded.

“No. These orders come from Brigadier La’ra.”

“Brigadier! He has been promoted again? I thought he and Tor were enemies…”

Ron’jar allowed a small smirk.

“They have been. General Tor is a…fair man. He recognizes results and those who provide them for him. As does La’ra. The Brigadier is pleased with your progress against the Ya’wenn. He believes you can help the farmers of Galt.”

Dath’mar could not be impressed with flattery. But if Colonel…Brigadier La’ra had ordered him to respond to the crisis, he could do little else. He leaned back into his small chair and glared holes through the viewer. He sighed and ground his sharp teeth.

“What are the details?”

“I will dispatch the reports. Precise details have yet to come through, but the colony governor can advise you on your arrival. Goesa’vaina out.” The screen faded to black.
Dath’mar switched the computer off. He knew of the Galt colony. He had run it supplies three times while commanding the Gro’mokh. It was an agrarian world, producing grains and large quantities of vegetables for Qo’noS and Imperial member worlds. He did not know why, but they imported masses of Grubbu worms on a yearly basis.
Frustration filled the Klingon soldier’s bowels. But in the end, he found that he was not so angry as he might have thought. He questioned himself internally. Why was he not completely wroth with anger?

The answer was simple. His Empire had, and always would be, more important to him than even his desire for revenge. The Empire came first. Now and always. He was it’s servant. A gloved hand reached out for the intercom switch by the old, scratched up computer.

“First Officer!”

“Kurvis.” Came the First’s replay. He was still angry. The captain found this amusing.

“Commander, we have new orders. Order Hekk to get ready for warp speed.”

“An emergency?”

Dath’mar sneered in disgust, despite himself.

“Of sorts.”

“At once, lord!”

Dath’mar killed the link. He’d inform the bridge crew himself and supervise the overall effort as well. His targ hopped up onto a chair as he passed, grunting for attention. The captain paused to give it a scratch behind his rough ears. The little beast’s eyes rolled in pleasure. He scratched even harder. As expected, the right rear hoof began to patter at the worn upholstery of the chair beneath him.

Well, if he must put off his vengeance to assist a colony, it was best to look at it as in the Empire’s interest. He would do as they bade him. Long live the Empire!
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #13 on: February 03, 2008, 12:32:58 am »
You should write Klingon.  You should also note the fanfic forums tide-like lulls and frenzies and take them in stride. ;D

You already know most of my feelings 'bout this one, so I'll just say I'm having just as much fun reading it again.
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« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2008, 03:22:53 pm »
That was pretty good. Sorry for no comment on Ch2, I thought I had.

The scene with the targ was cute - as was Dath'mar's decking of the cook. "I don't care if I have the Klingon equivalent of a Pomeranian for a pet, I'm still a manly man!" *punch*

A good, solid Klingon scene. Very few (if any) spelling mistakes. Clear storytelling. A good feel for the featured players. Miranda as a battlecruiser? I can see that, just feels a wee bit weird.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #15 on: February 05, 2008, 05:40:27 pm »
Miranda as a battlecruiser? I can see that, just feels a wee bit weird.



A quote from STIII:
[As Klingon points to the sensor screne before him...]
"Federation battlecruiser..."

In Rogland, Klingons call most everything a battlecruiser, so just take it as a general term. Their version of 'starship'. My Rommies will call just about everything they have a warbird, but I won't be writing them using said term for anyone else's craft.

Its raining like hell here...so I'm off!

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« Reply #16 on: February 08, 2008, 09:43:17 pm »
CH. 4





Today was the first day the crew of the Pang had used their briefing room in all the time that Dath’mar had been in command. Typically, he held conference on a mission on the bridge for all to hear, officers and crew alike, or he used the Threat Analysis Room on Deck Six. There had been a layer of dust atop the inexpensive polymer table when they’d entered. Even the division officers used their operational spaces for briefings. This room simply wasn’t used much. But it existed.

Dath’mar had chosen to hold his briefing here now that his ship was nearly ready for warp and the operational data had been reviewed. He knew the officers would not be happy. And he wanted their displeasure vented before him only, and not in front of the men…

Kurvis rolled his eyes as he slid the data pad in his hand away in disgust.

“This is a joke. We go to help farmers figure out why their crops die!”

I’rell, who’d read the dispatch with far more interest for detail, whacked the commander on his armored shoulder. “They know why! They ask us to solve their problem. They mention that their grubbu have died and that they cannot begin the planting season.”

“Grubbu!” The First Officer growled. “What do they have to do with plants!”

Dath’mar glanced aside and waited for his science officer to answer. Kurvis could grasp most any science having to do with blasting another ship into ribbons. The captain was now learning that the same officer had trouble with other, less combative forms of knowledge. Such was the nature of the soldier.

I’rell tensed, feeling all eyes suddenly on her in the half-lit room. Lieutenant Hekk, First Gunner Shenna, Navigator Ger’shall, Comm Chief Jark and the Qas DevwI’ Commander Kel’dann were all here. All looking at her expectantly. How would she fair?

“Their natural soil possesses a high abundance of natural, inorganic fertilizers such as rock phosphate and limestone. What it does not possess are organic compounds like nitrogen, such as that trapped by bacteria in the soil, vermicast or humus. These are created by releasing grubbu worms into the soil over great expanses. They sift through the soil, feeding, and their feces replenishes the dirt with the nutrients that Galt does not naturally have.”

Now Dath’mar understood all those damned grubbu shipments.

“How did the grubbu die?” He asked.

Commander I’rell picked up the data module and looked it over.

“It does not say, Captain.”

“Then they do not know.” Dath’mar leaned back in the slim, creaking metal chair. “Do we know of other sources for grubbu?”

Hekk, the engineer, was the one who looked up to answer that.

“Grubbu are indigenous to Qo’noS. This was the first time I had heard of a use for them. You can’t eat ‘em.” The last bit was reference to an ancient children's joke. Grubbu tasted acidic and fowl. Kids often added them to plates of Gagh as pranks on adults and other children alike. Many parents carefully examined each handful of gagh before shoveling it into their mouths…

Dath’mar’s eye again looked to I’rell. He wondered if Starfleet briefings followed this retinue… With each officer hanging on the science specialist’s every word…
“If there are other worlds who breed them, I know of none.” She told them. I’rell turned to the computer access terminal before her and flipped the toggle to bring it online. She waited while the ancient thing started. Light flowed over the narrow contours of her face.

Kurvis, least interested in this mission, seemed lost in thought suddenly.

“If the grubbu on Galt all died out, then we need to know why. We will accomplish nothing if we bring them another group and they just up and die!”

The ship’s marine commander, Kel’dann swiveled in his chair and addressed the captain. “Could an enemy have poisoned them?”

Dath’mar shrugged.

“The farmers employ only the most minimal means of tracking space objects. No vessels have been near since their last medical run three months ago. But any vessel could have come in under stealth and done what ever they may… The farmers tested for terrestrial based and common poisons. They found nothing they could report.”

“Radiation?”

“None.”

The soldier grunted and sat back. For one whose specialty was ground and shipboard-armed combat, he seemed strangely piqued by this mission. Perhaps it stirred up the monotony for him. The captain noted the oddity in the commander’s personality and refocused his attention on the matter at hand.

“Our first course is to get to Galt and assess the situation first hand. I already know no grubbu exist on the non-Imperial worlds between us and there. How long till we are ready for warp flight?”

Hekk shifted, but not out of discomfort.

“My men work to replace the outer hull modules we pulled to access equipment. This will be done within the hour. Then another half an hour for adequate integrity testing. An hour and a half, likely less.”

“Good. Navigator,” Dath’mar addressed the young woman at the end of the flimsy, modular table. “Set a course for Galt when we leave this briefing and have it standing by. We will run at maximum speed to minimize our reaction time. The Empire will not say Pang did not give her best effort.”

Commander Kel’dann looked to his CO again.

“What reprocuctions are we looking at if our…rescue…is not successful?”

“Galt serves the Empire by exporting crops to member worlds throughout our territory. This generates much-needed capitol since the Praxis disaster. It also ensures enough food for livestock that feed the growing Klingon populations…” Dath’mar stifled a small smirk. “WE do not favor vegetables as staples on the dinner plate…”

Gruff chuckles and outright laugher floated about the long room as I’rell finished her data search.

“Two other worlds breed and produce grubbu for export. They are well past Vor’cha Sector. There are no ships currently shipping grubbu in any reported sector.”

Kurvis glowered in thought on the matter. Warriors made poor agricultural think-tank members.

“Are there any other sort of…worm…that we can substitute them with? Surely other worms sh*t fertilizer.”

I’rell tapped another key. The image on her screen cast a green hue over her face in the dim white light of the briefing room. “No other worm is bred in such quantities. Grubbu are specifically used for this purpose. There has never been a planet where they could not be used.”

The captain sat in silence while the rest of his officers brooded over their own thoughts. Likely they thought this was a poor use for a battlecruiser. Let some transport ship handle this, they were likely grousing. But no other ship was within range to deal with this before the onset of the planting season. The Empire’s economy had flattened. It had been floundering since the loss of the Juramik Stretch forty years ago. Praxis had made it all the worse. If Galt fell, it would sew chaos throughout the Empire’s trade economy. Member worlds would lose a vast amount of their market. People would begin to starve. The Empire would again have to plead with the Federation for help, just as they had over the ecological damage to Qo’noS.

“If we cannot replace the worms, then perhaps we can get hold of what they put into the soil.” Dath’mar said lowly, almost a repressed grumble. His men settled their eyes and attention on him. “I will speak with the farming governor and gather more information. Till then, our objectives remain. Reach Galt. Gather real intelligence and then take care of the emergency. This is not a glorious mission, but assisting our worlds bears honor. Let that thought enter your minds while we undertake this action. Stations!”

Officers stood as one and saluted their captain sternly. They began to file out and Dath’mar stood up. Kurvis remained behind to speak with him as the doors closed. Both men smelled of far too long of duty shifts. The First Officer had a sardonic smirk.

“This task is an onerous one, my lord.”

“Yes. Not very song-worthy, is it?”

“No. You accepted it easily?”

“Not without argument. But when the Empire speaks, the Pang reacts. Whatever the reason. You disapprove of our cruiser being used in this way?”

Kurvis seemed to consider before answering.

“It is unusual. But the bulk of our fleet has moved to the Juramik Stretch to reclaim it from the Mirak. We must succeed here just as they must there. I suppose it is the way of things.”

“Yes.” Dath’mar wondered over why his First lingered just to banter this subject. “You have further concerns?”

“Today will be Second Gunner Motek’s first duty shift on the bridge since his…accident.”

“You suspect further insubordination out of him?”

“Only time will say. While emotional, he has a fine record. Your slight to him, however, will be remembered.” There was an unnecessary warning overtone to Kurvis’s words.

“I need no reminder to watch my back.” Dath’mar told the taller officer. “And he will learn to do his duty.”

“Yes, my lord.”

“Station!”

Kurvis turned swarthily on his heel and strode out of the briefing room. Dath’mar considered his words and thought about how he would handle future incidents with his second gunner. Beyond this, he had more important, if less glamorous, things to attend to.





The image of the rotund face of Governor Legat of Galt stared back on the small screen in the half-lit recesses of the main communications room. Captain Dath’mar did not initially think much of the short-looking, round bodied man who stood there, looking back at him. He wore tan leathers, no weapon beyond a knife, and stood with the leisurely pose of a civilian who’d never known strife or bloodshed. He reminded Dath’mar far too much of his own chief surgeon.

Once the governor’s first words directed their conversation immediately toward progress, however, the military captain began to form a new opinion of the man.
“We have new results from the latest measure of scans our soil analyst, ran. They found a previously undetected quantity of Solonium-90, an isotope which does not occur naturally on this planet.” The fat man said.

“Source?”

“At first, we could not fathom. There had been no ships here in months. And the isotope was not present at the last scan of our fields. However, we did finally remember a comet that traveled fairly close to our world seventeen months previous. Our computers are primitive, but we were able to build a model that shows that water drifting from the passing tail of the comet likely deposited it over most of the main continent.” A measure of pride peeked through the downtrodden expression of the governor-farmer. He had been thorough and given the Fleet commander something useful to work with. “This Solonium particle has been found to be poisonous to the Grubbu we have left. This is what killed them in the fields.”

“Do you have a method of removing the particle from the soil?”

“We have already begun. With the sifting equipment we have now, it will take over a year, but we are ordering more equipment. We should be operational by the next planting season…”

This farmer indeed knew his business. Dath’mar’s previous disdain for the man’s appearance faded. ‘He is no warrior,’ the captain thought. There was no insult in the thought.

“But now to solve our current problem.” Dath’mar said with a sigh. He leaned back from the screen he stood before and crossed his arms. “Do you have suggestions? We have been unable to locate you another source of Grubbu.”

“They would scarcely be helpful if you did. They would die if we were to try and propagate them into the soil structure. The soil must be cleaned before returning to our established method of soil husbandry. What we need is fertilizer.”

“Fertilizer?” Dath’mar tried not to spit the word.

“Yes, soil with high quantities of sodium nitrate to boost the natural veins of limestone and organic compounds in the primary fields. Some field sectors will yield well for a season without enhanced fertilizers…if we baby them… But there are heavily taxed sectors of cropland, which must have richer fertilizers. We have plenty of manure from our own livestock, but we still need nitrates.”

“Do you have a list of suppliers for this?”

“We have lists of suppliers, but many are too far away to be of assistance. Even if you were able to make the trip at warp nine, it would take months to bring it here. We need the fertilizer in three weeks.”

A flash of anger over the situation flared in the captain’s soul. He did not direct his anger toward the planetary governor, but rather internally. But the farmer saw it just the same and visibly blanched. Dath’mar further furrowed his brow, making his steel eye patch hurt.

“Send us the list of your requirements, including minimal statistics. My science officer will examine it and I shall decide on a course of action.” He finally told the man.

The Klingon governor bowed slightly.

“Thank you, captain. Honor to the Empire.”

Dath’mar nodded back to him simply and turned away as his chief noncom shut down the link. The captain paced very slowly about the room as the three gathered comm officers began to receive the information being transmitted from Galt. He was lost in thought as to how he would acquire the needed fertile dirt for the planet, and more importantly, how to transport it. He had an extensive cargo bay, but it was eighty percent full of supplies and provisions for his extended mission in the Kovarn Reach. As he stepped back and forth in the seven paces long room, the deck shuddered under foot at the passage of his cruiser into warp speed. Hekk had finally gotten squared away and Kurvis had ordered the ship into action. At least now they were doing something. But what next?

“Transmission received, Captain.” One of the high collared enlisted men told their CO. Dath’mar held a hand out for the data chip and took it. Then he passed silently onto the bridge.

The huge bridge was humming with activity as the engineers conferred with the exec as to the status of the drives and the integrity of the hull. Both were apparently fine. This cruiser was old, but certainly not past her prime yet. Dath’mar turned right immediately upon exiting the communications room and halted at the science station. Commander I’rell turned in her chair at the feel of his approach. He handed her the data chip.

“Open this.” He told her.

I’rell nodded and turned her seat back to her wide console. The designer of this bridge had made sure of a lavish sensor/science control panel, which followed the curve of two bulkheads. Two posts manned it when fully staffed. And I’rell demanded a full staff at all hours. As second officer, it was her right. Dath’mar agreed with her. His last command might not have died had there been extra hands at the ship’s eyes when that mercenary had been creeping up on them…

Information began to scroll across the main monitors in red Klingon glyphs. Dath’mar scanned them over only partially, picking out highlights. It was his science officer’s duty to see that he understood the measure of the information within. I’rell was second to none aboard at this task.

“It will take some time to digest all of this data. Some of it may not be useful to us at all, from an operational stand point.” She told him.

“The farmers are thorough.” Was the captain’s comment.

I’rell looked up at him, craning her long neck.

“Yes, my lord.”

Dath’mar left her there and turned for the command chair. If she needed time, he would give it to her. He shouldered into his command chair’s embrace and landed as lightly as ever. He feigned a slouchy behavior, but remained deft as ever. He surveyed his command deck with his one eye. Behind him, the doors parted. To the right of the center seat, the noncom manning Gunner Two straightened and glanced behind. His replacement was coming.

Dath’mar readied himself, his honed warrior’s instinct primed for the moment he may have to roll out of his chair and defend himself. Instead, Lieutenant Second Rank Motek came slowly about the side of the command seat and faced the captain in rigid stance. His balled right first found his heart and shot forth in salute. “Permission to assume my post…Captain.”

“Granted, gunner.”

Motek turned for the station and stepped off the captain’s platform. His stand-in looked up with some confusion as to the exchange, then seemed to shrug. He left the gunnery post to his superior and made for the aft hatch. Dath’mar watched the lieutenant’s stance as he gingerly bent to sit in his seat. He was hurting from the repairs to his belly. Perhaps the injury, and the resulting scar, would teach him order. Or at least compel him not to question his CO in battle.

The shift bore on.
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--thu guv!
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #17 on: February 08, 2008, 10:04:45 pm »
This is the coolest Klingon mission ever.
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #18 on: February 08, 2008, 11:42:35 pm »
Heh.  That's what I told him when he wrote the first version of this.

"What's next?  They raid the Romulans for a thousand tons of cattle feed?" ;D :laugh:
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Re: Dirt
« Reply #19 on: February 09, 2008, 10:20:36 am »
I think the this forum has more skill in writing than most trek writers and Guv's should be the next trek series. Esp. with this Klingon pov in it. Adds flavour to Fords endavours ( ;))

And I know Larry's work (and speculate Andy's too) ties in really well.

OT though: I keep repeating myself but I love the little things you add! The scene with the cook, the miranda convo, the dust in the conference room, the explanation of the dying worms. Details that add to the story, link previous chapters and hint at coming chapters. Great work m8. Leaves me one thing: saying GIMME MORE!
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