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Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« on: June 14, 2007, 09:11:34 pm »
Firstly, a warning to those with delicate sensabilities... There are graphic scnenes in this story. I've toned them down some, but some may still wish to steer clear of it.


Star Trek
Of The Survivors…
CH. 1





In a cold and dark room, a single man hung, bound at the wrists, from a high support girder. He was naked, stripped of clothes and all his outward vestiges of dignity. Frigid water dripped from the leaking, rusted pipes that crossed the room’s ceiling. The chill drops came down on him with irregular timing. They chased each other down his back, his shoulders, over his stubbly head.

The man’s head hung down in tiredness. Sheer exhaustion led his shoulders to relax, to constrict his windpipe. The girth of his own muscles pressed in on his throat, choking him. He didn’t really care. Maybe this time he’d just let it happen. Give up and die. Maybe he’d find peace in the after life…if there was one. His dangling feet sagged closer, agonizingly closer to the grimy, duracrete floor of the basement chamber he hung in. The manacles about his wrists made a fresh cut. The new sensation almost felt good. At least it felt comparatively warm…

But at long last, when the human thought he was about to give all of this world up, self-preservation kicked in, forcing his straining arm muscles to pull back up, spread out his shoulders again. No, he couldn’t just let himself die. He didn’t know why the hell he was fighting so damn hard. Maybe he was just so damned entertained by all of this…

The grating noise of a heavy steel bolt being drawn aside roused the dirt and blood covered man from the closest thing he’d yet come to slumber. Perhaps his keeper had come to end it for him. Maybe this visit would be the last. He deigned, however, to make sure his host was greatly charmed by his presence.

The gravelly voice, sounding like stone being torn into rubble, came up from behind. Once again the Warden was smiling. He hadn’t been when he’d left the room last time. He circled round the hanging captive, ducking close beneath the man’s sweat smeared armpits. The grey skinned man grinned, looking like true evil amid the dark shadows of this sublevel.

“How are you doing today, Captain?” He said jovially. “I trust the day of rest I granted you has left you refreshed and ready to begin anew?”

Commodore Chevis Ford glared back at the Ya’wenn Over Warden with a sardonic blaze lighting his bleary eyes. “Has it been a whole day already, Jarn? Seems like your stink only just cleared the room.”

Jarn smiled again, this time without the visible teeth. He looked away with a friendly expression as though he were sharing a warm moment with a close friend. As though Ford hadn’t been hanging from his wrists here for three days, undergoing constant torture. He looked back to the twisting human. Jarn was almost tall enough not to have to look up at the suspended man.

“Come now, Captain… Is that anyway to speak to your humble host?”

“My apologies…” Ford tried in vain to refrain from gasping in his exertion. “I’m used to much less evolved company. I’m sorry if I’ve offended your delicate sensibilities.”
Jarn looked at him oddly. Ford’s response had almost sounded cordial. Was the human beginning to crack? “No problem at all, Captain Ford. In fact—“

“Here…” Ford interrupted as he began to swing back to face Jarn more evenly. “Lemme make it up to ya!”

Jarn jerked his gaze down at the first splash of warm urine to wet his tunic. With an animalistic snarl bordering on its own insanity, Jarn reared back with a balled, stone-like fist and struck the area where the offensive stream had sprouted. Ford took the hit one the side of a hastily raised thigh. He tried to kick out at the Ya’wenn warden. But he was too slow. His leaden muscles were unable to catch the quicker, fully rested alien. Jarn’s second punch landed on target. So did the third, forth and final strike.
Ford sagged from the chains, blood and spittle draining from his bubbling lips.

Jarn shook his hands free of trace fluids and circled around the gasping human. He shook his head in disappointed fashion. “What a disgusting display, Captain. It’s a shame you can’t make this whole affair easier for you. There’s no need to go through any of this ordeal. Just tell me what I want to know.”

“I don’t know sh*t.”

Jarn smiled sadly.

“So you’ve said. But we both know better. Come on, Captain… Take the easy road. Tell me where you’ve hidden your ship and all this pain will end. No more beatings, no more hanging from the ceiling. No more defecating on yourself. I’ll even find a place in my organization for you. You won’t be the first of my former enemies that I’ve turned around. There’s profit to be had here, Ford. Just name your price and I’ll give you a fair trade. Where is the Endeavour?”

“Gone. She blew when she fell into the plasma storm.”

“So you’ve said. But that shuttle pod I found you in was in far too good a shape to have come from within a plasma string. Your ship was intact when the shuttle launched. No, Captain…I saw that ship of yours take nearly thirty direct weapon strikes to her unshielded hull…and survive. She just turned away from my fleet and sailed away. I don’t think the plasma storms could claim her. At least not those circulating within that section.” Jarn turned back and stepped close to Ford once more. He didn’t think Ford would chance the reprocuctions to pee on him a second time. “I want that ship. Where is it, Captain?”

“Well…” Ford sighed, readying to get hit again. “If it was up yer ass, you’d know it.”

Jarn’s expression turned to one of sad resignation. He walked slowly away from Ford and knocked on the old steel door. The door withdrew once again, allowing entrance to a pair of dirty dressed prisoners wearing shock collars. They wheeled in a tall cart topped with hoses, electrodes and intravenous taps. Ford recognized the gear. He’d been expecting something of the sort.

The Over Warden seemed reluctant to look back at his prisoner as the two others went about the task of readying Ford to be attached to the mind-sifter. At least they were using alcohol to wipe down the areas they were about to pierce, Ford noted with a sarcastic thought.

“I regret resorting to this thing, Captain. I have seen what it can do to a man that’s been hooked up to one for too long. It was a gift from my Klingon allies, and I’ve been putting it to good use. I’d have rather converted you to my crew, Ford. A man of your skill and tactical knowledge would have made me invincible against those I aim to over throw. But since you will not render me the location of your ship, I must remove that knowledge by force. Save the both of us the trouble, Captain. Tell me where she is.”

Ford forced a wicked smile onto swollen, busted lips.

“Go climb a tree.”

Jarn smiled back, dark and admiring of his enemy’s resolve.

“You were a good adversary, Captain. I’m sorry it has to end this way.”

With that, the Ya’wenn warden turned and exited the sub-level. He left Ford in the hands of less than gentle prison thugs charged with the task of extracting intelligence directly from the neurons of the mind. The commodore was gratified at least that he didn’t have the energy to scream out any more. There would be no piteous echoes to follow the Over Warden back to his elevator.
***

Now that some have finished reeling over the fact that Ford isn't dead...lemme lend y'all a tidbit about my stories, which I've learned from Soap Operas over the years... "No body, no confirmed kill. And sometimes, not even a body is evidence enough..." 

I'll do the CH. by CH. thing again, unless viewership dies off as it has before. I may seem needy to some over the comments, but this is one of a very few sites that I bother with... So I swing by very often. Anyway, hope this little chapter gets some mudslinging going!

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #1 on: June 15, 2007, 08:44:32 am »
Ah.  Reminds me of how your RPGS roll so far...you die...you roll the infamous destiny dice...you get those magic numbers and thus your character is alive, but the three numbers were triple-6's, which, in Rog-rules, means you character is probably wishing he'd just kicked the bucket like a good little boy.

Loved Ford's...weapon of retribution, btw.

Need more.
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #2 on: June 19, 2007, 05:23:58 pm »

CH. 2





Just beyond the outer reaches of the dangerous field known to Starfleet as the Tempest Plasma Region, a small starship decelerated to a near stop. She was a lithe and angular design, with upswept, wing-like engine struts and a sleek saucer profile. She bore obvious armor plating, covering the more vulnerable sections of her warp nacelles and her outer hull. Twin torpedo tubes jutted out from a cleft section in her forward saucer, their size in proportion to the rest of the craft lending testament to the small stature of the ship. She was less than two hundred meters in length, but bore an enormous armament. 

The USS Tenseiga, NCC-3056, was, for all intents and purposes, a warship. Labeled an escort vessel, her official duties were given to the protection of trade ships and patrolling Federation borders. Today, she was on a search mission. Pieces of a week old battle were spilling from the roiling masses of light red gas before the tiny combat vessel. Most of those twisted chunks of burnt metal were alien in origin, belonging to the Ya’wenn. Tenseiga was here for the few pieces that did not belong to the alien fleet.

On the bridge of the Tenseiga, Commander Benjamin Thomas all but clambered out of the command chair to get a good look at the view screen. He halted just aft of the combined helm/navigations console and gawked at the floating bits of metal that were parting themselves from the plasma storm. His blue eyes strained to seek out any sign of Starfleet designed alloys or hull sections. Every piece was blackened or tanned to a ruddy color. There was no outward sign to point the commander to any specific piece.

Ben glanced to the main sensor station.
“Surall?”

“I am scanning, Captain.” The Vulcan officer replied. The console before her, for all the modernistic appearance of the touch-pad controls and computer generated monitors that the station offered, truly was far less advanced than what she’d had aboard the Endeavour. Such a small, uncomplicated combat vessel could not hope to carry as expansive an array of scientific instruments such as what a line explorer possessed. Tenseiga was less than a quarter the volume of their previous starship. And most of her space was devoted to engineering and combat applications.

Commander Thomas waited impatiently beside the helmsman, Lieutenant Bronstien, continuing to watch the main screen. Bronstien looked up at the giant man who hunkered beside him. Ben had been plagued by the death of their former commanding officer, Commodore Ford. He continued to be plagued, in fact. The majority of the first few days since the battle had seen Thomas at the bottom of several bottles of hooch. He’d barely come up for air long enough to hurl hateful accusations at Ambassador Spock for his decisions which had shaped the battle. Were it not for the foresight of Admiral Sharp, Thomas would have remained at the bottom of the bottle.

The Admiral had given Thomas a much-needed kick in the ass. He’d ordered Thomas back onto active duty, told him to put down the bottle. When reinforcements for Starbase 23 had arrived, he’d emplaced Thomas as the CO of this ship. Newly commissioned, Tenseiga hadn’t even been fully manned when she and her sisters had come to the base. Her slated skipper remained in the Earth Sector, and hadn’t been due to take his ship on her shakedown cruise for another two weeks. Till further notice, this ship belonged to Thomas.

The decision had been controversial, especially given Thomas’ proclivity toward rash behavior. The incident involving the supposed Commodore Shiloah was just the most recent example of some very poor decisions. Command had balked at the idea of giving this man a ship of his own. But Sharp had swayed them. As Chief of Starfleet Operations, with words carried weight. Ben had gotten the commission. And it was the best therapy that could be provided the commander. Get back out here…look around.

Maybe even find his friend’s body…

Bronstien knew this last was among Thomas’s top priorities. He hadn’t voiced the concern, but the lieutenant knew it weighed heavily on his mind. The lieutenant could read it in the giant man’s every movement.

“Controls answering All-Stop, Captain.” Johnathan informed him. Ben looked back down at the helmsman and nodded. He still didn’t like being referred to as the ‘Captain’. He was this ship’s master, now, though. He was the captain.

“Alright…” He said absently, then looked back over to the small science station. Surall was laboring over the myriad of controls, gleaning every scrap of information she could from this ship’s scanner array. Finally, with the most subtle shake of her head, the science officer turned to face Thomas.

“Metallurgical scans reveal no trace of standard duranium or tritanium composites as found in Starfleet technology. All hull materials seem to match what we know of Ya’wenn construction methods.”

Ben seemed to sink in his boots. His meaty hand fell from the back of Bronstien’s chair to his side. “Keep scanning. Weapons officer, load a Type Three probe and ready to deploy it into the Tempest field.”

The junior grade lieutenant that headed Tenseiga’s tiny security department nodded back from the starboard tactical console. This ship sported two distinct weapons control stations, labeled Tactical I and Tactical II. Lieutenant Kurita manned the number two station at the moment, where the torpedo armament was mainly controlled. It was not long before the small Japanese man glanced back.

“Probe ready, Captain.”

“Fire.”

The tiny Tenseiga rattled with the expulsion of the two-ton probe into space. One wouldn’t have even felt a shimmer from aboard an Excelsior-Class ship. Thomas had served on ships this size before, but it was still going to take some getting used to again. He returned to the slim, fan-backed white command chair. Could he ever get used to all this? Command of his own ship? It felt so alien and so…temporary.

By his rank, Thomas belonged on a full sized destroyer or better. A frigate or perimeter action vessel such as this was, was technically a billet meant for a lieutenant commander, or even a senior lieutenant who had a great deal of experience. But Thomas had needed something to occupy him lest he turn into an alcoholic, and no larger ships were available for him to command. He thought nothing of the oddity, though certain other officers had made mention of the discrepancy.

“Captain…” The youthful voice of their comm officer, Lieutenant Smith, sounded from directly aft. Beyond the size of the console, Tenseiga offered much the same communications suite as Endeavour had possessed. She was, after all, intended to hear through all manner of fleet generated interference. “I’m picking up a faint signal…”

Ben swung his chair round.

“What type?”

“Not sure… I need more power to the comm array.”

Ben looked to his right, to the portside engineering console. At a gesture, he ordered the noncom there to relay the power management orders to the main engine room. A small ship like this operated under tighter power constraints than their larger cousins. It wasn’t long before Mister Smith had the power he’d requested.
The tall young man bent close to his station and pressed the microphone close to his ear as he listened. After a few tweaks to the transceiver controls, Noah looked back with confidence to his CO. “It’s a ship disaster beacon, sir. Coded to broadcast every ten minutes, and it’s been reconfigured for directional transmission.”

Ben’s eyebrows raised in surprise. He couldn’t help but feel that odd tingle of hope that the impossible might have occurred. That a disaster beacon had been set to directional broadcast meant that the sender didn’t want to be found by just anyone… “What ship, Mister Smith?”

“Endeavour, Captain! It’s the Endeavour!”

“Where away?”

Noah turned fully back to his console as he gathered every crew person’s attention. He manipulated the direction finder’s controls, narrowing down the possible origins of the signal. “It’s fuzzy, sir. But I think we should turn to heading 075 mark 017. I can’t read the distance.”

Ben whipped about the face the main screen. All that really showed out there was a great wall of fiery plasma. “Navigator, what’s out that way?”

The ensign manning the station next to Bronstien read slowly over the readouts before him. “Just a big mass of ionized particles, Captain. The cloud bulges out some four hundred thousand kilometers astarboard of us and goes on for over a parsec. Something might be transmitting on the other side of that.”

Lieutenant Bronstien leaned over and checked on the kid’s monitors himself.

“Confirmed, Cap’n. I think it clears on the other side.”

“Then bring us around, Helm. Ahead full.”

Tenseiga responded, rotating easily on her lateral axis and shot ahead at a quarter the speed of light. Johnathan Bronstien reveled in the maneuverability of this small ship, hardly able to keep the grim little smile from his face. Endeavour had been a huge, lumbering beast, slow to accelerate and hard to turn. In comparison, this ship was the proverbial hare racing before the tortoise. As a born pilot, he could not help but enjoy driving this craft. He did so, however, with a shade of regret.

The lieutenant deftly drove the escort around the circumference of the gaseous outcropping. As it began to recede off the left-hand edge of the main viewer, darker, emptier space loomed out beyond. The vast mass of the Tempest fell away from sight as Tenseiga rushed onward. Within an hour of long, silent bridge operation, the last vestiges of the violent storm had faded till barely a glow lit the viewer.

Bronstien finally allowed his eyes to drift up from the console blinking and chattering before him to study the main screen. Thomas rose out of the conn and resumed his standing space between the two flight control stations. The astonished look on his face made it apparent he thought he’d seen something.

“Interference now clearing.” Surall chimed in. “Lateral sensors have reflected off a solid object…”

“Getting the disaster beacon again.” Smith reported as well. “Signal has now switched to a constant pulse. I think her sensors have identified our transponder…”

Ben looked over to the science station.

“Are you detecting any evidence of active sensor emissions from the contact?”

“Negative. I have focussed the telescopic array onto the contact. On visual.”

The main viewer switched to a picture of a blackened, rent starship whose insides stared out through a plethora of breaches at naked space. Her hull was blasted into a cratered, moon-like expanse of twisted metal. Long stretches of unprotected internal volume shone piteously. She had been blown to pieces by uncounted torpedo hits and then burned till no silver metal remained.

Her basic lines and most notable details remained, however. The USS Endeavour slowly pushed herself through space at a dead crawl, propelled by her own, dim impulse drives. The crew of the Tenseiga stared in open amazement. Ben stabbed a finger toward the comm station.

“Smith, open hail!”

“Frequencies open, Captain.”

“Commodore Ford, this is Thomas on the USS Tenseiga! Please respond!”

The big soldier stood silent, bounding in his enthusiasm as he awaited the impossible response. After seeing the ship, the thought of Ford’s survival did not seem so far fetched. Thomas continued to gape at the viewer. Enthusiasm waned.

“Commodore Chevis Ford, can you read?”

“Now getting massive readings of Theta Band radiation.” Lieutenant Surall reported from the sensor console. “The ship has likely been bombarded by more than three days worth of heavy rads… Any human left aboard, unshielded…”

Thomas looked back to the brown skinned Vulcan woman. He didn’t feel any anger toward her for her words, but he felt as though she had betrayed him. He looked back to the wreck moving across the screen. “Helm, close in on her and pace her course. All sensors to ascertain Endeavour’s condition.”

“Aye.”

Ben faded into the back ground on his own bridge, slipping back and sliding down into his command chair. He did not want to think that his friend had fought to survive the Ya’wenn, then fought longer to save his ship…only to then die as she passed through waves of lethal radiation on her way out to clear space. Was Chevy over there…sitting in his own command chair…manning his bridge in an everlasting vigil?

How would Thomas handle the sight when he went over there…seeing his friend in that chair, or worse, laying in a heap on the deck? Well, Ben thought, whatever’s over there, I gotta see it.

Tenseiga caught up with the chugging hulk and fell in beside her. For all her dilapidation, Endeavour was still impressive in scale. She completely dwarfed the Akyazi-Class escort. The mere fact that the huge starship was still capable of self-motivation spoke chapters on her toughness.

“Theta radiation is leveling off,” Surall stated as they watched in respectful quiet. “I estimate she will be inhabitable within two point one seven days. I also read undamaged internal space. The bridge is compromised, but many sections of the saucer interior remain intact. Endeavour retains low level emergency power. Her impulse drive is operating on a pressure reversal from the phaser reserves.”

“Skipper had to work overtime to pull that one off.” Thomas thought aloud. “He would have needed several hours to rig that kind of system. Any chance he could have took another escape pod after he aimed the ship here?”

“No escape pods appear to have been launched after our departure.” The lieutenant responded. “I am unable to extensively scan the shuttle bays due to the remaining radiation. All bay doors show as closed.”

“We saw the old girl explode, right?” Helmsman Bronstien said suddenly. Breaking through his awed malaise, he turned away from his controls to look at his captain. “She blew up as we were running the hell away.”

Thomas glanced Surall’s direction. The Vulcan retargeted her visual array to the lower slope of Endeavour’s engine section. The hull there was pitted, cratered, and had massive sections missing, marring the once sleek lines.

“Her warp core has been ejected. Likely this was the origin of the blast we recorded.”

“Computer ejected the core...” Thomas said. He drew a challenging look from his science officer.

“The commodore may have ejected it before the automatic system initiated.”

“No…Chevy would have aimed it at the Ya’wenn if he’d done it by choice…” Ben regained his feet and circled his command chair. He halted aft, near the communications console. “Smith, signal Starbase 23. Report that we have found the Endeavour and she’s intact. Advise we’re gonna beam over a survey team to ascertain Commodore Ford’s…ultimate disposition.”

Smith nodded back. “Aye.”

Ben looked over to science once more.

“The radiation bad enough to pierce our EVA suits, Surall?”

“Indeed, Captain. RAD Suits from the engineering department would provide ample protection, however, despite the much shorter life-support resources.”

“RAD suits it is, then. Bronstien, Surall, you’re with me. Smith, you have the bridge. Get engineering to round up two repair teams to look Endeavour over.”

“Aye,” The comm officer said as he stood. He hesitantly took the conn and began to relay the orders down to engineering. Surall finished imputing a series of sensor commands and joined her captain and helmsman at the portside lift.
***

Hopefully this will generate some results :)

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2007, 12:14:43 am »
I have to, now, go back and read 1-9. BUT, not having done that, I felt up to speed as it was.

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2007, 03:44:42 am »
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One of the best (imho) TNG eps. I wonder what has to be bartered for Ford, Picard was worth a cardassian strike fleet.
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2007, 08:25:42 pm »
I wonder what has to be bartered for Ford, Picard was worth a cardassian strike fleet.

Bartered?

Ah, you are not totally familiar with my characters. I'm glad to see this has you comparing it to one of your favorites. I liked that ep. too. I couldn't write this one without thinking back on that one. Something about the man who played Gorkon in STVI playing a villianous torture master... Ah...irony.

I'm also glad, Czar, that you didn't feel lost. I typically like to think of my stories as reasonably self-contained, thought these latest do heavily depend on those that came before. Makes me glad to see that someone can jump right in and still enjoy the tale. 1-9 are floating around here someplace...

Any who, I'll leave this one up for a might longer and post another CH. or two in about a week.

Thanks to those who've replied thus!
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #6 on: June 25, 2007, 07:21:20 am »
I wonder what has to be bartered for Ford, Picard was worth a cardassian strike fleet.


Bartered?


yes Bartered

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I'm not?

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I'm glad to see this has you comparing it to one of your favorites. I liked that ep. too. I couldn't write this one without thinking back on that one. Something about the man who played Gorkon in STVI playing a villianous torture master... Ah...irony.


I agree!

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Any who, I'll leave this one up for a might longer and post another CH. or two in about a week.


No GIMME MORE!

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #7 on: June 25, 2007, 05:29:24 pm »
He he! You'll see what I meant about the bartered comment... Glad you're enjoying. Since you're waiting, here's another CH.

CH. 3





“Beam-in point, sir?”

Commander Thomas looked up from the round RAD helmet he was about to don to return the transporter tech’s quizzical expression. He paused for a moment. Beaming in just anywhere was liable to get them killed. He grinned wryly.

“Beam us directly to Auxiliary Control. We’re only gonna have about a minute, maybe two, to disengage the auto-destruct.” He told them.

Surall paused in her own helmet emplacement.
“Auto-destruct? There is no evidence that self destruct has been implemented.”

“No… What we’re gonna find over there is a tricorder set to passive search. As soon as we finish the transport cycle or dock a shuttle, the self-destruct system is going to start its countdown from either one minute, or two.” The captain told them. This information scared three of their engineers into slowing their advance toward the transport alcove. They looked to one another in concern.

Surall’s head cocked aside.

“How do you know this?”

“I know the Commodore…and it’s what I’d do.”

Thomas moved closer to the group of repair techs who were attaching the bulky, round helmets to their RAD suits. He looked over their air lines, bottles and temperature regulators. He checked their equipment, making sure they were as ready as they believed they were. Phaser pistols, web belts with basic gear, med kits, repair cases, flashlights. Everything they’d immediately need when they boarded the derelict Endeavour. Each of the young men and women checked out fine and he gave them an assured grin before putting on his own helmet.

“Alright, everyone. She’s a mess, so be on your toes.” He told them as he and Bronstien became the first to step up to the waiting pads. The smaller stature of this transporter room became nearly claustrophobic with the inclusion of their bulky suits and added equipment. None complained. Ben gave the tech a wave and the subspace gear behind and within the aft bulkhead began to whine, then throb with energy.

The first party of seven Tenseiga crew dissolved into a blue mist of energy, then reassembled in totally different surroundings. The Auxiliary Control room of Endeavour was totally dark for the first three seconds of their arrival. Then crimson tracers began to pulse and monitors flickered to life. Each could hear the general alarm barking. Ben looked to the science station along the starboard bulkhead. There, he found the tricorder he’d prophesied and the hard-wired connections leading from it to an open interface panel the commodore had jury-rigged by hand. A newly lit monitor just behind the standing tricorder showed a glowing counter which was counting backward from 59.

“Whoa, sh*t!”

Ben nearly tripped over a fallen piece of ceiling strata as he lurched into motion. RAD suits were no better at offering peripheral view than any other kind of environmental suit. He bobbled, but recovered, hopping in low gravity over blackened, gritty debris as he neared the science console. Ben was careful not to disturb the tricorder where it sat. Likely, Ford had rigged it with a charge to detonate when picked up. Ben ripped the glove off his right hand and placed it over the security ID panel on the console’s face. The system immediately began to swing into the process of identifying him.

“Thomas, Commander Benjamin R. Executive Officer. Identified.” The garbled computer voice told him. Ben leaned in to be heard.

“Computer, cancel auto-destruct sequence, Authorization: Thomas Beta 6175 Enable.”

“Voice print not recognized.”

Ben growled, then reached up to unsnap the connections holding his cover in place. Hopefully a few minutes of radiation wouldn’t prove too harmful… He laid the helmet on the station top. “Authorization: Thomas Beta 6175 Enable!”

“Authorization recognized. Does the Captain agree?”

“Commodore Ford is not available. Recognize Chief Science Officer.”

Surall, without being told or asked, had already doffed her helmet and right-hand glove. She slid in between Thomas and the console, planting her hand for the DNA scan. The security monitor began to cycle just before the scratchy lady’s voice stated: “Surall, Lieutenant. Chief Science Officer. Recognized.”

“General Authorization: Surall Beta Epsilon 77189 Enable.”

“Authorization accepted.” There was an unusual pause as the counter continued to pass 40 seconds. Tension caused Thomas to stiffen. Was the self-destruct system damaged? Finally the computer went on. “Second Authorization protocol…Implement original Destruct Codes.”

“sh*t!” Thomas cursed. “Destruct Cancel Sequence One, Code: 47-B.”

 A waiting symbol appeared on the console, and Thomas looked to the science officer. This destruct sequence belonged to the original system, and the codes had all been change two years prior when the system had been upgraded... Ford had reprogrammed the system to need both sets to ensure no one but his people reclaimed the ship. Did Surall even know the original code?

Surall surprised him by not pausing even an instant.

“Destruct Cancel Sequence Two, Code: 147-3…C”

“Destruct Cancellation Sequence completed and engaged. Awaiting final code to end countdown.”

“Code: Zero-Zero-Destruct…” Ben had to guess… Which destruct sequence had his friend used? He would normally ordered Code One to set off the warp core and the antimatter containment. But the core had been ejected… “Zero…”

“Destruct Sequence Aborted.” The blaring alarm halted mid-blast.

The counter had halted at 10. This was much closer than Thomas would have liked. Leaning away from the console and wary of further trickery, Thomas began to replace his helmet and glove. He had a wide and sarcastic smile on his face beneath the tinted screen of his visor. “Paranoid bastard!”

“The Commodore did go to extreme lengths to ensure this vessel did not fall into Ya’wenn hands.” Surall commented. Ben looked her over to make sure she had also replaced her helmet. She went on. “Likely we absorbed no more then fifteen rads within this compartment. I would not advise longer exposure, however."

Bronstien carefully stepped down from the upper level of consoles and halted at the slim, modern conn design that dominated the center of the room. This chair had originally been intended for the bridge, but Ford had been adamant about keeping his old chair. Davenport had ordered the yard birds to bring it down here. The young helm officer bent to pick up a coffee cup. Emblazoned on the side was a black skull and cross bones flag and the logo: “Don’t Piss Me Off, I’m Running Out of Places To Put The Bodies…”

“Skipper had the time to have a cup of coffee before he drove the ship out here. Should we search the CO cabin?”

Ben thought of the image of his friend laying peacefully on his bunk, maybe an empty hypo of sedative beside him to ensure he’d sleep through the radiation belt… He didn’t want to believe anything of the sort had occurred.

“Is there any place on this ship that could have withstood the Theta radiation? The nacelle control pods?” He asked.

Surall shook her head within the big helmet.

“Negative, Captain. The Control Pods are capable of withstanding only three hundred million rads. The storm Endeavour would have passed through far surpassed this level.” The woman slid easily into the empty, grit-streaked chair before the science console. She began to access the main systems and power them up.

“All external sensors are off-line. The ship is being guided on inertial navigation only. Internal sensors are dead…however, there is a data entry left by Commodore Ford. He left the ship aboard the shuttle pod Swordfish on Stardate: 9709.9…before Endeavour was likely to have entered the storm.”

“It’s 9710.5, now.” Ben thought aloud. “Chevy’s been gone four days. Could he not get out through another opening in the storm?”

Lieutenant Bronstien was the one to answer that.

“Navigations estimated that no other openings will form within a light year of here for another six days. Without warp drive, the Skipper wouldn’t be able to reach any where else.”

“And the shuttle pod left to him would not have had the deflector capacity to survive exiting through the plasma field.” Surall added.

Thomas repressed a growl and waited as Surall and the rest of his team assessed the condition of the ship. The engineering technicians had halted near the ODN trunks protruding from the aft bulkhead of the compartment. Just on the other side of the semi-circular shaped wall was the central core of the ship’s main computer. This would give them a direct tap into the ship’s governing systems and allow them to more fully diagnose this vessel’s condition.

“Main impulse fuel containment remains intact.” Surall continued with her report. “Half the reactors remain on stand-by status. The remainder have been deactivated. There may be some damage to the impulse reactor system, but the detection grid is damaged and cannot detail their condition. Life support has been shut down. Several air regenerators and regulators are offline. I am attempting to repower them to place them on stand-by. This will give us an onboard system for replenishing our limited air supplies.”

“Good.” Thomas stepped away from the science station. The gravity was spongy at best. The entire gravity array was likely burned up and operating on back up batteries. He hopped up to the conn platform and considered the command chair there.

Bronstien had taken the helm, which stood to the right of the conn, ten feet ahead. Operations was next to that, much like it would be found on the bridge, providing the plasma storm hadn’t claimed the bridge’s trappings. A call from science recaptured the commander’s attention.

“Sir, I have uncovered a recording from the Commodore.”

“Visual.” Ben replied, raising his eyes to the small, round-edged viewer that hung like an after thought on the fore bulkhead.

The screen belched light and wavered to life. A grainy image of the Commodore grew to life before them. He still wore only his white undershirt, bearing no symbol of rank. His clothes were grease stained, his pasty skin sweaty and dirt covered. He leaned tiredly into the science console where he’d recorded the message.

“If you’re watching this, then you’re definitely Endeavour officers. Anyone else would have towed the ship to the base an’ not boarded till the radiation faded. Either way, only Ben, Ron or Sharp knows me well enough to be able to shut down the destruct package.

“The ship is in sorry shape, and by the time you find her, she’ll be even worse off. I’ve linked the impulse drive to the phaser reserves to provide a power source the plasma storm can’t touch. The impulse reactors are too close to the outer hull… By the time she reaches the border, there won’t be an operable sensor left, so I’ve tied the helm to the inertial systems. I haven’t booby-trapped anything, so don’t worry about that. I figure the Ya’wenn would be unable enough just to get past the self-destruct gag. And no, there isn’t a bomb attached to the tricorder…

“I’m setting the old girl for the nearest point of clear space. I’ve gotten the shuttlepod Swordfish together in the time between Ya’wenn sightings. I’m not going to be able to keep the ship away from them. Jarn’s dead set on claiming Endeavour…” A cold shaft of realization pushed its way through Thomas. He saw Bronstien straightened also at the helm. After all their efforts, the Over Warden had survived the destruction of his own ship. “And I’m not about to let him get her. After I set Endeavour for Starbase 23, I’m going to take the shuttle and lead Jarn away. He won’t be able to track the ship…”

Resignation settled on the Commodore’s face as he looked into the camera.

“I’ll do my best to give him the slip. But I’d rather he capture me than get this ship. The last thing we need is his bunch getting this level of tech from the wreck… This is Commodore Chevy Ford…signing off.”

Thomas sat in silence as the recording ended. Ford had said little that they hadn’t already ascertained, save for the reason behind his departure. He hadn’t feared the radiation so much as he’d feared the chances of Jarn obtaining this ship. So he’d set Endeavour off on her own and taken the pod…

A sudden, violent realization took hold of the commander’s mind. He knew where he must look to find Chevis… He rigidly stood up and looked over to his officers. “Surall, get ready to go back to the ship. You’ll help Navigations set up a course for Kovarn.”

Johnathan rose from the helm and faced his captain. Conferring with Navigation was his duty, which meant Thomas had other intentions for him. Without seeing his face, the captain knew what the kid was thinking by his posture. “Bronstien, you’re taking command of Endeavour. Get her home.”

“Cap’n! I’m your acting XO—“

“An’ that’s why I’m leavin’ you here. You’re the one I gotta trust to get the girl home. If the enemy has tracked her here or captured Ford and gotten the intel on her location, then I’m relying on you do deny Endeavour to them.” Ben didn’t include the words ‘however you have to do it’…

Johnathan stood without moving for some moments, staring back. Then he nodded visibly. “Aye, aye, sir.” He replied, then turned back to face the main screen.
The commander left the lieutenant there and joined his science officer at the aft area. Ben withdrew his communicator and flipped it open. “Tenseiga, two to beam back.”



Lieutenant Bronstien watched his captain and the science officer beam away. He didn’t like knowing that Tenseiga was going into harm’s way without him at the helm. He liked being left to command a wreck even less.

With Thomas and Surall gone back to Tenseiga, he was left with the four engineering techs here at Aux. Con. and another seven of them crawling around in what was left of impulse engineering. His eyes fell to the conn at the room’s center. It stared back at him in challenge. This was his biggest command test yet. He looked to the most familiar of the engineers at his disposal.

“McCoy, let’s see if we can get the impulse drive going.”

“Aye, sir.” She replied. The specialist clambered up from where she’d been kneeling and snapped her diagnostic case shut. “I’ll get down there and head up the crew on the impulse deck. From here it looks like the control mechanisms and software are still intact. I’d still feel safer running the fusion systems on manual.”

Johnathan nodded back.

“Whatever you think is best, Spec. Get down there.”

“Aye, sir.”

Bronstien watched her go, then turned to the remaining engineers. They were still running the software through diagnostics and looking for malfunctions. “The rest of you knuckle-draggers get this place runnin’. I’m gonna see if I can get us some sensors.”

The lieutenant headed for the science station. He paused to consider the tricorder, which still sat atop the console’s main control board. It amused him that the tiny device might be their only remaining sensor device. Then another thought struck him. He looked back to the remaining engineers. “Juarez, get down to the shuttlebays and let me know what’s left.”

“Aye, sir.”

Bronstien thought the situation over, then sat down at the station. He picked up the tricorder and detached the wiring that led to it. He hadn’t wanted this duty. But he never turned away from a job he’d been given. He shook his head within the huge helmet and went on to draw up a long list of damaged sensor controls on the console before him.
***

Well, there's more to sate your appetite, Grim. More forthcoming next week. Hopefully some one other than you, me and the Czar will comment on this here gaggle of words in the meantime...

Also...+1 Karma to he who can tell me where the name of Thomas' ship originates from and what it was. La'ra cannot participate in this, as he has foreknowledge. +2 Karma to the person who Doesn't have to look it up on the net to answer...

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #8 on: June 26, 2007, 05:13:35 am »
Nice one, the Destruct sequence and the vid message. Not 100% about the leaving the ship with our favorite helmsman though, i'd expect them to wait for an escort. Then again, the Thomas we know from previous stories would not wait so it's consistent. Perhaps a little more from the others (Surall perhaps) over the value and risk of losing the ship (again).

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #9 on: June 26, 2007, 10:41:11 am »
Really liked that chapter.  Somehow it just seemed 'on', with lots of those little details I love so much.

The destruct sequence was pretty much what I expected, since that's probably exactly what you'd do. ;D  Also loved the Commodore's assurance that their wasn't a bomb under the tricorder (though he said nothing about the oily rag in the hallway).  Favorite bit, though, was Thomas checking over all his posse's air hoses and such prior to beam over.  The way his inspiration's loyalty level could translate into protectiveness is something we hadn't seen from the big guy yet.

Keep 'em comin'.
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #10 on: June 26, 2007, 09:05:30 pm »
I would figure in a more real world, checking over their equip before deployment would be a standard thing...not that we ever see it on Trek save for like 1 time on ENT. The idea that Thomas was the one to do it, on the other hand, was my way of both showing that it WAS infact done, and that Thomas wanted to be the one to do it for his own satisfaction.

And I seriously thought about the oily rag...

To Grim, if you ain't cheatin' you ain't winnin'. +1 Karma for you. And, yeah, another CO might have stayed close by Endeavour to ensure her returning home. But, Thomas has a reason to be in a hurry. An upcoming Sharp scene might clarify it for you. Aside from that, he's totaly confident that Bronstien will blow the ship sky high should the Ya'wenn come to get her. And, of course, you're very much right about his concistency. I imagine Andy will have much beratement for him  ;D

thanx both!
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #11 on: June 29, 2007, 08:28:57 pm »

CH. 4





Over Warden Jarn looked down with disdain at the heap of pitiable humanity that lay in the metal-framed chair. The chair had been brought in for Ford to support his weight while his men questioned him. He could no longer hold himself up to prevent strangulation while hanging from the chains.

The smell in the dank room had worsened in the hours since Jarn had left. Ford was covered in dried sweat and piss. He hadn’t given up without a fight. The info hadn’t come without a cost. Saliva ran freely down the commodore’s stubbled chin. His glassy eyes goggled up at the Ya’wenn jailer. A wave of anger washed over the human. He spat out a garbled curse and flailed violently.

“I’m very sorry, Ford. I never wanted to see you this way,” The warden crooned mockingly. There was a shadow over his eyes that told that his composure was an act. “Just tell me what you told my boys here and it’s all over.”

Jarn wasn’t sure what the curses the Federation commander hurled out at him meant, but he was sure they would have angered another human. The Ya’wenn leaned in close, despite the smell, and asked again. Ford’s eyes rolled away. One of Jarn’s men cranked up the voltage on the electrodes leading to the base of Ford’s skull. The commodore made a noise likened to a squeal.

“Hhrr-uuhhh--- Not far from the battle sight--- Bearing for Starbase 23---Aaahhh---heading 157 mark 144---hhaaa…”

Jarn looked away in unconcealed disgust. He knew he could figure out the Starfleet navigation standards with the Klingon database he had on hand. The Klingons had gathered a great deal of information about their enemies in the Federation. Jarn would put this intel to good use in the future. He’d discern the majority of the location while en route to the sight of their battle.

“Keep our guest alive until my return. Feed him intravenously. If his information proves to be good, we’ll put him out of his misery then.”

The Ya’wenn prisoners nodded enthusiastically and turned the machines they managed off slowly. Jarn cast a final look upon his adversary, then stomped out of the sublevel.
***





Lieutenant Commander Davenport turned away from the Strategic Command board that dominated the operations center of Starbase 23. The report detailed in his hand was not going to make Admiral Sharp happy. He hoped to have a few minutes to figure out how to present the data PADD in his hand. No such luck was to be had today, however. Jonathan Sharp stood directly behind him as he turned to face the command office.

“Another report from Tenseiga?” He intoned.

Ronald nodded in response, but held onto the PADD a moment longer. Sharp noted his hesitation.

“Further word on Endeavour’s condition?”

“They report she’s salvageable, Admiral.” Davenport replied. At last, Sharp extended a heavily lined brown hand and the chief of operations handed the pad over. He mentally winced as the older officer read the report over. Sharp looked back into Ron’s eyes.

“He’s a mad man.” The admiral said in such a light voice that no one else overheard. Ronald felt the compulsion to agree with the flag officer, but he also understood Thomas’s motives. “Tenseiga won’t last ten minutes in a fire fight against the Ya’wenn Kovarn fleet. What the hell is he thinking?”

“He’s going to get his friend back.”

“He won’t make it…and he’ll take even more people with him. I take it Thomas took advantage of the twenty-five second comm delay between the border and here?”

“Yes he did.”

“And his ship’s already inside the Tempest…” Sharp didn’t require an answer to that last. He knew Ben Thomas wouldn’t have waited around for Sharp to have the chance to order him not to try his rescue operation. He was wondering if he were going to regret allowing Thomas back on active duty after the Shiloah incident. That attack, back when they’d all believed Shiloah was a fleet officer, had shown just how easily he could fly off the handle. “How soon can we send support?”

Ron cleared his throat.

“Comanche is back on patrol, all battle damage repaired. T’pol is fully operational and also on patrol, but she’s without her main sensor pod. Command says we won’t get another of those any time soon. So she’s an under armed fast cruiser right now… Yorktown and Eldridge remain in dry-dock. The Shran, Kiev and Le Resolute are all out on patrol and have been since the day after the battle.”

“Which are the closest to the Kovarn section?”

“Le Resolute is the closest, but since we pulled back to a farther perimeter, it will take her seventeen hours to even reach the plasma boundary. Then over a day to reach Kovarn if the Tempest behaves. And, if we pull Le Resolute, that leaves only the Shran covering a mighty large hole in the patrol grid.”

“Order Le Resolute to move to within three light minutes of the Tempest nearest the Kovarn section. She is not to enter the Tempest unless she receives word from the Tenseiga. Launch the remaining escorts to assist the Shran.”

Ronald reclaimed his PADD and began to take the necessary notes. As acting Strategic Operations Officer, it was his duty to see to the deployment of the ships under 23’s command. He’d taken to the job well after being the chief of shipboard operations for some time already. To him, it really just amounted to relaying someone else’s decisions and offering opinions.

“Tetsusaiga is already deployed and will get there in twenty hours or so.” He told the admiral as he began to move toward the communications deck. “Tokijin and So’unga will take about an hour to ready for launch and can be there in just over thirty.”

Sharp took the travel figures under advisement and remained in silent contemplation as Davenport began to relay operational orders to the comm officer on duty. He looked about the circular operations center at the sea of maroon uniformed officers and white-shouldered enlisted personnel. Sharp was the Chief of Starfleet Operations, but for some time now, he’d been forced by circumstance and necessity to remain here and personally handle things in the wake of the Shiloah incident. He wasn’t used to front line duty any more. He’d grown soft and accustomed to issuing orders from Earth. Now he was back out in the Frontier again. Next to the Klingon Neutral Zone and this area bordering the newly found Ya’wenn. It was somewhat exhilarating to be back out here, even if he was only aboard a space station, directing traffic.

The admiral studied each of the men and women he commanded. They were fine examples of everything Starfleet and the Federation had to offer. His orders, when issued from Earth, often affected people just like them way out here on the front line. He found his experience of coming out here, serving with them, to be a good, learning one. Perhaps he’d issue a mandate that all Staff Officers tour the Frontiers more often. It was well within his sphere of influence.

“Orders relayed, Admiral.” Ron was calling out from the comm section. “Will you want to have a briefing with the escort commanders before their departure?”
Jon nodded back.

“I’ll go and see them one on one. Don’t schedule anything official. Are both ships fully outfitted?”

“Aye, sir.”

Sharp left off without further comment and headed for the turbolift that would take him to the outer docking ring. Ron watched him go, noting the tension that was again growing in the older man’s still broad shoulders. Sharp had been in the fleet a good long time; worn four versions of the uniform, served on a dozen ships and commanded three of them. The age and the wear sometimes showed on him. But he continued on, never slowing.

Davenport wondered if the man would ever get enough of the service. Would Ronald himself be able to serve that long? And if so, what would his view of the world and the galaxy be like? Indeed, what would those views be like once the Ya’wenn crisis was resolved?

The commander shrugged mentally. No one could answer such questions. His most immediate worry was for the crew of Tenseiga and his Skipper, Commodore Ford. Would the commodore be retrieved alive, and if so, in what condition? He worried that Thomas was leading his ship into too great a battle.

Did the newly minted captain truly realize what he was getting into?






Commander Ben Thomas leaned in to rest his great bulk on his elbows, bearing all his weight on the silver conference table that took up nearly all the space within the narrow room. His remaining senior staff was gathered here, ready to discuss the trial ahead. To his left was the ship’s chief engineer, Lieutenant Genevieve LeCreaux. Right was Lieutenant Tomi Kurita, his weapons officer. The two of these, with Lieutenant Surall, represented the highest-ranking officers onboard.

“To clarify the issue,” Ben started out, a meaty hand closing on a coffee mug set before him by the senior yeoman. “Lieutenant Surall is the acting XO till Bronstien returns. She’s the only one I won’t have to move from a critical position to cover the job if I’m not available.”

Surall took the queue and activated a strategic map of the Kovarn star system. The entire solar body was littered with dense collections of asteroids and floating meteors. Drifting masses of the plasma storms wandered in at odd angles to wash into their sun’s gravity. Kovarn was the sixth planet in the system, and swam in the thickest field of the debris.

“Our approach to the Kovarn prison world is going to be one rough bitch.” Thomas told them all. The junior helm officer blanched visibly as she looked at the closeness of the swirling belts. “We estimate anywhere from ten to twenty enemy warships will be in system, with an unknown variable in the number of allied vessels that might assist. We’re gonna need more than vas—“

Ben stopped himself. Many of the young officers before him already knew what he had been about to say. Hell, they all knew it. Even the bland look on Surall’s face had given way to slight surprise in his sudden and profound restraint. Thomas marveled over the change himself. Normally he’d have just spouted the comment without thinking.

“It’s…gonna be tight. A single ship can’t fight ‘em.”

The chief of security was thus far the only one among them confident enough to broach a comment or question. He inclined his head to catch his captain’s eye. “So what do we do?”

“We run all the way in at warp, an’ beam in a team… One single team to break the commodore out and get him to where we can beam him out of there.” Thomas watched as the idea sank in on them. The most obvious problems with this plan became obvious to Kurita first.

“When we slow to impulse for the beam in, the enemy will catch up with us. We will be caught in orbit, and we’ll be without shields when we try to beam our team in.”

Ben looked evenly at the dark haired man. He couldn’t have been more than twenty-five at the most. But he was good. Thomas had read his file. “We’re not gonna slow down from warp speed…at least, not for long.”

Surall filled in the rest.

“Near warp transport, implemented through ‘touch-and-go-down-warping.’”

The helmsman, Bronstien’s number two person aboard this ship, gaped in shock.

“That’s…really, really…very dangerous!”

Captain Thomas didn’t avert his eyes from the girl.

“Can you do it, Ensign?”

“I…”

“Can you do it?”

A certain kind of resolve formed on the young officer’s face.

“I’m the best you have, Captain.”

Thomas nodded to her. He liked Ensign Allison Torres. Her inexperience led to self-doubt, but this was a common enough plague among any newby. She was already dealing with it by admitting she was the only one here capable of the duty.

“According to your file, you’re right. Petty Officer Larami will be on Nav to help out. He doesn’t have the piloting marks you do, but he’s experienced.” Ben assured. Somehow, he was really beginning to feel the part of the Starfleet captain. This was his ship, and though temporary, these were his people. He could get this job done, and these would be the people to help him.

“Now,” With a point to the science officer, Ben drew the officers’ attention back to the star map before them in the table’s center and the line being highlighted leading in toward Kovarn. “We’ll approach from the viscinity of the eighth planet, a gas giant with severe radiation bursts. That will mask a lot of our insertion. With any luck, we’ll be able to get within three light minutes of the planet without detection. We’ll approach slow, both to mask our warp signature with the planet’s radiation fields and to manipulate how the enemy comes in at us if they do detect us. I want ‘em to bunch, start taking up formations. Then we kick it up to high warp and evade them. We’ll maintain best speed till we make orbital approach and initiate emergency deceleration. We’ll be at sub-impulse for about two seconds.”

The engineer wound up the nerve to broach the next concern.

“With this kind of approach, we’re looking at energizing transporters while the ship is still at warp. Timing is going to be everything.” She said. Ben loved her light, almost imperceptible, French accent. It had taken him a while to recognize the sound of it, but, combined with her name, he’d finally made the connection. “We’re going to have to energize four point three-six seconds before decel.”

“That’s why you’re gonna be at the transport console when me and my guys beam down.”

Kurita turned a disbelieving eye on his CO.

“You’re… leading the team, sir?”

Thomas didn’t have to respond. Surall made the most obvious observation on the matter for them.

“Captain Thomas is the only man aboard ship with the experience in combat raids to make this venture a successful one. With him will be two noncoms drawn from your security contingent, Lieutenant. Mathers, a former marine, and Gentry, the most skilled among your riflemen.”

Kurita seemed offended.

“Not me?”

Thomas smiled.

“I need you to make sure I have a ship to pick my ass up off the planet when I get Ford back. The return trip ain’t gonna be so easy. Now…this is what Surall and me have come up with so far…”
***

No barterin' in this story, folks.
Let's see what y'all think of it...

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #12 on: July 02, 2007, 07:32:29 pm »
All I have to say right now is that it looks as if more than Endeavor will be in a not-so-happy condition when this is over. And they'd better have a nice warm clean change of clothes for Ford, and perhaps some febreeze?

Again, as I said before, I don't feel left out of the loop. Without looking back at 1-9, I know a lot about them already.

This promises to have a great conclusion, and even though I don't think it is written yet, that conclusion might just leave enough open for a great sequel.

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #13 on: July 02, 2007, 10:11:49 pm »
All hail the Czar!

Actually...I'm writing story number 15 in this series. #10 has been done since January 25th. I spit out an average of one story a month. My record was Story #11: White Rabbits, which I started on January 26th and finished Feb 12th. It's almost as long as this one. When I get on a roll...I roll.

And yeah...they gonna need some xtra strength febreeze...

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #14 on: July 09, 2007, 10:18:10 am »
Hey Guv,

Sorry for being away for so long recently. Been on another forum, building a couple of shuttlecarriers, and playing Gears a lot. :D

First off, this story is fantastic. Learning that Ford was still alive... that the huge antimatter explosion was indeed the warp core but it just happened to be outside of the ship when it blew... Thomas being in command of one of those hot little Akyazi-class PA ships... then heading off on a rescue mission where he shows brains...

Su-f*cking-perb!

I absolutely love this line:
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Was Chevy over there…sitting in his own command chair…manning his bridge in an everlasting vigil?

Gave me a spine shiver. Seriously.

I really do appreciate Thomas growing up a bit. Instead of merely raging against the machine, he's planning his rage and considering it's implications. Being the one in charge forces you to take more stock of the possible consequences, I suppose. No final layer of insulation when you become Captain.

I have an Akyazi in my shiplist and was going to do stories on her as well, but I can't down and churn out stories like you can. And they're so good! Majorly jealous.

Can't wait to read more.
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #15 on: July 09, 2007, 10:20:10 am »
P.S. I love the Czar's sig quote from Londo and Vir.
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #16 on: July 09, 2007, 04:57:03 pm »
CH. 5





Commodore Ford roused to wakefulness under protest beneath the dim lights of his prison. The diffuse illumination shed by the single bulb high above was enough to send torrents of pain through the junior flag officer’s retinas. It hurt to open his eyes.

He hurt. He did not have the energy to move, nor even to rouse himself of his own will. Ford felt ready to give in and die. But something had awakened him. What was different? What had drawn him from the blissful dark, back to this hell?

It had better be damn well worth it, he thought.

His head swam. Was he up side down? Was he being hoisted over someone’s shoulder? Was he moving? Yes, he was. A Ya’wenn prisoner had tossed him over his shoulder. Ford coughed up thick fluid that almost gagged him. The prisoner who had him apparently noticed, and began to lay him on the cold, dirty floor. Ford sagged into a heap of torn flesh and broken bone. He looked up to the grey skinned man.

The alien leered back.

“I almost thought you’d died on me. I was going to lay you on the table…” The alien looked down, as though something interesting had drawn his eye. He withdrew a long, sharp and familiar blade from his belt. Ford gagged again in apprehension.

“Is this your knife?” The prisoners asked mockingly. “I hear you killed several of my fellow Ya’wenn with it. Jarn made it a gift to me…for caring for you.”

He flipped the eighteen-inch Bowie around, looking the ten-inch blade over with begrudging respect. “It’s an interesting design. As much knife as it is sword. I’ll bet you fight with it like it was a short-sword, yes?”

Ford’s head lolled, his right hand tumbled down from his hip to the unforgiving duracrete deck. That was when he noticed what had awakened him. He now knew what the difference was…for the first time since he’d been brought here…

Ford smiled. The Ya’wenn caught the curvature of the grotesquely swollen lips and leaned in close, the gleaming tip of the blade just beneath the commodore’s eye. The prisoner returned the smile.

“You like this weapon? Do you want it back?”

“No…” Ford returned, voice the ghost of a crackle. “You keep it… By the way…you forgot to retie my hands!”

Ford’s right thumb jerked out in a straight-line motion and jabbed deep into the alien’s left eye. There was a gushy pop beneath the thumb-tip even as the Ya’wenn began to scream. Ford’s remaining fingers grasped a hold on the alien’s ruddy face, his left hand grabbed the back of the alien’s shaggy head, and he pushed the thumb ever deeper into the socket. The squealing alien grabbed at Ford’s hands, trying to tear them away as he scrabbled backward. The human’s digit smashed through the thin, honeycomb-like bone behind the eye and shoved sharp debris into the alien’s brain. The prisoner drew stiff, his shrill scream cutting off suddenly. He fell into the human, about to die.

Before the Ya’wenn expired, he plunged Ford’s own knife deep into his guts.
***





Xia Tolin glanced up over her small meal to her beau, Ron Davenport. Her human partner was entirely focussed on the consumption of his own dinner: Italian style meatloaf, mashed potatoes, gravy and green bean casserole. Since the supposed destruction of their ship, duty had been the only thing to keep most of the survivors from going crazy. They’d lost a lot of people in that battle. They’d lost their homes and their skipper.

Admiral Sharp had given every man of them who remained in his right mind a job here on Starbase 23. He’d kept them busy. It was the best medicine. It kept people from dwelling on how close they’d been to dying out there. But, like so many medicines, the side effects were just as trying.

No one had the time to resume even a shadow of their regular lives. Their routines, their trained duties…all of those were in limbo. It made getting up every morning so surreal. Nothing seemed right, from their new duties to their current surroundings. This was not the Endeavour.

All of this had led Davenport and Tolin to spending less and less time together. They had forced their schedules into linking tonight. To make time for the other. But, now that they were finally together at the same table, neither had really spoken a word. Both were too tired to try and come up with conversation. They just ate and gave in to their worn out minds, bodies and spirits. Ron’s shoulders were slumping so much he resembled an Andorian Rijak, a native animal of her world renown for its slim shoulders and long neck. These creatures had such small shoulder mass that one could never build a harness to fit them.

“This is sad.” Xia said when she could stand it no more.

Ron looked up, surprised and worried at the same moment.

“What?”

“We don’t have the damn time to do anything more than eat a damn meal together. You spend all day in Ops while I’m out working on the Yorktown! We had to force Personnel to schedule us together and who knows how long it’ll be before we get even this much time together again!”

Ron seemed to soak this in like a plant drinking water. He just looked ahead, eyes slightly averted from hers, and thought it over. Then he met her gaze. “Yup.”

“Yup? That’s all you can say?”

No matter what species the female belonged to, certain things set each of them off. Short, uninvolved answers seemed to work for the majority of them. Especially when pertaining to issues they felt strongly about. Ron could either take the bait, or think and diffuse the ticking bomb. He decided he was far too tired to twist at the end of her line.

“I’ll talk to the Admiral. When Endeavour’s brought in, I’ll make sure we head the reconstruction crew. Then we’ll see enough of each other to make you sick of seeing me.”

Xia gave him a brittle smile that was ore show than truth.

“You think he’ll salvage Endeavour?”

“If Johnathan’s report is anywhere close to the truth, she’s not in that bad of shape. Mostly needs hull repair and a new core. The coils check out moderately damaged, the impulse drive is operational and the power grid still functions. If the structure is intact, we can rebuild her.”

“And if the structure’s compromised,” Tolin finished with a dark sarcasm in her light voice, “Then we get to rip out all those working parts for salvage and we tow the ship off to Ralna Four Depot.” She looked back up at him suddenly. “What happens to us then?”

“That’s up to Sharp. He doesn’t know about us, so I’d have to tell him so he’d be able to post us on the same ship…”

“Will he do that? A lot of CO’s like to split up dating officers.”

Davenport looked up and out the viewports of the small base restaurant and thought in silence. When he looked back to her, it was with firm confirmation in his eye. And a soft smile. “Well, if they try to split us up, I’ll resign.”

Xia returned the smile, at first thinking that her man was only joking. When the human’s pink face grew more stern and serious, she sobered. Her own cobalt eyes widened. Was he…really saying what she thought he was?

“You’re serious?”

“Yeah… I am. I’d resign.”

“To follow me? Just to be near my post?”

“Well, I was more hopin’ there’d be a more mutual act of support. Like maybe you’d…”

Her smile matched his own.

“Offer the same threat?”

“At least.”

Xia reached across the small table and patted Ron on the cheek.

“You’re cute, Sparky. But you’re not that cute. We can’t go that far. So don’t you dare… Understand?” She stared into his soft eyes and withdrew her small hand. Ron seemed to consider her words, then looked down sheepishly at the table. How serious had he really been in his offer to leave his career behind, she wondered. And had she crushed him by letting him know she would not do the same for him? She decided to change the subject.

“How is Sharp planning to get Endeavour back here? Without warp drive she’ll need a space tow.”

“Sharp’s pulling a ship in from Sector 12 to get the job done. She’s outfitted for the tow.” Ron said. He looked vaguely uncomfortable now, but whether this was due to their earlier conversation or the fact that he was not allowed to discuss sector operations outside of the command staff was unclear. “We’re leery, though, because we don’t have the escorts we’d normally use in this situation.”

Tolin nodded, briefly considering bringing up the other topic again. She did not want Ronald to believe her feelings for him weren’t strong. She envisioned a long relationship with him. Very long…

For the first time, she found herself wondering just what the future would bring the two of them. Did their remaining together rely totally on the resurrection of the Endeavour? If she was to be scrapped, could they find a posting together on another ship? And how accommodating would another commanding officer be to their relationship? How could they have that long lasting relationship she wanted…if she wasn’t willing to give up something that important?

Xia found herself dwelling on this subject as the two of them continued their dinner.





Lieutenant Bronstien settled the small shuttlecraft he piloted onto the forward hull of the wrecked starship Endeavour. He initiated a series of magnetic locks to secure the pod to the cratered bow, just above Whiskers’ compartment. Once assured that his craft was not going to float off into space, the helm officer keyed open the comm link to his comrades within the Excelsior’s ravaged insides.

“Shuttle pod Jet in position. Got the ODN data link ready yet?”

“Affirmative, LT.” Came the scratchy voice from the interior speakers. Johnathan believed he was speaking with Specialist Green. Sounded like him, anyway. “We have a computer link to your shuttle.”

“Tying shuttle sensors into Endeavour’s computer…” Bronstien replied slowly. This was not his forte, but the process was reasonably simple so long as you had all of the access codes. It took him only a few seconds of plunking at the keys on the ops panel beside him to achieve the link. “What’re you reading down there?”

“We have input… Sensor control coming online.”

Johnathan tapped a few more keys to stabilize the link against the radiation’s interference. Done, he stood and detached his small air module from the regenerator in the pod’s after compartment. This auxiliary craft was a tiny one, and it’s rear section held little more than a bench for two passengers and some equipment linkages. It had a roof mounted airlock mechanism for hard docking with larger ships, but the magnetic grapnels he’d needed to secure the pod to the hull were on the bottoms of the impulse nacelles. He would either have to EVA out to an airlock, which was not possible in a RAD suit, or beam back. This shuttle did not have an emergency transporter. Only the newest of the larger shuttles possessed those, and none of those remained aboard the great ship. John flipped open his communicator.

“McCoy, do you have transporter power yet?”

The reply of the senior spec on his team came back swiftly.

“Negative as yet, Lieutenant. We’re still trying to scrape up enough capacitor power to get a pad working.” She told him. He’d been trapped on a devastated shuttle deep within the Tempest plasma storms with this woman some months back. She’d proven her skills as an engineer at that time so solidly that he didn’t even feel frustrated at being stuck out here in the Jet. If she told him she wasn’t ready yet, then he’d just have to wait.

“Understood, Spec. Take your time, I’m startin’ to like the view…” Bronstien’s eye drew out the port window to the sloping stretch of torpedo blasted hull panels and jutting structural girder work. He could see the blackened spider webbing of the ship’s internal frame in one stripped place. He immediately felt a wave of sorrow for the damaged ship. For all intents and purposes, this ship had been his home. Hell, his possessions were likely still inside his cabin. That portion of deck four seemed more or less intact.

Seeing the wreckage of the hull and knowing how many of his former crewmates lay dead within her corridors brought unwelcome thoughts and emotions to the surface. He didn’t want to keep looking out there. But he could not stop himself. It held an almost mesmerizing quality…

A surprising tone from the main panel started the lieutenant and brought him back to the ‘cockpit’. He slid uncomfortably back into the pilot’s seat, setting his big helmet in the ops seat. There was a red, flashing indicator on the sensor relay monitor. A chill shot down his sweat soaked back.

The sensors had just detected the transponder frequency of a Ya’wenn warship.

Johnathan swallowed, again keying his still open communicator.

“McCoy, I need a transporter! We’ve got unhappy visitors coming in!”

“Ya’wenn?”

“Yeah! Beam me the f*ck back aboard!”

“I only have about seventy percent power. Give me two minutes!”

Bronstien checked the sensor monitors. How long did he have till they entered weapons range? The pod had a maximum detection range of just over a light year if the array was pointed right. He queried the system for the accurate distance. Point eight-one light years, approaching at warp factor five. They’d be here in seventeen hours. His initial panic had been uncalled for, but he felt little better of the situation.

He brought the communicator back to his dry lips.

“Go ahead and charge the transporter to full, Specialist. We’ve got more breathing room than I thought. But you might think about gettin’ some guys to unpack a few more shuttle pods from the hangers. We might need ‘em.”
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You read, you reply...then I post more! ;D
There's ya some more. I'm very glad it has been enjoyed, so far. Also Very happy that Andy approves slightly of Thomas' sudden blooming of maturity. And you're exactly right. He lighted upon the BIG SEAT and had to act the part of Captain. And he'll be a very dangerous one at that.

Well, any way...off to see what everyone else has to say...

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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #17 on: July 10, 2007, 09:20:12 am »
Movin' right along, I see. 

This is the stage of the story where I really don't have that much to say, it being in the middle and all.  So far though, I'm noticing that, unlike 'normal' Trek, your characters still appear to be capable of functioning when not surrounded by other main cast members. ;D  Davenport and Xia seem unhappy with their new surroundings, but they haven't just shut down...Thomas and Surall and company on the Tenseiga seem driven to rescue Ford, but they also seem to be adapting well to a new ship and crew...especially Thomas.  Interested to see if Commander Thomas keeps his little hot rod after this one...

The 'time together' issue with Davenport and Xia was very realistically done, too.  Liked how you handled that.
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #18 on: July 10, 2007, 11:14:48 am »
Yeah, I agree with Larry about the Xia-Davenport dynamic, and the separated cast circumstances overall. I think one of the things Trek fiction can do that the shows don't is exactly this: split them up and let them shine on their own or in smaller groups. It's kinda like early TOS where we see Sulu and Uhura's other friends in the Rec Room, bit part players that actually have their own lines. It shows they characters have a life outside of the framework of the main show.

And Guv, I'm don't "approve slightly" of Thomas' command maturity, I approve wholeheartedly! Hell, I may even begin to like the guy now that he's not off in his own ferociously loyal, f*ck everyone else world. :D He's a good character and plot driver, it was just that his more extreme behaviours rubbed me the wrong way.

I look forward to seeing more of the T'n'T Team! More Akyazi Action! Yeah!  :thumbsup:
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Re: Story Number 10! Of the Survivors...
« Reply #19 on: July 10, 2007, 08:35:54 pm »
I look forward to seeing more of the T'n'T Team! More Akyazi Action! Yeah!  :thumbsup:

Oh, you'll be gettin' some Akyazi-Action! Don't you worry. Tenseiga makes a good showing of herself in this one.

Nothin at all to say about Ford gettin plugged in the guts? The scene actually came from a dream I had, though the dream turned out better.

More 2 cum soon.

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