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Endeavour Story #9
« on: April 30, 2007, 11:04:17 pm »
Well, here's what went down after 'Home Base'. Hope this one generates some comment as well.

The name came to me while I was in the process of writing it. It wasn't till after that I noticed how pornographic it MIGHT sound to some baser individuals...such as myself... But it kinda fits, so I've left it intact.


Star Trek
The Carrot and the Long, Hard Stick
CH. 1





“Starship USS Endeavour arriving.”

Commodore Ford inclined his head at the annunciation that called out from the overhead PA system. The voice of nearly every Starfleet computer sounded the same, the voice of a woman dead now for over a century. The wife of an Admiral Roddenberry, or some such, Chevy believed.

The commodore stood beside his XO, Commander Benjamin Thomas, and his CMO, Doctor Andrea Keller. Beyond her were the two noncoms that had accompanied him to this base nearly a week prior, PO1 Dawayne Goodwin and Specialist First Class Kimberly McCoy. Andrea was today standing one place down the file from Ford. They did not wish to flaunt their dating status before the crew of the ship, even if the majority of the crew already knew. Ford was not a man to flash his private affairs in front of people, and Keller agreed whole-heartedly. So she rested between the two hulking blonde men of the ship’s compliment, entirely dwarfed by their combined mass. At least McCoy wasn’t taller than she…

Outside the long, rectangular docking compartment the officers stood within, the gigantic, silver-hulled form of the Excelsior-Class Endeavour slowed to a bare crawl and edged closer to the station’s docking arm. The ship was a massive construction, built as much to be a work of art as a functional space-going vessel. Her lines were sleek and sublime. Her skin was a puzzle of interlocking square and rectangular alloy panels, left unpainted to show the brilliance of her natural metallic glory. Her engine intercoolers and deflector dish glowed a soft blue color that contrasted against the plain hull, black painted trim and the speckling of interior lights. The brilliance of the azure light coming from the navigational deflector cooled to a ruddy yellow color as the system cycled down to a stand-by setting.

The giant ship came to a leisurely halt, firing her RCS thrusters to align with the docking mechanisms of the Starbase. The gathered officers and observers watched in silenced awe as the ship settled then pushed suddenly nearer. She sidled up to the docking arm that extended to greet her and there came a subtle thud from the heavy structure of the space station. With the clack and rattle of multiple interlocking clamps and power taps, Endeavour was docked to Starbase 23.

The main doors to the airlock reeled open as the recorded sound of a boson’s whistle piped out over the intercom. Ford and his companions stood at straight attention as the far doors parted to reveal Lieutenant Commanders Davenport and Tolin within the Endeavour’s own airlock. The two of them set off into a briskly paced walk, headed for the ship’s CO and party.

Davenport took the lead as the two quit the docking arm and stood at attention before the skipper.

“Permission to board Starbase.”

Ford shook his chief of operation’s hand.

“Granted, Sparky. Welcome aboard Starbase 23. Admiral Sharp sends his congratulations for the splendid handling of the affair with the Pang. He also wishes work would allow his time to come down here to greet you in person.”

Ronald shrugged. Tolin had stepped up close and personal next to the commander, showing her own not-quite-regulation relationship with Davenport. “I imagine Shiloah’s true nature has left the Admiral in quite a bind.”

“Yeah.” Ford turned to the remainder of his people and gave them a go-ahead nod. “Return to Endeavour and make ready for departure. XO, the ship is yours till I get there.”

“Aye, Cap’n.” Thomas replied with a meaty-faced grin. He motioned for the gathered crew to follow and led them down the gangway where a similar ceremony would doubtless take place as they boarded ship. Ford watched them go, then regarded his remaining officers.

“Sharp will make the time to speak with you about what happened. He’s been on the operations deck for nearly two solid days since Shiloah’s nature was discovered. I think he’s blaming himself for not having seen any signs.”

“What signs were there?” Ron asked as the three of them left the docking bay and headed down a long, straight hallway. “Both Banks and Gossport were consummate actors. We had no clue either of them were Klingon till it was almost too late.”

“True.” Chevy agreed. “But Sharp worked with Shiloah, or Brigadier Komar, for two years on Earth before Sharp recommended him for the post of Sector Commander here. That’s hard to get over.”

“Any clue how Komar got so far into Fleet ranks?”

“Intel believes that Komar took on the identity of a Starfleet Commander approximately ten years ago when his ship was boarded by the Klingons. The Klingons took that Shiloah’s ship, capturing the upper decks, and started heading her for Imperial space. The reports of the junior officers in engineering stated that Shiloah miraculously showed back up hours later, badly injured about the face, and led them to retake command. After that, they fought their way to the aid of ships warping to their rescue.”

“They think that’s where the swap took place?” Tolin asked, her voice a whisperish tone with the accent of her people’s northern continent. Ford nodded to her in response.

“Yeah. The real Shiloah had too many officers and men from his past that, when contacted, knew him and could describe what he’d looked like. Those people hadn’t seen him since the Klingon capture and he accepted another starship command soon after with a completely different crew. Intel also contacted Shiloah’s parents. They hadn’t seen anything more than a subspace transmission of him since the capture.”

“Seems like a pattern, then.”

“Yeah,” Ford paused as he considered a turn in the station’s corridors. He led them first to the left, then reconsidered and took them down the opposite hall. He was not completely familiar with the layout of this outpost. “I hate this place. Anyway, Intel is using those parameters to try and locate possible further Klingon infiltration within the ranks.”

“What about your yeoman?”

“Not nearly so sophisticated. He was just implanted within a personnel transfer between base and ship. They cooked him up a fraud data trail and a mediocre history and let him loose. He was just a good enough actor to make it work. I did him the biggest favor by selecting him as my yeoman.”

Xia Tolin shook her white maned head.

“And from there he had access to a Fleet Captain’s files and all the strategic data in your computer.” The group silenced as they entered an alcove bank full of turbolifts. They remained quiet among all the subordinates gathered there and waited till they could board a lift car alone.

“Yeah…well. Until I got promoted to Commodore, Fleet didn’t share too much data with me. The C in C was never fully convinced I belonged in command of an Excelsior to begin with.” Ford replied, then ordered the car to proceed to the ops level. The turboelevator hummed away as it took them up into the towering command structures of the armored space station.

Mister Davenport looked uneasily aside to the commodore, about to broach a question to which he dreaded the answer. “I see that the XO has been reinstated. Any fallout following the trial and his conduct?”

Ford shrugged, his expression darkening.

“Some. Admiral Nakamura felt Sharp out for the idea of bringing Thomas up on charges of conduct unbecoming and several other miscellaneous articles of B.S. Sharp overruled him. We’ve got too much going on in this sector to throw away a line officer with Ben’s record. Nakamura wasn’t happy ‘bout it, but then, he isn’t the Chief of Starfleet Operations. Sharp is. So Ben’s still with us.”

The lift ride was a short one. The silver doors parted and allowed them out on a wide command deck packed with consoles and duty stations. Operations consoles lined the raised outer circumference of the circular room. Steps led down into a railed-off section akin to a starship’s bridge where stood the wide, round Strategic Command console. Sharp stood among the officers surrounding the wide, grey table, pointing into the holographic displays of ships depicted there.

Something was afoot. There was a particular buzz of activity in the ops level that hadn’t been there just fifteen minutes prior. Ford led his silent entourage down into the command section. “Something up, Admiral?”

Jonathan Sharp glanced back at his junior flag officer. Stern worry framed his dark skinned face as his almond eyes studied the bald Commodore. “The Ya’wenn have attacked our task force. Two frigates, the Texas and the Rome where destroyed.”

“Destroyed!” Ford found that highly surprising. The encounters Endeavour had had with the Ya’wenn had displayed that people to have much inferior technology than Starfleet. But then, they had just recently been given photon torpedoes… “How many hostile ships?”

“Just one. A very large ship from the reports rendered b the Rome…just before we lost contact. I’ve ordered the Comanche to halt her search for cloaked ships so she can move into the area. The Le Resolute and the T’pol will arrive to back her up in three hours. Their orders are to draw the line and keep that ship from reaching the shipping lanes.”

Chevy looked down at the map depicted on the flat display of the StratCom console. The tabletop showed the area of the Tempest plasma storm near where Endeavour had encountered the Pang two days prior. “Do we think this might have been the ship that attacked the Pang?”

“We don’t know.” Sharp motioned and led Ford to an adjoining console that showed a visual image of the Ya’wenn warship in question. “But it could well be. She’s impressively armed and armored.”

Chevis looked upon the picture of the blocky, silver painted vessel. She was a stubby, blunt shaped design with huge warp nacelles slung beneath long, blunt wings portions. New torpedo launchers stood out from the familiar lines of the design, covered in rough designed armor. Multiple weapon projections studded the hull and a wicked looking nose jutted out from the bow like some kind of dark beast. Ford knew that ship.

“That’s Jarn’s flagship. He’s got some new toys and wants to show off to us.”

“I don’t know the extent of the rogue Klingons’ plans against us, but it’s quite obvious to me they want the Ya’wenn to cause as much disruption as possible in this sector.” Sharp said, looking Ford in the eye. Chevy nodded his agreement.

“Anything to draw our attention away. How much do we think the Klingons know about what we’ve uncovered?” He asked.

“Hard to say, Chevy. It all depends on how secure the C in C’s office really is.”

“Which, of course, he adamantly denies is infiltrated.” Ford added. He looked back upon the grizzly image of the Over Warden’s ship and the weapons it was pictured firing at another Federation frigate. “My orders?”

“I wanted you close, but now I need you out there to chase that ship back into the Tempest. Do whatever you have to do to ensure the safety of Federation traffic and assets in this area.”

Ford nodded to his friend and commanding admiral. He turned and locked eyes with his two officers, pointing them back to the turbolifts. “Sparky, Engines, return to the ship and get her squared away. There’s some special ordnance in Bay Five here on base that the Admiral has ordered be loaded into our magazines. Take care of that. And make sure that Gossport is escorted to station security. We’re leaving in less than an hour.”

“Aye, sir.”

Sharp looked with amusement at his subordinate as Davenport and Tolin stepped away.

“Engines?”

“Yeah. Thought she was deserving of Bornet’s old handle.” He replied, remembering a former chief engineer of a previous starship named Endeavour. Sharp stood totally straight, studying Ford with interest.

“Is there a reason you’re still here?”

Chevis nodded.

“I’m told there’s a Federation Ambassador en route to Earth, returning from Qo’noS. I was wondering what strings I’d have to pull to get his shuttle diverted to this sector and my ship.”

“You want an ambassador on your ship?”

“Yeah… Someone good at offering the proverbial carrot to aggressive nations. I’d like your authorization to make an overture to the Ya’wenn and try to curb all this conflict before something bigger gets started.”

The admiral looked impressed.

“You really think this Jarn will listen to you or our ambassador?”

“No. But I don’t think he’s a real leader among his people, no matter how much money and resources he has at his disposal.”

Jonathan Sharp considered the proposal then gave his ascent with a nod.

“I’ll do what I can to steer that shuttle this way, Commodore. If I can get the ambassador to agree to help you, I’ll have his craft meet Endeavour en route.”

“Thank you, Admiral.” Ford turned and was on his way. Sharp watched him go, proud of the officer he’d led up till now.
***


Well... those of you looking below will note that I have only posted one chapter...

This is because, at the moment, that Well of Inspiration I've been dipping out of since December '05 has temporarilly run dry. I can't say it was a bad run. I've completed 11 stories in just over a year, each with it's own main plotline and have advanced a pretty intricate sub-plot to the point where it begins to take shape for those reading it. Not too shabby, even if I say so myself.

Hopefully the spring will flow anew soon and I can get back under way. Till then...I'm enjoying doing other things. Till I go back to full time Trek writing, I'll be posting this story at a slower rate and allowing those who give a damn to post comments without having to set aside several days to read the whole thing.

Anyway, hope this tid-bit will be enjoyed. I'll post CH. 2 as soon as everyone checks in again.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #1 on: May 01, 2007, 02:34:09 am »
Very good opening, Guv.  Clarifies some little loose ends from the last story and establishes the current plotline/advances the overall 'through the whole series' story.

Loved the 'USS T'Pol'.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #2 on: May 01, 2007, 01:01:45 pm »
Yup, a nice little start. I was gratified to see this:

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Admiral Nakamura felt Sharp out for the idea of bringing Thomas up on charges of conduct unbecoming and several other miscellaneous articles of B.S. Sharp overruled him.

Shows you had either thought of this before I voiced all my objections, or took on board my objections as the reaction of unnamed miscellaneous Fleet officers. :D

Either way, I was very pleased to see it.

Not much else to go on, but I did like your description of the Endeavour. So, your Excelsior has black trim, and not the blue of the Excelsior or the teal of the Enterprise-B? I have a ship--hell, a whole fleet--you'd like to play with, then.

Oh, one more thing; the voice of the computer. Even though the tip of the hat to real life was nice, remember that Pike's Enterprise

1) Didn't have a talking computer
2) Did have an XO with the same voice as the TNG computer. :D

You could say that Number One became an Admiral and decided after the hodge-podge of computer voices over the years--female in TOS, different males and females in the movie series for different ships--she decided to implement a Fleet-wide computer voice. Hers.  ;)

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2007, 10:34:02 pm »
As to the attempt by Nakamura to indite Thomas, that was there originally, but your wording did inspire me, so I altered the original script slightly as a tip of the hat to you.

'Bout the computer voice, we don't KNOW Pike's Enterprise didn't have a talking computer. 13 years later it did, under Kirk, though that could still have been an upgrade. I can't remember a real instance of NX-01 having a talking computer... Though I did note a few faux pas where Archer answered the 'comm by just looking up and talking... and addressing the computer once in similar fashion as well. Mostly. it was just a nod to Roddenberry and Majel Barret.

I'm very glad you like this intro bit. And yes, I just had to use the USS T'Pol.

I'll leave this up for a week or so for others to get 'round to it. Then I'll post some more.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2007, 08:52:05 am »
You could say that Number One became an Admiral and decided after the hodge-podge of computer voices over the years--female in TOS, different males and females in the movie series for different ships--she decided to implement a Fleet-wide computer voice. Hers.  ;)

For some reason, this made me think about what would happen if they went back and gave the original six movies the Lucas treatment. Replace all the old effects with CGI, and such... and also replace all the computer voices with Majel Barrett's.

Sorry, I know, random thought.
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« Reply #5 on: May 03, 2007, 08:53:44 am »
I can't remember a real instance of NX-01 having a talking computer... Though I did note a few faux pas where Archer answered the 'comm by just looking up and talking... and addressing the computer once in similar fashion as well. Mostly. it was just a nod to Roddenberry and Majel Barret.

That's the major thing I hated about Enterprise. They couldn't even stay internally consistent. ::)
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« Reply #6 on: May 03, 2007, 03:19:48 pm »
That's the major thing I hated about Enterprise. They couldn't even stay internally consistent. ::)

Heh.  If you're counting on Star Trek to be consistent in any incarnation, you'll be countin' for quite a while.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2007, 08:31:40 pm »
OH! Do not be a'dissin' my ENTERPRISE!

heh... Well, it is my favorite series, though only since I bought the DVD collection. Having it all before me, when I can watch it back to back and without commercials...makes a difference to me.

And no...only in fanfic will you find that anyone truely TRIES to maintain consistancy. TNG and DS9 made their attempt at it, but then, I have luke-warm feeling for them. TNG took all of the action out of Trek and brow beat anyone who objected. DS9 was too wishy-washy and grounded in space-fantasy with the prophets thing. Voyager...Trek for the sake of Trek. Enterprise tried to go it's own way and got railed for it by fans. Now we have no Trek, save the upcoming movie which will be equally railed by fans.

BTW. Kieran...did you actually like the chapter above?
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« Reply #8 on: May 05, 2007, 08:44:06 pm »
My bad, Guv. ;) Yeah, I liked it; I still think the best thing about your stories is the character interactions; they seem genuine without being forced. That's something I've always had trouble with, I think.
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« Reply #9 on: May 06, 2007, 09:36:01 pm »
Character interaction is what killed my last Endeavour series before it could get off the ground. By story #2 of that particular jaunt, I was tired of writing it.

Then something dawned on me late one night. The reason my stories way-back-when were so prolific and fun to write (though not necessarilly good...) was because I'd based all the main characters on people I knew and mimicked their interaction. And it worked so damn well. That night, I jumped out of bed and started revising the NCC-2007's crew roster. I took people I knew and that knew each other and began to think of how they would react and speak when put in a specific position. It was great. I wrote two chapters that one night before work.

Take it for what it's worth, but maybe you can make that kinda work for you. La'ra uses a similar method. He's the one who got me thinking along those lines.

Now, how bout CH. 2?




CH. 2





Captain’s Log, Stardate: 9709.2

USS Endeavour has set out to reinforce the area we know that Jarn’s ship has been lurking within near the Tempest plasma region. Captain Ramses of the Comanche has not yet been able to locate the Ya’wenn ship and it is possible that they have retreated back into their own space before our ships could reach them.

Admiral Sharp has reported his success in securing the help I requested. Perhaps with the ambassador’s help we can bring all this hostility to an end without further bloodshed. I only hope we can convince Ya’wenn leadership to listen to us over Jarn.
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Commodore Ford again found himself standing at attention as his party waited to welcome a newcomer aboard. This time, however, he stood within the mechanical confines of the main transporter room, just before the semi-enclosed control booth. His Chief Engineer, Commander Tolin manned the controls that were at this moment beaming the esteemed ambassador over from his long-range warp shuttle. The noise of the transporter buffer filled the chamber and brought the collected officers and honor guard to even stiffer attention as the alcove lit with a shining blue field of energy.

The energy solidified into a single shaft of light bearing a tall, regal silhouette within. The personage inside posed in relaxed dignity, bearing a single pack and what was likely a book tucked beneath one bent arm. Ford’s breath caught slightly in anticipation of meeting this man. There was not a person aboard who did not want to shake his hand.

Even Commander Thomas, beside Ford, could hide his exuberance. All those collected had donned their dress uniforms for the occasion and stood decked out in the darkest maroon colors with the broad, decorative piping that lined the uniform’s edges. Ford had elected not to wear all of his Service Injury Merits, stopping at a mere one.

At a nod from the CO, Petty Officer First Class Goodwin stepped up and let out a shrill blast of the electronic boson’s whistle to signal the arrival of their guest on board.
The transport field parted and faded away with the majority of the noise, leaving the respected form of Ambassador Spock standing on the foremost pad above them. With the customary single raised brow expression common to his Vulcan heritage, the Ambassador looked to the commodore and nodded politely. “Permission to come aboard?”

Ford edged close to the steps leading up to the arrival platform and made the Vulcan greeting gesture, his four fingers split into a V. “Granted. Vulcan honors us with your presence, Ambassador.”

Spock stepped down to an even keel with Ford, also raising the traditional gesture. He wore the traditional grey-black traveler’s robe his people seemed to favor.

“The honor is to serve, Commodore. Thank you.”

Ford swept a hand toward his throng of officers and crew.

“These are my command officers. Commander Ben Thomas, XO. Doctor Keller, Commander Davenport, Lieutenant Nechayev and in the control booth is our Chief Engineer, Commander Tolin.”

“I am honored.” Spock replied in his schooled method of speaking English.

“Shall we get you squared away, Ambassador?”

“Not as yet, Commodore. If you’d be so kind as to take care of my pack, I would like to be briefed on the situation as soon as possible. I understand that you established first contact with the Ya’wenn?”

Ford nodded as a junior noncom stepped up to take the Vulcan’s pack and book.  Then Ford led Spock out of the transporter room and down the honor guard flanked corridor outside it. “Yeah, if you could call it that. We were out to secure the release of Klingon nationals from their prison and the whole affair degenerated from there.”

“I’d be appreciative if you would convey me to your briefing lounge to study your tapes on the matter.” Spock replied, matching the shorter legged gait of the round CO. Ford nodded his response, looking back to see how Mister Davenport was tending to the dismissal of the guard and the collected officers. Thomas had fallen in behind their guest, still smiling to have a living legend of Fleet service among them.

“Have you had much contact with these people, Commodore?”

“More than anyone else, I’d say.”

“I see. Then I will need your help in preparing for the meeting when we can arrange it. How do you intend to find the ruling world of the Ya’wenn?”

“Hadn’t figured that one out, just yet, but I’m workin’ on it.”

“I see.”





The officer’s briefing lounge on A Deck was stone quiet as Ford and Ambassador Spock read over the files on the species with which they were about to contend. The task was no light matter. Little was really known about the governmental workings of the Ya’wenn’s political body.

Jarn, the only official Ford had dealt with, had a title that translated through the UT as a kind of warden. He ran a prison complex, which catered to various species other than his own. He commanded ships and apparently had the authority to broker deals with alien governments. How much of his authority proved to be legal, however, was up to speculation.

“One would hope,” commented Spock after more than an hour of quiet reading and watching tricorder video, “That the Ya’wenn government proves more scrupulous than Jarn’s example. To deal with a political entity that legitimizes the use of fraud, slave labor and wanton force to achieve its goals would prove most difficult.

Ford lowered his PADD and took a drink of iced tea.

“I’m hopin’ Jarn is the black sheep of the bunch. Maybe they tolerate him because of the money he makes them or maybe they don’t know the full extent of how he operates his business.”

Spock regarded the Endeavour CO with interest. Something in Ford had intrigued him.

“Admiral Sharp stated that you originated the idea to push for a peaceful resolution with the Ya’wenn.”

“Yeah.”

“I find this path odd, considering your normally militant approach to past situations. A commander of your reputation would normally deal with offending enemy ships in a direct manner, and only convey an ambassador when force fails to resolve the issue.” Spock leaned his head to the side inquisitively. Ford felt a bit of heat stain his face.

“Well, maybe the two extra arrowheads on my rank bar makes me think a little longer about things. Starfleet isn’t supposed to be the military. Our conflict with these people seems driven by a grudge borne by a man who’s had his pride stomped on…by me. At the time, I did what I thought was right. In hindsight, I don’t think I’d have done anything different. But it still seems like my responsibility. So I’ll deal with it before it costs any more lives.”

Spock raised both brows and leaned back in his seat at the head of the table, a place customarily claimed by Ford himself. “How many starships have we at our disposal?”

Chevis shrugged.

“We’re meeting up with the Comanche, T’pol and Le Resolute. The Yorktown, Shran, Eldridge, and Kiev can all reach us within twelve hours without seriously depleting the patrol force.”

“Then you should call upon all of them.”

Chevis stopped dead in his tracks. Spock looked back at him in all his Vulcan ernesty. This was not a plan Ford had expected. “Going in strapped, aren’t we?”

“Strapped?”

“Packing heat, expecting a fight.”

“That was not the intention of my suggestion, though not entirely outside the realm of possibility.”

“Then what?”

“A show of strength. We protect the lead ship, which bears the ambassador, and show that we mean to be heard. There will also be an unspoken threat toward those who fail to listen to our proposal.”

Ford grinned.

“It’s all for show… Been learning from those Klingons you’re dealing with, haven’t ya?”

“Some contamination is inevitable. I have been working on an armistice with the Empire for some time.” The elder Vulcan seemed to take his own decision under scrutiny. “It would be the height of naivete to assume Jarn will not attack us once he learns of our intentions. Likely, he will attack this ship regardless of our purpose. We cannot proceed without adequate protection.”

Ford stood up from the table. He had some captains to call up.

“I like the way you think, Ambassador. I’ll be on the bridge.”

“Very well. I shall retire to my cabin and further study your reports.”

“As you wish.”

The commodore turned and preceded the older man out the door. He nodded to one of the two guards manning the small security alcove outside the lounge and directed one of them to lead Spock to his guest cabin. It was easy to lose one’s way aboard an Excelsior-Class starship. He did not want the ambassador to suffer the mild embarrassment of having to ask for directions.

Upon emerging upon the Command Bridge, Chevis drew up to the Strategic Command console Commodore Shiloah had ordered installed. Ford hadn’t liked any change to his bridge, but given his new rank and the responsibilities therein, the console had proven its worth just in organizing the patrol routines for the many frigates under his command. Commander Davenport stood beside the console at the moment, his ever-present coffee mug in hand as he studied over the tactical situation outside their hull. The operations officer looked up at his approach.

“You and the ambassador come to a decision on our game plan, Skipper?”

“Yup.” Ford braced both palms on the console table and leaned in tiredly. “We’re going in with a show of force. Have comm send dispatch to the Yorktown to have her group form up with ours.”

“Aye, sir.” Ron turned briskly and went to the communications station. There he conferred with the young lieutenant Smith. Soon, Endeavour was calling in her cousins in preparation of entering the Tempest once again. Ford looked to the center seat where sat Mister Thomas.

“XO, our ETA to intercept point?”

“Seven hours, present speed.” Thomas replied mechanically. Ben wasn’t the most by-the-book individual to ever wear the Starfleet uniform. But occasionally he could rap out a report in the correct sounding manner. This always brought a wry grin out of Ford.

“Alright. I’m going below to change out of this monkey suit.” The commodore tugged at the base of his dress jacket for show. Ben chuckled at the skipper and looked him over with all of his campaign medals, braids and ribbons. The remainder of the bridge crew had gotten out of their own dress uniforms in the intervening time between the arrival of their passenger and resuming their posts.

Ben gave his skipper a wink.

“But you look so pretty in your dress, Cap’n.”

The commodore feigned a grimace.

“I better get out of it quick while my chastity is still certain.”

With a good-natured smile, the CO left the bridge for his quarters.
***



Hope this is as well recieved as the last! I look forward to reading your replies. Sometimes after a long day at work, it's the best thig to cheer me up. Along with listening to the day's broadcast of Paul Harvey on his site...

See ya soon!

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #10 on: May 08, 2007, 12:04:06 pm »
Although absent for a while i've been reading your latest work. And I'm mucho impressed. Great easy flowing dialogs lots of action without it taking over the plotline, naked women and last but not least: humour. Makes my day.


ps.: All you others who've posted their stories will receive credit due asap....
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #11 on: May 08, 2007, 12:52:58 pm »
Been too long since we've seen your leering skeletal visage, Grim!
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #12 on: May 08, 2007, 10:19:57 pm »
Thank you very much, Grim.

More to come soon.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #13 on: May 14, 2007, 06:46:52 pm »
Only 2 replies? Oh well. 

R/L can be a bitch. That...or no one was impressed with Mister Spock beaming onto the Endeavour...

Either way... Here's some more story!


CH. 3





“Contact, Commodore. Distance one-point-seven AUs.” Came the smooth voice of the dark skinned Vulcan science officer. Relaxed in his command chair, Chevis Ford looked her way. He was now in his standard uniform, the slimming and professional maroon jacket and black pant with the short-collared command sweater beneath.

“Jarn’s ship, Lieutenant?”

“I believe so, sir.” The officer replied with confidence. She pressed a key to extend the main sensor scope from the left corner of her panel. “Its warp field profile matches the signature of the vessel we fought within the Tempest on Stardate: 9704.”

Ford stood from the conn to stretch his legs before what would likely become a combat encounter. His right hand came to rest on the butt of his phaser, holstered at his belt. He’d ordered all hands to arm with standard sidearms hours before. Rifle bearing guards manned their posts near each turbolift here on the command deck. The commodore took a long glance across the bridge, taking in the composure of his officers and noncoms. They were ready. Some looked to him, awaiting his next command. The rest watched their monitors for changes in their equipment and made final preparations for the mission ahead.

“Battlestations.” He called out.

The lighting dimmed by computer control at the sound of the order; red tracers highlighted the corners of the compartment. Unnecessary personnel filed off the bridge to the pulsing bark of the klaxon alarm. The sound of the comm officer’s young voice sounded over the intercom, adding to the urgency of the ship’s signals. “Battlestations, battlestations! This is a Red Alert. Set Condition One throughout the ship.”

Division commanders began to sound off over the comm system, barely audible as a chattering din from the communications console. Ford looked about at the collected men, watching them make the transition into soldiers. He glanced directly aft to the StratCom and Mister Thomas. The XO looked back to him, matching his expression, looking on expectantly. Whatever confidence one took with him into battle, one always wondered if it was going to be the final time.

“XO, signal the task force to take up Advance Deployment Position Sharp Seven. Also, confirm their battle preparedness.”

Ben nodded once, tapping a key on the StratCom’s face, and headed for the comm station. Ford turned back fully toward the bow, settling his eyes on the main screen. He looked outward into the fuzzy pink sheen of the plasma storm before his ship. His adversary was out there. Jarn waited in his battleship for the chance to strike down another Federation vessel. Maybe he even waited for Ford himself. Chevy found that thought satisfying, but foreboding as well.

“All decks report Red Alert Status, Commodore.” Lieutenant Smith reported from comm.  Ford gave him a thumbs-up. Jarn’s vessel was just barely visible as a tiny black dot in the lit visage of fiery space.

“Very well, Mister Smith.” Ford replied.

“All ships report ready, Skip.” Seconded Thomas. The big mountain of a man returned to the aft consoles and bent there in waiting. Ford slowly turned and made to join him. He immediately looked down onto the black 2-D display, which showed a graphic map of the surrounding space all about the Endeavour within five Astronomical Units. The glowing, swirling mass of roiling plasma of the Tempest Storm showed ahead and to the portside. Behind the Excelsior-Class starship, her current task force escorts; Comanche, Le Resolute and T’pol; followed their leader in a V formation. Deployment Pattern Sharp 7 called for the force command ship to lead from the head of the group. Ford felt this was the way any battle against his adversary should be fought.

He would lead, charge down Jarn’s throat. Jarn’s beef was with him. Ford would like nothing better than cutting him down personally. The dark feeling was not one becoming of a Starfleet officer. But he felt it none the less. He knew that if he did not put an end to Jarn’s aggression, it would continue. It would worsen. It had to end.
The portside lift doors opened at the aft of the bridge, allowing Ambassador Spock to enter. His hands were clasped before his robe, making him the picture of serenity. He looked every inch the negotiator that his newfound reputation made him out to be. He came to stand beside Ford while the commodore thought about tactics. Chevy looked up at him.

“Ambassador.”

“Commodore.” He returned the greeting. “You have found Jarn?”

“Indeed. He’s alone. No back up. We’re about to enter what we believe to be their accurate sensor range.” Ford pointed to the image of the small ship that his task group was closing in on at a speed of warp factor eight. The Vulcan nodded and looked back to the ship commander.

“What are your intentions for the Over Warden?”

“I don’t want to antagonize the Ya’wenn by destroying one of their biggest and heavily manned warships. But I don’t intend to allow Jarn to just walk away without punishment just so he can bushwhack us later.”

“You intend to capture him.”

“Indeed.”

The ambassador looked left to the main viewer forward. He gauged the silver-hulled craft and all of its armament. “Jarn’s ship carries four hundred men, according to your scans from your previous battle. He may have added more. How many security personnel does your group have?”

It was Thomas who answered.

“Endeavour carries one hundred and twenty security, and we outfitted with a full company of marines from 23. That gives us a total of two hundred fifty here. Comanche has her sixty men. Le Resolute has forty and T’pol has twelve. All together we’re packin’ three hundred and sixty-two riflemen.”

“Any idea as to the level of the Ya’wenn’s training?”

“From what we’ve seen,” said Ford, thinking back to their mission to Kovarn. “They’re not professional soldiers. Hired guns, thugs, maybe some mercenaries. I’ll bet on our men any day in a straight up fight.”

“I doubt any pitched battle will be equitable, Commodore.” Spock warned. “They will undoubtedly be ruthless in defense of their ship, sacrificing their own numbers to vent compartments of our men. They know the layout of their vessel more implicitly than we, and they won’t be setting their weapons to stun.”

“I know. But I’m not out to keep their ship. We’re only after Jarn. It’s a smash and grab operation.”

Spock’s brow shot up and he nodded. They didn’t need to hold that ship. They had only to take the Over Warden from it. Deprived of their commander, the Ya’wenn left commanding their vessel would likely give up any idea of pressing the attack against such a large force of ships.

Ford was smiling with a wicked streak of cruelty.

“This could also be our chance to discover where the Ya’wenn homeworld or capitol is. We’ll question the Warden under truth serum.” The thought of the medication would do to its recipient gave the Commodore much more pleasure than a Fleet psychiatrist might have liked.

Spock noted the obvious signs of Ford’s malice. He’d seen various examples of adversarial relationships between humanoids during his tenure in the service. The hatred hurled between James Kirk, his former captain and friend, and Kahn Noonien Sigh, a bio-engineered cast-of from a bygone era was quite fascinating. The two men would have hurled their own bleeding organs at one another had that been their only method of attack. Ford and Jarn might prove to be just such an example.

Ford went on watching the developing tactical situation beyond the ship’s hull. Jarn’s battleship sat unmoving before the super-hot gasses of the Tempest. He was possibly unaware of the danger bearing down upon him. He likely knew of the warp fields belonging to the starships, but without accurate sensor data on various classes of Federation ships, he was probably waiting to see what sort of ships were coming his way before making any decisions. He probably hoped a fat, juicy convoy of civilian ships was trucking toward him.

Jarn did not know that even Federation cargo ships had better sensors than his people possessed.

“We’re getting into their sensor range.” Thomas intoned.

Each man about the StratCom watched for computer rendered signs of activity from the warship. Moments passed, showing the horrible reaction time Jarn’s crew of misfits churned out. Ford grimaced at the thought of having to rely on such a gaggle of men. Given the adventures Endeavour had underwent in the last six years, she would have been floating debris with such a compliment running her.

“Now reading power increase from Jarn’s ship, Commodore.” Came from science. Ford looked over Surall’s way with a nod and looked back down to the icon on the screen. The ship remained rooted in place. Was Jarn unaware of the danger these ships were to him, or was he still ascertaining his data?

Two new numerical markers popped up beside the red icon of the Ya’wenn ship.

“Their shields have gone up…” Ford commented. “He’s powering weapons.”

“Incoming hail, Skipper.” Called out the comm officer. Both Spock and Ford shared the raising of an eyebrow. Ford turned to face the main viewer.

“Gutsy bastard. Put him on screen.”

The fiery spew of gas disappeared from the forward visual display and was replaced by the bridge of another starship. This time, no unnecessary furnishings adorned the control room of Jarn’s ship. No pillows or silken hanging made it a den of heathen comfort. Jarn had learned from his previous engagement with Endeavour. He’d ordered every creature comfort out of the chamber where he’d command during battle.

“Captain Ford,” graveled the harsh voice of the tall, muscular, grey skinned alien who resided in a command chair with high armrests. The chair still seemed very comfortable. Far be it for Jarn to resign himself to an uncomfortable seat… “A pleasure to see that you have gotten your ship back into one piece.”

Jarn was smiling in confidence.

Ford stepped closer to the viewer and his own command chair. He put his hands lightly atop the blue upholstered conn. “And yours, Warden. And it’s commodore, now.”

“Ah, you received a promotion, no doubt for surviving me the last time.”

“Actually, they gave me the promotion for a really good book report I did on fat, swarthy prison lords.” Ford responded with a huge grin, as though he were addressing a long time friend. His comment made Jarn’s brows knit despite the calm he projected. “I’m going to give you the chance to surrender your ship without a fight. I’d hate to have to embarrass you again.”

“That’s mighty humble of you, Commodore. I’m touched, but I’ll have to decline.”

“You don’t really think you can outfight us, do you?” Ford pushed him, hoping to keep the Warden inactive while his ship’s closed the distance.

Jarn looked anything but nervous, but he was a cool customer. One did not know what the alien was thinking when he kept his game face in check. Ford was having less success in baiting him than the commodore had imagined. But so long as he wasn’t issuing orders to depart or attack, Ford had the upper hand. The deployment he’d placed his ships in was designed to cut off any attack or retreat vector, so long as they were close enough to do so.

“I could outfight you on any given day, Ford.” The warden boasted. His jaw jutted in masculine defiance. He’d likely prefer a good brawl or melee between the two. He was much larger and younger than the commodore. “I’ve gotten new equipment to get around the toys at your disposal. You won’t best me again, I assure you. You should fear me…”

Ford’s expression was equally assured. His hands spread to take in all that he had in a gesture. “We take all comers here, Jarn. We’re ready when you are.”

The Over Warden just smiled in response, and then he was gone. Replacing him on the viewing screen was an image of his ship turning away from the approaching Starfleet vessels. Ford jumped down the level to his conn and slid into the seat. “All ahead flank!”

“Flank, aye!” Shouted Bronstien in enthusiastic response.

“He’s runnin’!” Thomas reported from the StratCom in his own gruff voice. There was laughter underneath the tone. “He’s haulin’ ass for the Tempest!”

Ford tapped the key on his left intercom panel.

“Engines! Give me maximum acceleration!”

“Aye!” Was Tolin’s reply over the speaker. The great warp engines of the ship roared to new levels of bass and tenor as the Endeavour responded with all that she had. She reached warp factor 9 within moments, pushing the other Fleet vessels to the ends of their design capacity. At warp 9.01, she began to leave her escorts behind.
Jarn’s ship leapt into warp speed, pushing her own drives to the brink of exploding. She was angled as far away from Endeavour as one could get and bore in on a specific point of the plasma storm before them. Endeavour vibrated like a washing machine spinning its clothes. They were slowly closing in on the silver warship before them. The commodore glanced down to the right hand tactical repeater on his armrest. They would over take the warden’s ship inside twelve seconds.

In eight seconds, however, Jarn would reach the first passing strings of the Tempest. Ford’s hands clenched on the chipped metal of the conn’s armrests. He was losing his chance to get that son of a bitch!

“Pour it on, Helm! Stand by tractor beams!”

Bronstien said nothing in reply. Nechayev acknowledged and began targeting the tractor emitters. Jarn’s ship suddenly enlarged within the magnification of the main screen, then began a wallowing turn to penetrate the outer membrane of the plasma storm. She pushed ahead at her best sublight velocity and faded from sight, passing into the wispy fields of roiling energy.

“sh*t!” Ford snapped off.

Spock rocked back on his heels. He’d been unaware of how engrossed he had actually been with the short chase, and Ford’s vehement outburst of profanity shocked him back to reality. Ford growled in animalistic fashion, slamming a fist down on the arm of the conn. He made Kirk seem reserved.

“Drop us out of warp and hold station!”

“We ain’t goin’ after them?” Thomas practically exclaimed the question. He leaned over the strategic station, hands bearing down hard on the metal edges of it. He couldn’t believe Ford’s sudden reserve. “We’ve got the better impulse engines!”

“Yeah, XO.” Ford breathed out as though he’d just finished a marathon. “But we left our escort behind and we’re nowhere near maneuverable enough to chase down a ship in that soup. Certainly not while trying to fight and beam in troops. And…we’ve got more ships comin’ that are dependin’ on us to lead ‘em to the Ya’wenn. So we let him go, for now.”

“So he can get us next time.”

“Maybe. He’ll have to get up pretty damn early in the morning to get anything over on us, Mister Thomas. For now, though, we wait. What’s the ETA of the rest of the task force?”
***

Perhaps this may wet the appetite.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #14 on: May 15, 2007, 03:42:25 pm »
Nice little segment there, Guv, but I feel the need to issue a few pointers. Sorry.  ;D

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One did not know what the alien was thinking when he kept his game face in check.

When you're keeping something "in check", you are holding that something back, restraining it, trying not to let it get out of control. "Game face" is obvious. So, you have two negatives making a positive here. It would have been better to say "...kept his game face in place" (which sounds silly with rhyming :) ) or "...kept his emotions in check".

I feel a pain, but I'm gonna say it anyway. You can say "ships" (without the apostrophe) if it is more than one ship (or chairs, or CDs). If something belongs to that ship, then we can go to the "ship's bridge". If we're on a videoconference, we can get feeds coming in from all the "ships' bridges". :D

And it's "whet" your appetite, as in with a knife. Bringing it to a keen edge. ;)

Oh, Thomas saying "riflemen". Would the huggy, clappy Freds call their marines that, especially as phaser rifles are Bad Medicine inside ships? Besides, with a full company, wouldn't there be a Heavy Weapons Squad and a Command Element?

My apologies Guv, but my Editor's Soul needed some release. Ah'm no' wantin' nor tryin' tae nark ye off.

Now, this line I love:

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The two men would have hurled their own bleeding organs at one another had that been their only method of attack.

What. An. Image.  :D

I like that Jarn is smart enough to run and fight another day. I actually find it possible that he timed his breakaway so that Ford would just miss cacthing him, just to get under Ford's skin--thought it might not be likely as Ford has been hiding Endeavour's true capabilities from Jarn.

Beyond that, there's not too much to comment on in Ch.2. Looking forward to more, though.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #15 on: May 15, 2007, 10:20:49 pm »
Some editors nitpicks still get past me. But it was a long story to edit. Forgive me.

In the US, Marines hold by the addage 'All Marines are riflemen.' My Starfleet runs on the same system. And yes, there would indeed be a Heavy Wep and Command Detail aboard, but as you'll never actually see any marines in this story, there was no need for unnecessary detail. And, so far as the Trek TNG tec manual's snarky explanations as to 'why' there were no rifles aboard Enterprise-D... They're stupid. You have rifles...you pack rifles. My idea is that Endeavour packs enough rifles in her standard armory package to arm 1/2 of the crew. With my Endeavour, that's 400 rifles. I also envision 3 good sized armories, FYI.

Glad you enjoyed this lil' tid bit.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #16 on: May 18, 2007, 11:24:12 pm »
Luvin' it so far.  Tension in the confrontation and short pursuit was very good, but I think my favorite scene thus far is Spock's beam over.  He has that...brusqueness we've seen from Vulcans, but in a way that doesn't seem impolite or ill-mannered.  That's Spock to a T...logical, confident, but not arrogant the way his pointy-earred brethren often are.

It's also very cool to see Ford's sense of responsibility for the things that've been happening.  While for my money, Jarn is the real cause of the whole situation, most folk would have their own share of 'my fault' after all the strife, and Ford's reaction to that, and the way it fuels his resolve, is very believable.

Downsides?  The chase seemed resolved a bit quick.  Other than that, nothing much, save Andy's favorite target, grammar, but I'm the last person that can complain about that.... ;D

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #17 on: May 18, 2007, 11:38:09 pm »
Yeah, I try to keep my cool about it most times...

...but I'm 'bout up to my eyes with the grammar comments... Speak to my word processor. I don't write for the express purpose of turning out a word-perfect collection of grammar. If I could, I'd hook a f'ing maching to my f'ing head and suck the story out of it without all the innane typing. Faster...easier.

But I digress from the wonderful artifact I've been given above. After a minimal amount of cajoling and waving of carrots before La'ra, he has read and commented on this story in a single hour! This makes me happy in places you don't want me to describe...

Yeah, I agree that the chase seemed a bit quick. But there was little else I felt Ford could/would do about it. He kinda pissed away a good chance to get Jarn, and it'll come back to bite him. So, no regretts over how I wrote it. You'll see what I mean later on.

I'm glad someone mentioned Ford's reactions to events. Yeah, he feels responsible, espescially sinse he really believes that last, spitfeul torpedo he fired started most of this conflict up. And he hates to leave things unresolved.

thanks ever so much for the comments, y'all.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #18 on: May 18, 2007, 11:44:00 pm »
If I could, I'd hook a f'ing maching to my f'ing head and suck the story out of it without all the innane typing. Faster...easier.

That'd be especially good for those scenes you have in your head but can't quite describe fully the way you want too....there's a little, tiny moment from 'The Harrying' that STILL bugs me cuz when I read it, it doesn't quite sound like how I pictured it.

I am so OCD.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #19 on: May 21, 2007, 10:17:05 pm »
Another week, another chapter.

I hope this is entertaining for all. Read on, if you please.

CH. 4




In the next few hours, the bulk of Patrol Task Force 173 converged outside the glowing clouds of the Tempest plasma anomaly. Endeavour commanded a group now composed of a Miranda-Class heavy cruiser, a research cruiser of like class, a refit Constitution-Class heavy cruiser, a Chandley-Class light cruiser, and three Okinawa-Class frigates. They were a force to be reckoned with.

Ambassador Spock eyed the forming starships as they fell into narrow line behind Endeavour. Endeavour was leading the task group into the Tempest to begin their search for the Ya’wenn homeworld. Closest to the Excelsior-Class starship were two of the frigates, Kiev and Eldridge. The later was the older of the pair, refit so many times that her hull panels almost looked jagged. Just behind them and barely visible as the swirling gushers of plasma enfolded about them, was the research ship T’pol. That Miranda Class ship was the least heavily armed among them, bearing only six phaser banks and bearing a wide sensor pod atop her ‘roll-bar’. It was for this module that the ship was a part of the patrol group to begin with. She had the most powerful eyes in the group; even more so than Endeavour, which was the newer craft.
Spock’s eyes sought out the faint lines of the Chandley-Class Le Resolute. That cruiser was among the relatively small group of ships built to accompany the Mirandas as fleet ships before the advent of the Excelsior. They weren’t as heavily gunned as they Constitution-Class forebearers, but their greater maneuverability and newer shielding had proven their worth. Spock had seen only one other vessel of this class, and was particularly interested to look upon this one. She was a wide, flat built vessel, with a smaller saucer than either the older cruisers or the Excelsiors. Two huge, hump-like hulls adjoined to her rear, and from them sprouted her warp engine struts. The engines stretched out beneath the craft rather than above. Le Resolute was a beauty, and her skipper well versed in combat. He’d served in frigates most of his career till being promoted to full captain. He’d then been given a larger ship to command a number of patrol ships from.

Among the assembled ships, Yorktown was the oldest. She was among the few surviving and serving members of the original twelve Constitution-Class. Bearing the hull code NCC-1717, she was a relative of the old Enterprise, the ship on which Spock had served so many good years. In outward appearance, she looked as new as either of the Mirandas or the Chandley, but within her there was told a different story. Her structure would be scarred and stressed from years…decades of service to the Federation. Tons of older equipment stood cobbled together with newer devices. Little was left of her original format, but even the equipment from the retrofit received by the first twelve ships was over twenty years old now. Yorktown’s day was nearly ended.

Spock watched them all as they appeared and faded from view time and again. He thought of Ford and how the man approached the rangy animal of command. His style was one all his own. Kirk’s was a more regulated, though often flamboyant method. He’d met Sharp, seen him in action. Jon Sharp was a very by-the-book officer. Most of the good captains were. Ford, however, did not head decorum. Did not adhere to the normal methods. He was as unrestrained and foul-mouthed as many of those Spock had met in the later Twentieth Century. But his record showed long lists of successful missions and admirable tactics. He was unorthodox, but efficient.

The ambassador wondered how this play would work itself out. Would he be able to broker a working peace with these new aliens? Or would their gestures be rebuffed, their intentions ignored?

For a year now, Spock had been in the Federation Diplomatic Corps. His contributions to the Klingon Peace Initiative were solid, even though results had thus been lean. Diverting here at the behest of Admiral Sharp had been at first viewed as a welcome distraction offering a different view of his work. But after reading over the reports and watching the visual recordings of this Over Warden, Spock began to wonder if this task was going to take on a whole new life of its own. A whole new team might eventually be needed to resolve the conflict here were it to escalate further. Lives had been lost on both sides. But the Ya’wenn seemed quite eager to spill more blood, and seemed to have little remorse for their actions.

Spock had seen only one example of the Ya’wenn mindset. But Jarn had to be at least something of a model for the rest of them. Even the most debased beings were a product of their society. Or were they?

Spock was never one to judge an entire species on the acts of one of its members, or even a group of them. But the chivalric, detached way that Jarn viewed violence was akin to barbarism. The tricorder readings taken of the conditions of his mining installation spoke of that. The ambassador hoped that Ford could find the true rulers of these people. Jarn could not be dealt with. A man like to him would be equally useless. Only an open-minded body of more disciplined beings could be brought to end this dispute and reign their Over Warden in.

Lost in his thoughts though he was, Ambassador Spock still detected the faint sound of the lounge’s doors open. A slight footfall came from the bow entrance, but came no farther. Spock turned to look upon the owner of those light feet. Framed in the light squared within the doorframe was the young, dark skinned Vulcan lieutenant.
Surall eyed him in silence, half turned to leave, hesitating. Spock’s brows rose.

“Yes, Lieutenant?”

She swallowed. She must have been very taken aback to have found him here. This was the officer’s lounge on B Deck. The ship’s upper officers dined here and relaxed in the quiet atmosphere of the somberly decorated compartment. Plants lined the walls, and the bulkheads were toned in a very neutral brown.

“I apologize for disturbing your reflection, Ambassador.” She told him, completing her turn to leave. “I shall leave.”

“Not at all, Lieutenant,” Spock called after her before she could take a step. “I find myself longing for a like mind to converse with. I have known only the company of Klingons and humans for the majority of the year. Aside from my father, that is…”

Surall turned back toward him and stepped past the threshold of the door. It closed behind her, restoring the low light level of the room. Spock motioned to a small coffee table and sat on the couch closest to the window. Surall approached, clasping her slim but long fingered hands before her and sat primly across from the Ambassador.

Knowing he would have to jump-start any conversation with this woman, Spock began unabashedly. “You are young, like so many aboard Endeavour. When did you graduate, Lieutenant?”

“Class of ’89, Ambassador. I graduated with honors and the Vulcan Merit of Sciences.” She said matter-of-factly. She tried to mask it, but pride shown out beneath her veneer of stoicism. This amused the much older man.

“Ah, you have achieved quite prodigious rank for so short a time. My own experience in Starfleet was not so swift in ascension.”

“Likely it was a different time…” Surall offered, hopeful to impress him with her empathy.

“I was held back by my own lacking ambition. I was more interested in learning than in excelling among my peers. I held the rank of ensign up until Christopher Pike assumed command of Enterprise. It was he who compelled me to ‘climb the ladder’.”

Surall looked at him with sudden interest. She switched to Vulcan suddenly, though the lounge abounded with no other personnel to overhear them. “Did you ever find serving among so many humans…lonely?”

“At times, Lieutenant.” He replied in the same. “You feel alienated?”

“Quite often.”

“You find no comradery among your peers? You lead a large department of like minded officers.”

“They are excellent scientists, but their methods are…”

“Illogical?”

“Indeed.”

Spock leaned back, his expression one of realization. He understood what her problem was. “And this capacity for illogic bars you from interaction on a social level.”

“I…”

“You fear contamination.”

Surall’s eyes widened at the accusation, then narrowed. She was not biggot. But, then, that wasn’t what he was telling her, was it? He sat there across from her, studying her like a teacher might a pupil. This man had lived among humans for most of his life, shunning life on his homeworld to spend time among them. Serving with them, living with them. He was also half-human. Perhaps he understood both minds.

“Perhaps.” Was what she finally answered.

“You have elected to serve Starfleet, which is, at its heart, an Earth-based organization. They conceived of it, Starfleet headquarters is posted on their homeworld. Given this fact and the human proclivity for adventure, it is only natural that they dominate it in population. You knew you would serve with humans, and a variety of like-minded species, when you joined. You should not fear to be influenced by them. It is up to you what behavior you emulate. Their nature is, at heart, an accepting one. They would reach out to you if you allowed it.”

Surall looked to the deck as she listened to his sage-like tone. Perhaps he was correct. She need not feel alienated among her own peers, among her shipmates. But they were so utterly different. Starfleet Academy had been hard enough, but she had gotten by with focussing on her studies and excelling in her classes. She’d assumed that those she’d classed with were so illogical and undisciplined due to their youth. The instructors seemed well rooted. Upon getting her starship assignment, she had expected to meet more officers of their ilk. This had not been the case.

Could she learn to look past their illogic and their chaotic nature? Or would she eventually withdraw into herself and shun contact? She refused to consider leaving the service she’d fought so hard to get into. Even by Vulcan standards, the Starfleet entrance exam had been grueling. She’d often been baffled at the fact that so many of these undisciplined human beings could manage to enter the fleet.

Spock was watching her as she thought the matter over. Finally Surall nodded to him. She would have to try. She did not envy the idea of serving in this fleet without companions. Spock returned the nod with assurance. Surall would do well.

For now though, he remained in the mood for companionship of his own.

“Would you like to share a meal, Lieutenant? I have heard that your Chef Riker serves an excellent plomeek soup.” He stood, motioning palm-up to the door. She arose as well.

“Yes. He has also managed to modify it to be palatable to human taste. He serves it quite regularly.”

“Then I must sample his human version. I cannot imagine it being made suitable for a species that requires so much spice in their food.”

The two of them left the lounge together.





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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #20 on: May 21, 2007, 10:24:14 pm »
CH. 4 (part 2)

Captain’s Log, Stardate: 9709.4.

Endeavour and Task Force 173 has been inside the Tempest for three days now. Some of our smaller ships are getting a good taste of what we had to struggle through without warp drive a few months ago. Damage has been light, the worst of it falling upon the frigates with their lighter shielding. Thus far it’s been nothing worse than blown plasma conduits overloaded by passing energy strings.

We have lost all sign of Jarn’s ship. With him went any chance of resolving our conflict quickly. Capturing him would have gone a long way to at least ending the armed conflict. Perhaps we can still achieve the same goal by starting a dialogue with the ruling government…get Jarn reigned in…

Ambassador Spock seems quite entertained with this whole mission, and has frequented the bridge daily. I enjoy his presence. He’s the only such official I’ll say that about, though. He has taken my leave to man the science console with Lieutenant Surall and seems greatly interested in our sensor enhancements. Surall seems more at ease with another Vulcan to interact with. I hadn’t noticed any particular discomfort on her part, but she does seem more at ease lately.




“Ready Room, Bridge.”

Commodore Ford glanced up from the log recorder at the sound of the intercom. “Go ahead, bridge.”

Lieutenant Noah Smith responded promptly. There was a slight, anxious note to his voice. “Skipper, incoming transmission from the T’pol. Captain M’Derra wishes to confer with you.”

Smith must have taken a peek at whatever information the T’pol had transmitted along with his request to speak with the Task Force commander. This would explain the edge to his voice. Ford smiled at the thought of having a nosey comm officer. “Very well, Lieutenant, patch M’Derra to my screen… And…no listening in…”

“…Uh…Aye, sir.”

Ford wiped the amused grin off his face before the Vulcan starship commander could see him and placed his log recorder on the far end of the desk. Captain M’Derra appeared on the pop-up screen of Ford’s console and nodded a greeting to the commodore.

“Captain.” Ford greeted, his face equally stoic as he eyed the plain-faced, black haired man.

“Commodore. Sir, my science officer has detected the impulse current of a nearby starship.”

“Ya’wenn?”

“No. But I believe you will recognize the impulse pattern.”

Ford flicked his eyes down to the waiting menu on his panel and tapped the flashing info packet that blinked for his attention. M’Derra’s face shrank in size on the screen and shared space with a subspace field display. The grid showed the energy flux of a vessel traveling at high impulse power. The field pattern did seem familiar, but Chevis did not possess Vulcan memory. He keyed for the Endeavour’s computer to identify the reading. He glanced up to the science ship’s commander with a slight smirk.

“I’ll be damned.”




“Helm,” called out Ford as he stepped out onto the bridge. “Come hard right, 075 mark 031. Make your speed full impulse power. Comm, signal the fleet to continue on course. The Comanche has command till we return.”

“Aye, sir.” Replied Mister Smith. Ford noted the smug grin on his face as he opened the hailing frequency. The commodore would have to remember Smith’s capacity to remember old sensor images. He’d known whose impulse track that had been, likely without having to ask the computer to identify it.

Lieutenant Bronstien glanced back from the helm as he prepared to make the turn Ford had ordered. “Skipper, that turn is gonna take us right through a magnitude three plasma flow.”

“I know that, helmsman. But I want to take the ship on the other side of it by surprise. The shields will hold. Make your turn.”

“Aye.”

“Computer, sound Collision.”

As the whirring alarm echoed throughout the ship, the commodore turned from the helm and secured himself to the conn. He looked aside to find both Commander Thomas and Ambassador Spock looking back to him with curiosity. He smirked in reply as he synched the lap restraints firmly over his legs. “Think we just found our path to the Ya’wenn homeworld, gentlemen.”

Spock responded with upturned brows only and swiveled his chair away so he could get a solid grasp on the edges of the science console. Thomas leaned close to the blue bridge railing and held tightly. The jetting plasma flow on the main viewer increased in size and clarity.

Endeavour hit with a thunderous crash, heaving her crew forward. Bridge lighting immediately surged and faded to combat red as numerous miscellaneous alarms and signals sounded their discomfort from about the room. Ford grinned wider, even as he gritted his teeth against the jolting, tumultuous ride. The main screen was a swirling cacophony of contrasting and conflicting colors and light. The hull moaned and roared with the abuse Endeavour shrugged off. The ship’s gravity center pitched, making the ship feel as though she was rolling on her side. But Bronstien held her course true.

The ride through the plasma front took all of forty-seven seconds.





Prefan Lodus of the pirate ship Cuunaan stood closely to his sensor operator as the two of them studied the confused imaged the equipment was rendering. Some sort of enormous energy front was passing through the plasma string aft of their lithe little hunter, coming closer at high speed. Lodus had ordered his vessel be turned away from it and his shields raised to full power should it turn out to be something dangerous.

The short, round-bodied Idari male scratched at his hairy belly and stood straight. His round eyes still beheld nothing but confusion as he eyed the readings. He hooked his hands into the crossed bandoleers that held his twin blast pistols. “Could it be some kind of ship passing through the cloud?”

“Through that cloud?” Asked the operator, another hair covered Idari, with incredulous humor in his tune. “No ship could survive running through a string of that magnitude! They’d be fried like a duzaa!”

Lodus furled his black lips as he continued to look upon the spectrograph on the monitor. Were it a ship, surely it would be emerging from the string within moments. He turned away from the sensor station and edged closer to the pilot module. He pressed three keys in the glowing bank of thirty viewer controls on the pilot station. The small, rounded view screen set over the pilot console cleared to show the view aft of his ship over the swell of her warp engines. The streaming blast of plasma churned along, a glowing river of energy running away from his precious ship. A dark mottle of color formed in the center of the river, growing larger and larger. Riotous bursts of electricity shot out of that blotch and arced over the eddies running the length of the flow. The dark area continued to grow and darken, then to blister and bulge outward.

Lodus did not think that any eruption of plasma from this distance would harm his ship. He settled in to watch the blast, an unconcerned hand on his pilot’s shoulder. He would at least get an entertaining show from a natural occurrence of physics. He grinned, his problems forgotten.

“NO!”

His face twisted into one of loathing and apprehension as the bulge in plasma ruptured and fell back from the lines and sleek contours of an all too familiar warship. The gleaming silver-white vessel dipped her left side and turned for his ship, leaving no room for doubt in the Prefan’s mind as to what that ship was here for. Lodus gaped, his hand gripped tightly on his pilot’s shoulder till the man squealed and yanked his clawing hand away.

“It IS a ship!” The sensor operator called out needlessly.

The USS Endeavour closed in at tremendous speed, her deflectors flaring from her passage through the plasma flow behind her. Lodus considered flight. But that ship was the faster. He thought of combat, but he’d already been beaten by them. His ship was still missing weaponry due to their last encounter with the Federation ship.
Lodus slammed a fist on the closest thing to him, again his pilot’s shoulder, and wheeled away as his anger flared. Captain Ford had made good his promise to look him up when he came to rid the string region of pirates! Was he the first on the list? Or had others fallen in the proceeding weeks and only now was it his turn?

“They signal us, Prefan!”

Lodus clenched his eyes tightly. There would be no escaping this. Whatever Ford would say, he would be heard, either over the radio, or within his prison.  Lodus decided he would try the radio first, in a likely vain attempt to avoid the prison. He waved for the sensor man to key on the communications system. He turned to look at the viewer. He forced a calm and upbeat look upon his face and demeanor.

Captain Ford was pictured in his bright and clean control center, his crisp red uniform practically shining under the lights. The bald headed, nearly hairless human smiled benignly as he looked on the pirate. “Prefan Lodus. How’s it been?”

Lodus listened to the scratchy translation that poured through his speakers and shrugged.

“Relatively well, Captain. Leading an honest trade operation now!” He replied with too much enthusiasm. Ford’s smile became acid.

“Really? That’s why your hold’s crammed full of weaponry?”

“I’m licensed with the Ya’wenn Bureau of Transport. I’m hauling weaponry to an out lying outpost!”

“Damn…that sounds lucrative. Where are your escorts?”

“Es—Escorts?”

“Transporting military ordnance… Surely they didn’t send you out without protective escort, Lodus. That would just be stupid with all the…pirates and such flying around out there…”

Lodus refrained from letting a growl slip. He managed a weak smile.

“Oh… the military escorts… They got lost. This region, you know. Very treacherous! We are in the process of searching for them!” Lodus knew it was weak. Ford wasn’t buying any of this…

The human captain smiled and stood up from his blue chair. He slowly walked down between the two forward consoles, between two equally smirk-filled crewmen in similar uniforms. Ford clasped his hands behind his back and somehow managed to be looking down on the Prefan. “Lodus, we both know what you’re doing out here. How about we cut a deal where you don’t wind up in my brig?”

“By what authority could you possibly arrest me? What is the charge?”

“A few months back, you attacked my ship, Prefan. I don’t need much of an excuse to rattle your cage. Either way, I’m gonna get what I want. The only question is whether you leave here a free man.”

Lodus’s eyes bobbed open.

“What do you want…Captain?”

“The location of the Ya’wenn capitol world.”

“You’re still dealing with them?”

“Sort of. Details aren’t important. Where is it?”

Lodus considered the possibilities of giving Ford falsified coordinates. There were many places he could send that ship where he doubted its chances of survival. But then, he’d doubted its chances of surviving his three ships all those months back… Then he’d had to scavenge the other two to repair the one he currently commanded. Ford was uncanny and his ship a titan! And he’d just proven that he had no trouble finding Lodus wherever he went!

“I’ll—I’ll send you the coordinates.”

Ford nodded to him politely. As the viewer faded to black, Lodus all but ran to the main computer terminal and began punching through its memory banks. No, he’d send Ford right where he wanted to go. Right to the Ya’wenn capitol. And then, hopefully, he’d never see Ford again…
***

There we are. Hope everyone remembers Prefan Lodus from story #1. He'll be back in a future story I have no doubt. He is my 'Harry Mud'...

Anywho, any and all comment will be apprieciated, non grammar related, that is...

Lemme know what ya think!

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #21 on: May 28, 2007, 09:10:03 pm »
Well, no responses. Oh well.


CH. 5





Seven Federation starships emerged from the Tempest plasma fields in double file ranks. They crept forward at low warp speed, making it plain to all those watching that they were in no major hurry to get anywhere. They entered into a region clear of plasma drifts and heavy gravitic activity. Large vessels of many varieties were within easy reach of the ships’ sensors. They gave the unknown fleet a wide berth, altering course to clear the way for them. Leisurely, the task group changed their own flight path, angling toward a close-by star and its accompanying planets.


“Course laid in for the Ya’wenn homeworld, Skipper.” Bronstien reported from his helm console.
Ford straightened tiredly within the conn, nodding to no one in particular.

“Very well, helm. Maintain ahead slow.”

Commander Davenport looked back from operations. “We’re being scanned from nearly every quadrant, Commodore. They’re interested.”

“Any one with better sensors than Jarn’s”

“Three ships have a definite range of two light years to their active subspace scanners, but they don’t match Ya’wenn configuration. I think they’re just visiting too.”

“Understood. Comm, keep an ear out in case anyone decides to say hello.”

“Aye, Skipper.”

Chevis rose from the command chair and stepped back to the Strategic Command console. Spock stood there, looking either at its display or the forward view screen. Ford laid a questioning look on the diplomat and received an even return.

“Yes, Commodore?”

A shrug.

“Just wondering about your thoughts on everything thus far, Ambassador.”

Spock rocked back on his feet to restore circulation and seemed to think the request over. When he looked back to the shorter human, his expression was just a neutral as before. “While your diplomatic methods are certainly not text book examples, you do seem to achieve some results. Now those methods will be put to the test.”

“Just you remember…bringing the fleet was your idea.”

“Indeed. I rather point to your use of threats to gain the knowledge of this star system. Such methods may not gain us the upper hand in these negotiations. I intend only a moderate show of strength. I do not intend to strong-arm their government into adhering to our wishes.”

Ford made an acquiescing face.

“If they don’t go for your proposals, we may not have much more choice than to resort to strong-arming. Our main intent here s to prevent further attacks on our vessels. If we need to use…Cowboy Diplomacy and strap a .44 to our saddlebags, then we’ll damn sure do that.”

The ambassador crossed his arms, seemingly amused with the commodore’s terminology.

“Cowboy Diplomacy. Explain.”

“Well, we’re not really out here to offer them anything for leaving our ship’s alone. We’re here to let them know that if they don’t reign Jarn in, there’ll be reprocutions…right?”

“In essence.”

“Sounds pretty close to protecting the range, like back in all those old movies. Leave our ships be or we’ll be back. Opening a lasting dialogue with these people is a secondary issue.”

Spock considered the relevance of Ford’s comparisons in silence. The commodore watched him for a moment, wondering if he’d made any sense at all. Finally, Spock returned his gaze to the CO. “You are correct that our primary purpose here is to safe guard our shipping. However, I would prefer not to do so in such a way as to create a potential future enemy for the Federation. These people must be made to see that there are other considerations to account for. Threat of force need not be the only reason to treat peaceably with us—“

“Skipper!” Bronstien grabbed their attention by suddenly whirling away from the helm. “I just picked up a Klingon transponder frequency coming from inside the Ya’wenn system. They’re in orbit of the second planet!”

Ford cast a sideward glance at the ambassador before returning to the conn.

“You sure about all that?”
***




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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #22 on: May 28, 2007, 09:16:06 pm »
CH. 5 (Part 2)

Captain’s Log, Stardate: 9709.6.

My hopes for this mission have plummeted with the discovery of a Klingon warship in orbit of the Ya’wenn homeworld. I find it likely that this vessel is affiliated with the group attempting to derail the peace initiative between us and the Empire. I will find out more momentarily.

The task force is assuming high orbit and Endeavour is moving into a standoff position before the Klingons. This action may seem unduly provocative, but I want to see just how easily angered our friends out there are. I have a sneaking suspicion as to who the Klingon commander may turn out to be…





“Hailing frequencies open, Commodore.” Smith’s voice came to Ford’s ear. He responded with the usual nod and watched as the bird-shaped Klingon warship grew in the center screen. He also glanced to Mister Thomas who stood near the science console.

Ben shook his head from that position, denoting that the Klingons had yet to react to their somewhat aggressive posturing. Had they raised shields or armed weaponry, Thomas would doubtless be calling out the alarm. The commodore looked back ahead.

“Class and identity?”

It was Ronald who answered the inquiry.

“She’s a Qam’a-Class battlecruiser, Skipper. IKS Gorvek. No intel on her captain. Vessel sighted once in brief border skirmish prior to Praxis Explosion.” The chief of operations was reading straight from his console monitors. He’d likely identified the ship from its transponder.

The battlecruiser was among the newest of Klingon designs. Built on the model of the much smaller B’rel-Class scout, this larger, more heavily armed clone took advantage of the design merits of the previous, battle-proven ships. Her heavily armored wings could be brought down to minimize the chance of a stray shot damaging the warp drive or the main reactor and its general raptor-like shape gave one the impression of fighting a living thing rather than a mechanical construct. The shape was predatory, brooding and dark.

Currently, the Gorvek’s wings were in the raised landing position. Its wing mounted gunnery remained dark, but was moving to track the Endeavour as she closed in. Someone was watching them…

“Now receiving response to our hail, Skipper. Coming on screen now.”

Ford had already straightened his posture in preparation to speak to the Klingon commander. What he saw on the viewer was an oily, unkempt looking soldier; the veteran of too many battles and too many kegs of Blood Wine. Chevis kept his face neutral as he looked on the man. He did not fail to note the man’s rank of Lieutenant First.

“I am Commodore Ford of the Endeavour,” he told the man, careful not to make it sound like any sort of greeting. “Who are you?”

The warrior in the unrevealing image grimaced as though it pained him to speak to a lowly Earther. “Korn, First Officer.”

Ford drew his instant smirk into a simple lengthening of the left side of his lips. The amusement was hard to hide. “Korn?”

“Korn, First Officer of the Gorvek.” The brutish fellow repeated. “What do you want here?”

“We have dealings with the planet below.” The commodore replied with equal curtness. “Where is your captain?”

“Below. Dealing with the planet as well.”

“What is your purpose here?”

The Klingon sneered, reaching for his comm controls.

“Go ask him.”

The screen returned to a visage of the winged cruiser as Endeavour’s forward motion halted. They were now standing right in front of the Klingon warship. The rest of the task force was spread out in upper orbit, ready to react should the Gorvek decide to do something stupid.

Ford arose from the conn and headed aft.

“Alright. Comm, see if you can raise anyone in authority. No one seemed willing to challenge us as we came in… What’s the traffic like around this planet?”

Surall looked back from her sensors.

“Moderate, sir. Mostly civilian and freight traffic. I only count three combat vessels within planetary reach.”

“Lightly defended. I wonder if the rulers are bowing to the Klingon commander in regards to us.”

Spock turned from his own perusal of the communications monitor, hands clasped before him in contemplation. “I think that likely. We will be hard-pressed not to fall into some kind of trap. Likely, this vessel is linked to Commodore Shiloah’s plot.”

“That’s what I’m thinking. Maybe cutting some kind of deal for more torpedoes.”

“Perhaps.”

Lieutenant Smith caught both their attention as he wheeled from the comm station. He pulled the silver command microphone from his ear before speaking. “I have someone from the Presidial Office. They are transmitting beam down coordinates for their Premier’s office.”

Ford nodded. At least they were getting this far. He looked to Spock.

“Feel like stretching your legs, Ambassador?”

“Indeed.” The tall Vulcan bent his head forward in monk-ish style and headed for the portside lift. Chevy turned to his exec.

“XO, mind the store.”

“Gotcha, Cap.” The huge man replied and stepped down to assume the command chair.

Ford stood looking at the big man sitting there for a while before entering the turbolift. Something about Thomas manning that chair looked…right. More so than it had ever before. Had something changed in his bearing or character since the trial? Chevy could not place the reason for this notion, but he did linger on the thought for a while. Noticing that Spock still held the turbolift door, the commodore turned and hurried off the bridge.
***





The Presidial Rotunda was not a great or grandly built structure. Its architecture was of simple, straight lines and clean, unadorned walls. It had stood for ten generations, since the formation of the Ya’wenn Affiliation. Soldiers of many different former nations and rebellions had besieged this grand building.

It stood in a flat field, grass shorn nearly to the ground stretching out so far as the eye could see. A single road led to it. A hoverpad stood behind it to admit planet bound visitors. More modern out buildings had been added to the complex, but their armored structures had been camouflaged to appear outwardly like the capitol building. The capitol was a tall, four story rectangular building, columned at every corner in alabaster stone. Steps led up to its arched doors, and a wide, pinnacled dome stood atop it. It was a beauty, copied again and again by smaller regional sections of the government. But none approached the simple ingenuity of design and simple grace that this one building impressed.

Within it was equally as simplistic. No futuristic and aesthetically marring apparatus shone out to draw one’s attention and clash with the architecture. No consoles or glowing monitors interrupted the white and blue interiors. Only simple desktop computers had been allowed for modern convenience.

The Presidial Office was no exception to this rule. One computer was evident on the Premier’s desk. That desk was a simple, oaken design. Its craftsmanship was superb, but it could have belonged to a time ages past. Drapes hung over the three great windows looking out onto the Rotunda’s landscape. Aged paintings adorned the walls. The largest hung behind the Premier’s seat, between two of the oval windows. A mere two guards stood their post within.

Likewise, the man sitting at that desk was just as inauspicious. He dressed in simple but formal attire: a grey suit, open at the front and showing a subdued blue under-sash where as a human might have worn a tie. His slacks matched the jacket, and his shoes were slim and low, made for formal comfort. This was how he ran his interstellar nation, and this was how he addressed the people of that nation. No uniforms, no gaudy trinkets of military campaign, even though he was a veteran of two prior wars.

The Premier was a man of peace.

This was why he did not like the sinister, oily looking alien who stood silently grinning close to his desk. The Premier had dealt with regional governors, alien diplomats, tradesmen and officials of all kinds. He knew trouble when he smelled it. And this odd looking humanoid reeked of it.

Two glowing shafts of azure light began to shine in the center of the Presidial Office, accompanied by a growing cry of sound. The Premier fought off the urge to cover his ears, and just as the sound reached its highest pitch, it died almost away. The light had also parted and faded. When it had gone, it left two humanoids, pale in color like to the oily faced man who stood to their left. Compared to the Premier’s more natural, dark grey flesh, these aliens appeared as ghosts.

The Premier remained seated, just as he had for the Klingon. These two men were what the Klingon had called Earthers. One wore a red military uniform. He was bald shaven like many Ya’wenn fancied, and bore what was likely a small weapon on his belt. The taller wore a long, floor-scraping robe of soft grey tones with triangular designs on its chest. He bore himself in earnest, hands clasped peaceably before him and his piercing eyes focused on the Premier with resolve.

He already liked this alien far better than the Klingon.

“Greetings, Premier.” The tall one said. His voice was as even as his countenance. He raised his right hand, palm outward and parted his long fingers into a V. “We bid you peace and long life. I am Spock, Ambassador of the United Federation of Planets. This,” he drew his hand then to the military man beside him, “Is Commodore Ford, commander of the Federation vessels that have traveled here to your world.”

The Ya’wenn ruler half bowed within his seat. The translator on his desk had done a good job in making the alien’s speech understandable. Their language must have been a simple, but articulate one.

“I am Premier Rellin Feece, leader of the Ya’wenn Affiliation. Are you here to present peace?”

This alien, Spock, nodded, a solitary, grave motion.

“Why, then, do you bring a fleet to our doorstep?”

Nonplussed, the ambassador made his answer without waver.

“The accompanying vessels were unfortunately necessary due to the actions of your Over Warden.”

Premier Feece acted taken aback. The implication was unlikely, but he was interested in how one of his prison leaders could have necessitated the appearance of so many armed warships. “Which?”

“A man named Jarn.”

The bald one sneered in genuine looking disdain. He also stared with unhidden anger at the Klingon commander. Feece looked blandly at Spock. “Jarn. Warden of our furthest and most remote prison facility? How could he have inspired such fear to travel through our space?”

“A number of his ships have attacked Federation assets, including the flagship we have brought here.” Spock looked at him evenly. His gaze was measuring and questing. He was gauging the Premier for each of his reactions. Feece knew this was an observant individual. He was likely a skilled negotiator.

Feece had to smile wryly at what this Spock was presenting to him.

“I find that highly unlikely. Kovarn is a low yield facility. If it weren’t, we would remove the prisoners and put a legitimate mining expedition down there. The minerals there are profitable, but in terms of money generated, it barely covers the expenses of feeding and maintaining the prisoners we incarcerate there. Jarn himself is a former prisoner stationed there as the last stage of his rehabilitation.” Ford scoffed here, drawing a cross look from the Ambassador. Feece went on unfazed. “Kovarn can’t have more than three bulk transports and a handful of hoppers at any one time.”

“Common Federation over exaggerations.” The Klingon commander crooned in a silky, seductive voice. This man tried far too hard to be friendly, convincing. He turned half toward the Earthers and slowly waved his gauntleted hands in a low gesture. “They claim hardship and persecution to beg for consideration for their cause. They feign weakness even as they post a fleet on your doorstep.”

There was a slight bit of truth to what the Klingon had said… There was, after all, a fleet in orbit of his world. Feece looked back to the newcomers for their reaction.
Ford was advancing on the Klingon. His brow was a furrowed mess and redness had colored his nose and cheeks. These aliens were capable of such coloration! Spock was watching Ford closely, and though he had yet to move, he believed the man was readying to restrain the rounder shaped officer before he did something rash. The Klingon, for his part, did not back down. Rather, he faced Ford fully and crossed his arms before him menacingly.

Ford stood before the short haired, mustached commander, glaring coldly into his eyes. Feece sat wondering when the violence would begin. Who would restrain Ford first…Spock, or the Premier’s own security men. Feece could see them both tense as the two squared off.

“Your name, flathead.” Ford demanded. Feece couldn’t understand the use of ‘flathead’. Was this some sort of slur? Physically, Ford did not look very much different than the Klingon. The Klingon’s hair was short, but unshaven. His coloration was darker and his hair coarser than either of the other two aliens. But beyond this, and the warrior stylings of the Klingon’s armor, there seemed almost no difference between Ford and the man he glared at. No added limbs, appendages or even bumps on their heads separated them.

The Klingon winced, only just perceptibly, at the insult. The corner of Ford’s mouth curled a touch when he saw that. At length, the Klingon answered as though he hadn’t noticed the slur.

“I am Captain Rell, commander of the Gorvek. Likely you noticed my ship in orbit.” Rell smiled an acid smile as he stared back, unblinking. Ford nodded very slowly at some kind of confirmation he’d just been given.

“Rell. I’ve been anxious to meet you. We got yer buddy Shiloah… Or maybe you knew him better as Brigadier Komar.” Ford obviously took great pleasure in revealing whatever situation this information alluded to. Rell made an effort to maintain full composure.

“Brigadier Komar has been missing for ten years, Commodore. If you found him within your own ranks, he must have seen it as some kind of retirement. A vacation within a simpler career.”

Rell ended everything in a smile. Feece did not trust men who had to force out a smile.

Ford was likewise unimpressed with Rell’s dismissal of what he’d said.

“Keep yer mouth shut, or I’ll shut it for you.”

Feece glanced back to Spock. The ambassador was eyeing Ford with baleful intent. Such blatant aggression was obviously not his modus operandi. When Ford finally stepped back a pace from the Klingon, Spock and Feece’s guards settled. Spock pushed on as though the exchange had never occurred.

“The commodore refers to Klingon interference in Starfleet operations with intent to disrupt the peace between our two powers. Ultimately, there is much at stake here. More so than I had previously guessed. Rest assured that what I claim about Jarn’s military strength is valid. Whether he has secretly built a war fleet or has made some sort of alliance with other commanders to gain the ships he wanted, your Over Warden possesses a fleet of impressive size. Starfleet has estimated he commands no less than twenty vessels of varying sizes. And it is also believed he has made a deal to gain access to advanced weaponry of Federation design.”

Ford seemed ready to pounce on the Klingon commander. Feece looked from him to the ambassador. He had just now noticed that this Spock possessed one difference from Rell and the commodore. His ears were pointed. Feece wondered if he was of some different creed from Ford.

“Twenty ships…” The Premier started as he repeated that statement. He glanced up to Spock. “The entirety of the Affiliated fleet has only thirty ships.” The leader blanched over admitting such intelligence to these would-be interlopers. But it was a well-known fact in this sector that Ya’wenn military strength did not lie in the number of its ships. Their race had only had access to warp technology for the last two centuries…

The idea of Jarn possessing a fleet to rival that which he controlled was absurd. And…frightening.

“Perhaps Jarn has laid hands on more resources than he has admitted to you, Premier.” Spock suggested. The idea was one that made Feece pause.

Rell made a dismissive gesture and crossed before the two aliens. His serpentine eyes glanced to the Premier as he continued to smile. “Or perhaps you listen to more Federation lies, Premier. Ambassador Spock can doubtless list a data pad’s worth of diplomatic credentials that would have led him to a negotiating table with your people…But the simple truth of the matter is that a year ago, and indeed most of his life, Spock was a soldier in the Federation Starfleet. His every breath is to further the militant goals of his people. Pay no heed to his prattle.”

Ford snapped his head back to Rell, his blazing glare daring the other to action.

“And just what the hell are you here for, Rell? The Premier here evidently doesn’t know about your deal with Jarn. Did we interrupt yer attempt to draw him into the deal?”

Premier Feece leaned back into the reclining comfort of his office chair. Rell had entered offering a deal of alliance between his Empire and the Ya’wenn. He’d alluded to having dealt with the Premier’s underlings previously, but had not elaborated once word of the approaching Federation force had come to the Presidial Office. Now Ford had given him reason to suspect Rell had been about to mention Jarn. But to think that Jarn had access to and command over such a huge fleet… It would mean chaos within the Affiliation.

Another war…

This was not something he could leave in the hands of underlings. He would lead the investigation himself. He opened a drawer on his desk face to grab out his comm unit. He withdrew the small hand radio and looked up to the argumentative aliens.

“I am disinclined to believe either of your views at face value. As Premier, my people rely on me to accurately weigh all information brought to me before making any decision that will alter or affect their lives. The idea that an Over Warden has amassed a combat fleet to rival that of his own government is one that bears investigation. But I will not allow my race to be drawn into the intrigues of two opposed powers. I will have my command ship relay me to Kovarn. Your respective vessels will accompany mine on its trip. The bulk of your Federation fleet, however, will depart Affiliated space. I will allow only your command ship to remain. Then we will reach the facts of this…situation.”

Ford did not seem happy with the Premier’s decision. Spock merely bowed thoughtfully. Rell smiled on, eyes glittering. The Premier resigned himself to tending with the details that accompanied leaving the planet for an extended period of time. He wasn’t looking forward to this, but he could not let claims of Jarn’s double dealing go without looking into. Captain Rell had been far too adamant that he not listen to the Earthers. This alone made the Klingon’s motives suspect.

“We shall make our departure and send orders to our fleet as a sign of cooperation.” Spock said as he nodded to the commodore. Ford glared icily back.
Captain Rell said nothing, but produced his own brown metal communicator and pressed a thumb stud on its side. He dissolved into a subspace energy field and beamed away. The Premier watched him go, wary of the journey he was about to embark upon.
***
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #23 on: May 28, 2007, 09:32:24 pm »
Got a baaaad feeling about this.  Especially with the cut down escort. ;D
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #24 on: May 29, 2007, 04:03:10 pm »
I've thought about it for a while, and since there's really light traffic on here lately, I've decided to just post the rest of this story and let whoever finish it whenever.

so...

CH. 6





Captain Rell materialized in the half-lit confines of his main transporter room. He immediately relaxed, having removed himself from the presence of those irritating aliens. He was rather happy with himself for the acting he’d done down there on that miserable ball of grass. He smiled thinly as his First Officer, Lieutenant First Korn stepped up to the transport platform.

“Was your mission successful, Captain?”

Korn had large, truly mountainous cranial ridges. At least they seemed so to Rell. Rell’s own forehead and scalp bore no ridges at all; smooth and hair-covered like to a human’s head.  He bore the taint of the Archer Affliction. He knew of the origins to his malformity, having delved into files made secret over a hundred years before by the Empire. Few else within the Empire knew how the genetic malady had come to be. In most Klingons it was curable.

Rell had not bothered to reach for the cure when it’d been offered. This was who he was. A ‘flathead’, as Ford had so coyly dubbed him. The thought of the insult made him smile all the more.

“I believe so, First Officer. By insisting that the Premier ignore the Ambassador and his commodore, I made it nearly imperative that he in fact do so. He readies to leave this world even as we speak. Prepare the ship for escort position and order engineering to standby.”

“Yes, my lord.” Korn replied and began to turn away. He halted as Rell stepped down from the transporter alcove. Rell noted a subtle shift on his exec’s expression. One of sadness, almost, or confusion.

“A problem, First?”

Korn looked back, seeming to totter on the edge of mentioning his concern or playing it off. Rell waited patiently. Finally, the exec spoke. “I have noted that humans nearly always react with amusement when told my name… You speak Terran Standard. Why is this?”

Rell’s smile morphed into a small smirk. Of all the things his XO could be concerned with…

“Phonetically, your name sounds like the name of a human vegetable. A small yellow kernel that grows in open fields. Think nothing of it.”

Korn nodded gravely and then went on about his duty. He went on to engineering to pass the captain’s order directly. Rell valued his First Officer. He still found it musing that such a small thing had bothered him. But then… He ran a hand over his smooth, hairy pate… he could understand. Funny that unwarriorly concerns could bother such men.

Rell exited the transporter room, receiving the salute from its operator as he passed, and went on to the bridge to ready for the rest of the operation. His faction was about to gain a far better hold on its situation…





Ford stomped off the transporter pad of his own ship, tearing open the now irritating front flap of his maroon duty jacket as he went. The ambassador followed at a slower pace, unhurried. Right now, Ford didn’t care if the Vulcan followed or not. He was more pissed than he would have thought such a meeting could have made him.
The thought of Captain Rell down there made him curse unrestrained in front of the enlisted that were headed down the corridor. Ford didn’t care what they heard at this point. “sh*t! I thought all the flat-headed Klingons had been cured or what the hell ever happened to them.”

“It has indeed been several decades since I have seen one. Starfleet Intelligence has conjectured that the genetic abnormality was finally defeated—“

Ford whirled back on the ambassador upon reaching the first empty stretch of corridor.

“What the hell was that down there? I thought we were going to negotiate from a position of strength. That’s why you wanted the task group with us in the first damn place!”

“Diplomacy is a fluid task, Commodore. One reacts to the stimulus one receives. I surmised that the Premier was not of the same caliber of leader as Jarn. His concern is for order and the welfare of his people. With his assistance we can draw this situation to a peaceful close and both nations might profit from an affiliation.”

“Or we might be playing into the Klingon’s hands! Or the Premier’s for that matter!”

“Are you angered that I have acquiesced to send the fleet away… or over some perception that I have betrayed you?” Spock asked this question in such an even manner that it caused Ford to halt in the beginnings of his tirade. He stood in silence, blinking as he wondered just what it was that had made him angry. Had it been seeing Rell? Somewhat. Was it the fact that Spock had agreed to send the fleet out of Ya’wenn space? Maybe. But then, Spock was ultimately the diplomat in charge here. And he was here at Ford’s request. He could not, in good conscience, deny the man’s counsel or choose not to abide by his decisions. And he could always get them out of this place should the need arise. So what was he mad about?

The commodore took a deep breath, remaining silent as cautious deck hands moved past and entered a turbolift. At length he sighed away his resignations. “You’re right. Sorry. It just gets under my skin to have all my plans and preconceptions shot to hell on a moment’s notice. I was relying on the idea of having those ships at my back.”


“And thusly you could deal from a more concrete position with both Jarn and the Premier.”

“Yeah.”

Spock nodded. The idea was not uncommon between them.

“The situation has evolved since the undertaking. I am convinced that the Premier and his government can be dealt with. A peaceful resolution can be met. Rather than shaking the stick, we can offer the carrot, to use the Terran adage. I also note that Feece fears the accusations we have brought to him. Once revealed, the fact that Jarn commands what is to his government a massive fleet of warships will doubtless throw his government and military into chaos. If Feece controls a fleet only a third larger than Jarn’s, then Jarn can usurp considerable control over his people. Fearful governors may even be compelled to align with his faction.” Spock let that last idea hang heavily on the air as Ford sobered. “Feece will undoubtedly require some element of Federation assistance. Likely, he will ask us for the ships we are about to order away.”

Ford smirked.

“Then I ain’t lettin’ ‘em get too far away.”

“That…is a valid thought.”

Chevy jerked his head in the direction of the lift bay and led the Ambassador inside. A moment later, they emerged onto the bridge in time to see the Klingon battlecruiser wheeling to starboard to break orbit. Ford went to stand beside the comm station.

“Lieutenant,” he said to the young Beta Shift junior grade, “Send the following to the Comanche. Endeavour departing Task Group to escort Ya’wenn presidential vessel to Kovarn. Group to retire to minimal holding position outside Ya’wenn space.”

The young woman looked back up to him with uncertainty in her eyes. Even she understood what could happen without the greater protection of the fleet. But she nodded and plugged the command mic into her ear to relay the message. Ford watched her work, listened to her light voice as she spoke into the pickup. A moment later she turned and looked back up to him.

“Comanche signals: Message understood. We’ll be in touch.”

Ford smiled. Yes, Captain Hiruul Ramses would still have his back, even if he had to fly a few hours to get to him. Ford would just have to be careful. He turned to find Commander Thomas approaching him from the StratCom. Ben wore much the same expression as Ford had faced Spock with only moments before.

“Do we know what we’re doin’, Skip?”

“Hope so. Fluid situation, XO. Fluid situation. We’ll just roll with the waves. Put tactical and operations on Condition Two status and implement combat watch status for all departments. Order small arms distributed.”

“Aye, Cap’n.”

Thomas stalked away from the ship’s CO and cast a hard eye toward the Vulcan standing near the science console. The XO knew the order to send the fleet away hadn’t started with Ford. Ford was just playing along. Chevy would hear about this come dinner time…

“Is the Premier’s ship leaving yet?”

Spock turned from where he was watching Surall direct the ship’s scanners.

“I believe I have identified the vessel intended to covey the Premier. It has come into a very close orbit and is powering a short ranged transporter unit.”

“Alright. Keep an eye on her. Tactical,” the CO turned his gaze to the slim Russian gunnery officer. “Keep an eye on that Klingon ship. Let me know the instant that bitch sneezes.”

“Aye, Keptin.”

Ford descended into the command center and eased into the waiting conn. He settled into the familiar confines of his chair and let himself relax. He sneaked a look at the tactical repeater on his armrest and watched as his task group accelerated away from the planet at high impulse. He did not like this situation. Any number of factors could lead to foul play. More Klingon ships could be lurking in the depths of the Tempest, allied with Rell and his conspirators and waiting to entrap Endeavour. Or Jarn himself could set upon them. And while it remained unlikely from what he’d observed on the planet below, the Premier could still be setting them up.

Only time would lead him to further answers. He’d have to wait and see what developed.

“Incoming hail from the Premier’s command ship.” Came the comm lieutenant’s voice again. “They identify themselves as Selvara and request we follow at 20,000 kilometers.”

“Confirm transmission.” Ford resolved not to sit up as he usually might. He was displeased and he’d slouch if he damn well wanted to. “Helmsman, break orbit. Lock in on the Selvara’s tail and follow her out.”

Endeavour peeled from orbit with a grace that belied her size and fell in behind the small, angular Ya’wenn presidential ship. The command ship was of the same class and design as the majority of those in Jarn’s own fleet. They were evidently a useful and practical sort of ship. He commodore watched as the little arrowhead of a ship angled for the pink tinted area of space that held the enormous Tempest anomaly.

Ford grunted with dislike at the thought of again flying through all that razor wire. It had been inevitable from the beginning of the mission; after all, they still had to fly through it to get home. But with the mission turning away from the parameters Chevis preferred, his mood was becoming more and more gloomy. It got no better when a glance to the tactical repeater showed the Gorvek sliding in right behind Endeavour. “Son of a bitch.”

Spock turned from the science console at the sound of Ford’s soft curse. The commodore ignored him, save to flash him a small smile, and hopped out of the conn to head for the tactical console. Once within range of Nechayev, he lowered his voice and leaned in close.

“Lock our aft phasers onto that Klingon ship using passive visual systems. If he so much as twitches, cave his damn bridge in with every amp of standby energy that’s in the reserves. And load the aft torpedo launchers. I want to be ready.”

Daniel matched gazes with the junior flag officer. He knew Ford’s concerns and shared them himself. He did not trust the Klingons. It was foolish at best to place blind trust in them after their long history and the facts of their recent infiltration of Starbase 23. Rell was among those implicated in the confessions forced from ‘Commander Banks’ during his interrogation via mind-sifter.

“You think the Klingons intend to attack vhile nearby the Ya’venn ship?”

“I think some one’s looking to put a torpedo into us. We’re not giving them the chance. When we enter the Tempest, use that opportunity to initiate full shields.”

Typically, half or quarter power deflectors were sufficient to protect Endeavour while traversing the plasma storm. Ford wanted full protection for most of this journey and taking this action gave him a way of doing it without seeming brash before the Premier.

“Understood, Keptin.” Nechayev, with his rolling Russian accent, was among those aboard who still referred to Ford as ‘Captain’. Chevy would have it no other way. He would have missed being called ‘Keptin’ by his Russian officer. This man kept to himself nearly all the time, but his reliable nature made the commodore glad to have him on the bridge.

Daniel looked back to his panel and quietly went about as he’d been ordered. He made no verbal report upon finishing each task, following Ford’s lead and withholding this action from the Ambassador’s attention. When he’d completed aiming the aft weapons and loading the torpedo launchers, he looked back up sternly and gave a single nod.

During this exchange, Spock had looked back only once. Ford knew the Ambassador likely had a good idea of what Ford intended. He would not allow the Vulcan to stop him from safeguarding his ship, though. Let him decide to send the fleet away without an argument… he couldn’t issue Ford direct orders on his own bridge.

Ford returned to the conn, easing the angry thoughts he’d been suffering from his mind. He bore no ill mind toward Spock. He still admired the man and his career. His daring to begin the peace initiative with the Empire had been monumental and there was no arguing his beginning success. He also realized that part of his consternation toward the diplomat stemmed from the fact that Spock had countermanded his own wishes and it rankled his pride to just simply adhere to the Ambassador’s decisions. At the same time, there would be nothing gained from arguing with him before the Ya’wenn and looking foolish.

Ford resolved to ride with the situation as it was. He knew where his fleet would be once the trouble started. He’d have a way out. And he’d make sure he could take that arrogant Klingon Captain out before he left. This last thought made him smile to himself.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #25 on: May 29, 2007, 04:09:07 pm »
CH. 6 (part 2)

Starship’s Log, Ambassadorial Journal Entry,
Stardate: 9709.65
Ambassador Spock recording…

Commodore Ford has remained cooperative despite the perceived slight to his authority which I have dealt him in sending the Task Group back into the plasma region. His actions remain on the borders of hostility, though his aggression is turned directly toward the Klingon cruiser that accompanies us. 

I can understand his aggravation and desire to protect his ship and people. I have my own misgivings about the situation. It was, after all, my own counsel to include the Task Force to safeguard our passage through the region. While sending our escort away lubricates our dealings with the government of the Ya’wenn, Ford remains correct that it leaves us vulnerable.

I have judged it to be a risk worth taking.

We have entered the Tempest Region once again and are proceeding at Warp Four toward Kovarn. The commodore has taken measures to ensure his ship’s protection from both the storm and our escorts. Arrival time to the prison world has been estimated within one-point-six days, present speed.

I have been successful in communicating a desire for face to face conference with the Ya’wenn Premier before our arrival at Kovarn, and away from the ears of Captain Rell. Feece has agreed and I am presently to transport over to his ship for our second meeting.

End of Log.





Ambassador Spock ducked beneath a final structural girder and turned to face the doorway indicated by the rifle wielding guard who had escorted him from the transporter room. This vessel was by far less sophisticated than the average Federation ship. It could not hold a candle even to the first Enterprise he had served on. The Ya’wenn, though ingeniously adaptive, were at least one hundred standard years behind Starfleet in technology.

The room Spock entered was much like the rest of the ship, cramped and restrictive. Unhidden structural members jutted out in measured gaps throughout and though this chamber was obviously meant to be a meeting room, it was still cramped. A narrow table, perhaps three meters in length, dominated the room. Small collapsible chairs lay stacked against the fore bulkhead, while two large, padded seats had been brought in to serve the Premier and his guest. A wide arrangement of aromatic food had been placed about the table. Obviously, the Premier suspected that an agreement with the Federation would be more profitable to him than with the Klingon Empire. Or perhaps he simply liked Spock more than Captain Rell.

The diplomat came to stand before the black table, hands clasped, as the guard nodded to the Premier and closed the reinforced hatch. Feece motioned to the table and drew his seat out to sit. Spock moved in like fashion and noted with slight amusement at the sight of what had been served to him.

“I hope that the selection meets with your palate. We don’t entertain non-Ya’wenn often. The meat is Corsed Steak. The long green vegetables are surriad and the tubers are kalliel. I believe you’ll enjoy the steak! It’s flavor is quite robust!”

Spock withheld the impulse to smile as his human side reveled in the humor of the situation. “My apologies, Premier. My people are vegetarians.”

“Vegetarians…” the planetary official’s eyes widened as he grasped what his small, earplug translator told him. “You mean Earthers do not eat meat?”

“Humans do in fact consume meat. My race does not.”

Feece’s eyes flickered to Spock’s sharp ears.

“You are not…human?”

“I am a Vulcan.”

“Vulcan… Is your race the dominant over the Earthers?”

The ambassador arched his eyebrow over the Ya’wenn’s comment. Many outsiders suspected Federation races were dominated by one or many of the others. The truth, once revealed to them, often shocked them. No one Federation race was permitted to lord over another.

“Vulcan was among the first charter members of the Federation. Earth began and organized the United Federation of Planets over a century ago. It is based on mutual interests of preserving peace and coexisting in a beneficial manner. No member of the organization is given authority over the others. We promote trade and assistance to those who are in need.”

The Premier nodded in understanding. The concept, at least, was not alien to him. This seemed promising for a future relationship with his people.

“Ford was a…human?”

“Indeed. What the Klingons disparagingly call Earthers.”

“So ‘Earthers’ is a racial insult?” The look on the Premier’s face told Spock that he regretted having used it. He probably had legions of employees to write speeches for him and make sure he never said anything to insult a particular group or party. “How many races incorporate the Federation?”

“One hundred twenty three at last count, with four currently submitting for membership when I left Earth.”

“You are based on Earth?”

“It is the central member world, and most defensible. Starfleet is also an Earth-based organization left over from the original human government, and it serves as the Federation’s main line of defense.”

Feece seemed to mull over the apparent importance of the human race and their fleet. His eyes narrowed as he picked at his meal. “Do you Vulcan’s serve as their diplomatic arm?”

Again, were Spock human, he would have grinned. Being mostly Vulcan, at least at heart, Spock merely leaned back and cocked his head to the side. “While Vulcans have traditionally been great diplomats within the Federation Diplomatic Corps, we are not solely ambassadors. As Rell was so quick to point out, I once served in Starfleet, and rose to the rank of starship captain.”

Feece seemed to take in Spock’s words. The ambassador took advantage of his pause to pick up a fork-like utensil and sample the green vegetable the Premier had named surriad. He found its flavor akin to human asparagus with a hint of something like soy sauce. It was strong, but not totally unpleasant to the Vulcan palate. Feece noticed his adventurous trial of the food and seemed pleased. He pointed his own fork to the serving platters in the center of the table. “There’s plenty of that.”

Spock nodded, shoveling in another bite as he waited for the Premier to venture further questions. He wasn’t long in waiting. “I have been thinking of your claims about Over Warden Jarn. I reread a report issued by Jarn about a transgression carried out upon his outpost by a Captain Ford. Same man?”

“Ford was just recently promoted.” Spock confirmed, allowing the leader to go on before offering the obvious rebuttal.

“Jarn’s testimony of the incursion stated that Ford came wanting to buy several Klingons from his custody. When refused this service, Ford opened fire on his installation, stole money from the surface and took a number of the prisoners anyway.”

Spock lowered his utensil and cleared his throat.

“One can easily guess about the validity of such a claim. Otherwise you would not have brought it up.”

“Quite.” Feece admitted. He put his own fork down and dropped his hands to his lap. “Jarn is not reputable. As I alluded to back at Ya’wenn Primus, he was formerly an inmate of the installation himself. His crimes were not severe. He was released to his own recognizance upon the tenth year of his incarceration because he had the skills with which to run the prison efficiently. In fact, upon his assumption of command there, the mineral profits from Kovarn’s operation increased by more than seventeen percent. He’s been there for twelve years without incident. We consider Kovarn one of our more successful penitentiaries. But…given Jarn’s past and his psyche scans pre-incarceration… I felt it necessary to question his motives and his report.”

“You believe there to be validity in our claims.”

“Without the presence of Captain Rell to cloud my thinking, I find that I do not trust him or Jarn. And should Jarn possess as many ships as you claim, then the future of my world and its government is likely in peril.”

“Do you suspect we are being led into a trap?”

Feece blinked.

“A trap? Traveling to Kovarn was my idea.”

Spock nodded.

“It may have been, but Commodore Ford suspects subterfuge. I would not be the first to discount a trained Starfleet commander’s insight. We may well be playing into the hands of a well laid plot.”

Feece grew more solemn as he thought the idea over. His back was tense as he leaned over the table and stared at his food. “At the first sign of danger, I’ll order this ship to turn about and return to Ya’wenn Primus.”

“That may not be sufficient.”

The Premier looked back up with him. The potential gravity of the situation was becoming clear. Spock saw great hope in the future of relations between these people and the Federation, but they had to survive the coming days and hour to make this hope a reality. Feece looked searchingly at Spock, drawing in a deep breath as he went out on a limb.

“Should your claims prove true, Jarn’s likely purpose would be to challenge the leadership of the Affiliation. If he had twenty or more ships, then he has a valid chance of success. What support could I barter from your government in the likely war?”

Spock’s face grew stony as he leaned closer. This was where an alliance could be forged. The Federation would lend support if asked by a sovereign leader. If the need was militarial in nature, then this would be provided. The Federation would, however, exhaust all diplomatic ends prior to sacrificing lives to bring their conflict to an end.





The officer’s ward was silent and half-lit as Ben Thomas entered. He found his CO sitting at his place at the head of the table. He had a burger plate before him, what Chef Riker jokingly called a ‘slider special’ after ancient navy food. Endeavour’s food did tend toward the greasy end of the spectrum, but the majority of the crew seemed to like it that way. Ford was a soft touch and tended to judge in favor of the crew’s satisfaction rather than Starfleet’s guidelines for nutrition. After all, they had two gymnasiums on board the ship.

Along with Ford’s supper, there were also a couple of data PADDs, including one in his hand. The soft yellow glow of its scripts shown on his round face as he sat silently facing the far bulkhead. Ford looked toward his XO as the doors whooshed closed behind him.

“Hungry, XO?”

“A might.”

Ford motioned to the seat beside him where the steward had left a similar plate for him. The fact that the Commodore had excused the steward and taken an early dinner stated that he wished to speak with Ben away from prying ears.

Thomas took his seat and leaned back, only half interested in the chow provided. He grabbed a couple of fries and waited while the CO finished perusing the fuel consumption report in his hand.

“Thought you might have some concerns about what’s going on.”

Ben nodded. If he was going to tackle this conversation, then he wanted to do it with food in his belly, he grabbed his slider with both hands and took a mighty bight out of it. He gobbled his mouthful down, tasting grease and bun and whatever the hell else Riker had packed on it, and washed it down with a good gulp of tea. Ford watched him with that unreadable smirk on his face.

Finally, Ben leaned back in his chair again and regarded the Commodore boldly. He hadn’t been back aboard ship for long, but it hadn’t taken Thomas long to reassume his traditional place as the counterweight on the fulcrum of Ford’s decision making process.

“Why the f*ck ain’t we over on that Klink ship kickin’ Rell’s damn head in? We know the bumpy headed bastard has something to do with Shiloah’s trying to kill the peace process! Why don’t we make the arrest?”

“Smooth headed.” Ford said. It was one of his deliberate disarming attempts, and Thomas bit onto it as usual.

“Smooth- headed… What?”

“Rell is one of the old-school smooth heads. No cranial ridges.”

“Huh… That’s f*ckin’ weird…”

Ford went on while Thomas’s train of thought was still derailed. Damn he liked to do that a lot!

“You’re right that we know Rell’s involved. But I’m gonna try to limit the number of monkey wrenches I throw into the diplomatic works.”

“No matter how many Spock throws into the tactical situation on our end?”

“I wasn’t very damn happy about ordering the fleet away. But they’re not far from us. We can have them back inside an hour.”

“How’d you manage that?”

“By ordering Ramses to ‘minimal’ holding position. In effect, I ordered him to leave, then track us just outside easy detection range. He’s shadowing us.”

Ben smiled darkly.

“’No uncoded messages on open frequency.’ You think Spock noticed?”

“I really don’t give a sh*t whether he did or not. I’m ensuring our survival here.”

“How much of Bank’s forced confession are we prepared to believe?” Ben asked. Federation law did not allow for the inclusion of confessions under torture to be admitted as evidence. Despite this, they both knew that information gleaned from a mind-sifter interrogation was usually dead on.

“I’m gambling on all of it being right.” Was Ford’s answer. “Both of us have been in those things. They suck out the information whether you wanna give it or not.”

Thomas repressed the shudder that rose to the surface at the memory of their botched incursion attempt ten years before while aboard the Hawking. They had needed vital military intelligence from the Klingons while they were trapped behind enemy lines by a terminal wormhole… They had come up with the brainy idea of getting themselves captured so they would be taken to a command level outpost. The trial had seen them both tortured, interrogated and nearly executed by a regional commander.

“Yeah. Not much room for doubt. So we know that Shiloah, Banks, Gossport and Rell were in cahoots. If we accept all of it, then we know that Rell traded Starfleet torpedoes for Jarn’s support against Starfleet in this sector. What if Rell also offered the assistance of his sect to help Jarn take possession of the Ya’wenn government?”
Ford shook his head.

“If Rell and his group had the resources to lend that much assistance, then I don’t think they would be resorting to such cloak and dagger techniques to combat us. I think Rell’s here to lend more… underhanded help. Hopefully we got there in time to stop him from spreading the bullsh*t before it got too thick.”

Thomas frowned.

“Who knows what he might’ve talked that Premier into if you hadn’t gone to talk to him. He might have convinced the Ya’wenn’s home government that we were the legitimate threat and not Jarn and his armada.”

“Premier Feece seemed to resist the idea of Jarn having a fleet at first, but then he ordered that we follow him while he investigated. He can be convinced…he’s smart enough to see through the Klingon’s lies. But I just hope we show him the light before it’s too late.”

The boson’s whistle sounded within the wardroom and gained both their attention. Lieutenant Commander Davenport’s voice came through next. “Skipper, we’re entering a denser region of plasma activity. The Ya’wenn command ship advises of the need to slow to impulse power for the next few light minutes.”

Ford picked up his hamburger and looked to the speaker positioned above the dining table. He thought for a moment before answering. Thomas didn’t like the look flashing across the commodore’s face and decided to eat some more of his meal before they had to leave.

“Understood, Commander. Reduce to sublight and match speed with our host.” Ford told him. “We’re on our way up.”

“Aye, aye, Skipper.”

Both Ford and his XO took a few extra bites before they abandoned the wardroom. Thomas knew his friend believed they were in for some kind of change. A close-quarter region was too good of a place to trap a starship, and if they were in for a confrontation, now might be the time.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #26 on: May 29, 2007, 04:16:25 pm »
CH. 7





Commodore Ford reentered the bridge and took a quick look about to ascertain their current situation. Most of his key crew was in place. Only Lieutenants Surall and Smith were not yet on the command deck. He decided to give them a few more minutes of rest before calling crew to stations.

Ford halted at the StratCom, nodding to Nechayev in greeting before he looked down to the tactical map. The corridor of free space amid all the streaming energy ribbons was only ten thousand kilometers wide at their widest point. In some areas the free roam shrank to as little as fifty klicks. The Ya’wenn presidential ship pushed ahead in the lead, followed by Endeavour. The Klingon cruiser came in behind, uncomfortably close. Ford noted the Gorvek’s position and looked over the indicators that registered the cruiser’s combat readiness. She still rode along without her weapons armed, and her shields were at a reassuring half power. Likely this was to allay concern.
 Chevy wasn’t buying any of it.

Thomas joined the commodore at the StratCom after a brief tour of the compartment and gave a reassured nod. The ship was ready for anything. Chevis looked up to his muscled friend.

“Any comm from Spock?”

“Not yet. Still making nice with the Premier, I guess.”

“Hmmm…” Ford grunted and looked back to the map. He didn’t like being hemmed into such a narrow playing field. With no room to maneuver, they were sitting ducks.
“We’ll give him an hour or so if nothing happens, then we’ll start buggin’ him to come home.” The flag officer cut a look toward the tactical console. “Weps, intensify forward scans. Watch for impulse currents and subspace impulses.”

“Aye, Keptin…” The lieutenant looked down suddenly, his eyes grabbed by a series of indicators that had just lit up. At the sound of a warning siren from his computers, the tactical officer looked back to his commander. “Keptin! Energy surge from the Klingon ship!”

Ford shot a look back to the StratCom then looked to the forward screen.

“Visual!”

Still at the conn, Davenport tapped a key to switch the viewer angle. The bird-designed ship was already wavering and fading from view. Ford released an ireful smirk and cursed his own ability to expect the worst…and often receive it.

“Battlestations!” Ford called off, already in motion and heading for the science station. Nechayev looked to him as he passed.

“Keptin, shall I open fire?”

The lighting had already lowered to combat level and the alarms were calling crew to their stations. Ford slowed up before halting at the main sensor station and he smiled back to the weaponry officer. “No, Lieutenant. If he meant to attack, Rell wouldn’t be dropping his shields and cloaking in the middle of a plasma storm. No, he’s retreating…not picking a fight.”

Chevis leaned in on the back of the secondary control seat and tapped the junior noncom there on his shoulder. “Replay the subspace receiver records for the time index just before the Gorvek engaged her cloak.”

The specialist nodded with an ‘aye, sir’ and began running the passive record in reverse. Ford jabbed a finger to the monitor at index 17:09:52. There was a tall spike in the recorded energy levels.

“Right there!”

The Senior Spec looked to the indicators the computer automatically ascribed to each of the readings. “Computer says it’s a spike in the ambient background radiations.”
“That’s what Rell was hoping. But the timing’s too good.” The commodore looked back at Thomas who’d remained with the StratCom. “We’ve got friends coming. Jarn I figure.”

“We walked right into the trap.” Ben said in a confirming way.

Ford turned for the conn, motioning Ronald to reassume his place at operations. Chevy slid into his command chair and got ready for what was coming. His hand fell to the intercom panel. “Transporter Room Two, ready to bring Ambassador Spock back as soon as the Premier’s ship drops her screens.” He then looked to communications. Mister Smith had emerged on the bridge and was taking his place at his station. “Comm, signal the Presidential Ship and tell them Spock is to return here immediately.”

Smith nodded, plugging his command mic into his ear and beginning to relay the instructed message. He glanced to his incoming transmission board. “Commodore, the Ya’wenn are asking what is going on. They’re insistent to know why the Klingons have engaged—“

“Tell ‘em to take a good guess and to get ready for a fight.”

Lieutenant Surall sat swiftly down at her station and automatically glued her eyes to her extended scope. “Now picking up definite incoming impulse currents. Twelve in number, perhaps more. I estimate time of intercept to be within twenty seconds.”

Ford considered turning his ship about and heading the opposite direction. But Spock was still over there. Damn them! Could they not hurry up in sending the Ambassador back? Seconds ticked away, seeming like hours. The Ya’wenn vessel continued ahead at full impulse power, seemingly unwary of the potential danger before them. Ford continued to glance toward the comm station. Noah Smith shook his head in response each time. No, the Ambassador hadn’t returned yet…

“Ya’wenn are dropping their screens,” Surall reported, giving her commanding officer a bit of a relief. “I read their transporters powering up.”

“Energizing now, Bridge.” Signaled the man down in the transporter room.

Smith then turned from his console.

“Ya’wenn report Ambassador Spock has beamed over and they request any tactical information we have to send them.” The young man reported.

“Tell their skipper that we have at least twelve unidentified vessels, probably hostile, on an interception course. Given the timing of the Klingon withdrawal, I suspect we are about to be attacked.”

Ford’s vision was forced to center on the main viewer as a volley of Federation designed torpedoes spiraled out of the brilliant distance and impacted over the span of the Presidential Ship’s hull. The ship was slammed to an abrupt halt, spilling debris, gasses and crew out into the open cosmos. Ford’s jaw sagged at the sight of it. The command ship hadn’t yet reestablished its shields! They’d taken the hits on naked hull and the entire ship was slowly disintegrating in a series of secondary explosions. Whatever wars these people had fought hadn’t been done so in space battles, and they were paying for their inexperience. The commodore could do little more than offer them his pity.

“Condition of the Premier’s ship!” Ford shouted off. Thomas was leaping for the science console to assist the science officer. Surall turned from her scope. Even her emotionless mask showed the extent of the damage without the need to speak.

“The command ship has taken direct hits to her engineering and life-support spaces. More than seventy percent of her structure has sustained damage. Her engine core is off line and on fire.”

Ford looked back to the image on the screen. The sad little ship was floundering there in a sea of her own guts, and Endeavour was beginning to pull past her. He considered dropping the shields to beam in survivors. He would leave his own ship open to attack…but then, all those defenseless crewmen…

“Cut starboard shields! Transporter rooms, beam all the survivors aboard that you can lay hands on! Helm, slow to match speed with the wreck!”

“Aye,” Came back from the officers involved. Dropping just the right side shields would leave his ship with more defenses than lowering them all, but it also served to slow transporter operation. They weren’t likely to retrieve all of the survivors…

The first attacking ship became visible through the misty wash of ionized gasses, steaming in at them from dead ahead. It was indeed one of the Ya’wenn ships, like to that of the Premier’s. It bore the exact same lines, but was much more heavily armed. Photon launchers studded the thing’s underbelly. Heavier particle cannon shown out from her prow and aimed for the Excelsior-Class ship. Already, incoming blasts of energy were lashing past the Federation starship.

Endeavour rocked with the force of the initial near misses. Finally, a solid shot struck home, jarring the ship to its core. Again and again their shots hammered home on the Endeavour’s fore screens. Ford held tightly to the conn. The commodore tapped the key to extend his lap restraint, fearful of being hurled free of his place. Thunder echoed through the battered craft. A second vessel then faded into view through the swirling wash of energy.

“Report!”

Nechayev struggled to keep his position at tactical as he made his report. The inertial dampners beneath his deck were barely taking the pounding that was being heaped upon the ship. “Forward shields down eighty percent! Supplementing vith auxiliary! Magnetic damage to phaser bank six.”

Ford watched while the enemy drew ever closer. Now a third vessel could be seen in the glowing haze before them. He waited for the first to close in to absolute minimal range. He grimaced with each blast that rocked his ship. She was taking a hell of a pounding, but the shields were still holding. He’d give those survivors as long as he could to be transported aboard. He knew his officers had to be standing on edge, near to frothing at the mouth as they waited for their captain to return fire. Just a moment longer…

“Lock in on the fore ship’s torpedo launchers! Open fire!”

Lieutenant Nechayev greatfully slammed a thumb down on the waiting red key. Endeavour jostled with the simultaneous launch of her forward torpedo tubes and a long burst of phaser fire. The foremost Ya’wenn escort shook and rolled on her side as all of the weaponry hit at once and continued to pummel her. Repeated strikes hit home, cutting black swathes into her silver hull through rent shields. Endeavour’s torpedoes detonated deep in the machinery of the little craft’s own launchers. These set of devastating chain reactions within the machinery and magazines of the escort. The whole of the craft blew outward in a great gush of exploding reactor energy.
Endeavour rolled half on her side in the wash of the explosion. Ford took some relief in the fact that the second and third vessels had yet to fire. Likely they were now waiting for the arrival of their sister ships to mass their firepower. Alone, none of those escorts stood a chance against even an immobile Endeavour.

“Transporter rooms, have you got them yet!”

“Still bringing in the engineering crew, Commodore!” Replied a chief whose voice Ford recognized. Martins? Jeffries? “Estimate another thirty seconds or so!”

Thirty seconds. A half minute. How long before the rest of the enemy got into position to pick up where their fallen comrade left off. There were five of those escorts now, slowly becoming larger on the main screen. A larger shadow darkened behind their line. At a guess, Ford figured it was Jarn’s ship. Once he formed up with them, they would advance. A glance to the tac repeater told him that the enemy was still within maximum torpedo range. Perhaps he could pepper them and compel them to dally a moment longer.

“Weps, open fire on the enemy formation. Continual fire pattern.”

“Firing now.”

On by one, from the port then the starboard launcher, the glowing missiles raced off to detonate in the faces of the gathered warships staring Endeavour down. As each torpedo in turn impacted with those ships, they shook and trembled with the punishment. It wasn’t long before they began to spread out to seek refuge from the incoming danger. Ford watched them on the viewer, tapping the intercom control.

“Engineering.”

“Tolin here,” came the feminine Andorian voice.

“Engines, can you generate a high spectrum subspace discharge with the warp coils?”

“Easily, Commodore, so long as we don’t engage the drive. What do you have in mind?”

Ford’s eye flashed to the swirls and streams of highly charged plasma that was the postmark of this entire sector. “I want to send a signal.”

“This pulse won’t be articulate enough to send a message, Skipper!”

“Doesn’t have to be. It just has to penetrate this energy storm. Get it going and leave it up for as long as you can generate it.”

“Aye, Skipper! I’ll get to work on it!”

Commander Thomas stepped down the stair to lean into the conn. A fresh volley of Ya’wenn fire was quick to hammer the ship as he came to a rest there. “Chevy, transporter rooms report all surviving Ya’wenn are aboard. Massive casualties.”

“The Premier?”

“They say he’s critical. Severe exposure.”

“sh*t!” The CO took a final glance at the rolling wreck beside his starship. “Tactical, lock tractors onto the Premier’s ship. We’re gonna try our slingshot attack again.”

“Aye, Keptin.” Blue, shimmering fields were already snapping onto the torn hunk of burning metal. The rattle of its internal explosions translated through the graviton fields and carried onto the Endeavour. “Ve have them!”

“Helm, both engines ahead flank. Steer for the lead escort on the right.”

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #27 on: May 29, 2007, 04:19:42 pm »
CH. 7 (part 2)

Bronstien responded without words, throwing the throttles full forward and tapping keys to disable the overload protocols. The ship lurched into motion, dragging her crew along against the protest of inertia. Ford and company clutched at consoles, armrests and railing to remain in place as the ship surged ahead. The helmsman sure knew how to handle this enormous beast. Below and decks behind the bridge, the impulse engines roared and growled in their fury.

“Shields?” Thomas called out, still leaning on the conn. The engineering noncom nearest him turned his head to report.

“Rebuilding, XO! Now at forty percent forward, ninety percent starboard. We have structural damage to frames B-114 and BL-5J. Turns will be rough!”

Ben nodded back and retired to the more stable bridge rail as a cluster of seven torpedoes launched from the still growing shadow that lurked behind those small escort vessels. Ford looked starboard to his weapons chief.

“Fore phasers to intercept!”

Nechayev said nothing back. His hands were a blur of motion, tapping in commands and initiating the mode controls. The forward most six phaser cannon on the saucer’s topside extended to fire off steady cones of wide-angle energy. Their overlapping spray made an enveloping field of red hot, destructive phased plasma that superheated each of the incoming missiles. Several erupted long before contact, coming no closer than a few hundred klicks.

The remainder were picked off with quick bursts from the matching six emitters mounted on the ventral side of the saucer. Only a single torpedo escaped interdiction and slashed against the reforming shields. It left little more than a black mark of charred hull in its wake.

Nechayev terminated the weapons fire to conserve capacitor energy and waited for the next onslaught. Commodore Ford narrowed his eyes and leaned closer to the forward feed. He didn’t like what he was beginning to see there.

“That doesn’t look like Jarn’s ship…”

Surall’s voice floated forth from her science scanner. “It isn’t.”

The huge, spiked form coalesced into a sheer wall of metal. Torpedo launchers stared out from nearly every angle of the monstrosity and underslung, glowing warp nacelles lit the thing’s belly in a menacing red. Its prow was constructed for ramming, long, armored and jagged. No windows highlighted its design. Naked magazines snaked across its exterior, leading to bank upon bank of simply built, hurriedly constructed photon torpedo launchers. Its fantail swelled into four huge impulse engines. Its blatantly combative construction opened the Endeavour Skipper’s eyes in near shock. He had not expected to meet this monster.

“What the hell is that!”

Thomas abandoned his place at the rail and made for the aft tactical sensor’s board just as another volley of photon torpedoes erupted from both this new menace and its accompanying escorts. Ford held tightly on as the weapons encountered Nechayev’s swiftly deployed defensive fire. Detonation after detonation rocked the racing Endeavour as she caromed nearer to the enemy.

“It’s just a collection of torpedo launchers and shield generators, Cap’n!” Ben hollered from where he was scouring the thing with scans. He’d already managed to dissect the simple machine into its component parts on the blue lit graphics across his board. “If we can get through its shields, we can cut it apart with a single barrage!”

“Weps! Concentrate torpedo fire on that new ship!” The skipper decided. “Helm, Alter course to bear on that thing. We’ll drop off our present with him!”

Bronstien nodded. The huge Excelsior began to turn in languid manner to her port. Nechayev looked up to Ford. “Keptin! I vill have to halt defensive fire to launch torpedoes!”

To punctuate his report, a warhead impacted against the bow, folding the Commodore and several others over painfully in their restraints. Red faced, Chevy glared back. “The closer we get, the less we can stop. Open fire and do what you can!”

“Aye!”

Torpedoes raced back and forth through space now clear of defensive phaser fire. The Ya’wenn craft rocked with hit after hit. Arcs of electro-energy tickled over the entirety of the warship and its hull darkened under the assault. Endeavour staggered under repeated hits. Her own shields were far less strong than this overbuilt monster, and she showed the carbon scoring of each blast as much of the resultant heat punched through. The Federation starship still pushed on, closing the gap as she aimed to slam her package home on the giant, sprawling beast that stood there pummeling her.

The Ya’wenn torpedo ship shifted her aim. A single volley tore her new target to pieces.

Endeavour heeled over on her left side, spilling three officers to the deck with a scream. The main viewer lit in hellish fire and then sputtered with static as the explosion washed over the entire craft. Ford ground his teeth as he held on.

“Report!”

“They took out the Premier’s ship!” Thomas shouted back just as he was torn from the free standing sensor console and tumbled to the diamond plate deck. Sharks erupted from beneath the engineering station as a bank of fuses gave way. The engineers there struggled to push away from the now burning undersides of the console.

“Speed!”

“Point eight and climbing!” Came back from the hunkered helmsman. Beside him, Commander Davenport was bodily clinging to his ops console, trying to keep in place against the torrential forces of the explosion and the shifting gravity. Bronstien was fighting like mad to keep the ship from sluing into the fields of energy rushing by to port as they were forced nearer.

“Get us past those bastards! Tactical! Open fire with ALL weapons as we pass between!”

“Aye!”

The situation was not as the commodore had planned or hoped. He’d intended to tear a hole through the enemy formation so his ship could pass amid the confusion with a minimum of opposition. This was no longer going to be the case. Now he was being forced by both his ship’s monumental speed and the enemy’s quick retaliation to pass directly between all of their guns at once. Ford fought to think of a defense to all the punishment they were about to absorb.

It was Thomas that spoke next.

“Full axial rotation helm!” He shouted as he clambered back to the rail and a vertical base, “Keep her spinning! Don’t let ‘em get a good lock!”

Endeavour was already beginning to jolt and bounce with successive strikes as weapon fire poured forth from the Ya’wenn escorts and the huge monster-ship. Lieutenant Bronstien did as bidden, putting the sleek ship into a long, unending roll on her side. Shots pounded the great lady on all quarters, leaving their marks and killing her shields a bit at a time. Torpedoes and beam fire roared past the Excelsior as she hurtled between the aggressor craft, and wound up touching home on the shields and hulls of their allies.

“Maintain fire!”

The ship’s aft weaponry spoke out as Endeavour spun past, trailing vented gasses. She left in her path two wrecked escorts and the giant monster was even on fire near to her starboard warp engine. The Ya’wenn turned to pursue, even as the worst off among them tore itself to ribbons from internal explosions.

“Redirect all secondary power to aft screens!” Ford ordered, unstrapping from his command seat and heading for the StratCom. Smoke abused his lungs once he stood fully, and he bent to get back below it as he reached the tactical screen.

“Rerouting engineering controls to operations!” Called Ronald. Ford spared him a glance, then looked over to the blackened engineering station and its flickering and deadened monitors. The officer and noncom stationed there had the bottom panels pulled and were spraying extinguishers into the workings. They’d be quite a while at getting that station back into action. He looked back to ops.

“Damage report!”

“Forward deflectors down to minimal strength, two generators overloaded and under repair. Remainder holding at forty percent. Two hull breaches along the main hull, decks seven and twelve. Secondary phaser bypass and control room out of action—“ Ronald halted as another shot struck home on the aft quarter. The enemy was either launching their chase armament or had turned about to follow. “Life-support out on decks four through ten, secondary systems in operation. Three hull breaches on secondary hull, all minor. Direct hit to armor surrounding antimatter containment, no breach. All containment systems nominal. Port fusion generator three damaged. Starboard warp intercooler destroyed.”

Ford absorbed the butcher’s bill and then lent his attention to the study of the tactical situation. His ship was being pursued at extreme range by the attacking Ya’wenn. The range separating them was reducing the effectiveness of their bombardment, though Nechayev was still having some luck at putting his torpedoes into their ravaged forward shielding.

“Concentrate fire on that bombardment ship, Mister Nechayev. Slow your fire rate.” Ford did not want to lose this fight for lack of missile armament. His magazine indicators still showed eighty in the aft bay, and sixty-three forwards. And he still retained his special armament.

As the gunnery officer complied, both Ford and Thomas turned their eye back to the tac map. Thomas ran the image to show further ahead, the speculative images being formulated by Lieutenant Surall at science. What they saw there made them grunt. The path widened some, but already more subspace waves were reaching their detectors, denoting the likelihood of further, incoming Ya’wenn starships.

“Damn it.”

“We have the special torpedoes.” Ben reminded.

Ford knew they would have to use them in this fight, but timing was going to be everything. He put balled fisted to his hips as he stood to stretch his back. His right hand flowed over the contours of his phaser pistol in its holster. The air was still murky with smoke even as the ventilators worked to clean the air. Something caught his eye and he bent again to tap at the reading and looked to science.

“Surall, is that a cross current showing on your sensors at 320 mark 025?”

“I believe it is, Commodore.” Only Surall seemed utterly unperturbed by all of the combat and strife assailing them all. Even her long hair remained perfect. She could have been looking over a pulsar with her scientific array for all of the signs she showed. This made her CO chuckle.

“Helm, if you see a hole open portside, take it!”

“Aye.”

Ben gave his friend a cautioning glance. “Cap’n, we could run out of space awful fast if we take a wrong turn. We don’t know where this arm might lead.”

“I know. It’s a gamble. But we can’t run into another wave of Ya’wenn and run the danger of their slowing us down for that first group to catch back up…” Running the map back to its original view, Ford was gratified to see that the Ya’wenn had been out paced. They were no longer in effective, powered torpedo range. Only a risky shot with the weapon’s boosters shut off for the majority of its trip could reach them. Such attempts would be easily intercepted by defensive fire.

Endeavour, however, running away from the Ya’wenn, remained in range since the enemy was flying into their effective firing range. This gave them more time to pummel the enemy as they sought refuge. Ford again glanced down to the indicators. Seventy-one torpedoes remained in the aft magazine.

“Hold fire, Weps.”

“Aye, Keptin.”

“Approaching turn, Skipper…” Called out the helm. Johnathan was craning his neck to study the image on the main viewer and compared what he saw with the readings on his nav sensors. “I think its clear!”

“I agree, Commodore.” Confirmed Surall. “Negative heavy plasma flow… Magnitude Two strings evident beyond.”

“Hard aport!”

Both commanding officers braced as the ship pitched into her turn. The hull groaned with the damage of its forward structure and a painful feeling vibration grated through the deck plates. The main viewer resolved to show the curvy, tunnel-like gap in the roiling plasma. The way looked clear, but any one of the turns ahead could reveal a sudden dead end to this escape route.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #28 on: May 29, 2007, 04:23:49 pm »
CH. 8





Captain Hiruul Ramses studied the graphic of energy levels showing in green on the primary monitor of his ship’s science station. Lieutenant Commander Josephine Paul pointed to one spike of energy, which was three times as powerful as any other recorded level. Ramses cocked his head and looked down at the slim young blonde officer. His left eyebrow inched higher as he questioned her without words.

“That is a highly elevated subspace emission reading. It’s greatly higher than any other field in action throughout the Tempest. No plasma current or subspace aperture could have generated a reading like this.”

Hiruul nodded, looking again at the reading. He was no scientist, but this was beginning to get the gears of thought rolling in him. “Mechanically generated?”

“I believe so, Captain.” Paul replied.

Ramses turned and stepped down to the powder blue chair that he called his.

“That’s the signal we’re waiting on! Navigator, lay in a direct course for the source of that emission. Helm, best possible speed.”

The ethnic Egyptian starship commander waited as his people set into motion carrying out his orders. He noted that the junior officers and senior noncoms were already moving in anticipation of his next orders. He smiled to himself over his excellent, well-trained crew. “Red Alert, people! Get this ship ready for combat. Commodore Ford’s in over his head and he needs you to give him a hand! Let’s go! Communications! Signal the fleet to follow us. We’re going in!”
***





Ambassador Spock took advantage of the brief respite in incoming fire to move amid the bloody, patient laden biobeds of the Endeavour’s main sickbay. Ya’wenn survivors moaned, screamed and called out in their own language for help. The UT in the pocket of his robe did not bother to translate the majority of their speech. Much of it was likely unintelligible.

He moved among them, returning grasping hands with a firm pressure or a reassuring pat. He could do little for any of these people. They suffered from extreme exposure to vacuum, burns and severe lacerations and trauma common to those who’d experienced a hull breach first hand.

Spock looked up amid the press of bodies, injured and medical technicians alike, to locate the surgery ward. He saw it at the far end of this unfamiliar sickbay design and began to make his way there.

The scene within the surgery section was one of barely controlled chaos and bloody mayhem. At the center of the room was Doctor Keller. Her surgical tunic was smeared red, much of it having come from the man she was tending to.

Premier Rellin Feece was a mere shell of his former self. His body was distorted from vacuum exposure, bloated and swollen with hemorrhaging blood vessels. His eyes gushed blood, and his ears were completely ruptured. Spock had to brace himself a moment, looking away from the writhing, contorted shape on the biobed. His pain was excruciating. Nothing could be done to alleviate the suffering till his bleeding was brought under control.

“SPOCK!”

The name was slurred, tortured sounding. But somehow, the Premier had seen him with his swollen, ruptured eyes and called out to him. The Ambassador looked back. Feece strained to pull himself upright, fighting against the pull of the doctor and two nurses who were struggling to save his life.

“Lie down, Premier!” Keller pleaded with him. Her brown eyes shot to Spock pleadingly. She needed his help to calm the man. Spock understood, nodded. He approached the biobed and put his hand into the spongy fleshed hand of dying leader.

Momentarily comforted, the Premier lay back. His darkening eyes sought the Vulcan in fear and pain. Spock could not allay the empathy that contact with a sentient being brought to his telepathic mind. He felt the man’s pain. He felt the terror the alien reeled with. He also felt fear…fear for his people.

Feece’s eyes suddenly drew very clear. He focussed on Spock’s eyes. Blood filled tears welled forth. Even Keller halted, amazed at the man’s sudden calmness. Feece drew a ragged breath.

“Don’t let Jarn… Don’t…let Jarn…destroy my people, Ambassador. Don’t let him…”

And with a shudder, Feece sagged totally onto his back. His eyes lost all focus, his jaw sagged. A shuddering breath filled him, then another…and then a final one…

And Premier Rellin Feece died.




Endeavour shook under the blasts of renewed assault. Ford staggered down the steps to his chair and strapped in once more. The enemy was taking great pains to take his ship out. They were pushing their impulse engines to the point of leaving white-hot vapor trails in their wake. Put they were slowly, painfully, closing in for the kill.
“Aft shields are strained! Generators seventeen through twenty overheating!” Called off Commander Davenport. “I figure another three hits will knock ‘em out!”

“Can you squeeze some evasive maneuvers out of this tunnel, helmsman?”

Bronstien considered his CO’s question, judging the space available inside this gap between adjacent plasma strings. The clearance varied from kilometer to kilometer, and at some points, Endeavour had to literally crash through converging masses to make her way through. With a shrug, Johnathan resigned himself to trying one more feat of piloting skill.

“Aye, Cap’n!”

Endeavour began to roll once again as she had when passing between the Ya’wenn warships, save that now she did so like a World War One biplane. Her corkscrew flight manner killed the following enemy’s capability to lock weapons. The occasional particle beam struck home on the rear shield. Torpedoes, finding it hard to track their foe through all the intervening ionization, were completely unable to make a hit.

Ford smiled widely at this boy’s ability to surprise him again and again. He couldn’t have asked for a better pilot. “Shields?”

“Engineering’s trying to restore the aft screens, but they’re almost out of tricks, Skipper!” Ron called back. “We’re bypassed like a traffic grid back there!”

“Are we still transmitting our warp signal?”

“I think so. The coils are still generating their pulse.”

Backup will be here soon. Ramses is a good skipper, Ford thought to himself. He’ll be here soon.

“I’ve got ID on seventeen different Ya’wenn engine signatures, Cap’n!” Thomas called out from the tac sensors console. “One of ‘em is Jarn’s. His group must be taking a different route because they’re closing hellasiously fast!”

“Better and better, XO. Surall, any idea on a way out of here?”

“Not as yet, Commodore. Readings are still highly clouded, but I can detect no obvious openings or weakening in the plasmic—“

“A good simple ‘no’ would work, Lieutenant!”

“No, sir!”

Another trio of photon detonations wracked the ship. Warning sirens began to shout from the tactical console. The aft shields were gone. Ford knew it without the need of a report. Nechayev looked over the steaming edge of his overworked console, face sweat streaked and worried.

“Aft screens gone, Keptin.” He confirmed.

“Maximum aft fire, all weapons!” Shouted the XO.

The lieutenant nodded back, setting in the commands to step up the timing of their return fire. The ‘whoop’ reports from his console repeated over and over as the guns spoke continuously. Ford watched the tac repeater on the left armrest. The lead Ya’wenn dropped back while that following monstrosity of torpedo launchers moved in even closer. Within moments, she’d be in range to fire so many damn missiles that no amount of evasive maneuvering could save them.

Another particle beam impact kicked the Endeavour in her ass, this one unhindered by the shields. The enemy had made their way to unprotected hull. Sirens sounded again as damage reports began to flow over the comm system. “Direct hit, engineering section!” Called out the CPO at damage control central, “Secondary coolant recirculation pump out of action! I’m reading a fire in engineering!”



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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #29 on: May 29, 2007, 04:29:35 pm »
CH. 8 (Part 2)
*Note: The following scene was added after the remainder of the story had already been completed. I don't think it mars the flow of the story, but if it does...this may be the reason. But I wanted to show Tolin in action, and not as 'the voice at the other end of the intercom'...*

Lieutenant Commander Tolin rolled with the impact as the deck pitched out from under her. Uninjured, she pulled herself to a sitting position as her keen eyes surveyed the engine room. Many of her officers lay on the floor and clung to the rails of overhead catwalks as a result of that last hit. The rear shields were gone. Now engineering lay exposed.

She smelled smoke…and coolant!

“Fire!” She shouted out, executing a kip-up that had her instantly on her feet. She’d always been nimble. It was a handy trait for an engineer. Now it served her to get around the mass of rad-suited engineers and coverall wearing techs that crowded around control consoles and interfaces.

She neared the warp core and it’s safety rail, felt the heat of the annihilation chamber, it’s reverberations. The core was much hotter than it should have been. A glance to the nearest indicators told her that core heat was increasing and internal was 30% above nominal. The coolant had lost pressure and was itself overheating, unable to take the strain off the core.

A panel blasted free of the starboard bulkhead. Acidic fumes and fire jetted out from the recirculation machinery within. The Ya’wenn’s torpedoes had done their worst! Alarms began to shout out even as the acidic coolant melted down bundles of wiring and opti-cable within the data trunk below the mains.

Tolin rushed close to see what could be done. Two of her men followed, pushing in with hand held extinguishers to fight the growing flames that licked from the destroyed recirculation gear. The fire all but laughed at their inane attempts at control. The plastic guards about the data modules melted inward, surrendering to the heat and adding their own fuel to the growing flames.

Overhead fire control sprayers were going off now, but their angle was insufficient to combat the raging fire there. Tolin herself grabbed up another hand extinguisher and fanned it over the blaze. It was no good…

“Activate the core containment fields!” The chief engineer ordered, implying the emergency barriers meant for just this sort of catastrophe. This fire was getting out of control and she had to protect the main reactor. She heard a woman officer respond, heard the thrum of the energy field snap into existence about the reactor casing. This left one less thing to worry about.

Lieutenant Varnez, a Denobulan and also the assistant engineer, rushed up to Tolin’s side. In his gloved hands was a heat disfigured field analyzer. He’d doffed his radiation helmet, and sweat poured from his blanched face. “Chief, coolant from the secondary machinery has combined with a plasma coil leak, Deck Twenty, subsection seventeen. That’s what’s creating the main fire. Suppression systems are overloaded and can’t keep up with the flames. We had to evac the compartment and seal it off.”

“Is it contained there?” Xia shot back at him over the spray of her canister and the crackle of the growing fire before them. She already knew the answer to her own question. Her blue antennae coiled down in anger.

“No, sir! It’s already causing damage and sympathetic fires in surrounding areas!”

“Evacuate Twenty from sections fourteen and sixteen on back to the fantail!” Was what the chief told him. “Once she’s clear, vent it!”

“I’ve got people trapped on the other side, Engines!” Varnez replied back. His face had just shot white. “They’re cut off from the Jeffries-—“

Xia dropped her emptied extinguisher and jabbed a long finger into the assistant’s chest. Her hand propelled the physically weaker man back to the humming field around the warp core. “Vent that damn compartment before the fire reaches the hanger fuel pods or the magazines! Go and do it now!”

Varnez nodded, eyes wide, and ran to the main control office to initiate the evac warning. In twenty seconds, that part of the fire would be out. Now if she could just eliminate the fire consuming this end of the same machinery…

A secondary coolant line chose that exact moment to blow. White clouds of vaporized coolant shot forth from the jagged conduit and began to pool in midair aft of the core. Tolin shouted a warning and ushered techs away from the flesh eating cloud. She herself wore one of the white radiation suits, though her gloves and helmet were far away in her office. Xia retreated before the growing cloud of death, making sure that her men got away as well. Her heart caught with the anxiety the deteriorating situation brought with it. If she couldn’t get this fire under control, they could very well lose the ship!

“Switch the ventilators to full!” She told one of the subordinate noncoms to her left at the controls. “Get this gas cycled out of here!”

The JPO did as he was instructed, but looked back at her with a dubious expression.

“The ventilators won’t function long sucking all that hot, corrosive gas through them, sir.”

“I know!” Tolin scanned the compartment. Save for the affected area near the secondary coolant apparatus, her people remained at their posts and continued along with their duties. She had a good crew. “Reroute secondary coolant to the main tanks and purge the rest to space!”

“Aye!”

They’d just have to hope the main system didn’t suffer damage. And even if it should, she could reroute more coolant from the impulse system. There were always back up options. So long as the ship didn’t lose many more systems…

Another direct missile impact staggered the ship and sent engineers to the floor. A man fell from above, right into the center of the shrinking cloud of deadly coolant. He screamed the instant his flesh contacted the gas, but luckily he struck a section of floor free of the floating vapor. He writhed and rolled away, blinded by the raw flesh dripping from his face. Tolin pointed two techs in rad suits to retrieve the crewer. Even as they grabbed him, another beam weapon hit sent the chief to her padded knees.

Anther scream from above made her look up to see the main maintenance catwalk give way and toss another man down. This fellow tumbled into the upper reactor manifold and then began to cartwheel down like a thrown doll. His head struck dead center on the reactor’s surrounding rail. There was a viscous snap before the body clattered to the deck in mangled disarray.

Tolin turned away. This ship was going to be a complete mess before they got away from their enemy. She looked back to the fire in the secondary pumps. It was no less voracious and was beginning to consume more and more ODN matrix as it grew. With a snarl, she began to wave men toward the main hatchway. “Alright, every one out! Clear the room!” She pointed to Varnez who was still in her office. “Set the timer to vent engineering! The suppression system has failed!”

“Aye!” The thin Denobulan engineer retreated into the officer interior and closed off the thin door there. He was braver than Tolin had guessed, and intended to remain in engineering while its air was blown out into space. Xia found a greater respect for the officer as she withdrew herself beyond the reinforced barrier that closed engineering off from the rest of the ship.

Outside the engine room now, Commander Tolin accessed the remote information terminal built into the bulkhead. She brought up an image of both the engineer’s office with her assistant within, and the flame engulfed area behind the reactor. The comm panel near to the display went off.

“Ford to Tolin! What’s goin’ on down there, Engines?”

Xia tapped the waiting response tab.

“I’ve had to evacuate engineering and parts of Deck Twenty. We’re venting them to space to control the fire!”

Right at that moment, Tolin heard the main vents open with a great whoosh. On the right side monitor, the fire died out, leaving wrecked gear and heaps of burnt plastic in its path. With the coolant also blown out to space, the fire should have no further fuel. Once cooled, the equipment should also be quite safe. She checked the visual status of her assistant engineer and found him smiling back and giving her a thumb’s up within the protected confines of her office. She grinned despite herself and despite the still forthcoming strikes from enemy fire.

The engineer pressed more controls to get a look at the aft sections where the fire had originated. The machinery rooms were also quiet, blackened areas free of fire. She saw suited crewmen heading for the bow hatches amid the vacuum. She hoped she hadn’t lost any of the groups that had been reported trapped. Being damage control men, they should have been wearing full rad suits.

Xia turned back to the intercom.

“Fires are out, Commodore!”





Tolin’s report should have born much relief for the junior flag officer. But in the end, it only lessened it to a small degree. His ship was in no less trouble. They were still under heavy pursuit, with every expectation of having to contend with more hostile forces soon.

Ford’s teeth ground. Maybe this was going to be it. He watched that bombardment ship edge closer. His own torpedoes struck home repeatedly, but its shields were in prime condition. Their escorts had done their job, absorbing the punishment as they ripped away Endeavour’s shielding. Now the big boy was moving back in to finish the job. Energy levels spiked on the big ship’s indicators as they armed all of their torpedo launchers.

As with all of Jarn’s ships observed thus far, that thing had nearly zero armor protecting its newly built missile launchers. This was the enemy’s biggest weakness.
“Nechayev! Load the tricobalt torpedoes into the aft tubes!”

“Loading torpedoes!” Nechayev replied. He tapped in the commands to ready two of the six weapons they’d loaded from Starbase 23 at the beginning of their mission. Endeavour had carried several of these weapons during the entirety of her commissioned life, but Ford had wanted more of them in anticipation of the journey into Ya’wenn space. Now those weapons would save their lives. “Weapons ready.”

“New impulse currents directly ahead!” Came from the science officer. “New vessels on approach!”

Ford slammed a fist onto his armrests.

“Load remaining devices into bow tubes!”

“Commodore!” Surall whipped away from her main scope to cast a truly surprised look at her CO. “Energy signatures are Starfleet!”

Ford looked back to the main screen. The murky wash of plasma parted around the burned and abused prow of a Miranda-Class cruiser as she shoved out into clear space to sweep past Endeavour. Even as she streaked over the Excelsior, Ford could see the torpedo tubes on Ramses’s ship alight with her own fire. Comanche spat long, straight bursts of phaser energy. All of her weapons slashed over the bow and topside of the chasing warship and staggered her. Its port side stumbled into a wash of storm plasma and came out trailing burning gas. Comanche passed over the Ya’wenn ship and turned her guns on the remainder of the followers.

“Incoming hail from the Comanche!” Smith reported.

“Audio, Lieutenant.”

“We got your back, Commodore.” Ramses’s scratchy sounding voice was saying. “Take a hard left in ten thousand meters and you’ll find a clear space leading all the way out to the Federation side. We’ll take some of the heat off your tail!”

Ford could not keep the smile from his face. Ramses timely arrival was better than he could have planned. “Just stay clear of that heavy, Captain.” He replied. Then, while the comm line remained open, he spoke out toward Nechayev. “Fire tricobalt torpedoes!”

Each of Endeavour’s aft tubes spat out a single, glowing, blue bolt of energy. The slower moving missiles shot directly out at their targets and closed the distance at a steady pace. The Ya’wenn vessel had no beam weaponry with which to swat at the missiles, nor were her escorts in range any longer. The weapons arced in and made their strikes.

The first one evaporated the forward deflectors of the bombardment ship and shredded its ramming prow. The second split the ship damn near in half. A blinding explosion ensued, blotting out any view of the maneuvering Comanche or the three escorts she engaged. When the field of burning gas dissipated, all that remained of the cruiser was a ripped open piece of debris with a glowing grotto of exposed decks blowing atmosphere and men into space. Then its torpedo magazines erupted. Each of its armed weapons went first, tearing open the exposed weapons surrounding it. Then the inactive fuel sources within the unarmed torpedoes joined in the mayhem.
The mess faded out of view as Endeavour made her turn to port.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #30 on: May 29, 2007, 04:33:50 pm »
CH. 9





USS Endeavour pushed her way into open space, followed closely by her burned and blackened savior, USS Comanche. Both looked beaten, despite the relatively light amount of combat Comanche had seen. The Miranda’s hull was burned in a neat semi-circle where she had flown through two light minutes worth of plasma flow to reach her command ship and pocked by no less then ten torpedo impacts that had left their scars through the shields. Endeavour looked a total mess. Her bow and flanks were nearly entirely blackened by almost constant contact with the Tempest’s jets of energy. Her windows shown out amid this like virtual beacons. The pot-marks of thirty torpedo detonations against one shield or another marred her remaining hull, which had already been darkened to a ruddy almond color by the plasma storm’s heat. Hull breaches roughed up her smooth skin along the saucer, top and bottom, and along the fantail of her sleek engineering hull. A long piece of intercooler had been blown completely away and trailed a white, frothy coolant.

The area the two ships emerged into was several light minutes across and free of any kind of radiant energy. It was lit by the surrounding flow in a surreal kind of ambient light that made the seven starships converging together seem a collection of ghosts. Yorktown had the lead of the waiting starships, flanked at either side by two of the three frigates.

Ford was out of the conn again, grateful that the air on his bridge was restored to a fully breathable state by the venting systems. The fire beneath the main engineering console was totally out and a repair effort could now begin in earnest. The two men manning it were even now on their sides peering into it as a third repair officer bent to open a case full of tools. Three other damage control officers were also making the rounds, checking systems and pulling panels off bulkheads.

The Commodore stripped the red jacket he wore off and tossed it across the back of the conn as he halted at the StratCom table and bent beside his executive officer. Ben looked back at him, frazzled but not yet worn out. Ford offered a small grin and then looked to the tactical map and the magazine indicators.

“We still got four tricobalt torps left, and about fifty photons. We’ve took out four escorts and that big bastard.” He tallied off. Ben grunted.

“Hope they didn’t build two of those things.”

The CO looked up to Lieutenant Surall at science.

“Science Officer, are you still picking up more Ya’wenn signatures incoming?”

“Yes, Commodore.”

“Where away?”

“Bearing 105 mark 040. Distance estimated within seven AUs. Interception possibly within ten minutes.” She told them. Then she added: “Fifteen contacts.”

Both men shared a grunt. Ben’s earlier count had been seventeen. Had they lost a ship or two?

“Gonna be one hellova fight, Skip.” Thomas breathed out. He tore open the snapped front of his own maroon jacket and left it hanging open.

“Now receiving navigational update from the T’pol, Commodore.” Smith called off. “Downloading it to StratCom and helm.”

Ford pressed the waiting yellow tab to retrieve the information. A long angle image of the storm that was not scannable by Endeavour’s sensors resolved over the tactical schematic. That science ship had some fantastic scanners. Ford nodded as he read it over.

“Ramses was right, we can follow this path right the hell outta here.”

“Providing we do it fast,” Ben pointed to the leading edges of the storm on opposing fronts. “This passage is closing up just like that one we used to find the Gorn frigate. I figure we got a quarter hour, twenty minutes...”

Ford considered his options now that he had some. He could play this the safe way and withdraw. His ship and the fleet would be safe and they could make their report. Fight Jarn another day. Or he could remain, fight Jarn now and possibly end all this before it got truly ugly and tied up more and more Starfleet ships. The odds currently stood at 15/7, Jarn’s favor. The Starfleet team had the technological edge but no one could guess how many more ships might arrive in the mean time. They might get lucky and take the Over Warden out, thus ending any further aggression from his people and organization. Ford did not think this likely…

“We’re outta here. Comm, send to the fleet. Set course for the storm’s exit. Make your speed warp factor four—“

“Commodore!” Surall’s exclamation cut Ford off and he turned to stare her way. He didn’t like the energy reading he could now see on her boards. “Plasma interference has been altering the sensor images I’ve been receiving. Range and bearing indicators are shifting…I now believe the Ya’wenn fleet to be approaching from bearing 017 mark 004. Distance two light minutes, no more!”

Ford looked down to the tactical map before him to see where that put the enemy. They would be coming out of the plasma storm in a marked weak spot in the field, between the Federation task force and their way out. The flag officer growled and turned back to Smith. “Pass those orders, Lieutenant! Tell them to ready for combat!”
“We can’t go into that passage at warp speed.” Thomas reminded.

“I know that!” Chevis snapped back. He glared a hole through the image on the board. “Damn. We’re gonna get that big fight after all. ‘Cept now it’s gonna be a running retreat. Get a damage report from the Comanche.”

“Aye,” Ben returned, heading off for the comm deck to relay the request. This left Ford alone to think strategy. Several options were available to them to withdraw from this area. He just wished the area were large enough to exceed warp four. Any faster would be to run the danger of clipping a plasma flow around the periphery of this formation or to hit a piece of stellar debris too large for the defectors to move.

After running the length of the clearance, they would have to slow back to sublight to traverse the passage out of here. And they’d have to move at breakneck speed to get out before the mass closed in on itself. Under combat conditions, with large numbers of ships, this would be a terrifying task… There was no way his force could beat the Ya’wenn before they reached the passage…

Nechayev turned Chevy’s direction.

“Keptin, the first Ya’venn wessels are emerging from the field. Distance ten billion kilometers. Closing fast.”

“Get a lock on their lead ships. Comm, signal the fleet to Phalanx Position Three.” Endeavour still lacked aft shields and the rest of her screens were down to half. Ford hated putting others in the line of fire, but he had to look after this ship. Endeavour would be best suited to provide supporting fire as the rest of the fleet maneuvered.
Ben turned away from Smith’s console as the boy sent his signal.

“Comanche reports forward shields below thirty percent and damage to her maneuvering array. Her targeting array also took a direct hit and he’s relying on visual sensors to shoot.”

Smith was next to report to Ford.

“Skipper, I think I got the message off, but the enemy has begun some massive jamming. Further comm might not be possible.”

“Use visual signals, we’re close enough. And repeat your last message to make sure.”

“Aye, sir.”

Thomas rejoined Ford at the StratCom. The two of them watched as the two fleets moved in toward their confrontation. The Ya’wenn were moving at warp four as well, eager to join the battle. Jarn’s ship rode at the tail, just like Ford’s. Both officers looked for the remaining Ya’wenn escorts that had been following Endeavour. Those ships were hanging back, likely due to damage, and angling out to eventually join the newly arriving force. They would be slow in getting there. Ben looked up to his friend, his face soft.

“Not gonna sit down for this one?”

“Nope. Figured I’d use this table for more than a peep show. Might learn something.”

Thomas nodded. They watched as the faster than light ships edged closer and the scale of the map narrowed to show more and more detail. ‘At least they didn’t have time to cut us off,’ Ford thought as he glanced up.

“Helm, steer right seventeen degrees. Comm, order the course change to the fleet.” He waited, seeing how the enemy ships tightened their center to prevent the Fed ships from breaking through their lines. “Comm, order Shran and Eldridge to flank off left and hit near Jarn’s command ship, with the Le Resolute in support. Attack Pattern Theta.”

“Sending now.”

Relying totally on visual messaging via the formation lights at the bottom of Endeavour’s secondary hull took more time than with subspace signal. Ford could tell by the length of time it took for the two frigates to break formation that Smith was unable to raise them via radio. Ya’wenn jamming must be very potent, despite their lacking tech.

Ford watched the three ships increase speed to factor four point seven and race ahead of the home fleet for eight seconds. Then the smaller ships turned sharply in for the right center of the Ya’wenn cluster. A full three seconds later, Le Resolute followed suit, coming in from a wider, higher trajectory. The trio aimed for Jarn’s larger command ship, which immediately slowed by a tenth of a warp factor and turned to port. This would bring her closer to Endeavour, faster.

“Comm, order remaining ships to come right twenty degrees and increase to warp four point five.”

As Smith replied, Ben repeated the same helm order to Bronstien. The ship turned starboard and began to close with the Ya’wenn even faster than before. The range disappeared in moments.

“Eldridge and Shran are firing.” Surall reported. “Light impacts on Jarn’s deflectors. Le Resolute now firing. Jarn is initiating evasive.”

Ford watched the larger command ship Jarn flew rotate and edge away from his attackers even as he returned fire. Several of his escorts were splitting away from protecting his lead ship to trail after the frigates. Both were taking heavy fire, but the larger Le Resolute lay in a position to clear their tails. Ford watched the transaction with interest long enough to note that they seemed to be doing well.

The remainder of Jarn’s force had just matched his turns and were bearing right for the Federation force. Nechayev looked up from the weapons console. “Veapons range now, Keptin.”

“All ships: open fire!”
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #31 on: May 29, 2007, 04:38:01 pm »
CH. 9 (part 2)

The main viewer lit with long lances of phaser light and swirling volleys of photon torpedoes. The lead ships in the escort wing took the brunt of the fire as Endeavour’s phalanx of craft opened up on them. Endeavour shot at convenient intervals, launching torpedoes between her protective screen along with occasional bursts of highly targeted phaser fire. Detonations shown brightly, illuminating the red-lit bridge in hellish plays of light and shadow. One escort took the full fire of three combined ships. The resulting punishment shattered its starboard section and sent it spinning out of warp speed. Another lost the majority of its nose section and broke formation.

“Jarn’s dropping outta warp!” Ben shouted as he jabbed a finger at the map between the two men. Ford watched as the irresolute commander effectively withdrew his own ship from the fight and fell behind. Endeavour could not turn to pursue or engage lest she leave the protection of her own fleet.

“Chicken sh*t!”

Jarn’s inexperience in this theater of combat showed in the tactics he employed. He showed, however, enough sense to act when he knew he was being out played. Several of his ships followed suit and disengaged their warp drives, though whether this was done under order or because his own commanders lost the will to match the Starfleet ships at warp was unclear.

“Eldridge has sustained a direct hit to her port nacelle.” Surall called out. “Her portside shielding has failed. She is breaking formation to gain distance on the escort trailing her. Le Resolute is out of torpedo range and unable to respond without abandoning the Shran.”

The Eldridge’s captain was aggressive. He’d pursued his target too hard and been led away from his protecting cruiser. Ford looked the tactical situation over. “Helm, come left to 344 mark 350. Increase to warp five. Comm, order fleet to assume Vanguard Position Ten as we clear the Ya’wenn main body.”

“Aye.”

A Vanguard position formed a wall well between the lead ship and any opposition as she traveled through the battlefield. Number ten organized them behind her at fifty thousand kilometers. Endeavour ducked beneath the ten remaining Ya’wenn who still were keeping pace and trading fire with the Federation ships. The increase in speed sent her safely past most of them before they could respond; though Endeavour did buck hard from two impacts to her ventral shielding.

“Closing with Eldridge, Keptin.”

“Very good, Weps. Target at will.”

Nechayev hurled three photon torpedoes at the maneuvering tail of the Ya’wenn pursuing the old frigate. They struck home hard, tearing hull paneling away despite not having penetrated the enemy’s shielding. The enemy escort took the hint and broke her pursuit.

“Ya’wenn are reforming with Jarn’s ship.” Thomas pointed out as the bulk of the Fed force moved out of weapons range. Even the most dogged of the alien ships had finally pulled back. They’d taken a hard beating. Fighting at warp was no faint-hearted occupation.

“They’ll be coming back soon. We’ve just made ourselves some breathing room.” Chevis watched as the enemy reformed their ranks and accelerated again to warp five point three. “Here they come…”

The flag officer looked down at his own formation and noted the free room they had left to maneuver. His task group had matched Endeavour’s warp five, and in less than a minute they’d be forced by the plasma to make a turn. “Helmsman, come left to 340 mark 0. Maintain speed.”

“Coming left to 340 mark 0, aye.” Johnathan repeated. “Now bearing for the exit point. Contact in forty seconds, Skipper.”

“Understood.”

Chevy looked up to his sweating friend. He had yet to notice like sweat pouring from his own face. “This isn’t my kind of fighting… Takes too long.”

“Yeah, but you got those extra arrowheads on your pin now. Better get real used to this sh*t.”

“Screw that. They’re coming into photon range again.”

This observation was punctuated by a direct hit to Endeavour’s unprotected rear. Sparks rained from an overhead bank of wiring as crewmen held on for dear life. The hit had been quite sudden and without proper warning. None had expected such good marksmanship from the Ya’wenn; to be able to hit Endeavour past all of her intervening ships.

“Helm, begin evasive turns.”

“Aye!”

Nechayev turned to report to the commodore.

“Keptin, that hit knocked out torpedo tube number four. Magazine loading system is totally wrecked.”

Ford refrained from further cursing. Losing torpedo armament in warp combat could end the fight for you right there. Phasers, while useable at FTL, were too short ranged to be very effective and could get a commander in lots of trouble. “Understood. Get damage control on it to see what they can do.”

“Any thought to whether this fight might drag out into clear space outside the Tempest, Cap’n?” Ben suddenly asked. This brought Ford’s perceptions to a sudden halt. He hadn’t considered whether the enemy would even follow, let alone what it might imply if they did. He didn’t get to dwell on it long.

“Yorktown just took a direct hit to her starboard engine!” Davenport shouted. “They’re fallin’ behind!”

“Comm, order the fleet to cut engines and reduce to sublight. Order Shran and Kiev to provide Yorktown with close support. Le Resolute and Comanche to back them up. T’pol and Eldridge to keep close in beside us.” Ford ordered. He did not feel comfortable giving these orders. At first he’d given in to the flow of the situation. Now that one of his cruisers, manned by 500 men and women, was under heavy fire and out of his protection, he was beginning to feel niggling doubts. Could he pull this off and get these ships to safety? And what would they do upon getting out of the Tempest? Would Jarn be bold enough to follow? Would he press home his advantage in superior numbers?

Yorktown showed to be losing her shields entirely. She was an old Constitution-Class heavy, and she was tired. Ford glanced to the main viewer to see a magnified image of that grand old lady taking a beating he wouldn’t wish on a Klingon cruiser. The Ya’wenn had drawn to a near halt with Yorktown between them and the remainder of Ford’s ships, and were concentrating their particle cannon fire on her port side. Yorktown was trailing fire and debris from her shattered hull and her nacelles were in tatters on the ends of her pylons.

Anger boiled forth from Ford. He abandoned the StratCom and stomped for the conn. Sitting, he began to shout orders as he clutched his armrests with a death grip. “Ahead warp factor one! Weps, lock in on the first ship in that column and put a tricobalt torpedo up its ass!”

“Aye!”

Endeavour’s engines roared shortly, hurling the ship into the fray before the remainder of the fleet could close to phaser range. The enemy immediately shifted their aim to the Federation command ship and began to pummel her viscously as she resumed sublight velocity. Ford was not strapped in with any kind of restraint, but refused to yield his seat to the effects of inertia. Their first shot leapt in on the Ya’wenn escort. The unknowing ship did not attempt any manner of evasive turn. They hadn’t seen what this device could do, and so took the rap right on the chin. The tiny escort blew into three distinctly different pieces when the warhead went off. Pieces of its innards showered the surrounding ships and even bounded off the retreating Yorktown’s battered hull.

 Endeavour took the incoming pounding on her shields like a heavy weight boxer shrugging off hits with his arms. The starship rattled and rolled with hit after hit. The deck lurched and rebelled under foot as Endeavour traded licks with the entirety of the enemy force. Another tricobalt torpedo launch resulted in one more destroyed warship. Jarn’s ship cut speed and fell even further behind to stay out of harm’s way.

Torpedoes rained home on Endeavour’s prow, blasting her formerly pristine saucer into a cratered wasteland of twisted, black metal. She rained phaser energy back at her enemies, cutting hot swaths through their armor and blowing their men out into the cold depths. More shots hammered in at the dark painted neck and the sleekly shaped engineering hull. The navigational deflector burst forth into thousands of illuminated, glassy shards as two torpedoes rammed into it.

The bridge was a picture of macabre chaos. Controls shorted out, stations caught fire and men tumbled from their posts with hard hits near the bridge. Damage alarms screamed as though they believed no one could hear them. Through it all, Ford glared at the image of Jarn’s ship and issued orders as though in a trance of hatred.
“Shields have failed!” Ronald was calling off, his face already blackened after a fuse blew in his face. “Directs hits to decks three through twenty all along the fore section!”

“Maintain fire and begin evasive sequence delta!” Ford fired back. “Weps, get a lock on Jarn’s flag ship and send him our last tricobalt weapons!”

“Aye, Keptin!”

Now the remainder of Ford’s fleet had entered full weapons range. They came in firing, trying to catch up with their lead vessel and take some of the heat off of her. Another blue tricobalt weapon spiraled out among the enemy and angle in for the lead vessel. Jarn’s ship kicked up to maximum impulse and slid between two of its aft most protectors. The torpedo locked onto one of them and tore it to flaming shreds as Jarn passed by unscathed. Only then did that lead ship turn in on the Federation fleet and begin to open up with the full extent of its arsenal.

“Comanche’s taking heavy fire!” Called Surall, “Her shields are failing and her warp drive is off line! The Eldridge is suffering fire in her engineering section and has sustained massive casualties! T’pol’s main sensor array has been destroyed!”

“We’re losing men here, Cap!” Thomas shouted as well, back at the StratCom. Ford shot a look his way.

“Has the Yorktown gotten clear?”

“Aye!”

“Comm, order all ships to withdraw toward the exit point before it closes. Best possible speed!”

Another wave of concussive hits staggered the ship, finally succeeding in hurling the commodore from his seat. Ford landed with a curse and grabbed onto a support leg to the nearby rail. “Get us out of here, helm!”

Endeavour turned like an ox cart, barely accelerating ahead with all of the damage she’d sustained. She trailed hull panels and debris, even some human flotsam. She and the ship’s she led limped for the way home, and the enemy pushed ahead in pursuit.

The Federation ships were able to gain some headway, widening the distance between themselves and their hungry pursuers. They edged into the opening of the passage with as much care as could be managed at such extreme velocities. Forced now to slow in order to make the turns of the changing energy flows, the Starfleet vessels gave up nearly all of their advantages in greater impulse velocities.

For all of the Federation fleet’s advantages in weaponry and technology, nothing could override overly superior amounts of firepower. The Ya’wenn of Kovarn had packed an insane number of photon torpedo launchers and particle weapons onto their craft to combat their enemies and the high tech they employed. It was not the first time such tactic had been employed to good effect. It had worked wonders for Jarn today…

Endeavour followed her ragged escorts into the twisting confines of the solitary path of escape that existed for them. She trailed plasma and debris like blood from her many wounds. The ship was badly injured and none of those with her could claim to be in better shape. To rescue the Yorktown and her crew, Endeavour and the fleet had all sacrificed something of themselves. In terms of men lost versus men saved, the trade had hardly been worth it.

Ford would not allow Jarn the victory of claiming the technology of a Federation starship, however. He wouldn’t even leave them debris.

He sat in the conn, nervously rubbing the tops of his armrests as his crew fought to keep Endeavour flying through and between the currents of plasma that churned along all about them. The enemy pressed in on their heels, occasionally peppering the Excelsior’s aft with torpedoes. Endeavour was nearly out of missile weaponry. The commodore was beginning to wonder if Jarn would ever run dry…

“Commodore,” Came the voice of Lieutenant Surall. Ford looked to her tiredly, energy all but drained from his face. Grit smudged his cheek and blood was dried atop his head from his fall.

“Yes, Lieutenant?”

“Sir, I have analyzed our exit vector. We will exit the Tempest in seven point four minutes. However, Jarn’s fleet is still in pursuit, and he is unable to turn back. It has become obvious he intends to follow us the entire way. Also, even should he decide not to pursue us as we go to warp speed, we will lose the Yorktown, Comanche and the Eldridge as they do not have warp propulsion.”

‘Then I saved the Yorktown for nothing,’ Ford thought to himself. By doing so, he’d condemned two other ships to death along with her… No, there had to be another way. He had to delay Jarn’s fleet, stop them from following. But how?

One quick and deliberate plan sprang to mind, and it frightened him.

Ford stood. He could deliberate on the idea that had occurred to him for hours and it would seem no better. He would not discuss it with the crew. He didn’t have the time to hear them out. He had to halt those trailing warships to save the majority of the crews who were fighting to make it out of here. The Commodore knew of but one method.

“Helm, cut forward thrust. Comm, signal the fleet to maintain maximum speed. Tell them to get the hell out of this place and call Starbase for backup!”

“Aye!” Lieutenant Smith replied. Crewmen and officers alike turned away from their stations to look at their commander. Something in Ford’s voice gave them pause. He stalked up to the tactical console and stood by his gunnery officer. His hand poised over the intercom.

Thomas scanned the look on his friend’s face and his own expression turned stark.

“Chev, what the hell are we doin’?”

“Helm,” Ford ignored Thomas, wouldn’t look his way. “Turn the wheel hard over, full about, one hundred eighty degrees!”

“Aye…” Bronstien pulled the maneuver off, rotating the ship like a top against her inertia. Now she flew in reverse along the same path she’d been taking. The ship faced her Ya’wenn opponents.

Ford’s set his expression to that familiar mask of neutrality. He tapped the intercom button, activating the intercraft pickup. “All hands, this is the captain. Abandon ship! Repeat, all hands, abandon ship!”

Alarms began to call out on every deck as white and yellow flashers pulsed on and off. Ben Thomas’s wide face went totally slack. He’d never heard Ford utter such a command in his entire career. But he had an idea of what the commodore was planning. “So we get to be the first one’s to lose an Excelsior?”

“Looks like it.” Ford looked to his officers, “You heard the order people. Get to your shuttles!”

Thomas stepped up to the tactical console. “We’re gonna need a man or two to aim this old girl down their throats ‘fore we go.”

“You’re goin’ now, XO.”

“The hell I am!”

Thomas grabbed Ford bodily and yanked him free of the tactical station. Nechayev did not know how to react, and remained still. His hand fell to his sidearm, though, just the same. Ford looked about to the position of his crew, then looked Ben in the eye. “I’ll be along, Mister Thomas. Just gotta make sure she gets to where she’s goin’.”

“No f*ckin’ way!” Thomas was not going to let his friend turn this into a suicide mission. Already the report of escape pods was sounding from the comm panel port of them. Much of the command crew had silently filed out of the bridge and was on their way. Only Ford, Thomas, Nechayev, Bronstien and Surall remained stationary.

“Lemme go.” Chevy implored, unforcefully. Inside, he fought over his decision. The grief building in his friend’s expression made the battle no easier. Was this decision the right one? Could he do this? And was it the right thing to do? Would it even work?

“Yer comin’ with me! We’ll—“

Ford looked aside. He could not second-guess himself. He’d hold this course, no matter his self-doubts. He had to make this work if he was going to save the fleet. He could not base his decision on his own fears or on Thomas’s friendship for him. There was much more at stake…

“Lieutenant.”

Thomas jerked his vision to stare down the weapons officer, but this was not the lieutenant Ford had spoken to. Surall slipped silently behind Ben and delivered a swift pinch to the nerve cluster at the nape of his neck. Thomas folded into a heap borne by the tiny little science officer. Ford gave her an appreciative glance. “Thanks.”

“Most obliged, Commodore.”

“Get him out of here,” Ford turned back to Nechayev. Time was short. “Set phasers to continual fire, pulse setting. Tie in automatic tracking and patch control to the helm.”

The flag officer spared a second to look down at the still troubled, distraught face of his closest friend. That man would walk with him down the road to hell. But Ford wasn’t going to let him. Ford smiled silently over their friendship. He then turned to look at Bronstien.

“Johnathan, ahead full!”

Lieutenant Bronstien nodded back without word and tapped the waiting control. The engines labored, pushing against the momentum that carried the ship away from the Ya’wenn. She slowly began to drive back toward them. Ford hopped down and jogged three steps to the helm position. He laid a hand on the lad’s shoulder and smiled down.

“Alright, young’n. Clear the bridge! And don’t forget my dog!”

After a moment’s hesitation and a glance to the last person who’d refused to leave the bridge, Bronstien nodded back and rose from his seat. He offered it to the commodore with a gesture and trotted into the waiting lift. Ford watched them go, then turned his attention to negotiating the turns leading back to the enemy. Shaking hands took control of the helm. Ford’s dry lips parted as he fought to control his breathing. He was very glad for the surgery he’d undertaken, that allowed him to be able to face this without passing out or falling to the deck.

The commodore’s mind was numb, much as it had been when he’d watched Thomas months earlier in the throes of his malady, fighting for his life in sickbay. The detachment from reality went unnoticed, but helped him to do what he needed to do.

He’d give the fleet the time they needed to clear the Tempest. And he’d make sure no one followed.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #32 on: May 29, 2007, 04:40:44 pm »

CH. 10






Doctor Keller hefted the bandaged SPO from engineering up from the biobed he lay heaped upon. Ambassador Spock hastened to assist her in bearing the larger man’s bulk as they struggle to carry him to the open sickbay doors. Fallen structural supports littered the deck outside the med ward along with a covering of burnt soot and debris. The ship’s damage was apparent even this far within the armored saucer section.

The medical staff fought and tugged to clear the sickbay of its living charges. Crew and passengers groaned and screamed in pain as they were lugged slowly toward the nearest banks of escape pods. Nurse Tyler paused as she bore a lady security officer out the hatchway. She looked back, unheeding of the blonde locks falling into her vision. She seemed ready to break down into tears. Bleakly, she sought Keller with her gaze.

“What about the dead!”

Andrea paused but only a second to look back at the array of corpses they were leaving behind. Humans, aliens of the Federation and even Ya’wenn littered the compartment. Sickbay was its own battlefield. They would leave them for the cremation to come.

Keller snapped her gaze back to Tyler with purpose.

“We leave them, Leftenant! They’re not going anywhere…”

Tyler lingered a moment more as Keller and Spock continued on with their charge. Only when the lady Tyler held aloft began to cry out in discomfort did the nurse finally set back into motion. They moved out into crowded corridors, stepping over girders, bodies and damaged equipment as they shuffled for safety. Shrill emergency sirens cut through the thick air and flashing evacuation lights shown in the murky smoke. They piled home into small EVA pods, twenty beings to a vehicle.

Keller pressed her chosen patient fully into Spock’s waiting grasp as she broke away to help a fallen damage control tech up from the floor. The technician suffered from a compound fracture of his left leg. He looked up at her pleadingly as she bent over him. Relief flooded his countenance as she grabbed him beneath his armpits and lugged him back to his good foot.

The doctor could no longer see the ambassador. The press of Endeavour crew was thick, the air in the corridor oppressive. Keller looked down, struggling forth as her new charge repeated ‘thank you, thank you!’ She’d originally been headed for the main shuttle bay, the muster point for senior officers during abandon ship procedures. But she knew her strength would not hold out so long.

Keller altered course, making for the already visible dorsal EVA bank. There she encountered much more assistance. Able hands relieved her of the man she’d all but carried. He was still thanking her even as he disappeared into the confines of the escape pod.

Her mind blank and numb, Keller resigned herself to the nearest pod and entered without word. Shock of what was coming to a close was settling in on her mind. What was to be lost wouldn’t totally become so apparent till some time later…






Commander Ben Thomas came to at the sound of a pressure seal clicking home. He shook the cobwebs from his head and sat up. Hands pushed back down at him and he slugged at their owners. Things were beginning to come back to him.

Thomas could hear a shuttlecraft’s drive firing, feel the skids rise from a deck. They were leaving the Endeavour… They were leaving Chevy!

“Turn this f*cker back around!” Ben was up and staggering to his feet in the crammed confines of the Type J shuttle. He gained his bearings after a moment, and turned left to see the edges of the main shuttlebay’s doors flash by. The shuttle dipped, being flown by Bronstien, and shot beneath Endeavour’s ragged port warp engine and zip away to safety.

While Chev’s still over there! Ben thought like a wild man. He surged forward through the press of crewmen and officers, bent on wringing the helmsman’s throat. He’d kill ‘em for making him do this!

“Sit down, Commander!”

Ben whirled at the stern, mature sound of Ambassador Spock’s voice. He faced the aged Vulcan with half a mind to put him down with a shot to the nose. That bastard had found a way to get off the ship. He wasn’t trying to be a hero and save everybody...all alone…

“Commodore Ford knows what he is doing, Commander. Do not degrade his sacrifice by challenging others to defy him.”

“He didn’t have to do this!”

“Endeavour will not fly within a plasma storm on her own, Mister Thomas. The Commodore knew this, as do you. That is why he remained behind to halt the enemy’s advance.”

“He’s throwing his damn life away!”

Spock looked at him, knowing and understanding. He was not unmoved by what was being lost, nor of Ben’s emotions in dealing with it. Ford knew that Endeavour was the only ship that could hold off the enemy while the rest of the fleet escaped. And he knew the ship’s automatic systems would be overwhelmed by the task. Someone had to remain…

“He’s giving himself so that others may live. I did this once. Those who were affected were no less sorry for my passing because of my actions, but I saw those actions as necessary none the less. Ford is doing as he must.”

“Difference being that you’re still kickin’, slick!”

An explosion rocked the fleeing shuttlecraft, slinging all those standing atop of one another. Ben fought his way back up, marveling over the blast. He clambered unceremoniously over bodies and chairs till he reached the cockpit hatchway. The transparent aluminum door was sealed, barring his entry. He pounded on it, drawing a glance from Bronstien as he fought to keep their shuttle under control. Tears rained down Ben’s face. He climbed past another man, intent on reaching the controls to the door.

He found them locked out, dead save to those within the cockpit. Surall had been expecting his to wake. He tapped at the dead panel, unable to make it respond to his commands. Ben sagged bodily. Miraculously, his eye found a monitor within the cockpit, showing and after view of their flight path.

Endeavour still stood there, slowly advancing on those ships that were even now ravaging her raw, glowing hide with piercing azure particle beams. No further torpedoes flew in on the Excelsior-Class ship. The Ya’wenn had perhaps run out. Ford flung his final missiles into the advancing escort vessels, slagging them and tearing them asunder.

Fire engulfed Endeavour’s entire engineering hull. This had not slowed her return fire, though the ship hardly moved now. Jagged pulses of phaser fire fired out from the ship’s functioning banks, pouring like rain upon those who threatened. Ya’wenn weapons slammed home over and over in the attempt to silence those weapons, but they still kept firing. Endeavour was rolling now, her attitude control lost. But Ford’s targeting remained dead on. One escort shredded into a flying inferno and rammed full bore into the Federation starship.

This halted all fire from the capitol ship, and Ben feared Ford dead now. He resisted the urge to close his eyes, to look away. He kept on watching, even as the distance and wafting plasma fields threatened to tear the vision from him.

The Ya’wenn lead ship, Jarn’s ship, cruised closer. She neared Endeavour’s bow and charged her weapons for a final blast to rid the sky of its worst menace. Anger swelled in Mister Thomas as he watched this.

One final, solitary blue torpedo lashed out from Endeavour’s starboard launcher. It streaked in on the phaser lashed command ship and hit her soundly amid the unshielded, unarmored torpedo launchers that Jarn had heedlessly packed onto his ship. There was an eye piercing flash. Jarn’s craft all but leapt within the viewer, just as Thomas leaped with a loud, triumphant cheer. A crowd now watched the goings on behind the XO. Their breath caught at the captain’s final attack.

The Ya’wenn command ship began to roil in on itself as internal explosions stemmed out from the central blast within her bowels. Armed torpedoes went off in tirades, shredding the lumbering oaf like splintered wood beneath the splitting maul. The ship bent in two at her spine, nearly breaking in half. Escape pods poured forth from within, but not dreadful many of them. Ben wanted nothing more than to turn and blast them out of the sky.

Jarn’s ship tore itself in half unevenly, like a cadaver torn between two ravenous hounds. Her innards spilled out everywhere, spiraling into the storm and bouncing off Endeavour’s drifting wreck. The final blast of Jarn’s warp core incinerated scores of lifeboats and knocked Endeavour, and Ford, into the swell of closing plasma. The Tempest claimed the ship, consuming her. Fires ate at her blackened metal skin. Ben watched as she sank out of view, barely visible with the clouding and interference. Her saucer was first to vanish, then as her engineering hull faded from sight there came a fiery explosion from the center of her drive section. The blast tore the surrounding plasma field apart and blinded the camera feed. When the antimatter detonation cleared, the shuttle was too far away to see anything. The opening in the plasma storm had closed in on the remnants of Endeavour and her surviving Ya’wenn pursuers.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #33 on: May 29, 2007, 04:46:48 pm »
Epilogue





Admiral Jonathan Sharp stood at full attention for the torpedo tube that lowered into position amid the throng of gathered officers and crew within the Starbase torpedo bay. There was no body to mourn for the man they’d lost. This made the ceremony no less important.

The Federation flag, blue on white, was draped over the casket. The name and serial, USS Endeavour, NCC-2007, had been painted onto the Starbase torpedo casing for this affair. Jon did not like funerals. He did not relish losing friends in the line of duty. But he was here for this ceremony. He would officiate it and see his friend’s memory honored. Once it was over, he would also honor his friend by getting stupid drunk and sleep off some of his grief.

That is what Commodore…Captain Ford…would have wanted.

“We are gathered here today,” The Admiral began, “To pay final respects to our honored dead. Commodore Chevis D. Ford gave his life in the service of his home and friends…his family. No greater honor could have been done him, or us. His loss is sad… grievous, but we…”

Yes, Sharp went on with the eulogy, but his heart was elsewhere. Much like the man standing at the head of the casket, Commander Thomas, he planned to find out if this Jarn still lived. He would set right all that had been done wrong in the past months. Sharp looked down on the solemn casing that might have held his friend in it had they a body, and vowed in silence that he would not rest till he fixed everything the men and women under his command had died fighting against.

Sharp hated funerals…
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Commander Benjamin Thomas sat in silent dark in the furthest corner of Starbase 23’s officer’s club. The drink held sweating in his hand had long lost its taste. It was nothing more than liquid comfort now. He shifted his attention from studying the drink and the cold, glowing stars shining in at him from beyond the clear pane of aluminum beside his table. Those stars were just as cold and loveless as the rest of space. Thomas drowned the thought in another gulp of vodka and reached for his bottle.

Refilling his tumbler, he watched as the warmer liquid dissolved the remainder of his ice. It was gone in a few seconds, dissolving like the Endeavour had in the fires of her own antimatter engines. His mind wandered to times where he’d shared a bottle of whatever with his lost friend. Good times or bad. Parties and brainstorming sessions. They’d been inseparable. Duty might have taken them out of sight for a time, but they’d always wound up back on the same ship before too long.

Ben washed this latest fill of liquor in a single swallow. The service had cost him a lot. It had cost Chevy even more. There was an empty hole in Thomas now, that hadn’t even felt so hollow when Ford in his anger had left his former XO in the brig on this very station. Thomas squashed the thoughts of his friend abandoning him here. After all, Chevis had come back to clear him. He’d pulled some kind of strings to make sure Ben wouldn’t spend the rest of his life in a very harsh prison. How he’d managed that, Ben still didn’t know. Now, he never would. He reached again for the nearly empty bottle…

A hand descended upon his and halted him. Ben looked up in surprise and forced his eyes to focus in on the tall, slim man restraining his hand. Lieutenant Daniel Nechayev stood before his table, a long, sober look upon his stony face. The Russian gave him a small smirk that looked like it was equal parts sneer and placed another bottle on the table before the Commander.

“Dat French svill is not wodka.” The gunnery officer told him. His own speech told of his level of inebriation. He’d been tying one on for some time now. “Try ‘dis, Commander.”

Nechayev helped himself to a chair across from the former exec. Ben glared at him for a time, unsure whether he welcomed the fellow or not. He did welcome his bottle, however, and decided he would accept the company for its sake. He reached out and pulled the well-worked cork. The label on the clear container was entirely in Russian. Ben wouldn’t have been able to read it anyway by now...

“Moscow Grand, ’23. Wery old…wery good.” The officer assured.

Ben looked back at him without discernable expression. He wouldn’t be able to tell how good or bad the vodka was at this point. He’d been here for two hours straight. The bottle before him was his second. He filled the tumbler in his hand and tossed half of it back. Daniel filled his own glass and took a long drink. Both men sighed over the good liquor. Nechayev had been correct. It was good.

“Dining on ashes, Commander?” Asked the lieutenant.

“Yup.”

“De’ Commodore vas a good man.” Nechayev said simply. There had been times he’d thought the man slovenly, undisciplined and crazy. But his methods, while unorthodox, has always rendered results. And his final act had been one borne of heroism. “He must have been of Russian blood.”

Ben scoffed out a haggard laugh at the idea. He pictured his friend in a fluffy fur hat with a little red star atop it. “No, not likely, man. Chevy was a Southerner from th’ ground up.”

“Ve both eat too many potatoes!” The other countered. “Wery little difference.”

“Yeah…”

“This a private party?”

Both men looked over to the two men standing before the table. Lieutenant Bronstien stood beside Commander Davenport. Neither looked nearly as trashed as the two sitting by the window, but they also bore bottles of booze. Slung under Bronstien’s other arm was the panting bundle of hair that had belonged to their Skipper. Ben smiled much more happily than he felt. “Have a sit down, folks.”

Ron sat without word, taking up the bottle of Russian drink and poured himself a glass. Ice clinked and cracked within his tall glass and he took a long pull. Johnathan poured up his own, then held it high over the table. His eyes met those of each at the corner table.

“To the skipper.”

Ben poured another and quickly raised his tumbler to clink with the others. “To the Cap’n!” He repeated. Everyone drained their respective glasses and set them on the glassy tabletop. The dog, China, continued to pant and look happily about at the collected men. He seemed confused at the absence of his owner. The officers took turns tussling the Pekinese’s hair and petting him affectionately.

Ben’s eye drifted toward the bar. Another form stood aloft near the closing doors to the officer’s club. The tall, broad shouldered kid looked their way, seeming lost. Ben felt himself smile genuinely as he recognized the junior Endeavour officer. Ford had made an impression on a lot of people. He waved the lone figure over.

“C’mon over here Smith. Get snookered with us.”

The comm officer smiled in relief and Ben snatched a glass off another table to fill it for the boy. “You old ‘nuff to drink kid?”

“I’m as old as Johnathan!” Noah returned. He had to be the only truly sober man at the round table. Ben smiled as he pushed the cool vodka Smith’s direction. Again, Thomas’s glass raised over the group and they raised theirs to match.

“To Commodore Ford!”

“To the Skipper!” They confirmed. This was they way the bridge crew of Endeavour spent their night.




*Note: I nearly decided to nix thie next two scenes, finding them rather overly melodramatic and never being quite happy with either. I still have them in here as I may improve on them later. The first is necessary for the next story. The second scene...I simply don't feel comfortable making such suppositions about a character who never belonged to me... So it feels off. But here they are, for the completion of the story...*


Doctor Andrea Keller sat alone in her temporary cabin. She sat on her narrow bed, legs crossed and arms clutched around her large pillow. All that she’d owned aboard the Endeavour was gone. She didn’t care. It was the other thing she had lost there that she was crying for. Face buried into the soft down of her pillow, the doctor let out her insides. Her wails were muffled as she buried her mouth into the fabric and stuffing. Her swollen eyes stung and her mouth felt full of cotton.

How long she had been there, she didn’t know. How long she would remain was up to anyone’s guess. Andrea could not get the image of the commodore, the captain… of Chevis Ford…out of her mind. She saw him standing there before her, laughing at something she’d said…looking back to her with kindness and love in his brown eyes.
Had he loved her? Maybe not. They had been together for such a short time… Then why was she having such a hard time coping with all of this? Why did she feel like she’d lost the love of her life?

The doctor had finally made time for a man, an officer aboard a starship she served on. She’d let him in, and she believed he’d been open with her. And now, after so short a time, he was dead. Starfleet had never been cruel to her. Not yet. Not till two days ago. That had been when Starfleet ceased being a challenge to her perceptions, the center for her learning and betterment. Now it was nothing but her torture room.

Andrea wanted out. She wanted away from this pain. She’d never been so close with a man she’d served with. Never made love to another officer or crewman. Never gotten in touch… And the first time had been a disaster. What made it worse was the fact that Ford had chosen to die. He’d faced the enemy alone. That he’d done it to save lives paled in her perception of the crime. It did nothing to lessen the hurt.

And she kept on hurting. The young doctor cried herself literally to sleep that night.





Ambassador Spock sat in silent meditation in the solitude of his cabin. There was no adornment here. His personal travel effects had been lost with the Endeavour. There were several things about this mission which left the elder Vulcan unsettled.

First were the dashing of the hopes he’d had toward a peaceful resolution. Premier Feece had died traveling to a prison world in the hopes of preventing a civil war among his own people. Spock had been trying to help Ford prevent further violence between Jarn and Federation shipping. All of this had failed.

Next was the commodore’s death. He’d died preventing Jarn from completing his destruction of the Task Group. He died to strike back at the Over Warden for all the harm he’d caused. For one of the few times in his long life, Spock hoped that Ford had indeed killed his man.

Should Jarn have lived, none of the violence that had threatened would be prevented. With both Feece and Chevis Ford gone, Jarn would see to the continuation of all his malicious goals. Spock would remain in the sector, to ensure the Warden’s activities were curtailed…should he prove to still live.

Spock hoped Jarn was, indeed, very dead.

Finally, and most distressing among all those things that concerned the Vulcan’s mind, were the words of Commander Thomas. ‘Difference being that you’re still kicking…’ Spock could not help but think about the implications of this simple retort. Yes, the Ambassador had been unnaturally fortunate and been given a second chance at life. Ford, in his sacrifice, hadn’t had such a luxury. No katra could be brought home to his people. No reanimated body awaited his spirit.

When Spock had sacrificed himself, he didn’t know that he’d be able to live past the incident. He’d comforted himself in the idea that his memories, his essence, and maybe even a glimmer of himself, would live on past his corporeal body.

Ford had taken the controls without thought for any of that. Spock admired this quality in the man. It had required a bravery many couldn’t fathom. Once, the Ambassador had possessed that quality. Did he still?

During this most recent encounter with danger, he’d done nothing to combat the enemy threatening the ship he was on. This was most uncharacteristic of his past experiences. Only months prior, while still a member of Starfleet and an officer of the Enterprise, he’d been right there, in the thick of it all. He’d taken direct control of his destiny, and that of the men beneath him.

During this recent battle, he’d been obliged to stand aside…. to allow those in uniform to make the decisions, deal with the events as they came about. He’d assisted in Sickbay, free of any decisions and most of the danger. Free of the responsibility.

Back in the days of his youth, he would never have shirked responsibility. He would have helped in every capacity available to him… Especially when he’d helped create the decision.

Spock’s insistence to send the Task Group away had, inadvertently, cost Commodore Ford, and many others, their lives. Worse than this realization was the knowledge that if he’d just stuck with his original plan of action, he would not have sent those ships away.

Had they been there, Endeavour would have had the firepower to make a much more effective escape. They would never have needed to face Jarn’s main force. Endeavour would have been able to effect a retreat at the very beginning of the battle.

Remembering that he’d known the danger he gambled with even at the time gave Spock no comfort. He still felt as though he’d failed, badly.

Hindsight was 20/20, it was said. This cliche made the realization no easier to live with. Spock concentrated on turning his perceptions inward as he cut out the surrounding world. He cleared his mind to meditate. He found this nigh impossible. Ghosts of the dead haunted his mind. He saw the twisted, rent bodies in the sickbay. He heard Ford’s objections. There was no rest from all this.

Spock knew this all to be just the beginning.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #34 on: June 04, 2007, 08:23:10 am »
Well, since we've already discussed my problem with this one at GREAT length ( ;D), I'll just hit the positives here:  The same strengths that are present in all the other Endeavour tales are still present in this story, and furthermore, I'm fond of your characterization of the original Vulcan.  Here he's competent, possibly wise, but not a god, as he's often portrayed.

Best part of the story for me, though, was Thomas showing some of his more noble qualities.  After so many where his key failing was at the forefront, it was nice to see just how loyal the man can be.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #35 on: June 04, 2007, 11:40:45 am »
Hi Guv. Sorry I've not been around to comment recently. 'Need For Speed - Carbon' has been sucking up a lot of my attention recently. I'm having fun doing up my cars, but ensuring that they don't turn into "culture coaches".  ::)
Nothing is tackier than gold alloys and spotlights on a Rolls Royce, so I'm making sure my Aston Martin DB9 and Porsche Cayman S look sleek and classy, but not like pimp-mobiles or gang-coloured-cars. So hard to improve tastefully what is already a beautiful piece of machinery.

So, that's what I've been up to. Now, onto what you've been up to. Okay, I'm up to and finished Chapter 6. I'm having a break now as reading off the screen really seems to screw with my eyeballs. Not only that, it gives me the excuse for multiple commenting!

Okay... Guv, you will no doubt be thrilled to hear that I have no grammatical quibbles with what I've just read. Not that I have some and just not going to comment, but that I don't have any. Good job!  :thumbsup:

I'm really enjoying your Spock scenes. I have always been deterred from writing the "real" characters because I don't know if I can capture them properly, but you're doing a great job. Spock's scene with Surrall was very well done, especially this segment:

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“You fear contamination.”

Surall’s eyes widened at the accusation, then narrowed. She was not biggot. But, then, that wasn’t what he was telling her, was it?

I like that you--and your characters--realise that you can say stuff like this without people throwing their hands up in horror and others hissing "racist!" It's only offensive if you intend it--and, admittedly, the subject takes it--that way. Super-double-dooper Good Job!
I also liked your--Spock's--analysis on Starfleet's makeup and of humans in general.

You descriptions are really cool. I loved the image--both internal and external--of Ford and the Endeavour riding the plasma rapids to surprise your Ya'wenn Harry Mudd, and said Mudd-ish's crew reactions when they realise they've been nabbed.

The description of the Ya'wenn capitol building was really cool. You really painted a good picture there, and imparted a sense of history and respect for that history in a few words. Also finding that Jarn is a criminal himself and the Ya'wenn Premier was a peaceful man who liked Spock immediately gave me warm fuzzies. Again, I have to question such blatant aggression and attempted intimidation by Ford, but that's his style. Dealing one-on-one with the Klinks, that approach is the only one that works, but on a diplomatic mission? You can be strong without threatening to beat another delegate's face in.

Conversely, I loved that Ford shook himself out of his self-induced stewing after Spock's "betrayal" comment, and that he's honest enough with himself that he just doesn't like buckling under to anyone on his own ship. You're making your own character seem less and more sympathetic (to me, anyway) by having him riled up and calming down respectively, and making Spock the innovator here. "Fluid situation" and all that.  :D 
Ford recognises that they are both working to the same goal, and that Spock's approach is the diplomatic version of his own. Spock also recognises the dangers and isn't blithely assuming his peaceful overtures will be readily accepted by any reasonable being, like so many Federation diplomats we've read in the novels. He has weighed Ford's valid concerns and decided the risk is worth it.

I also like Renn being super-oily and smiling a lot. Ah, TOS Klinks. Good job on the description and characterisation of the Flathead, even though the respect he has from his turtle-head XO was a bit of a surprise after all the ST novels I've read. Makes sense, given the 'Enterprise' explanation, and I like that Renn called it the "Archer Affliction". That's a very Klingon thin to do.  ;D

Oh, the "Qam'a" class: Is that a FASA designation for the K'Vort?

Spock's own meeting with Feece was pretty cool. Diplomatic niceties are hard to do when you don't even know what race your guest is, and you did that scene very well, with Spock's inner amusement at Feece's well-intentioned gaffs. I can easily see some haughtier DipCorps type getting offended by such.

Okay, that was a mammoth commenting session. I'm off to grab some lunch and maybe sketch out a short story involving Kirk & Co. to see if I can put words in their mouths to my own satisfaction. And to stop staring at this damn screen for an hour.  ;D

Oh, just in case you didn't get it before: Good Job!  :thumbsup:

I'll come back for another couple of chapters later on, maybe tomorrow. Similar commenting to follow.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #36 on: June 04, 2007, 04:27:10 pm »
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Good job on the description and characterisation of the Flathead, even though the respect he has from his turtle-head XO was a bit of a surprise after all the ST novels I've read.

Expecting the Guv to use ANYTHING from the novels is sort of like expecting someone not to notice Jeri Ryan's breasts;  It's possible that it might happen, but it would be foolish to ever count on the occurence. ;D
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #37 on: June 04, 2007, 05:09:48 pm »
Just read Chapters 7 & 8. Ooooh, exciting stuff!

The destruction of the Premier's ship was nasty and somewhat unexpected, as was his Gorkon-like death scene. There's going to be hell to pay patching that government back up.

The battle was well choreographed and the Tolin scene was really cool. Was it just the Comanche that came to the rescue, or did the frigates come too? An Excelsior and a Miranda vs. 20-odd ships is still kinda long odds..

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Expecting the Guv to use ANYTHING from the novels is sort of like expecting someone not to notice Jeri Ryan's breasts;  It's possible that it might happen, but it would be foolish to ever count on the occurence.

I wasn't saying i was expecting the Guv to respect or use the novels, I'm just saying since that is my background, it was unexpected to me.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #38 on: June 04, 2007, 08:09:39 pm »
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I wasn't saying i was expecting the Guv to respect or use the novels, I'm just saying since that is my background, it was unexpected to me.

Right.  And I used your statement as an excuse to make a cheesy wit and mention Jeri Ryan's breasts all in one post! ;D
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #39 on: June 05, 2007, 09:15:02 pm »
AAAAHHHHH........

NoW Mr. Andy knows how to post a comment. I had to change pants after that first one. Thank you very much.

I'm very glad this one is being well recieved. After some discussion, I wasn't sure at all. But as it happens, I still stand behind my 'product', the hell with opinions against what I've written >:( (certainly not meaning you, Andy). 

I'm absolutely flabergasted that there were no grammatical errors for you to point out. I think you just stared at the screen so long you couldn't see them, honestly. I know they gotta be there... ;D

In answer to your question (as I do try to answer them, no matter what they are) the Qam'a is just something I patched up. It's based on the FASA L-42 design (aka a big BoP)... I use the idea that its heavilly armed and a power hog, as implied in the specs for the game. There the similarities start to diminish. The class name simply comes from the Klingon dictionary, or what I loosly remember from it. Qam=Bird  'a=big or greater   Which I guess could mean that Qam'a translates to Big Bird class... And who says Seseme Street doesn't have a fleet...

I thank you for the mention of my discriptions. Some are better than others. But I've always hated authors that give you a bare-bones discription of surroundings, or worse, no discription at all. That bothers the living hell out of me. If you're trying to hide detail, that's one thing... But just not giving any for no reason... that's lazy. I also, with the rotunda scene, wanted to give an impression that this was a working government. Something it's people worked to create, and they had pride in it. Like the US back before the Vietnam War... Ohhhhh...can't believe I just said that, but there it is...

La'ra certainly is correct of my dislike of using the novels for any kind of material. I don't like most of them, and those I did like, I still won't incorporate into my stuff. I treat only on-screen elements as 'canon', though I do use SFC and FASA ships since everyone is pretty well familiar with them and I can just refer to said ship without going out of my way to waste your time describing every nook and cranny. While I love well described things...there is a limit to what won't slow down the tale...

I also verily agree that one Excelsior and one Miranda vs. Jarn +20 was out there. But the Endeavour is my Defiant. She takes way more than she probably should. I want to give the reader a kind of 'and she's still standing!' feel when reading what she's had done to her. Hope I didn't go too far. The rest of the fleet, indeed, doesn't join till slightly later.

Did any one notice the Eldridge? And does any one remember the signifigance of said? Had to use her...

Well, this is a much too long reply, but you're the only one who read and totally liked, so, I'm babbling. I thank you again, Andy!

More soon.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #40 on: June 08, 2007, 08:41:02 am »
I just had to keep scrolling and reading guv, even though i'm at work with a bug on my name. Speaking of which, gotta go but let me say you did great!
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #41 on: June 08, 2007, 09:04:02 pm »
Ahhh! Exxxxcellent. I lure people to wasting company time to read Trek!

Good...goood! (in the voice of the Emporer...)

I'm glad you enjoy!

Lemme know when y'all are done so I can post the next...

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #42 on: June 14, 2007, 02:07:22 pm »
Hi Guv, managed to finally finish this.

Two bad things and I'll say them first to get them out the way:

1) You seem to think that light-minutes are horribly vast. Surall reports her sensors have been tricked:

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Distance two light minutes, no more!

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“Keptin, the first Ya’venn wessels are emerging from the field. Distance ten billion kilometers. Closing fast.”

Just so as you know, one light minute is approx. 18 million kilometres.  ;)

10 (American) billion (a thousand million) kilometres is approx. 9.25 lighthours:D
10 (British) billion (a million million) kilometres is approx. 1 light year, 20 light days, 19 light hours, 15 light minutes.  ;D

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Detonations shown brightly,

You used this a couple of times. The word you're looking for is "shone".

Now, onto the actual story istelf.

Holy f*ck! Talk about a surprise ending!

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“So we get to be the first one’s to lose an Excelsior?”

Ouchie... not really something you'd want to be remembered for! I'm still in vague shock that you actually did this. Not only the ship, but the lead character too. I saw Ford assessing Thomas and seeming to think he was growing a bit in command abilities, but... holy crap!

The battle was very well written. I wasn't keen on seeing how easily a Constitution went down, but with an Excelsior getting beaten up by the barbarians' (if only due to weight of numbers and retrofitted modern weapons) it was properly done. Your tactics seemed pretty well thought out and the descriptions of the ships in their formations, under fire, in the plasma storm were painting brilliant pictures in my head.

Thomas having to be nerve pinched was expected, but actually being nerve pinched was amusing and not-so-expected. His diatribe in the shuttle was well contained and believable in how he couldn't turn them around.

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Best part of the story for me, though, was Thomas showing some of his more noble qualities.  After so many where his key failing was at the forefront, it was nice to see just how loyal the man can be.

Ya, not so much. I'm all about saving my best friend and all, but there's loyal, and there's stupid. Heedlessly demanding a return and jeopardising a whole shuttle's worth of crew against his CO and friend's very obvious orders and wishes just strikes me as boneheaded. Simpsons Homeresque Heroic. If he'd been allowed to commandeer the shuttle and go back, I'd have hoped Spock or Surall (if aboard) would have double pinched him to stop him being that stupid. "Damn everyone else and I'm going back", quite likely just so he can die by Ford's side.

The camaraderie scene at the end was a nice touch. Keller seems like a barren person, and blaming Starfleet for his loss--while a very Human thing to do--is wrong and dangerous. If she's going to run away, she can't realise that running away never solved anything, just delayed the reckoning. That's who her character is (I'm assuming), and you wrote it well. I can just see bad things in Keller's future with her thinking that way.

Spock's final scene. I have some of Larry's "God complex" for the TOS characters, so I'm not sure about how his soul-searching actually goes. However, having that complex, you seem to be ahead of the game in that I don't automatically hate it. ;)


All in all, quite the awesome tale. Quite the shocking ending. I can't wait to see what happens next... if there is a next.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #43 on: June 14, 2007, 08:54:07 pm »


A very nice comment indeed. Glad you liked the story.

A lot of nitpicks worked in there, but from you, very much expected. At least no REAL quibbles about grammar...

As to the subject of light minutes: Never really researched it. If I edit the story again, I'll just use different measurements, such as AUs. No big deal.

About the Yorktown getting beat down 'easily'... Ever count how many torpedo impacts it took to bring 1701-A's shields down in STVI?

About 13...that's it. And most weren't even along the same shield arc. Yortown, old as she was, took a beating in this story, my friend. And given that in TMP time, a single photon irreparibly wrecks a nacelle (STII)... She did pretty damn well.

You continually mention character 'flaws' with Thomas. I mostly think it due to your dislike for the character, and therefor not liking anything he will ever do (much like my angst against my x-wife). He is incredibly loyal, and his friendship for Ford led him to believe he could do SOMETHING to save Ford... If your idea's on loyalty approach that of your comment above...I hope I never find my life in your hands...  You made an accurate point, however. There was nothing he could do. And that's where Spock's words of wisdom came in. I hope you at least like how Thomas is used, if not the man himself...

No, Andrea Keller's thoughts immediately after the loss of Endeavour and Ford will not overtly plague her into the future. Her thoughts were indeed post-ordeal, not so far removed from the actual incident. The emotions of loss, grief and anger were very fresh. Like all of us after any event approaching this example of severity, her thoughts were decidedly more dark than normal. After some removal and healing, her mind will adjust to the ordeal. It will affect her future decisions, but not so severely as you seem to be thinking. But then, this might count as a spoiler, so I'll not elaborate further.

And about the examples of 10 billion KM...what the f*ck is wrong with the British metric system? What's in between your version of 100 million and 1 billion? I'm glad I don't have to drive place to place looking at British signage...   ;D

Now that I've apltly ruffled yer fur the wrong way, thank you for the kind words about the main jist of the story. Just don't jump to too many conclusions before reading on. The evolution of my tale is in the continuing of the series... if that made any damn sense...I'm reading it over now and thinking...that sounded better in my head...

Alrighty... BTW...I thought the Shone/Shown difference was as you said...my spell checker argues with me over it... Oh well. Machine is only as good as the ignoramous programming it...

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« Reply #44 on: June 15, 2007, 08:55:39 am »
Glad you liked the comment, Guv.

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About the Yorktown getting beat down 'easily'... Ever count how many torpedo impacts it took to bring 1701-A's shields down in STVI?

Ya, but Scotty yells out "She's packing quite a wollop! Shields collapsing!" Chang's ship was a prototype. One torpedo from his ship was enough to pitch the Excelsior about too, if you remember.

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You continually mention character 'flaws' with Thomas. I mostly think it due to your dislike for the character, and therefor not liking anything he will ever do (much like my angst against my x-wife).

I think that is a very good point. I like to give everyone a fair shake (even fictional characters), but whenever Thomas shows his... I don't know what to call it. "Redneck", maybe?  ;D Anyway, whenever Thomas gets all "You'll do it Chevy's way or your a F*CKIN moron!", it ruffles my feathers. I don't mind him most of the time.

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He is incredibly loyal, and his friendship for Ford led him to believe he could do SOMETHING to save Ford...

Responsibilities should triumph over blind, raw, "I gotta do SOMETHING 'cause it hurts too much to accept I can't do anything!" That's why people like this in the movies are always restrained before they do something glorious, but futile, for the about-to-die hero. As did you here.

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If your idea's on loyalty approach that of your comment above...I hope I never find my life in your hands...

Ouchie. Mind you, I'd never make a good Starfleet officer without some serious personality/backbone buidling. :D
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #45 on: June 15, 2007, 09:13:07 am »
I think it's important to remember that Thomas was reacting to a very extreme situation, and that no one can be expected to maintain full rationality, all the time, in such situations.  Emotions are powerful things...even for Vulcans, Surak and Spock often acted illogically where the other was concerned...and in a time and place when passions are being acted upon, people do, or want to do, foolhardy things.

Ya' don't see much of this on Star Trek though.  At least not lately.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #46 on: June 15, 2007, 08:55:21 pm »
Glad you liked the comment, Guv.

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About the Yorktown getting beat down 'easily'... Ever count how many torpedo impacts it took to bring 1701-A's shields down in STVI?

Ya, but Scotty yells out "She's packing quite a wollop! Shields collapsing!" Chang's ship was a prototype. One torpedo from his ship was enough to pitch the Excelsior about too, if you remember.

Quite so. I don't believe, after seeing the 'wallop' packed by the Mark VI photorp in STII, that Chang's torps were anything special. After all, if his torps were specifically designed to go with that ship, the weapon masters known as Klingons would have built a torpedo whos exhaust wouldn't give the ship away...

If it makes you feel better about how much a beating Yorktown took, remember that I did say Jarn had aquired my new world's 'ADCAP' (ADvanced CAPacity) torpedoes. The beating she took is well within bounds. After all...we're talking about a show/movie series that continually shows that a ship can and may be destroyed by a single shot... (IE: The freighter in STIII, USS Grissom, the BoP in Generations, and numerous ships cheaply blown to smithereens in TNG/VOY...though surprisingly...not one example in ENT...)

About Thomas once again...also mind you that his reactions aboard the shuttle were post-waking up from a nerve pinch. Having passed out on various occasions...you don't think straight during said times. I always make 0 sense after such occurances. Ask La'ra...I'm f*ckin' bonkers. Thomas, on the other hand...was clear enough in mind to see through the cloud of such an instance to actually WANT to continue helping his friend. I didn't present such in a clear manner, I realize, and may yet include such detail at a later date. Right now...I'm pretty happy with #9. But you've given me ideas on thoughts to avoid in later stories. I don't want Thomas to come off as a simpleton.

BTW, loved the ouchie remark you made in answer. Gave me mad chuckles. One day, I really must meet you... And hopefully said meeting will not involve harrowing circumstance...

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #47 on: June 23, 2008, 06:47:51 pm »
Great stuff. I'm catching up on Endeavour out of order and I hope the moderate gravedigs aren't offensive. After having read #10 and then catching this one, I especially like that nothing was given away about the later fate of Chevy. For all intents and purposes, the story of Chevis Ford could have ended there and it would have been time to move on to another CO.

The reaction of Andrea is very believable for a person who, prior to her relationship with Ford, was VERY reserved and never let anyone too close. Very real.

Spock's final scene rings exceptionally true to me, a long time original series fan and reader of books like Diane Duane's Spock's world. It simply fits the Spock I know from all the literature and on-screen appearances.

Earlier in the story, I almost expected to see Spock having something like this short speech: "Commander, the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, or the one. Commodore Ford understands this, and that is why he has made the choice he has. Do not throw away your life, one of the lives he is trying to save, in a vain attempt to rescue him, or, more foolishly, die with him. If you will honor his sacrifice, live long and prosper."
This would probably have been met with a curse from Commander Thomas, from what I have come to understand of him.

In any case excellent work. A number of spelling errors or homonym issues that I really haven't the energy to go over, none of which lessen the impact of the story, despite knowing Ford eventually got back.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #48 on: June 23, 2008, 08:32:01 pm »
Ambassador Spock, quite wisely having read Commander Thomas' bio before boarding Endeavour, knew quite well that such a speech would have gotten him killed. If not then, later.

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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #49 on: June 24, 2008, 01:14:06 am »
I should have said, would have been met with at least a curse from Ben. In any case, my statement remains. You wrote Spock well. He rings true to the character as I know him.
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Re: Endeavour Story #9
« Reply #50 on: June 24, 2008, 08:05:47 pm »
*bows*

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