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Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« on: September 15, 2006, 11:15:47 pm »
This story is dedicated to the loving memory of my parents, especially my mom who recently passed away on March 15th of 2006. Both mom and dad will be greatly missed.
   Burton R. Gwinn Jr.                                Patricia Ann Gwinn
   6/5/45---4/12/05                                   5/18/48---3/15/06



Star Trek
Side Trip
CH. 1
   
   
   
   
   Captain’s Personal Log, Stardate: 9703.1

   A captain’s world can turn completely to hell in just an hour or two. That thought keeps running through my mind. It’s been four days since our engagement with the Gorn. The battleship and its escort under tow have out-paced us. Even though they’ll have to maintain low warp, we have no hope of tracking them to get out of this region of plasma. We’ll just have to trust our own navigational abilities to find a clear path to normal space. The paths we entered from are completely closed now.

   Most of our injured crew are back up on their feet with about twenty back on duty. Gravest among the injured was the XO’s case. Mister Thomas sustained grievous injury to spine and cranium, and also breathed in infectious microbes when his pressure suit was breached. Doctor Keller is doing what she can, but he needs Starbase facilities. If the swelling in his body doesn’t abate, he’ll never regain the use of his legs. Ben is my friend as well as my exec. His pain is my pain. When contact is restored with Fleet Command, I’ll log an official protest through diplomatic channels. That Gorn captain was out of her bounds...and her mind…

   Damage to the hull has almost been entirely repaired. Engineering says that we should get our aft phasers back later today and our aft shields should be online again any minute. Warp drive appears hopeless at this time. Ten of the twelve coils in the starboard nacelle were cut in half by direct hits from rail cannon projectiles. We have a few ideas about how to proceed, but I believe an allied space tow is our best option at this time. I am about to head to engineering to confer with Lieutenant Commander Tolin.

   End of log.


   
   Captain Chevis D. Ford allowed the gentle motion of his fall continue as the section of the ruined nacelle drew nearer. Beside him was his chief engineer, Lieutenant Commander Tolin. He and the Andorian officer had been out here, packed into EVA suits for the better part of an hour as they examined the damage to their engine from afar. The Gorn had hobbled them with but a single burst from their secondary armament.

   Far across from them as they free floated the distance sat the unblemished port nacelle. Its long silver-grey expanses of unmarked metal gleamed in the ionized light play about them. The long radiator strip of cooling machinery wrapped around the tubular engine in its entirety, bisecting the silver alloy with a line of black. In contrast, the shamble that the officers floated down toward was a disaster.

   Ford set his magnetic boots to standard and bent his legs to absorb the light shock of his landing. Tolin did likewise. Both stood now at the forward curvature of the wrecked engine, abaft of the saucer. The captain could see his men within the many windows, going about their duty as the great ship slowly crawled through plasma-filled space.

   Before them was an expanse of torn and twisted metal and polymer. The intercoolers were rent to shreds and the curved alloy protecting the driver coils within had been penetrated by no less than fifty projectiles. The damage was no less than that of two full phaser blasts delivered at close range. And the effect was the same. No warp drive.

   Ford eyed the scene in dismay as his engineer scanned it in detail with her tricorder. All of this had been scanned before. And by many teams before them. This tour was for the captain’s benefit only. He’d just had to see it. Now he stood with fists crammed into the fabric protecting his hips and growled.

   “Well…” He mumbled, “There’s something to be said for simpler technology…”

   “Yes,” Tolin’s accent almost sounded like a lisp at times. Her particular brand of speech did nothing, however, to camouflage the seething hostility beneath. “Their tritium bullets were very effective at tearing my engine apart.”

   There was no chance of repairing the injured coils, so Ford didn’t bother asking. They were fragile devices and full of fractures down to the microscopic level. The engineering staff would never be able to seal them all. Only two coils escaped harm; both in the far aft section. Neither coil had power; their leads were severed. The plasma flow to them could not be restored unless the other coils were repaired, or removed.

   “Propulsion on a single nacelle is lookin’ like our best bet, Chief.”

“It would be a long shot, Captain,” her voice returned through his helmet comm with skepticism. “Our coils are not arranged for such use.”

   “It’s been done before.” He reminded. He knew all to well what her response would be.

   “Indeed, Captain. But each time at a high degree of risk. And two ships met a bad fate in their attempt to reach home.”

   “The Exeter and the Aurora.” Ford remembered them well. Both had tried to get back home to their respective bases and both had plowed into the surface of the planet they had been orbiting. The Aurora had met her doom only seven years ago while he’d commanded the Gibbons.

   “The warp field generated by a single set of port aligned coils would be highly unstable. Piloting the ship in this tight field of plasma would be suicide.” Tolin objected further.

   “It would be a long shot…” Chevy agreed, his tone empty of emotion. There were so few options. “How about the idea of tearing out the wrecked coils and swapping some of the port assembly for them?”

   Tolin’s suit bobbled as she nodded her head. Ford imagined she was very uncomfortable with her antennae packed into that small helmet. He started trekking for the nearest EVA hatch in the interests of alleviating her the discomfort. He’d seen all he needed to.

   “The coil interchange would be the most effective course, sir.” Tolin said as she followed. “However, we should hold off till we exit this denser field of string phenomena. Should we encounter another adverse gravity sheer or a front of hard radiation, the EVA crew would face—“

   And emergency squawk emitted from their comm units. Commander Davenport’s voice came through immediately on its heels. “Hate to cut y’all’s field trip short, Cap’n. But we’ve got a wave of hard radiation incoming from starboard. Prepare for transport.”

   Ford and his engineer drew still as they awaited their beam-out. Frustration swelled in the captain. He was still incensed at being attacked by the Gorn, and still further perturbed at their inability to make repair. This wave of rads, and its impeccable timing, just showed him how much longer they would likely be delayed in getting the Endeavour mobile again. He was silently cursing to himself even when the blue transporter field swept him from the hull.


   
   
   
   
   Lieutenant Commander Ronald Davenport leaned closer to the briefing room table as he addressed the captain. The room was filled with the department heads representing each section of the ship. Each was in their full, standard uniform. Many of those uniforms had their maroon jackets open; a sign of the tiredness and strain that had been on them for some time now. Today, Ron sat in the XO’s unoccupied seat. He was not comfortable there, and so long as Mister Thomas was still aboard this ship, he never would be. He cleared his throat before he spoke.

   “Yes, Cap’n. I think our best, fastest route is to arrange ourselves a space tow.”

   Ford crinkled the side of his ruddy face with a smirk. Ron’s own face was round and at times jovial looking. He was and easy going man whom did things at his own pace. But today, as on many others, he was dead serious. The captain respected the ops chief’s effort to put himself before his fellow officers and propose an idea to the captain. Ron had been just as uncomfortable looking back when he was chief engineer. He did not like being in the limelight. But he did what he had to, just as he always had. Ford decided to help him out a bit by speeding it up.

“You’re about to ask me to let you go out there in a shuttle and hail Starbase Twenty-Three.”

   Davenport nodded.

   “That’s right.”

   Ford sat back, inhaling a slow breath of consideration. He chewed the inside of his lower lip. The dangers were apparent to every one present. A shuttle was ill protected to venture out there amid all that plasma. One good shift in the string patterns would fry them, either with a wave of radiation or a concentrated string of roiling plasma.

   “That’s a risky venture, Ops.”

   Ron nodded again. He knew it very well indeed.

   “I’ll have our best pilot at the helm.” He cocked his head toward the thin, tall Mister Bronstien. The young lieutenant nodded his own ascent to the notion. He was ready for something daring. Ford looked between them as he ran a hand over the smoothness of his bald head. He had several options before him. None was great. He could wait till they found a clearance in the storm, praying it didn’t suddenly get worse, and allow Tolin’s men to effect the coil swap plan. This was what he’d decided upon up till now, but waiting weeks to reach and area where repairs could be made and then having this region shift and ruin it all for them did not seem so appealing. He could also chance warping to a safer region on the one nacelle, but as the engineer had counseled him, that was too great a risk. Or…he could send this shuttle mission…

   “I won’t say I haven’t been tempted to order such a mission. But the danger is almost as great as trying to send a repair team to the outer hull. He glanced over to his chief science officer. The olive skinned Vulcan met his eyes with hers. Ford was coming to depend on this young woman quite a lot. “Surall, how far does your astrometrics department calculate this denser region stretches out to?”

   Surall did not refer to the notes she’d brought along with her on her PADD. Vulcan’s really didn’t need to take notes, even though they always seemed to… “Our long range array has been able to ascertain that the most dangerous area of this phenomena radiates out from us for at least another sixteen light days from our present position. At maximum impulse velocity, we will not reach a clear area for eighteen point three-six-four days. Barring further hampering changes in course during such time, that is.”

   “Eighteen days,” Ford repeated. “If we don’t have to back-track.”

   Ron caught Ford’s gaze and delivered his most reassuring look.

   “The shuttle Patricia can make it out of this region entirely within the next four days. A tug can reach us in five more. And we wouldn’t have to risk a hazardous EVA repair.”

   Ford’s expression turned to a playful kind of humor.

   “Sparky, you remember what happened the last time I let you play with a shuttlecraft…”

   Ron shrugged with feigned innocence.

   “That mountain got in my way, Cap’n. I swear it! This time there won’t be a planet or a mountain for light years!”

   The gathered senior officers sitting near to them chuckled in a needed, soft laughter, with the sole exception of Surall. This was how a good crew operated. And Ford had one of the best. In the last few weeks, they had really meshed into a cohesive unit. Those who were familiar with each other already acted much as a family. They would protect each other as one.

   Ford stood up from the rounded silver table. “Alright, Sparky. You got your shuttle. I’m gambling you’ll get help here and return safely before our situation gets any worse. Endeavour will continue on her current course at best speed. You’ll refit the Patricia with the best shields we can slap on her and go for help. Once you send your message, remain outside the string region time the tug comes and dock with her. I don’t want you chancing the storms twice. Draw up your plan and report to me within the hour on the details.”
   
   
****

This is the first story I started after my Mom died. It's pace may not be all that it could be. Also, as La'ra will note, that with a few exceptions, the story is a rip-off of the plotline of one of our last Trek RPGs... :)

Hope y'all find this one as enjoyable as the last 2!

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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #1 on: September 18, 2006, 09:39:05 am »
I like it, and you have to realise that not every story has to rip along at a fair clip. Slower stories are called "character pieces", or if you prefer, "fluff". :-D

I really like the coil-transfer idea, but I'm pretty sure that's a dockyard job. Either way, I'm going to keep that in mind for my own tech background. Good job!

If it's 16 light-days to get out of the storm, why will it only take 18-odd days to get out in impulse? What's your top impulse speed? The ST Encyclopedia has full impulse as 0.25 light-speed, which means it should be 16*4=64 days to get out. The shuttle must be going at 4c (warp 1.5 or so) to get out in 4 days.

Yes, this is me getting bogged down in the technical details, but I'l just like to know. Heh.
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #2 on: September 18, 2006, 11:13:30 am »
I believe Jolly uses the idea that .25c is the usually called for 'full impulse power', but that the sublight engines are actually capable of much faster top-end speed.  It's just that going faster than .25c is inefficient...it's more cost effective to just go to warp...except in combat or situations such as the one presented in this story.

That might not be out of the Tech Manual, but it might've been in the DS9 reference...I know for certain it was in the Last Unicorn Games Trek RPG, which had some good material in it.
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2006, 09:58:36 pm »
Many references lead to  a high 'c' velocity for impulse.

Yes, some of it comes from the technical manual (both TNG and DS9). Though these days I temper my use of those since I discovered that their listing for the effects of a level 16 TNG phaser pistol blast being about the same blast yield described for a 2.5 megaton nuclear detonations...

Where I also get this is from a canon source. In Star Trek: TMP, right around the 'wormhole' accident, Sulu states they are at impulse power and holding at "Warp Point Eight". (.8c) I took this to be the best impulse velocity the ship could make. I also decided that the Excelsior could probably do .9c, given the 15 year design leap. This also coincides with the Last Unicorn game system's stats for the base model Excelsior.

The idea of how long it would take to cross 16 light-days of space at that impulse velocity was purely off the top of my head and is immaterial. I also intentionaly try to keep what 'full' impulse is kinda vague, which is pretty well what they did in the show(s). But if pressed, I'd have to go with what the tech manual says, and label it at .25.

Them's my thoughts on the idea.

And as to the coil swap being a yard job, you are indeed correct. But, trapped out in dangerous space with no real way of calling for help...one tends to find ways to rig something up...like the American ship in WWII which had her bow ripped off in a storm. Said ship's crew stopped off and built her a new one of wood so she could sail more safely on the way home.

I'm glad you liked what you read thusly. La'ra has again responded by answering your questions rather than stating what he actually thought of the story itself...but this is normal...

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« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2006, 06:40:33 pm »
It's not just that it's inefficient. Relativistic stresses on equipment are cumulative. They don't kick in noticeably until about .33 cee, though, in theory, so Starfleet has full impulse a .25 cee in the regs.
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2006, 07:15:40 pm »
Can't say I quite remember that being mentioned...anywhere. But oh-well. Techno-babble and ideas over speeds we'll probably never reach don't matter so much as the telling of the story. So, continue to enjoy.

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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #6 on: September 20, 2006, 04:30:45 am »
I'm glad you liked what you read thusly. La'ra has again responded by answering your questions rather than stating what he actually thought of the story itself...but this is normal...

I'll probably stay quiet on this one until after I'm no longer worried about accidentally letting a spoiler slip. :singing:
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #7 on: September 20, 2006, 05:16:01 pm »
Some of it's not mere technobabble. The math indicates that right around .33 cee is where relatavistic effects start to get ugly. As for the rest, IIRC, there was some comment made in The Wounded Sky on the subject when they engaged in warp and high sublight combat with a squadron of Klingons.
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #8 on: September 20, 2006, 09:55:50 pm »
Can't say I have any idea what the 'Wounded Sky' is (unless it's an episode of TNG...it rings a bell...). And they can come up with math all day long on 'relativistic effects', but when it's all said and done, we ain't gonna know a thing about what does what till we try and build this crap.

My tech-babble is based on what I see in Trek and a lil' of my own imagination. I don't base this off any tech manual, nor novel/comic/website/video game (tho I take liberties on cool looking ship models...). The closest I've come with this series to any of that is giving the Gorn gauss weaponry, and that was only to please my friend La'ra, the Gorn fan.

I'm using the movies (1-6) as a guide to what the ships can do, tempered by some of the TV shows where I find gaps and unknowns. I'm still flabber-gasted that this discussion got its own page here, but...Trekkies are Trekkies, I guess. Back when I was so heavy into the tech manuals, I'd have been right in there on it with my own opinions.

I'm glad this got everyone's attention in the very least...

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« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2006, 05:51:16 am »
It's one of Diane Duane's Star Trek books, and a masterpiece if you ask me. I love the character of K't'lk. (She's a Hamalki female. Looks like a giant glass spider and shes absolutely irrepressible.)
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2006, 09:43:48 pm »
Ah...one of those books.

I like Peter David's old novels, myself. And that one author me and La'ra like so much...uses Sulu, Uhura and Chekov so much... Can't remember the name right off the top of my bald head...

Diane Duane and Diana Carey novels leave a bad taste in my proverbial trek-mouth. Never have made it through a whole one with the exception of The Great Starship Race. Not a great novel, mind you, but entertaining. And not totally sure right now if either of them even wrote it...

Oh, it's been so long since we've had consistantly good Trek novels... Seems to me the TNG series years spurred TOS lovers into creative action. After that... :-[

Anyway, I stay away from using novels as tech sources.

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« Reply #11 on: September 21, 2006, 10:13:51 pm »
Alrighty, to get this pagfe back on track, I'm gonna post some more story.  :)

Some of this chapter, and maybe the story itself, might be overly dramatic. Or maybe the oposite. I don't write things like this very often and need the practice. If y'all have hints on 'fluff' stories, please present them. But, without further adu...


CH. 2
   
   

   
   Lieutenant Commander Davenport lowered the data PADD he’d been perusing and eyeballed the senior helmsman as he exited the shuttle parked in the center of Bay One. Lieutenant Bronstien was just as tall as the ops chief, which was saying something. He was half as thin though, and this made Ron feel overweight despite his grade-passing build. The dark haired boy held an air of menace in his eye as he gazed at the senior officer.

   “Does the shuttle meet with your expectations, Mister Bronstien?” Ron drawled.

   “Indeed it does, Mister Davenport.” Johnathan responded. He bobbed a bit on the balls of his feet. The kid was itching to get out there and ride the ionized rapids. Davenport had never been such a daredevil. He considered this lad to be a bit touched.

   “The deflector generators are all tied in. All we need now are the final provisions and the skipper’s okay.” He told the young LT. Bronstien nodded and looked the Patricia over. She was a Type J cargo shuttle, which had been modified again and again over the last six years. Her warp drive was good for sustained warp for longer duration than any craft currently aboard ship. She had racks for mounting capitol ship-grade phaser emitters and an extensive sensor refit. Now she had three new heavy shield generators to go with her numerous other additions.

   The after main hatch opened with a loud drone of machinery. In from the causeway beyond came several enlisted ratings bearing antigrav units laden with supplies. Right behind them slumped their tired captain. Ron waited silently till the men closed in and began onloading their wares onto the shuttle. Ford handed Ronald a manifest.

   “One emergency long-range comm unit, seven cases of field rations, three complete field medkits, four EVA suits, one emergency life support generator and ten pounds of coffee with a battery powered coffee maker.” Ford rattled off as Davenport smirked over the last entry.

   “Ten pounds of coffee, huh? Think that’ll be enough for two weeks?”

   Ford made pained face.
   “You’ll just have to make it stretch, Mister Davenport…”

   The operations officer shrugged whimsically. “Oh well, when I get down to about four pounds, I’ll just dump a man out the airlock for every pound we use after that.”

   Ford chucked his friend on the shoulder.

   “Officer’s thinking, Commander. I knew I promoted you for a reason.” Ford watched for a moment in silence as Lieutenant Bronstien and Smith checked off the provisions aboard the craft. “You just don’t get killed out there, Ron. We’ve lost enough people out here on this mission. And none of them for any good reason.”

   Ron nodded, saying nothing. All those deaths were riding heavily on Ford’s mind. The ops chief carried his own anxt for his treatment by the Gorn. They’d shot him down like a dog after he’d rigged up life support for their unborn children. Everything that they were struggling with now was the result of a rash captain’s bad judgement.

   “I almost wish I’d accepted the Gorn’s offer for a tow…” The captain eyed Davenport searchingly. He wanted to know how his friend felt about the decision. If they had accepted the tow, they would be out of the string region and well under way toward help by now. Ron clasped Chevy on his drooping shoulder.

   “I’d have made the same choice, Skipper. That captain wasn’t trust worthy.”

   Ford looked away, mulling that over in his mind.

   “Just make sure you get your people back home, Commander.”

   He walked away then, leaving Ron to finish outfitting the Patricia for the trip.
   


   
   
   
   The portside main door to Shuttle Bay One reeled slowly open before the Patricia. Ron watched it open through the tinted barrier of the forward porthole and keyed the main comm. “Bridge, this is Shuttle Seven. Ready for launch.”

   “Understood, Shuttle Seven,” Came back an unfamiliar voice over the speaker. “You are cleared for departure. Good luck.”

   It’s bad luck to wish someone good luck, Ron thought to himself. He might not believe in all superstitions, but he certainly kept track of them. He sighed as he began to key a series of controls. “Thank you, bridge. Seven out.”

   The ops chief gave a gesture to his pilot. Bronstien plied his hands about the console before him and their tiny ship lifted. They passed through the bluish forcefield holding in the bay’s atmosphere and began to slowly traverse the distance beneath the slope of the saucer section’s bottom. Once clear of their home ship, the helmsman poured on more speed to take them off toward their journey.

   “We’re clear, Commander.”

   Ron was silent a moment, going over lists and considerations in his mind. Then he nodded to himself. “Alright, Lieutenant. Set me a course of 047 mark 085. Accelerate to warp factor one till we reach the first way point and then edge her up to maximum warp.”

   Only a few days ago, Bronstien had kept Davenport teetering on the edge of his seat by flying at impulse power through all this soup about them. Now they were in a much more fragile ship, and he was ordering the kid to fly them through the same stuff at faster than light speeds… Ron appreciated the irony of the situation. He still wasn’t comfortable with this, however.

   Johnathan caught the flicker of nervousness in the other’s hands as he keyed the warp drive. Holding a straight face, he looked suddenly at a phantom display. “Uh-oh!”

   “Uh-Oh?” Ron parroted back, eyes wide. “What uh-oh?”

   “Oh, it’s nothing…”

   “You let me decide what’s nothing!”

   The flash of subspace penetration pulsed before their porthole and they were off.
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   Captain Ford paused before the doors that would allow him entrance into the interior of sickbay. He still was not used to this. Coming here every day and seeing his oldest friend laid up on that damned bed, immobile, was a trial. To be sure, the captain’s anguish was nothing compared to what Thomas himself was dealing with. But it was taxing none the less on an already burdened starship commander.

Ford took a deep breath, and allowed himself to center his thoughts. Once prepared, he forced himself over the invisible mental barrier and entered the medical ward. The main admissions center of the circular constructed complex was a warm, fuzzy shade of Fleet blue and thickly carpeted. The waiting chairs matched the floors and the walls, and the end tables placed here and there were faux wood. The nurse’s desk faced the captain, and Nurse Galloway nodded kindly to her skipper upon recognizing him. She said nothing to Ford as he quietly made past her station and entered the recovery/observation ward.

Mister Thomas was laying on the very last biobed in the ward. A small meal table had been erected over his torso and he’d propped himself up to better look at the contents thereon. Ford smirked at the sight of what his XO was doing with that table covered in data PADDs and took a swift step that way to join his companion. The blonde form of Doctor Andrea Keller was soon blocking him.
“Doctor.” He greeted her. The slim, short woman wore a typical white medical coat over her olive green duty tunic. Her shirt boasted the older turtleneck collar that Ford had hated so much over the last twenty years. He was ever so glad to finally have the optional slim collared tunic.

“Captain, might I have a word with you about your Number One?”

“I went to the head before I got here, thanks.”

Keller’s eyes clenched so much at Chevy’s attempted joke that he believed they might cross. He stepped back and forced himself to relax a bit more. His gaze centered fully upon hers. “Alright, Doc. What about the XO?”

“He has been ordering the yeomen and deck attendants to bring him data work to go over. As you can see, he has quite a pile of them.” She complained her voice low. She was doing her best to keep from being over heard, but Ford saw his XO glance over a raised PADD and smile. Ford kept his own grin at bay.

“Well…whatever keeps him happy…”

“That’s just it, sir.” She pressed, making a halting gesture with the palm of her hand as though she believed he was about to bolt past her any second. “I would prefer it if the Commander found something more relaxing to bide his time. He is supposed to be on the mend, you know. Data work is not what one reviews for fun.”

“What do you suggest?”

“Anything. He could use those PADDs to read a book or galactic news…”

“I’m not sure Thomas even knows how to read.”

“Sir--?”

Ford looked over the round-faced doctor and motioned to his friend.

“Hey, Ben. You know how to read?”

“Nope!”

Ford looked back to the doc with a playful shrug. “See there, Doctor. Can’t read a lick.”

Keller’s hands found their way to her slim hips. “Then how is he doing all that data work?”

“Mostly he just amuses himself with the graphs we make him and all the pretty pictures. Then he just puts his thumb up to every yellow box he sees…Which got him in trouble with the yellow skinned women on Triannus Three. Thank you, Doctor.” Ford moved past Keller, whom he left in such a confused state she just stared after him.

Ford went to settle into what had become his customary chair beside the narrow bio platform Ben rested on. Thomas lowered his PADD just enough to eye his captain conspiratorially. “You know I only had the yeoman department bring me these to keep her from hovering over me all the damn time.”

Chevis made a false frown and shrugged. “I know how you just love paperwork.”

“How’re repairs going?”

“They’re not, really. The whole area around Endeavour is currently saturated in heavy radiation. I can’t send any hull teams out. I’ve ordered full impulse, so maybe we’ll get to clearer space soon.”

Ben thought about the news in silence.

“I’m wishing now that I’d pulled my team back before we contacted the Gorn.” Seeing the captain’s face immediately darken,
Thomas swiftly changed the subject. “Any report on our shuttle team?”

Ford nodded.

“Davenport reports they’ve reached the first planned waypoint. Ten hours till the next, then they’re off our scopes.”

Ben’s expression sagged upon his broad, husky face.

“I’d give anything to be on that mission with ‘em.”

Ford could see the wetness welling within the exec’s blue eyes. His own heart sank at the pitiful sight. He wanted to club that Gorn captain down…beat her bloody… This was his friend! Did the Gorn even recognize friendships? Did they have the basest idea of the concept? Surely. But how could that captain have been so blatantly out of bounds? Had she been insane? She’d brought on the deaths of numerous Starfleet crewmen and officers, and lost several of her own men in the violent boarding of this ship. What had it been for?

There was a deathly real chance that Benjamin Thomas might never walk on his own again. Dying in the line of duty was one thing, and readily accepted as part of the service. But being made lame… Crippled… That would be hard to live with. Science could cure many afflictions, but some things were beyond even today’s medicine. Only luck and a load of carefully monitored antibiotics could help Ben now.

Ford looked up at his XO. He grasped the larger man’s shoulder. Thomas barely felt it. He was tingly from the neck down. He smiled back anyway. There was nothing they could do to alter the past. They could not track down the Gorn and exact revenge. They had neither the motive capacity nor the lack of principle to do such.

“As with every thing else in our Starfleet lives, Mister Thomas…” Chevy told him, “We’ll fight our way back to right. This is only temporary.”

Ben closed his eyes for a long time. And when he felt controlled enough to open them back up, Captain Ford was still there. Just like he always had been.
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And there's another chapter! Most of 'em are pretty short in this story.

Hope it's enjoyed!

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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #12 on: September 23, 2006, 09:22:14 am »
Jesus Guv, sorry about your parents man, losing both within a year I can't imagine. Your Dad was only 11 years older than mine is, makes me think.
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #13 on: September 24, 2006, 01:19:36 pm »
Guv my condolances.
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2006, 11:50:53 am »
This was a great chapter. Not merely "I liked it" or "good job". This was a great chapter. It bears repeating. Now I'll tell you why.

Only one minor nitpick before the good, and here it is:

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“I’d have made the same choice, Skipper. That captain wasn’t trust worthy.”

I'm not sure 'trustworthy' is the right word here. I'm sure it's true to the way they feel, but do they really think the Gorn would have towed them into a plasma storm to destroy them? While some probably do feel that way, is it an objective, legitimate concern of the command officers, or is it just their anger speaking? If it was anger then Davenport was out of line, and he should have used a different phrase, maybe something along the lines of it going against the grain to accept the help of those who ambushed them (I can't think of anything specific at the moment).

So, to the good:

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“I almost wish I’d accepted the Gorn’s offer for a tow…” The captain eyed Davenport searchingly. He wanted to know how his friend felt about the decision. If they had accepted the tow, they would be out of the string region and well under way toward help by now. Ron clasped Chevy on his drooping shoulder.

The fact that he asked this question (and it is a recurring theme throughout this chapter) has erased all my criticisms of your previous story and the motivations for the battle. I'll take it as a lesson learned for my own writing.  :thumbsup:

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Ford took a deep breath, and allowed himself to center his thoughts. Once prepared, he forced himself over the invisible mental barrier and entered the medical ward.

Excellent characterisation. I can clearly see his struggle and it is very real to me, as everyone has done this for something to some degree or another.

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Her shirt boasted the older turtleneck collar that Ford had hated so much over the last twenty years. He was ever so glad to finally have the optional slim collared tunic.

Good tying in with Established Trek. I think the Turtlenecks look better, but I don't know what it'd be like to wear them. I get the feeling I'd appreciate the low collar, as I hate wearing ties and having a constricted throat. I'm like Dr. McCoy pulling at his dress uniform. :D

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“I’m wishing now that I’d pulled my team back before we contacted the Gorn.” Seeing the captain’s face immediately darken,
Thomas swiftly changed the subject.

Again, I love that everyone is second-guessing themselves becasuse of the consequences of what they did. I hadn't realised where you were going with the aftermath of the battle, and this makes me wish I'd kept my trap shut to begin with. *grin*
(Then again, maybe my criticism helped you focus the aftermath so precisely. *pats self on the back*)

The by-play between Ford, Thomas and Dr. Keller is pretty funny. I'm not sure about Ford's schoolboy toilet humour reflecting well on him as a Starfleet captain, but it's still funny. Also, Thomas's "data work with pictures" is really funny too. Good job.  :thumbsup:

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“As with every thing else in our Starfleet lives, Mister Thomas…” Chevy told him, “We’ll fight our way back to right. This is only temporary.”

Ben closed his eyes for a long time. And when he felt controlled enough to open them back up, Captain Ford was still there. Just like he always had been.

Beautiful line. Chokes you all up.

Man, I'm starting to get into the whole "Larry's Patented Big-Ass Review" style here...

So, just in case you didn't get it: I like it.  ;D
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #15 on: September 25, 2006, 01:52:27 pm »
Gonna echo Andy, here.  This is one of the best individual chapters of yours I've read, and since it comes hot on the heels of a pretty great intro, I'm excited about the rest of this story.

You even made me laugh while I was reading it.  You know how I read...that's a feat.  I usually don't start laughing at the funny parts until I'm thinking about the story twenty minutes later. ;D  That was the 'Thomas can't read sequence, incidentally'.  Sounds like a BS story we'd give some poor, unsuspecting stranger.

Davenport, incidentally, is probably becoming my favorite character.

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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #16 on: September 25, 2006, 10:44:16 pm »
Why thank you all!

I was wondering how this story would be recieved. I am very happy that its being so well liked.

This one was probably among the hardest to write, though when I look back at the data file on the document history, it didn't take me long to write it. Seemed like it took forever at the time.

Some of the dialogue and scene ideas were originally in the end of the second story, but I removed them from #2 to give it a tidier ending and revamped them for this story.

Andy: Thank you espescially for the review!
Davenport's use of the term 'untrustworthy' came from a loss for words at the time of writing it. I looked for a better way for him to convey what he was thinking, but in the end, left it the way it was to reflect his own confusion and loss for words. He'd been shot by the Gorn and his ship brutally assaulted. He truely didn't know what else to say.
Captain Ford's use of 'toilet humor' draws primarilly from my own sense of humor. It's not always apprieciated (such as that one time on someone else's story) but it is definitely me... So Ford has the same bad humor. And he likes to confuse people as much as I do. No it doesn't reflect well on a vaunted Starfleet captain, but Ford doesn't care, and nor do I. It is, after all, in his character.
The line you quoted 'this is only temporary...' is one I almost scrapped. I thought the whole line might have been too sappy, but gambled on leaving it in there. I'm glad it evoked the right feeling and am very gratified.
I like to throw in little bits for continuity, thus the occasional bit about the turtleneck shirts. Ford is me, and I can't wear anything around my neck like that. Ties seem to be the one exception, oddly enough, but then, I love wearing suits. Don't know why...I just do... But if I really had to wear one of those STII:TWOK uniforms, I'd be in a loony bin by now.
I'm very glad you like this story. If I can impress you this much, I am indeed doing well!

La'ra:
I find it amusing that Davenport is becoming your favorite. Care to list reasons?
I also figured you would love the joke sequence. It's part of the reason it's in there to begin with. Some humor has to lighten up the morose mood of the sickbay scenes, and I figured something you would like would be just the thing. You're my 'story-humor- sounding board anyway. If I don't see you laugh at smoething I wrote, I know I missed what I was aiming for...

To those who sound their condolences, Thank You. I'll always miss Mom and Dad, but it was easier to lose them than to watch them suffer the way they were. There were never two people I knew who loved each other more.

Thanks to all, once again!
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #17 on: September 25, 2006, 10:57:20 pm »
I wasn't gonna post so soon, but you all made me so damn happy, I'm busting to get this one out. I hope I don't dissappoint after such aclaim!



CH. 3




The low, rhythmic strumming of Lieutenant Bronstien’s acoustic guitar filled the cabin space within the cargo shuttle. Commander Davenport lay stretched out on the narrow bunk in the cargo compartment and listened to the lieutenant’s talent. The kid wasn’t a professional. But he could be if he could find the time to develop his skill further. Ideas wafted through the operations officer’s mind about starting a ship’s band. Many vessels boasted groups of musicians who performed for their crews.
Johnathan continued on in a slow rendition of a hard rock song from twenty years prior. Ron was no fan of hard music, but he believed the song belonged to Sable Riot… They’d been and old school kind of metal band modeled after various bands of the late twentieth century. Davenport had to admit, however, that once slowed down, their tune was quite rhythmic.

In the cockpit section, Lieutenant Smith and Engineering Specialist McCoy manned the controls till their next course change. Neither was a specialized helmsman, but both were trained shuttle pilots. Bronstien had relinquished the controls about four hours prior upon entering what he called ‘safe’ space. Ronald could hear the two younglings discussing family lineage as the engineering rating tried to convince the star struck officer that she was not related in anyway to any Starfleet medical officers aboard Enterprise. This discussion had been escalating now for some time and had both Davenport and Bronstien smiling.

“I swear it, I am not from Georgia and I don’t have an uncle named Leonard. Now give it up! Sir!”

Ron leaned off his small rack.

“Hey, now kids, don’t make me pull this ship over! I’ll tan both your hides!”

“Sounds kinky!” Johnathan remarked from his side of the aft cabin. Ron shot him a mock-bemused expression.

“Don’t you start in, Mister. I’m supercharged on Juan Valdez and ready to scrap.” He held up his ever-present coffee mug for emphasis. The lieutenant grinned back. An alarm from the nav computer drew both their gaze and halted John’s constant strumming.

“Coming up on second waypoint, Commander.” Noah called back from the operations seat. Johnathan set his guitar down and moved forward to replace McCoy at the helm. Ron moved close to the cabin bulkhead and leaned into the control space.

“Hail the captain.” Davenport said.

Smith tapped several keys in succession and nodded.

“Endeavour, this is Shuttle Seven. We are nearing Waypoint Two, over.”

Static rolled through the open comm line. Finally, a scratchy rendition of Ford’s voice became audible. “---erstood---loosing radio con--- . ---trying to boost gain but--- will be out of sensor---“

Ron eyed the boy at the operations seat. Smith was already trying to clear up the transmission, but having little success. The blonde headed kid looked back at him with a frown.

“Best I can do, Commander.”

Ronald nodded and cleared his voice.

“Roger that, Endeavour. We can barely read you. Sensors show the way to be reasonably clear for the next two light days of our position. Do you copy?”

“Affirmative--- Seven. After --- you will be out of comm range--- Try not to get dead---“

Ron smirked at the comment.

“Copy that, Cap’n. Thanks for the sentiment. Seven out.”

Ronald smiled a small smile to himself as he watched the tightly packed cloud patterns flow by. Were this not such a dangerous place, it would have been relaxing. He hunkered in the hatchway for a time longer, sipping black coffee and enjoying one of nature’s most beautifully hazardous formations.

Another alarm was soon screaming, this one an emergency proximity siren. Ron looked over to Johnathan, his serene moment broken all to hell. “What the hell’s that, Lieutenant?”

Bronstien shook his head.

“Don’t know, Commander. Deflectors just snapped on. Sensors have detected…”

Noah interjected in a loud voice.

“It’s a large ionic discharge, Commander! Approaching from 273 mark 068!”

Ron braced himself within the bulkhead hatch and motioned for the red headed engineer to prepare herself. McCoy strapped herself in to the small passenger bench aft and pulled a status monitor close. Ron looked down on the drawn face of his helmsman. “Evasive?”

“Too big.” Was the answer. Ron could see a frighteningly large sickle shaped torrent of energy coming into view at the port side of the viewscreen. From what little he could discern at this angle, it was still enough to chill his nerves. And so soon into the voyage, too…

Bronstien was putting the Pat into a hard starboard turn, hoping that he could reverse course before running out of time. Davenport did not place much hope in the maneuver.

“Can you out run it?”

“Too late!”

The viewport before them flashed alight in blue energy and the shuttle rolled. This was the last impression Davenport could gather from the impact before his vision faded out and darkness took him.
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“Captain!”

Ford swung the conn toward the ops console and the enlisted rating manning it. The unfamiliar man’s voice carried in it a serious note of concern that made the captain’s heart plunge an inch or so. “What is it ops?”

Sir…I’ve lost Shuttle Seven’s transponder signal.”

Ford swung his chair to face his most experienced sensor officer, Lieutenant Surall. Surall was already peering into her main scope; any order for her to confirm operation’s report was unnecessary. The brown skinned Vulcan’s brows knit into a clenched furrow. “Confirmed, Captain. I no longer read the Patricia’s coded signal.”

“Her warp signature?”

“Indications are negative. Reviewing recorded sensor data.”

Chevis stood up and slowly walked closer to the blue painted rail between the command section and the science console. Among the bullet riddled stations adorning the bridge deck, science was the only one completely restored to its original condition. Each and every other post surrounding the captain bore evidence of the Gorn’s violence. Even his conn was a battered and pieced-together jalopy of its former self. Ford had felt that science was first and foremost among the main duty stations. It served as the eyes and ears of the ship. Anything else could be handled from engineering or auxiliary control. But science was primarily nestled on Deck One, the main bridge. Finally, Surall looked up from her screens.

“Shuttle Seven appears to have encountered a sizable wave of ionized energy from the plasma front at bearing 347 mark 005. This string extends ahead of us as far as our sensors can detect. The energy levels of this wave are in excess of five hundred thousand Cochrans. I doubt the shuttle’s shields could have sustained even a fraction of—“

Ford jabbed a finger at her to cut her off. He’d have nothing to do with further reports of crew casualties. “Initiate a full sensor sweep of the affected area immediately, Lieutenant! Find that shuttle!” He turned on the communications spec manning the port-aft console. “Comm, hail the shuttle! Keep hailing till you get them!”

The young lady at the ravaged and barely operable station nodded and turned to her instruments. “Shuttle Patricia, this is USS Endeavour, please respond. Shuttle Patricia…”

Several of the bridge crew had stopped to stare in concern at their captain, particularly among the ratings who were in the midst of repairs on the damaged bridge equipment. Ford ignored them all. He realized he was acting aggravated and frantic. But those were his men out there. Men he’d ordered out into harm’s way to do a job for his crippled ship. A ship which remained in a crippled condition because he had been too proud and angry to accept the Gorn captain’s offer of aid. He’d argued with himself over sending them out there. And he’d gambled on their ability to survive and bring home help.

To have those men killed so soon and so ineffectually was something he could not accept. Nor was he about to give up on them. His face was flushed and warm feeling. His chest felt as though an elephant were sitting on him. He wondered how many among the crew had noticed his discomfort, but only in a vague, analytical sort of way. His eyes bore down on his comm spec.

Finally she turned back to him, face downcast and eyes refusing to meet her skipper’s.

“Sorry, sir. No response from Shuttle Seven on any frequency.”

Ford whirled back on science.

“Lieutenant?”

“The region is far too ionized from cloud activity to lock onto anything as small as a shuttlecraft.” Without the aid of some kind of signaling device or an active warp signature, our chances of finding the Patricia are slim.”

Surall reported everything with all the unemotional detachment of a programmed machine. Ford knew Vulcans well enough to know that this was not meant to anger or dishearten, but it did both none the less. Ford stalked away from her, fists clenched. He felt ineffectual and lame. Much as his command was at the moment. He would have to remedy this.

“Continue scanning the area with all available instruments and send out a hail at regular intervals.” He paused at the port side of the bridge rail; eyes locked on the bullet holes in the blue turbolift doors before him. “Nechayev, you have the bridge. I’ll be in engineering.”
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A short chapter. But it's where things get rolling lil' more. Hope y'all like it.

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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #18 on: September 27, 2006, 02:46:17 am »
You got me hooked. It's kinda like a rollercoaster ride for me. I don't really want to find out whats next cause i know i'll become sick but i'm facinated and exited to see the rest. Though this does not make me sick I definatly groan in symphaty everytime something additionally bad happens. And I still want more!
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Re: Endeavour Story #3: Side Trip
« Reply #19 on: September 27, 2006, 10:41:31 am »
Yes, this was another good one Guv. Your character banter is nice and rerlaxing, and your danger well executed.

Keep em coming.
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