Ya, but that's a condor DN. Not a Hawk hull, and that is commentary from an observer. My reference includes those from SFB modules, Rulebook and section R4.
Whatever, we can argue this point over and over. Yours is an excellent design, looks similar to the SFB hawk illustrations, but resembles too closely the aft hull of the K series for my personal tastes. When I think Romulan design, not kestrel hull, I think of a bird. Like the Fasa Winged Defender or Whitewind cruisers. I also think of the flowing blended aesthetical beauty of the sfb hawk illustrations... Either or.
Your path for this model is unique. And it's likeable. I like it. You cant ask for more when modeling something new. You'll always have those that pick and peck.
That being said, I'm not in love with this design concept. It's reminds me of a girfriend I'd f*ck, but not date exclusively.
If you were willing to pimp your services, sure, I'd ask for a different secondary hull... But hey, there's nothing wrong with yours. You have a unique look and the texture package you put together makes it (EDIT for Italics)
top notch. You could do up a fleet of these and I'm sure they'd sell. I might even buy one... or two.
EDIT2: The more I look at this model the more I like it. Those make dangerous girlfriends, ya know...