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Settling In
« on: October 20, 2005, 07:29:50 am »
This story isn't really ready for a full-fledged start, but the first chapter was easy enough. Got up at 4 am and had to write. Hope this is palatable...

Settling In




CHAPTER ONE
Outside the Goesa’vaina Starsystem,
February 23, 2274,
RIS Ce’vash




Commander Virinia was beginning to feel the hunter’s exhilaration as her vessel closed in for the kill. She had been stalking her prey for two hours now, not the longest of hunts, but one made all the sweeter when she thought of just who it was she was bringing down. Before her pristine Gallant Wing-Class Warbird, and sitting next to helpless in space, the USS Endeavour was centered in her bridge viewscreen. The huge, lumbering grey-white human ship drifted ahead on what little motive power was left to her, still trailing behind traces of drive plasma and atmosphere from within her rent hull. Her once smooth and cylindrically shaped engineering hull was warped, bloated and ruptured from within from what the Klingons had done to her two days prior.  Her slotted, shell shaped hangerbay doors were twisted and torn outward, the decks within blackened and pitted. Her nacelles were dark, unpowered.

Captain Sharp was about as helpless as he had ever been.

This did not lessen the thrill of the hunt for the young Romulan commander, though. Sharp was still a cunning adversary. The chance to rid the Star Empire of his menace was not one to be passed up or taken lightly. You hunted him as though he was a viable threat, or you did not hunt him at all. Those who had attempted to take him and his ship down presumptuously had paid with their lives.
The Ce’vash closed with her prey, who as yet remained blissfully unaware as she licked her wounds. Endeavour seemed to think she was safe all alone out here, with plenty of breathing room between her and the fleet she’d fled from. Sharp’s sensors continued on their standard deep scanning routine, scouring the area for any vessel closing in. He had thus to get an emission return from the Ce’vash’s cloaking screen, however.

“Weapons officer, range to target?” Virinia asked, unable to fully avoid whispering the inquiry. It was an age-old habit of the service. It added to the sense that one was sneaking quietly up on an adversary.

“Twenty-thousand ven, Commander.”

“Speed still dead-slow, Commander.” The steersman chimed in as well.

Virinia’s second in command, Subcommander Iia Prynn, approached and stood silently next to her. Virinia found the officer’s proximity comforting, even if the woman was Tal’Shiar. Iia was caught up in the moment herself. The hunting and stalking. The thrust of the blade into the prey’s throat… It had an unmistakable allure that one couldn’t deny after having a taste. Her hazel eyes danced with a hidden fire and brought a smile to the commander’s full lips.

“Weapon status?”

Again, Lieutenant Joved answered, never having to look his screens over to know what they said. He could almost feel the details they would be telling him. “Main and secondary torpedoes charged to full. Main weapon set to enveloping warhead. Disruptors primed at full power. Targeting locked manually. My target is their stardrive hull and fuel center.”

“We approach from seven points off her right wing, Commander,” Iia stated, her eye turning to Virinia in a measuring manner. “And range grows short. Are we ready to attack?”

“We attack.” Virinia assured her, stepping forward and past the circular main controls station that took up most of the bridge’s central core. “Set final targeting resolutions and fire on my command. Drop the cloak!”

The shrill cloaking alarm called out as crimson tracers flashed along the bulkheads. Virinia’s heart began to pound and the singing in her ears grew loud. But something had just changed…

At the second beat of the alarm, Joved turned half out of his seat to look upon her. There was puzzlement, bordering on fear in his face. “The target raises shields!”

Virinia looked back to the viewer, just in time to see the battered cruiser dip her starboard side and whirl upon her. The blinding flash of weapons fire lashed out and the entire bridge lurched backward. Virinia tumbled past the helm station, slamming headlong into the forward viewer like some grotesque snow angel and remaining there as terrible forces assailed her ship. The thunder and cacophony of direct phaser and torpedo hits thudded in her head, as though they specifically assaulted her.

Where had she gone wrong?




USS Endeavour.




“Energy surge! Bearing 150 mark 031! Five thousand kilometers!”

Captain Sharp snapped his head away from the starboard-side science station where Commander Jeremy made his report and locked eyes on the pilots conning his ship. “HET now! Bring her around! Fire Mister Ford!”

As the cruiser labored to complete the High Energy Turn, the stars on forward main viewer spiraled round to show the image of the quickly coalescing Romulan warship as she dropped her invisibility screen. She was of the wide, saucer hulled Gallant Wing-Class light cruiser, presently more than a match for the crippled starship Endeavour. The Warbird shimmered and became solid like a ghost in an old movie, her weapons ports aglow in fiery red and green.

At navigations, Ford’s fingers descended on the final targeting controls and pressed down on the Mode 1 key. Endeavour shook with the reverberations of launching photon torpedoes and the scrawing noise of the entire forward phaser array filled the darkened bridge. Light-spiked images of roiling torpedoes and brilliant, alternating pulses of phaser energy shot out at the nearly solidified vessel. They struck the Romulan hard, rolling her down on her bow and spinning her half a turn to port as her hull buckled and blew apart under Starfleet’s tender caress. The green glow in her nacelle vents dimmed under the attack, and atmosphere began to boil out from within the raptor painted craft. Another trio of photons shattered the Wing’s left warp engine, scattering sparkling debris all about.

Ford lashed out with another, single burst of phaser fire, this time specifically targeted for the warbird’s engineering decks. The emitters of the lower saucer bank spat fire like an ancient set of twin machineguns. The beams chewed into the armor of the lower hull, ruining the ostentatious paint job the Romulans had spent so much time refining.

“We got her, Captain!” Jeremy reported the obvious with satisfaction from his post. This was what they had been planning for the last hour. The enemy had been detected on the passive particle spectrometer system well outside of weapons range and was determined to be a cloaked contact closing in. Rather than tipping the warship off by immediately raising shields, Sharp had elected to play dead. Lure the Romulan or Klingon in and then bushwhack them as they became visible. The ship’s XO looked toward the engineering console opposite of his station. “Status of tactical systems?”

The young brunette manning the console looked over the spread of yellow-lit graphics before her. Endeavour was holding on by her fingernails now. “Shields remain at full power, but phaser reserves have fallen to below ten percent. Photon torpedo arming mechanisms still operating at fifty-percent efficiency.”

“Hold fire to recharge, Mister Ford.” Sharp called to the eager navigator. “Helm back us off from the Warbird. One quarter impulse.”

“Aye, sir.” The Andorian lieutenant replied from Ford’s left. The spinning Romulan on the forward view began to immediately shrink as Endeavour put distance between her and danger.

“Status enemy ship?” Sharp directed at Jeremy. The XO spun his chair to the sensor controls and began to scour the Gallant Wing for details.

“Severe damage to their port warp nacelle with severed plasma flow. Multiple hull breaches, including in the engineering sections. Their warp power is fluctuating. Their shield power is interrupted near their impulse manifolds and I believe they are attempting repair. Their weapons remain armed, but their plasma torpedoes are losing their charge. They still have full disruptors, but they may not be able to recharge them.”

“Miss Lania,” the captain turned his white chair round to face the comm station. The Vulcan lieutenant there glanced back at her CO, one hand poised over her controls and the other on the command microphone in her ear. “Put me on.”

The overhead speakers thumped with the open comm line and Lania nodded back. Sharp centered his gaze on the viewscreen. “Romulan vessel, this is Captain Sharp of the USS Endeavour. We’ve made nearly full repair of our systems since your earlier attack and are quite capable of defending ourselves. If you do not withdraw, we will be forced to destroy your ship. Respond.”

Endeavour was hardly in the shape to back up such claims. Should the Rihansu wish to continue the battle, it would turn grueling and bloody. Both ships were nearly in as bad a shape as the other. The casualties on both sides would be sickening. Hopefully the enemy commander agreed with that sentiment and would not press the issue.

No response came to the captain’s hail. The only reaction was the Warbird rotating away from Endeavour and powering ahead on impulse engines. With another wave of shimmering energy, the bird faded like a mirage. Sharp held his breath for a moment and glanced at the science console. Jeremy intently watched his scopes for any hint of the Romulan’s actions. “She’s headed away, Captain. Her plasma trail is really easy to track…”

“Coarse?”

“Goesa’vaina system. She’s going home.”

Sharp looked back to the viewer and forced his back to relax. His nagging sixth sense told him this was not over. “Watch her, Number One. I don’t think we’re getting off as lucky as it seems.”
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Just kind of a quicky fight to show I hadn't forgotten about Sharp, nor do I believe the Empires would just let him get away. I'm hoping to correlate some effort with La'ra on this on for a good show down that we've concidered for some years now...
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2005, 06:18:27 am »
gdamn. I didn't expect an update this soon! Shows that cloaking can be a liability as well as an asset. I just wonder why the rom never got a chance to fire. If I'd be the one at weapons I'd rip off the entire console to get those plasma's en dizzies in Endeavour
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2005, 11:02:49 pm »
Y'know.  Were I the Rom captain, I would expect that kind of information being relayed to me only as a bluff.  You sound like you're writing from FASA's system though.
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2005, 08:01:49 am »
Ouchie for the Rom. Nice little story, and precedent was set when good ol' 1701 zapped Kruge's BoP in STIII. Glad to see that the Klink-Rom fleet didn't immediately discount the Endeavour, although the Roms should be prepared for some not-so-friendly Klingon griping for fluffing this assignment.
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #4 on: October 24, 2005, 05:06:02 pm »
Well written from both points of view. One minor nit to pick, though. "Coarse" is how you describe language, sand, gravel, etc. Obviously, from your context, you meant "course."
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #5 on: October 25, 2005, 06:18:12 pm »
As for writing stand-points, I take what I like from FASA and from SFB as well. So far as both game systems go, I think both kinda stink. No offense, but FASA is too undetailed and SFB is just...bla... Though SFB is actually better than SFC turned out. Missiles on SFB could at least be useful. Not so much on SFC.

As to why the Rom didn't get off a shot, it takes a ship at least five seconds to drop her cloak and fire. Endeavour already had most of a firing fix and only needed a visible target. I wanted to depict a close call, but evidently for some I didn't. The scene where Endeavour actually makes ready to fire is several seconds before the ending of the previous scene if that's any help...

The battle-scene's real purpose is to show that Sharp is never a push-over. Bring your top game or stay home. It also adds strength to a battle scene coming later. ;D

As to my spelling mishaps... Oh-well! ;D Don't really care!
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #6 on: November 02, 2005, 05:58:27 am »
Gallant Wing, hmmm? That's one of those really ugly FASA ships, isn't it? In that case it deserved to get smacked up by the Endeavour.

I also wondered about the HET, but in SFB/C I've never timed a HET against decloaking before. I do seem to think now that it could probably be done in time, but there wasn't the urgency to the Fed's actions you wanted.

Nice little scene, though.
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2005, 08:51:45 am »
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I also wondered about the HET, but in SFB/C I've never timed a HET against decloaking before. I do seem to think now that it could probably be done in time, but there wasn't the urgency to the Fed's actions you wanted.

It can be done, though on the real SFC games, it doesn't matter so much since the shields are always operational.
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #8 on: November 03, 2005, 07:16:08 pm »
Indeed. SFB&C have those uber cloaks, though there's no difficulty in finding your victim.

My original idea of the fight was minus the HET. Probably should have dropped it and went with a broadside, then had Sharp turn in on the Rom. But then, I was writing pretty madly and didn't stop to think about it.

However, Jaeih...How (assuming I'm right about what game speed you probably play at), could you not get the HET in on time on SFC? At my game speed maybe... Never played SFB against cloakers, La'ra balked...so I don't know how the board game would have worked it...

Anyway, I don't use the whole SFB or C idea of "charging-up" for the HET. They never charged for a maneuver on Trek, even in TOS. When the 1st Rom Commander ordered Escape Maneuver One, he got it! None of that "we're waiting to charge" crap. But, enough tech harping.

I agree the sense of urgency is off, and that's the real issue, and it's only compounded by reading it from a game stand-point. As to the ugly Gallant Wing. La'ra bought the FASA model of it. I thought it quite beautiful, even after he mauled it with his globby paint job (He was, like, 12 or less...). It is and will always be my favorite Rom ship. So blaa ;D

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Re: Settling In
« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2005, 07:34:45 pm »
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Never played SFB against cloakers, La'ra balked...so I don't know how the board game would have worked it...

It essentially adds 5 or 6 hexes to the 'effective range' you're shooting at.  IE, you're firing at range two, but you roll for hits and damage as if you're at range 7 or 8.  There is a 'hidden cloak' rule, which adds hidden (partially) movement to the mix like we used on FASA, but if I recall neither of us had the patience for the 'tax manual' at the time. ;D

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I thought it quite beautiful, even after he mauled it with his globby paint job (He was, like, 12 or less...). It is and will always be my favorite Rom ship. So blaa ;D

I wish I still had that thing.  I could apply some paint thinner and let you handle the decoration.

Good thing we didn't do that the time though, since it would've got broken by Noah, the most efficent destroyer of ST ships since The Doomsday Machine!
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #10 on: November 07, 2005, 07:24:17 pm »
Adds hexes to the range...? Stupid.

As for the "tax manual"... Again...stupid.

Too many rules for a friggin game... And the rules themselves, not really even that damn good... But well...they made for the basis of damned entertaining computer games. The FASA game on the other hand... the other extreme. Too simple.

And...remind me to injure Noah for the destruction of said model... Still have the incomplete winged defender...?
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #11 on: January 19, 2006, 09:15:55 am »
is anybody here?

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Re: Settling In
« Reply #12 on: January 19, 2006, 09:17:52 am »
yep, if i have thread notification on...
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #13 on: February 01, 2006, 01:37:20 am »
Using the correct language ("Rhihannsu" as opposed to Romulan" as well as names that aren't roll-your-eyes Roman Empire). Love it!

I wonder if there is any interest in my Rhihannsu Dictionary beong posted here? It is about 30 pages long and took me about three years to create.


What do folks think?

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« Reply #14 on: February 01, 2006, 09:47:14 pm »
I know Jaeih would love that. I'd like to see it too. If you've spent that long doing it, it's definitely a labour of love on your part. Far be it for me to scorn such laudable dedication.

Open up a new thread and post it letter by letter!
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #15 on: February 22, 2006, 04:35:48 pm »
<BUMP> for this good idea!
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #16 on: March 05, 2006, 01:10:39 pm »
Waiting for the next part  ;D

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Re: Settling In
« Reply #17 on: March 06, 2006, 06:30:38 pm »
Sadly, this one is on hold till the Klingons in my head begin chattering again...

I'll also rewrite some of the above to remove the SFB references. Thought I might enjoy throwing in the whole HET thing, but it really just threw the pace of the story-telling by having it in there.

So Keep an eye out in coming months for a repost of this thread when I begin writing it again. Till then, enjoy some Endeavour. ;D
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #18 on: March 06, 2006, 09:55:29 pm »
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Re: Settling In
« Reply #19 on: March 09, 2006, 08:53:22 am »
Not a problem, Guv. We're all enjoying the Excelsior Endeavour story too much to want you to stop that. Get back to this one when you can.
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