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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #60 on: October 19, 2006, 10:41:50 pm »
RBAG could serve as the neutral party!

I wonder who you might be pulling out of the hat for this one, eh La'ra?

I await more of course.

Been doing a great deal of writing myself, the last 2 days. The new idea for story 5 is going along much more smoothly. You'll like the trouble Thomas gets into...

Anyway, give me more!

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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #61 on: January 17, 2007, 01:15:43 pm »
And lo, the glacier moved...

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“Are you insane?!”  Heartreaver screamed.

La’ra smiled.  He tried for a cold smile.  He was not so good at cold; the expression came across as malicious rather than sociopathic.

“Not at all.”  He answered.

“I told you…I told you!…I would not negotiate with these people!  Now you ask me to limit my own activities because of you decided we must talk!”

The Queen was putting on a show.  They were not alone.  Several aides and guards were standing about the throne room, looking on in impassive support of their soveriegn.  La’ra understood the pattern; only those she was pleased with met her in private.

“I was unaware the Klingon Empire had become so soft!”  She continued.  “Negotiation!  Neutral parties!  When did your warriors become Federation puppets?!”

La’ra continued to smile.  He said nothing.

“You have nothing to say for yourself?  No excuse for this incompetence?”  Heartreaver demanded.

“I was waiting for you to finish your tantrum.”  The Commander replied.

Heartreaver recoiled.  For a glimmer, her armor was gone, her dark eyes wide with anger and mania.  She regrouped just as quickly, replacing insanity with haughty obligation.

“You will not speak to me in such a manner.”  She said, as evenly as she could manage.  Hers was not a cold anger, but fury under tight control could be intimidating, so she made the attempt.

“And you will not dictate the actions of an officer of the Klingon fleet.”  La’ra snarled quietly.  “Unless you no longer value the Empire’s assistance…?”

The Monarch stared at him, her eyes continuing to boil.

“Assistance…offering parley to rebellious merchants who’ll accept nothing short of my gory death…what assistance is there in that?”

“Had you allowed some explanation before your tirade you would already know.”  He retorted.  “You claim that prior to the Constantinople’s arrival your troops were all but victorious.  We are unable to provide direct support.  The best we can help you achieve is a stalemate.”

“A stalemate is better than…”

“…than victory?”  La’ra barked.  “I doubt that.  With both of us in orbit, you can achieve little.  With both of us gone, your forces hold the advantage.”

Heartreaver frowned.  La’ra continued.

“The Federation will happily support your adversaries if no one hears about it.” He explained.  “But now the entire sector has heard about it.  There will be an uproar, I assure you.”

“You’re gambling.”  She said, realization dawning.  “You are gambling that public knowledge of our conflict will force the Federation to recall their ship.  And then you will withdraw as a sign of ‘good faith’.”

The Commander did not grin. A good plan it was, but enacting it for Heartreaver’s benefit soured his enjoyment of the scheme.

“You risk my throne on your…analysis of the Federation reaction.”

“Yes.”  La’ra agreed.  He was fairly assured how the Federation government would react.  Even if knowledge of Heartreaver’s tyranny galvanized the Earther’s and their allies, there’d likely be a period of confusion the Queen could exploit.  If there wasn’t, he could at least maintain the stalemate.  “But the risk is calculated.  I’ll contact you with any developments.”

The Commander turned to leave.  No one objected.
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #62 on: January 17, 2007, 01:36:32 pm »
I like that. Your ananysis of Federation politics is spot on, and in line with your opinion of the Feds through TOS, with examples of their "brush war" mentality in 'Friday's Child' and 'A Private Little War'. This does seem to be at the far edge of their morals for the Happy Shiny UFP, especially if there are attrocities being commited with Starfleet's  knowledge, if not support, but it is concurrent with the 'brush war' mentality of the 1970s-80s.

The scenes themselves do seem kinda bare-bones though, but I don't know what I would have added to flesh it out. The message comes through loud and clear, but it is kinda stark. Looking forwards to more.
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #63 on: January 19, 2007, 10:17:12 pm »
I find that I must agree with Andy on the starkness note. Sometimes, though, a bare-bones scene must be written when the mind tells the tale but the mood does not flow into it...

Some detail on surroundings, those individuals in the room. Stuff like that I tend to leave out on first draft when my mood is lacking, then go back and add later on as I re-read my crap. But then, focussing in on just the conversation and the persons speaking has merits too. It consentrates your attention (as the reader) on just what the author is trying to get across.

La'ra hates dealing with this woman, but must. He is ordered to ensure she comes out on top, so he will. He has come out with a plan that is the most likely to succeed. It sweetens the pot, for La'ra, that the Queen won't like the idea. Therefor La'ra, as always, wins. And he gets to be at least a little bit happy about what he did.

My opinion...La'ra should provide the rebels with a nuke to kill the Queen, then install a puppet governor in her place to carry out the interests of the Empire! Glory to the Empire!

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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #64 on: March 04, 2007, 01:52:52 pm »
*rolls another barrel down the ramp*

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La’ra paced the length of his quarters. 

There’d yet to be any solid reaction from the Constantinople.  That wasn’t surprising; less than twelve hours had passed since his broadcast, his meeting with the queen. 

Communications activity from the Starfleet ship had increased dramatically.  They were discussing the situation with someone.  The Federation Civil broadcasts were starting to note the situation.  That was good, but he wanted more.

He came close to hitting the intercom switch, asking the bridge watch, once again, if there’d been any change in the Constantinople’s status.  He’d done so an hour before.  Had there been something, he’d have been notified.  He did a few more slow laps around his room before snarling at his own impatience.  He headed for his bathtub, undressing as he went.

The big copper basin was perhaps a third full when the intercom buzzed.

“What?”  He snapped at the speaker.

“Commander, I think there’s something you need to see.” 

The voice was Leral’s and the com indicated she was calling from the command center.  La’ra glanced at the clock;  her watch had been over some time ago, which probably meant she was trying to analyze some odd blip on the sensors.

“Coming.”  He answered.  Leral’s odd blips were usually trouble.

He threw a fur-lined robe over himself and stalked off toward the bridge.



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“This could be anything.”  He rumbled.

“It could be, sir.”  Leral agreed.  They were staring at a sensor profile of the Constantinople.  All appeared normal, save for one small detail.  “But I don’t think so.”

“How long ago did they increase power?”  The Commander asked.  Hiv’laposh’s sensor crew had been watching the Federation ship for days.  They knew her scent well enough to spot anomalies.

“About an hour.  I looked back through the logs.”  She answered.  Around them, the bridge was quiet.  The night watch was accustomed to La’ra appearing at odd hours, but the sensor chief’s continued presence, the fact that their Commander was wearing only a robe…those were reasons for eavesdropping and concern.

La’ra nodded.  “Did you inform L’dar?”

“Yes.”  Leral replied.  “He…said it could be anything.  Some experiments I’ve run in the lab took more power than this.  He said I should tell you.”

La’ra nodded.

“Any change in their orbit?”  He snarled.  Like his own ship, the Starfleet cruiser was in a geosynchronous pattern, holding above the same spot on the planet.  Neither ship had been willing to leave the battle sites unobserved.

Leral pressed a button on her console.

“No…but there will be.”

La’ra frowned.  Leral’s eyebrows had raised slightly.

“She’s altered her heading slightly…very slightly.”  Leral continued.  “Away from the planet.”

La’ra stared at Leral’s data.

“She’s expanding her orbit.”

“Yes, sir, just slightly.  Few kilometers per rotation.”

“I see.”  He stood, fully, adjusting his robe. The Lieutenant nominally in charge of this watch was standing, assuming La’ra would soon be easing into the command chair.

“Lieutenant…”  La’ra began.  “Bring us to a precautionary alert.  Personnel only.  Do not standby the weapons or raise the shields.”

“My Lord.”  The younger officer assented.  La’ra frowned.

“Address me as sir.”  He warned.

“Yes…sir.”  The Lieutenant said, conscious of his gaffe.

“A common mistake.”  La’ra confided.  The Lieutenant began the alert procedure.

“They’re up to something?”  Leral asked from her station.

“Not something.”  La’ra growled.  “They’re going to attack.”
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #65 on: March 04, 2007, 02:01:13 pm »
hmm...I would think the Feds wouldn't be quite so ready to shoot considering the situation.

Roms, maybe, any little thing panics them...


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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #66 on: March 04, 2007, 02:10:49 pm »
Ok, so where is the rest? :o

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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #67 on: March 05, 2007, 05:12:40 pm »
Soooo... Famed Stator Fleet is going to attack? Not only that, but attack the Bandito? How very unlike them. What possible reason can they have, beyond bruised pride at being politically outwitted by a dumb Klingon brute?  ;D
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #68 on: March 05, 2007, 05:17:20 pm »
Eh, I think that'd be a typical initial Klingon reaction. La'ra isn't your stereotypical Klingon brute, but he is a Klingon warrior. Of course, I'm not saying I'm certain that the Feds won't attack(although I agree with Andy... what reason would they have to do so?), just that I don't think they will start a furball simply because they came out on the wrong end of some backwater planet's political intrigue.

However, I know La'ra, so I'm fully prepared for him to prove me wrong and make me look like a bonehead. ;D
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #69 on: March 05, 2007, 07:50:15 pm »
I have a sneaking suspiscion that La'ra (the author) is about to show us something that almost never happens in a La'ra (the character) story. La'ra might have just made a ...gasp...mistsake! But only time...much...much time and La'ra's continued....if belated... poting shall show us if any of us are right in our assumptions.

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« Reply #70 on: March 06, 2007, 05:27:30 am »
I have a sneaking suspiscion that La'ra (the author) is about to show us something that almost never happens in a La'ra (the character) story.

La'ra makes mistakes all the time, I just don't...emphasize them.  He also tends to be lucky, which probably makes them less noticable.
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #71 on: March 06, 2007, 05:02:12 pm »
Well, I'd have to pick through one of your stories to find one. But no matter. You emulate an odd mix of TMP Klingon (tempered by Worfisms) and heavy TOS elements. Kirk never made a real mistake. So it fits.

I like for the main guys to just f*ck up every once in a while. Keeps 'em honest. This is by no means a degradation of your esteemed body of work, however!

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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #72 on: March 07, 2007, 08:33:26 am »
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Kirk never made a real mistake.

Oh-ho ho!

Ilia was kidnapped off his bridge in ST:TMP after he disregarded his XO's counsel.

You think forgetting to put up his shields in STII wasn't a real mistake? Many people died from that.

Blindly accepting that 'Starfleet Command' received his hail during a mutiny in STV was pretty dumb.

His prejudice against Klingons almost allowed a war to start in STVI.

And there were plenty of mistakes made in TOS too.
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« Reply #73 on: March 07, 2007, 07:13:57 pm »
Oh, noooo....

Not Kirk. Noooo.... ;D

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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #74 on: March 22, 2007, 11:29:21 am »
At long last...she's finished.

Lemme know what ya' think of the finished product as well as these last two parts.  Been a long time coming, but I think I can be proud of 'er.

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The bridge was still in motion, more experienced personnel relieving the younger evening watch.

“Starfleet’s going to attack?”  Ran’jar scoffed.  He was clad in his uniform pants, the black turtleneck that was usually the first layer of the Klingon uniform.

“She’s slow charging her phaser reserves.”  La’ra explained his suspicion.  “Building up power quietly.  And look at her heading.”

Ran’jar sat at his console, frowning.  A button or two was pressed.  The First’s frown deepened.

“Do you see it?” La’ra asked.

“She’s up to something…”  Ran’jar grumbled.

“If she goes to full impulse…”  La’ra grinned.  “…she’s turned just enough her course will put us between her and the planet, well inside their optimum range.”

“All stations report alert status, Commander.”  Someone announced.

“Good.”  La’ra answered, turned back to the comm panel.  Ran’jar was shaking his head.

“Uncharacteristic.”  He growled.

The Commander nodded and turned toward the viewscreen.  The Constantinople was framed there, looking bright and innocent.

“I underestimated him.”  La’ra admitted.

“How so?”

“Starfleet talks endlessly about their morals…their laws.”  La’ra quietly explained.  “Yet here he is, supporting cowards, butchers.  We’re doing the same, but our own government makes no pretensions of altruism.”

“You would rather not be supporting the Queen.”  Ran’jar reminded.

“Indeed.”  La’ra paused a second, continuing to study the Federation cruiser.  “But there are advantages to it, if one looks for them.  She is an unstable ruler.  The Empire will not tolerate her for long, and any change we make will be toward…security.  There’s some benefit for the Kelor in this, I think.”

“I was disappointed in our Starfleet friend and failed to realize he’s using similar logic.”  La’ra continued.  “He probably hates his ‘allies’ as much as I detest Heartreaver, but if he wins, his side gains a measure of control…they can make things here more…palatable.”

The First considered.

“Disappointed?”  Ran’jar asked.

“I’ve been spoiled by Sharps, Kirks, and Bates.”  Said La’ra.  “They have a touch of Klingon in them, to back up their fragile ideals.”

“Those willing to break their own rules, disobey their orders, to find the perfect solution?”

La’ra nodded.  “Yes.  But here both our orders have…reason, behind them.  And this prevents any perfect solution.”

“Like killing the Queen and installing a puppet government?”

“That does sound close to perfect.”  La’ra grumbled.

The Klingons were quiet for a moment.  Other officers called out the status of various systems.  Bridge indicators hummed and whistled.

“If she gets into the position her Captain wants, she’ll have the advantage.”  La’ra growled.  Klingon ships used speed and turning ability to maximum advantage.  Starfleet ships were clumsier, but if the Hiv’laposh were hemmed in by the planet, her edge would be dulled.

“We could shift our own orbit.  If he attacks then, the fight will be even.”

“Yes…”  La’ra let the word trail off into a hiss.  “…and he might use the excuse to attack.  Our friend isn’t stupid…he’s either going to arrange provocation or wait for us to provide it.  We’ll have to be…friendly about it.”

“We haven’t made a report to Sector Command in over twelve hours.  A higher orbit would allow a more secure transmission.”  Ran’jar informed.

La’ra grinned.  The expression was wide and in total earnest, something he hadn’t managed in days.

“What’s the helmsman’s name?”  La’ra whispered.

Ran’jar rolled his eyes.

“Danok.”

La’ra nodded, moved toward the center of the bridge.  On the viewscreen, the Constantinople still looked pastoral.  He took another second to study it, then strolled toward the helm.

“Ensign Danok.”  He said to the lanky Klingon who did the steering.  “In just a moment, I’m going to order you to shift orbit.  You’re going to do so in a manner that leaves up in an excellent position to break orbit and accelerate to full impulse.  But I want you to make it a very…casual manuever. Not sloppy.  Do you take my meaning.”

“Like we were heading to dump our garbage, sir?”  Danok had a bushy goatee.  It bobbled as he spoke.

“Yes.”

“Understood.”  The helmsman affirmed.  La’ra moved back to the command chair, activated the intercom.  L’dar’s rumbling voice answered the summons.

“We may need to accelerate quickly to full impulse and cold start our shields. Be ready in two minutes.”  La’ra instructed.  He deactivated the link before his brother could protest; now wasn’t the time for argument.  He was still grinning.  “I think we’d better make our Federation friends aware of our intention.  To avoid any possible misunderstanding.  First?”

Ran’jar nodded once and pressed a button.  There was a crackle from the overhead speakers.

“USS Constantinople.”  La’ra began. “We are due to make a report to Sector Command.  We are moving to a higher orbit for clearer communication.  We will begin our maneuver momentarily.”

“Inform Kelor orbital control.”  La’ra added.  Ran’jar did so.  Best for everyone to know what was going on, of course.  The Commander waited a respectable amount of time.

“Now.”  He said to Danok.

The old battlecruiser edged forward, pulling away from the planet in a long upward bank.  There was no quiver in the deck, no lurch from churning impulse engines.  La’ra watched his command indicator anyway, admiring the laziness of the course.  Nearby, Leral’s eyes were locked on her console.  Any moment she could yell a warning.  La’ra would have a second at most to order full impulse, shields.  Then the Hiv’laposh would pull into open space and engage her foe.  Certain parts of La’ra’s soul wouldn’t mind that a bit.

“No change…”  Leral called out.  The shift was a third completed.

If the Constantinople was going to act, it’d be in the next few seconds, La’ra decided.  His ship was superior to the Starfleet cruiser.  The Federation captain had tactical sense.  He’d attack now or not at all.

The Hiv’laposh climbed away from Kelor, settling into a high, comfortable orbit.

No attack came.
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #75 on: March 22, 2007, 11:30:33 am »
The Queen’s displeasure had grown.  Her throne room was packed, now, legions of advisors, guards, courtesans, and hangers-on.  Whatever function they normally served, today they were here to remind La’ra just how many people Heartreaver held at her whim.

The Queen was on her throne of course.  She was a sight to behold, clad in a little silk and a lot of jewels, sunlight streaming through the chamber’s giant windows to illuminate her as if she were an idol, or perhaps a goddess.  Her eyes though, were haughty ice.

“Our planet is blessed.”  She began.  “No less than six governments have offered to act as mediator, between my regency and the Rebel upstarts.”

La’ra listened, smiling slightly.  He’d called on the palace to announce the Hiv’laposh’s impending departure.  The Constantinople was already gone.  She’d left only hours after the crisis point, or at least, what he considered the crisis point.  The tiny power surge that’d aroused his suspicions had disappeared after his battlecruiser had shifted orbit.

He couldn’t truly know what the Starfleet Captain had intended. Seeking battle was not usual for Starfleet.  Many things about the Kelor situation were not usual for Starfleet. 

Ran’jar was unconvinced of course.  He didn’t grant the Federation enough will for such tactics.  But there was a tug in La’ra’s stomach that made him believe otherwise, and he hoped the feeling was correct;  if it were so, that meant the Constantinople’s captain was of a type too few in the galaxy.

Heartreaver was still talking.

“It’s been suggested among my advisors that, perhaps, we might consider the Betazoid offer.”  Heartreaver continued.  “Apparently some among my own people have been infected with your weakness."

La’ra raised an eyebrow.  He hadn’t expected another tantrum in front of her assembled court, but it seemed one was coming.

“What right did you have to declare that I was willing to negotiate!”  She demanded, standing.  “We have allied ourselves to the Empire on the basis of Klingon strength and yet I find myself being urged to talk terms!  To parley with those who threaten my rule!”

She stormed down from her raised pedestal.  Her voice increased in volume, decreased in control.

“Well know this:  My price for our resources, those things your government craves…has changed.  Your rank…your ship…your head if I feel the need…those will be provided to me or Kelor will be of no worth to the Klingon Empire or…”

“Silence!”  La’ra barked.

Heartreaver, perhaps, wasn’t surprised. Her court was a different story.  There were wide eyes, sudden intakes of breath.  Guards fingered their weapons, though cautiously.

“You feel…”  He asked, quietly.  “…that you’ve been treated unfairly?”

“I feel that you’d best mind your tounge in my court, Klingon.  Here you have only what I grant…”

“I have my battlecruiser in orbit.”  La’ra warned.  “Which means I do as I please.”

The Queen did not blink.  She was silent.  Apparently, her mind was capable of that kind of logic.

“You have an oppurtunity here.”  The Commander advised.  “You have time until any negotiations can be arranged.  Time to batter the Rebels until their bargaining position is quite poor, time perhaps, to defeat them.”

“I told you that I will not compromise.”  She was quiet now, her voice low enough that her courtiers could not hear.

“You will if you wish to keep your throne.  You speak of your advisor's wishes...your power isn’t quite as centered as you’d like, is it?  How much foolishness will you have to display before one of your supporters sticks a knife in your pretty back?”  He spoke loudly, boldly.  “The Klingon Empire desires stability on this world.  If you cannot provide it, we’ll happily deal with your…successor.”

Heartreaver’s eyes narrowed.  La’ra grinned.

“Get out.”  She spat.

“Gladly, and with more pleasure than you can imagine.”

The Commander turned and strolled out.  He didn’t look back.



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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #76 on: March 22, 2007, 11:43:10 am »
A good story. My favourite lines are typical La'ra, the last of which is in this chapter"

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“What’s the helmsman’s name?”  La’ra whispered.

Ran’jar rolled his eyes.

However, I'm sorry but I still don't quite get Constantinople's motive to attack. I understand that the Federation is hoping to have their side win so that they can send in advisers and kerb the violence, but I don't understand why the Starfleet ship would attack the Klingon ship. Or rather, how doing so would improve Starfleet's (& the Federation's) position. La'ra already sent out the message, it's already in the sector's comm. nets.

I understand that it is technically possible that the Starfleet ship is charging it's weapons and altering course to attack. it is technically and tactically possible.

I just don;t understand why it is being done/considered.
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #77 on: March 22, 2007, 11:45:07 am »
I just don't understand why it is being done/considered.

Nor do you know, really, if it was actually being considered. ;D
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
                                                                 ---------Rod Serling, The Last Flight

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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #78 on: March 22, 2007, 01:52:25 pm »
So it is merely La'ra's gut instinct insisting, despite very little evidence to the contrary? Even he doesn;t know they why of it?
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Re: Fragile Ideals
« Reply #79 on: March 22, 2007, 01:57:34 pm »
La'ra doesn't KNOW they were going to attack; that's what his instincts told him, that's what his tactical sense told him, and he was convinced enough that the Federation's usual modus operandi wasn't applying in this case.  I thought I made that relatively clear in the last scene.  If not, I'll have to revisit it.

In any case, La'ra was convinced...but I'll leave speculation on whether or not he was right to you and others.

I know, of course, but I ain't tellin'. ;D
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
                                                                 ---------Rod Serling, The Last Flight