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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #80 on: August 26, 2005, 12:23:56 am »
Ah-ha! Groovy! I'll play with that when I have more time. Tis 12:14 and I've just written another chapter in two hours... I don't write as much these days, but when I do, damn.   Hopefully this won't seem...off...

Now, on to the details...

I really wanted more detail discription inside the deflector station (you'll see what I mean), but every time I tried such, I felt it dragged down the tempo of the scene itself. So most of it got scragged in editting. Maybe it isn't noticable.

To Jaeih: There's a grizzly scene in this chapter you may want to skip. It emphasises on a particular acpect of Ron'jar that you, and all Rihansu lovers, may not like to read. If you do read, do so at your own risk! Just kidding, It ain't that bad...but then...maybe... Can't really tell how people react somethimes...

Any who:
Chapter Eleven
Trade Square, Jessa’man’a City,
Goesa’vaina
February 21, 2274




“You are certain, Lieutenant?” The surprise laden within the Goesan queen’s voice bordered on grief. Jackson could sympathize. So far, all their efforts had been bent on preventing the Klingons from getting into the city. Now he had brought them all news that their enemy was likely already within the shield.

“Those shuttles were manned with only a pilot each. Just enough to fight them and put up a good show,” Alfred began to lay down the facts as he’d been mulling them over in his mind for the past two hours. “We’ve searched three of the downed craft to make sure the first wasn’t some kind of fluke. There were no transports detected from the surface to any ship or location on the planet. No one near by saw any one leave those craft. And there has been no follow up bombardment of the shield, even though that fleet up there could punch through in a few minutes.”

“So you believe the Klingons are already here…in force…” Elani could barely manage her voice above a whisper. This monarch had her inspired moments, but she was very young. Jackson would not have been surprised if she retired suddenly from the field.

“We can assume nothing else, my lady.” Prime Coarus told her, his own voice a stoic measure of certainty in comparison. His long fingered, callused hand grasped her shoulder. The young ruler seemed to take strength from contact with the older man. “They will go for the shield generators.”
Other people would have wasted valuable time concentrating on how the enemy had gotten in, Jackson thought to himself. These people saw more import in just stopping what the enemy was doing. Others could figure out how to keep them from getting through the shield again. The human security officer already had a good idea of how they’d managed that feat. He’d seen the two-meter or better tall sewage drain which had emptied into the flats the farmers used to process fertilizer. The shield would have been weakest in that area…

“We have to stop them if we’re going to keep the Klingons out of here till the fleet arrives.” Jackson added emphasis. His hand rested on the solid form of his slung phaser rifle.

“Then you shall go.” Elani’tess said. Her eye turned to Coarus. “Send two units to each of the generator stations. Three shall go to the power station and secure it there. You shall take charge Coarus.”

“As you will, my lady.”




Near Deflector Generator
Station One,
Jessa’man’a City.




Ron’jar paused as again he drew out his now-silenced tricorder and passed it about the immediate area. He glowered in silence over the readings, but shared none of them. They were far too close to the generating station to allow any stray noise to give them away. Their emergence from the under-city had been quick and undetected, and the only soldiers within sight had been eliminated in moments with equal silence. Now their objective lay but forty meters from them. The streets were empty and quiet.

The commander remained in the shadows of the narrow alley his team hunkered within. The columned buildings at every street face provided ample cover for his men to skulk behind. They also allowed great advantaged in cover to defender and invader alike. The cobbled street eased up the city’s gentle slope as straight as a line, hooking to several smaller walk paths left and right. The city street lamps shone out garishly upon everything, accentuated at intervals by lower hued torches.
Ron’jar surveyed the way in silence. Something was not correct here, he realized. When he’d come here years ago, foot traffic in this quadrant of the inner city had been dense at all times of day and night. Surely most within the city would be frightened of the coming battle and fearing raining death from the heavens, but where were the idle gossips, the men and women not content to sit by and let the government handle everything for them whilst they remained in the dark? There were always those who did not preserve their personal safety and went looking for those who knew more. There were always those who sought to protect their streets in their own manner, particularly among these strong people.

Why were the streets here empty, when others, even now, were not.

Commander Ron’jar signaled his party to be alert with a shaking, closed fist signal. All behind him hefted rifles to their shoulders and began to more thoroughly scan their threat vectors. The commander himself knelt and affixed both the rifle stock and optical scope to his weapon. Lifting the optical sight to his eye, he scoured the generator building with the sensor he trusted more than any tricorder.

“The roof guards are behind cover,” he murmured lowly to his men. Beside him, S’tall fidgeted nervously. Some of his own men did as well, but not with their weapons.

“No other soldiers in sight.” He lowered his scope to the doorways leading into the station. No guards were visible, adding to the suspicion he felt over the whole situation. He twisted the selector on his sight till it switched to thermographic imaging. There he saw the low-resolution forms of two armed sentries, hiding on either side of the entrance, which itself was covered by the shimmering splatter of an active deflector shield.

With a series of fast hand signals, Ron’jar conveyed the intel to his team and then began to issue deployment commands. With lethal silence, the men and women of his team filed deftly out of the alley and took suppression positions behind the evenly spaced columns before the building right of their commander. S’tall, for her part, remained with Ron’jar, weapon up and aimed to cover the rear.

Taking a solid kneeling stance on the uneven cobblestones of the alley, the Klingon commander set his weapon to full power and took careful aim for his target. The flat thumb-trigger clicked and his weapon bucked in his hands. A blinding burst of emerald spot across the street and blasted a rough-hewn hole through the reinforced duracrete wall of the installation. For all their patience and cunning, the Goesan’s had never constructed a truly blast-proof wall. A force field covering a door was good enough to keep out most cat burglars, but it took more thought to keep out a Klingon warrior.

Standing as his men opened fire on the guard positions above, Ron’jar drew his communicator. “Attack.” His voice muttered as he picked up his Romulan compatriot and shoved her out into the street.





Inside Deflector Generator
Station One




The Dashak Prime turned from behind his position of cover and motioned the alarm to his men. “The outer wall has been breached. Prepare to repel intruders!” His men raised their rifles and submachine guns. This was going to be a close quarters, bloody battle. Coarus mentally steeled himself for the coming moments. His phaser rifle was set to setting five. Enough to kill without doing serious harm to the surrounding machinery. Across the narrow confines of the service corridor, Lieutenant Jackson’s rifle was set likewise. The Dashak Commander momentarily questioned his wisdom in trusting such a technologically different weapon for this fight. He as yet held no faith in these weapons…

There was no time for such self-doubt, however. From the sounds of disruptor fire battering the roof and walls of the structure, the Klingons were nearly to the breach. Coarus could not see the hole in the outer wall from this area, but Jackson’s tricorder device had shown it to be just down the hall. He hefted the lightweight weapon and prepared himself.

Already, flashing pulses of amber light were reaching his awaiting team as the enemy battled his defending comrades. Spatters of jolting gunfire echoed within the confines of the complex, bouncing from wall to wall. The occasional scream or barked order reached the Prime’s ear. The command ‘fall-back’ echoed by more than once…

Coarus gave the silent order for his men to advance. He wasn’t going to wait for the enemy to be firmly entrenched within the station before attacking them. His men needed back up. After the first two men of his team passed his position, I’rell rose to a crouched stance and advanced with them. Out of his peripheral vision, he noted the human security soldier do the same. The Terran’s training was quite good and Coarus felt quite secure with the alien at his back.

The two point men halted at the corner leading to the pitched battle. The first, his identity obscured by the ancient lar’fa kerchief tied about his face, readied his weapon and glanced about the right-hand turn. Returning then to the safe position, the soldier looked back to his commander and began to rote off a series of hand signals detailing what he’d seen. ‘Three hostiles-heavy fire-four casualties-hostiles behind cover.’

Coarus mentally pictured the cover available down this particular corridor. There was a security station meant for screening visitors, the security booth, pipes and electrical switching boxes. Any of these would provide excellent cover. Frowning, Coarus signaled his men ahead.

The first two swung around the turn in the corridor, SMG’s up and raking the way ahead with short and controlled bursts. Coarus followed them up, kneeling at the same corner and pivoting around it to add to their fire.

All of I’rell’s original men which he’d placed here were down by the time the Prime caught view of the battle. The aperture created by the enemy was now very wide, having been battered apart by shots coming and going. Fire had claimed much of the nonmetallic machinery to be had and much of the so-called cover had been shot through by high power hits. The Klingons had already made it inside, and knelt behind whatever was to be had, and some were simply charging up the walkway. One of his two point men took a hit from the Klingon closest his group and clattered to the expanded-metal deck. The second man put a quick burst into the alien, three shots slamming into the silver armor it wore.

The Klingon didn’t fall. It didn’t even stagger. It just raised its pistol and shot Coarus’s man in the face. The alien warrior slowed to a walk as dark red blood flowed down the contours of its armor. It leered at the Dashak Prime. The aim of its disruptor turned his way.

Coarus didn’t hesitate. His phaser rifle came up and planted a glowing crimson beam right in the center of its chest. The beam slapped the alien back several paces as its armored chest came aglow with phased energy. The warrior staggered, looking down at the huge, smoking burn that cratered its chest. But the alien still stood. It glowered back at Coarus and again raised its pistol.

A second, longer phaser blast halted further action in the Klingon. The beam burned a path clean through the warrior and dropped it to the deck atop the first point man. Coarus continued to act, firing back down the corridor at the still advancing forms of enemy soldiers, but was completely stunned by the Klingon’s resistance to injury. Goesan submachine guns fired a twelve-millimeter round at over one hundred fifty meters per second. Three successive hits from said weapon was enough to drop a Goesan male even from a full-tilt charge. The Klingon, from the number of holes in it, had sustained no less than nine such hits, all in the chest. Coarus had heard of their organ redundancy, but the true scope of it leveled him. How many round could they take? There weren’t enough phasers to arm all the military…

More of Coarus’s team took support positions near to him, standing over him and lining the opposite equipment wall. Their ballistic projectile fire deafened him at such proximity. He was used to it. The enemy did bloody jiggles as they continued to advance and take cover before the defenders. A couple of the Klingons fell, only to get right back up again. It was a scene right out of some macabre play. More of Coarus’s own men fell. The man standing above him staggered forward from a hit to the belly, and instantly lost his head to a blast directed at the Prime himself. Half congealed hunks of red gore glopped down of the soldier as he continued to return withering, nearly continuous fire on the aliens.

Jackson’s own red beam slashed out at the enemy. The lieutenant picked out one target after another, felling three. Heartened by the reduction in enemy troops, Coarus called for a slow advance. The Klingons had to be pushed out from here…




Outside the Deflector Station




Ron’jar pressed against the thick, fractured wall of the deflector station and gasped from the burning, wet pain from inside his chest. The rifle bullet from those short Goesan repeaters stung like a fire wasp. He glanced down at the small, finger width hole punched through the reinforced leather of his armor and the dark trail of blood emitting from within. The wound did not feel very threatening. He figured the projectile had lost velocity passing through his armor, glanced off a now broken exterior rib and was likely sitting in the middle of his left anterior lung. He took a deep breath, forcing steaming hot air into the injured organ. Yes, his lung was indeed injured. He’d have to watch his stamina in the hours to come.

Ron’jar was in no real danger. His assault party was. Of the eight who had begun the assault, he was reduced to three, himself and the Rihansu included. The rest were either dead or incapacitated. This was not the perfect attack he had envisioned. But then, they seldom were.
The Commander snatched out his communicator.

“Boren, Group One has failed to reach objective. Begin your insertion. I’ll keep the enemy busy.”
“Understood, my lord!” Was the marine commander’s short reply. Ron’jar could hear the pride resonating within the man’s baritone voice. Boren seemed a stout sort of warrior. He would do well to keep that man near him. He glanced aside to the opposite side of the breach in the outer wall. There, S’tall and Bek Orn were still leaning in at intervals to loose harassment fire into the building. Return fire was fierce, and there was also danger from ricochet.  S’tall caught his gaze first, then touched the large, tall form of Orn to gather his attention. “Grenades!” He ordered them. Both soldiers began to withdraw numerous packages from their equipment harnesses as the commander kept up their covering fire. He gave his people six seconds to ready, then withdrew from the crevasse.

Orn and S’tall stepped into the danger zone and hurled their weapons. They made five throws before return fire gathered enough strength again to pose a true danger. Jerking a thumb behind him, up the north face of the street, Ron’jar gave them the order to pull back.

At the thundering sounds of grenade detonations, Both Orn and the Romulan sub-lieutenant bolted across the exposed breach and joined the commander in running along the length of the deflector station. Cracks of gunfire called for their attention from the roof guard positions as they negotiated their path. No columns lined the exterior of this building, forcing the defending invaders to press themselves against the face of the retaining wall and return fire almost straight up.

A muffled ‘wump’ bounced down the boulevard. At its sound, Ron’jar felt almost like smiling. Boren had made his entrance on the far side of the station. Perhaps he would be able to take down the shield without mauling the entire city in the process.

“We are inserted.” Came the Lieutenant’s confirmation via their coms.

Ron’jar’s time to exult came abruptly to an end as Bek Orn took a shot to the back from the open crevasse behind them. Soldiers had emerged from within the station and were intent on eradicating the remnant of his team, oblivious to the new threat to the building. Orn dropped, blood coursing from his lips as he mouthed incomprehensible words. Another chattering burst of auto fire caught S’tall in the shoulder with two rounds. Green blood splayed upon the white face of the deflector station as she slumped into the commander’s waiting arms. A grin of cruel satisfaction spread upon his bearded maw as he deftly turned the Rihansu about to face those who’d shot her and held her dead-weight form between himself and danger. Another duo of weapon blasts from both avenging Goesans raked the limp Romulan, drawing the breath from her in a ragged gasp. Two rounds hurtled clean through her and injured the Klingon as well, but it was not enough to bring him down. Behind his non-human shield, he returned fire on his aggressors, putting them down with blinding red shots of disrupted energy.

Ron’jar held the gurgling S’tall aloft for a time longer, making sure no other Goesans abounded to make life difficult for him. When he ascertained that the remainder in the area were battling his harassers and those within the station were slugging it out with Boren’s group, he allowed the Romulan woman to sag to the dusty walk.

Ron’jar looked down at her for a moment, his brief glint of satisfaction over having used her thusly faded. S’tall struggled to drag life-continuing breath into her ravaged lungs, all the while staring in shock back up at him. Her back muscles twitched spasmodically, giving her the dead feline look as she lay there spilling dark green fluid onto the packed cobblestones. With a grin of admiration, he saw that the Rihansu was willing to die as a warrior. Her gun hand tried valiantly to raise her disruptor to bear on him. With a nod, Ron’jar ended her struggles with a single blast to the forehead and stepped over her inert form.

From far above, streams of brilliant emerald fire rained from the heavens. The shield had been brought down. The siege of Jessa’man’a had begun.

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Hope that was bearable, y'all. Please post all coments and continued objections to my comments below. ;)
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #81 on: August 26, 2005, 01:11:40 am »
Hey, Reaper man, thanks!
Think I might be able to wrap my warped little mind around your info!
I apprieciate!

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #82 on: August 26, 2005, 02:03:53 am »
No prob, you gave me an update to saviour so that evens out.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #83 on: August 27, 2005, 11:25:58 am »
Ooooh Guv, you had better not let anyone else hear of what you did to S'tell, as if news reaches Jaeih she'll come looking for you, and in 2275 she gets her KRC.

Great installment, but the Ronjar is a really nasty piece of work.

Keep it up!

PS. As to yiour tasteless remark, forget about them. Like I said, it doesn't bother me--guys will be guys and I ignore it--so don't dare let yourself be chased away. Stay and give us more stories!
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #84 on: August 28, 2005, 10:36:35 pm »
Ooooh Guv, you had better not let anyone else hear of what you did to S'tell, as if news reaches Jaeih she'll come looking for you, and in 2275 she gets her KRC.

Ronjar is a really nasty piece of work.



That might actually make an excellent story... Perhaps your KRC will be in the combined fleet in story 2... As a mention only, per your permission. I don't know near enough for Jaeih to make even a cameo appearance.

Glad you enjoyed. Ron'jar is a Klingon's Klingon, so to speak. Though. like Worf, comes off to most as overly stoic. He saves his real laughter for the company he cares for. And Ron'jar HATES Romulans, and there is some history which will come out later which explains why...
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #85 on: August 29, 2005, 12:45:35 pm »
 :notworthy: :notworthy: Thanks a lot Ron'jar + karma 4 u

Realmente una narración muy bien hecha, es tan gráfica que te la pudes imaginar perfectamente, como si estuvieras viendo una película.


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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #86 on: August 29, 2005, 01:41:39 pm »
:notworthy: :notworthy: Thanks a lot Ron'jar + karma 4 u

Realmente una narración muy bien hecha, es tan gráfica que te la pudes imaginar perfectamente, como si estuvieras viendo una película.



According to babelfish this means:
Very a well done narration, is really so graphical that you the pudes to imagine perfectly, as if you were seeing a film.

Seems he likes it :D

btw j/k KBF-Frankk no aggro intended
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« Reply #87 on: August 29, 2005, 01:59:54 pm »
:notworthy: :notworthy: Thanks a lot Ron'jar + karma 4 u

Realmente una narración muy bien hecha, es tan gráfica que te la pudes imaginar perfectamente, como si estuvieras viendo una película.



According to babelfish this means:
Very a well done narration, is really so graphical that you the pudes to imagine perfectly, as if you were seeing a film.

Seems he likes it :D

btw j/k KBF-Frankk no aggro intended

Thanks Grim + Karma 4  u

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #88 on: August 29, 2005, 04:46:26 pm »
the pudes = are able to
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« Reply #89 on: August 30, 2005, 05:54:09 am »
And +1 for the final translation :D
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #90 on: August 31, 2005, 10:05:04 am »
Man, I can't wait to read what the Roms did to Ronjar for him to hate them so much.

Great installment, keep it up!
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #91 on: August 31, 2005, 10:27:15 pm »
Man, I can't wait to read what the Roms did to Ronjar for him to hate them so much.

Great installment, keep it up!
They drank his LAST bottle of blood wine!!!

Seriously, though, thanks to ALL for the reviews!
Frankk, thanks for the karma and also for the non-American lingo that I'll never be able to understand in my life that made me feel so damn good!

To Grim, thanks for the translation, without which I'd just have to sit here and smile and nod to myself!

Rommie, thank you for gracing the page. If I recall from previous pages, you mentioned something about not likeing great-reaching planetary battle stories or something. (forgive if I remamber incorrectly)
Your 'Gremlins' was wonderful, and I like small ship stories. This here is a 'fleshing-out' of a previous version of a Sharp story which only La'ra read. It's been gnawing at me for 4 years...

To the Scot, an additional ration of brandy alotted to your allowance effective immediately, carry on! And you will learn of Ron'jar's hate, just not likely in THIS story...

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« Reply #92 on: September 02, 2005, 08:20:19 am »
Thanks for the offer of an Extra part in your story, Guv, that's quite flattering!

Jaeih gets her KRC on 10th March 2275, so if your second story takes place after then, feel free to have the RIS Javelin join in. If, however, your story takes place before that, Jaeih can still make an appearance in her KR RIS Kestrel as a lesser member of the combined fleet.
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« Reply #93 on: September 02, 2005, 07:30:19 pm »
Story 2 will be only a day after #1, so I'll likely mention the Kestrel. Kinda had my heart set on that one anyway.

I can't profess to know anything about the Javelin, though. What make and class is she? I quite enjoy SFC3 GenAWar using KR-class ships. Espescially in going after larger ships I have no right trying to take on, such as Refit Galaxy-Class DNs. Yes, I have won these battles, but they are indeed a challenge.

Y'all enjoy and keep whatever comments remain a-comin'!

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« Reply #94 on: September 06, 2005, 08:18:58 am »
Well Guv, the full details of my longest command are here:

http://www.starbase23.net/Ship-Rom-Javelin.html

but for the short version, she's a converted Klingon D7C-class command battlecruiser, hence the designation KRC. In 2280 (my Timeline) she has her Plas-Gs replaced with Plas-Ss, and the new designation KRL (or KRCS, for SFCers).

Most powerful D7 variant for over a decade, before the X-Ships are introduced.

As for SFC3, what a yawn-fest. I managed to play that for all of 30 minutes before being bored stupid, and even then I still tried to get into it. Everyone fights the same because everyone has the same weapons, and the Klinks and Roms can cloak, meaning the Freds got pasted. Then, playing online, everyone does warp jumps to dodge torpedoes and gain position, or make repairs.

YAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWN!!!!!
Never could drum up the interest for the Mods. Did it really make the game that much more interesting?
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #95 on: September 06, 2005, 05:49:38 pm »
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Most powerful D7 variant for over a decade, before the X-Ships are introduced.

The KR-series are nice ships, but I find that the plasma torpedos and cloaking devices are nowhere near as effective as disruptors and high speed.  Just can't move fast enough charging plasma torps...

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As for SFC3, what a yawn-fest. I managed to play that for all of 30 minutes before being bored stupid, and even then I still tried to get into it. Everyone fights the same because everyone has the same weapons, and the Klinks and Roms can cloak, meaning the Freds got pasted. Then, playing online, everyone does warp jumps to dodge torpedoes and gain position, or make repairs.

Basic game did kinda suck, though in my experience the damn cloaking device would get you killed faster than anything else on the game, especially fighting the Feds and their pulse phasers and Quantum torpedos.  Only thing I used it for was the occasional escape...

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Never could drum up the interest for the Mods. Did it really make the game that much more interesting?

I know the mod he's talking about:  Generations at War.  I reacted about the same way you did when he told me about it, but lordy, what a difference it made.  Still didn't feel like SFC 2...too much canon Trekness and not enough SFBness for that...but it was certainly an improvement.  All sorts of ships too, and the TOS-era Fed phasers were blue, which warmed my heart.:)

I still prefer the earlier SFC games...GAW make the third installment much more playable, but it's still a bit arcadey...they feel more like actual combat to me since you have to squirm for every little advantage.  But if you still have SFC 3 and would like it to be more than a coaster, I strongly recommend it.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #96 on: October 11, 2005, 09:02:13 pm »
Sadly, La'ra will never grasp the use of the cloaking device... It saddens me in my happy place... :(

One the bright side, I have finished Goesa'vaina if anyone gives a %#@!&**!

Enjoy!

Chapter Twelve
Ninth Day of Gromarg
Atop the Alabaster Library,
Jessa’man’a City




Commander Ron’jar stood stiffly at full height near to the lip of the roof of his chosen command position. The three wounds received the night before were swollen and testy, covered in antiseptic synthetic skin. Field opticals were glued to his hands and eyes as he visually surveyed the ongoing battles raging still throughout the city. Klingon forces within the capitol were progressing steadily from point to point and had been doing so all night. It was now early morning, the air crisp with slight condensation and moderately hot as the moon Calla descended steadily over the still dark southern horizon. The Empire now controlled seventy percent of the city’s thoroughfares and supply points. The power generators were in his men’s hands. The city had been put to darkness three hours before moon-down. His men, placed under his direct command by Tor, were winning.

The few Starfleet troopers left behind by Sharp had proven a powerful nuisance to his men’s tactics throughout the night’s battle. Their concentrated phaser fire and mortar support continued even now to hamper his Qas Dev as they tired to set up secure waypoints within the streets and buildings. The Starfleet commander was wisely keeping his artillery on the move, firing a few barrages and uprooting before return fire could be organized. Soon, this headache would be removed as well. Or they would run out of ammo. Either would suffice.

The trials and hardships of this battle made Ron’jar’s chest swell with pride and centered his mind on the weighty honor of it all. His tactics were keeping the fighting localized about the centers of organized resistance, sparing the civilians caught in the crossfire. Large groups of civilians were gathered together as they were encountered and beamed to detention camps outside the warzone. This would also lessen the occurrences of further hostile breakouts among the people as control was taken in the coming days. There would simply be no one immediately available to join the rebel forces, which would irrevocably evolve once the fate of the world became clear.

“Commander!” Came a stern voice from behind. Ron’jar turned, lowering his glasses as he regarded the soldier approaching him. Bek Nurrag strode across the open rooftop of the captured library and ducked beneath the barrel of the damaged Starfleet phaser cannon mounted in the center. Reaching his captain, the young officer offered a data pad. “Intercepted Starfleet transmission relayed by General Tor. He confers it to you, stating you know these people better than he.”
Ron’jar’s brow arched at such an admission. Tor proved at times why he was a high-ranking General and commander of an entire sector. It seemed his relationship with Tor would be less strained than La’ra’s… He took the pad and thumbed it on. Having read it fully, he eyed his comm officer.

“Has Endeavour received this intel?”

“No, my lord. Fleet jamming has blanketed the enemy battlecruiser’s comm.”

Ron’jar pondered Sharp’s reaction when he received such orders from his commanders. He would be compelled to inform the Goesan government… The Goesan Queen would be incensed… What would she do? “Reply to the General that my recommendation is to end comm jamming and allow the repeat of this message to come through. I believe its effect of the Goesan command could be advantageous.”

“Yes, my lord!” The youth all but shouted, saluting and turning on a heel as he left with his orders. Ron’jar turned back to the task of over looking the battlefield. Beside him, his command staff worked at delivering his orders to the men scattered about the city. Looking from his field glasses to the broad tactical holo before him, the commander reflected that this battle might end more swiftly than previously considered.




Command Intelligence Center,
Grand Assemblage Hall




Elani’tess once again felt as though she could not believe what her ears were telling her mind. Had Sharp really told her all this? “Captain Sharp…” Her head shook slowly back and forth. Her face was pale and unnaturally flaxen from lack of sleep, the rings beneath her green eyes nearly as prominent as the dark wings of her smeared mascara. “I cannot believe this. Your Federation, your vaunted Starfleet, abandons us!”

“Jessa’tae…” The muscular man seemed deflated. It killed him to relay this. “The Klingons have initiated broad-scale raids all along our side of the Neutral Zone. They’re hitting necessary supply lines that would hamper our ability to rescue your world if we were to divert our ships to your system. They’re hitting our supply lines with dreadnoughts! Six separate convoys were decimated last night by the reports I’ve received. Starfleet has to maintain the lifelines that keep our worlds going. It’ll be some time before we have the situation under control and can recall ships from deep space probing duties to reinforce us. When we have the necessary ships---“

Sharp was never able to complete his claim. The Jessa’tae could bear no more. The failure of promises she herself had accepted from the might Federation and the ill fated advise of the very captain viewed before her had finally split her resolve. Quaking with weariness, she bent low before the screen and buried her face in her clenched hands. Her muffled screech silenced the Starfleet officer and widened his eyes. Behind her, Coarus’ jaw slackened, never having seen his queen thus. Her great measure of enforced calm was gone. What was left was fatigue, rage and fear. She rose back to within sight of the visual receptors transmitting her image to the human ship. Tears caused her mascara to streak down her blanched face. Her eyes were dark and dull, setting the huge Captain aback in his white, cushiony chair. Outrage had turned those emerald colored orbs into animal slits as she glared into Sharp’s face.

“To blazes with your explanations and reasons, Captain! My people are fighting and DYING in the streets based on the hope that your people would be able to come in here and HELP us! It was YOUR advice that compelled me to order my people to take up arms against the Klingons! It was our treaty with YOU that led me to TRUST your FEDERATION! Now MY people are embroiled in a bloody conflict they cannot win, and your ships aren’t coming!” Elani paused to glare with hellfire and unbridled scorn at the human captain.

“My lady…” Sharp was at a loss. Quiet descended over the comm link. “I can’t begin to apologize. Your suffering---“

“Save your empathy, Captain Sharp! My world from now on will rely upon its own to care for itself. See to the interests of your own government.” Elani’tess slammed a palm down of the signal controls, cutting the feed from ground to ship. The queen gathered what dignity she could muster and turned to Prime Coarus and Iram who flanked the consoles opposite the comm station. She pressed long fingers to her cheeks to rub away the make up that had flowed down her face.

“Iram, assemble my maid servants and order them to bring my bathing wares. Have them come here where it’s safe and order them to gather my senatorial robes. Prime Coarus, contact the enemy command and request a temporary cease fire."

Both men stared at the queen as though she’d just spoken Romulan. Coarus alone could muster the presence to mutter: “What is my lady’s intention?”

“I do what I must to preserve our peoples lives, Dashak Prime. I’m going to do what I knew I should’ve in the beginning…”

Both men did as they’d been ordered. Neither liked it.




Chapter Thirteen
Within the Alabaster Library,
Three hours later…




Jessa’tae Elani’tess strode slowly as she could down the densely packed rows of collected scrolls and parchments that made up the ancient histories section of the great library. She garnered up all her self-respect and nobility for the debasement she was about to inflict upon herself. Her pride almost made this meeting impossible. But her love for her nation forced her on.

Her maids had done a stellar job in making her presentable for this meeting. They had stripped away her soiled, sweat stained clothing and the layers of grime and ruined make up and started again from scratch. Now her light-colored flesh shone like ceramic art, her fan-like mascara work casting a beautiful contrast in hues upon her face. Her light blue, silken robes swirled around her and her voluminous curves, dancing about her gracefully as she glided. Her jet hair hung in elaborate braid from the top of her scalp. She bore no jewelry.

Klingon guards stared blankly at her from various corners of the musty smelling room. Each was armed with their brown-looking rifle-pistol weapons. Most bore bladed implements on their person, more than a few held those crescent shaped swords in lieu of their energy weapon. None advanced threateningly toward her, and to her estimable surprise, none glared at her, or leered menacingly. None called out threats or cut-downs. No insults were to be had. There were no gestures. The Klingons stood like well-drilled soldiers straight from the parade grounds. The officer she had been told to expect stood with his back to her at the far end of the long chamber. Before him was a spread out array of some of her worlds most treasured historical texts. He perused over them as though he could read them. Mayhap he was just looking at the pictures.

Elani drew to a silent halt just behind the girthy warrior and waited for his to turn round. She did not have to wait long…another surprise to her.

The Klingon before her was shorter than the average Goesan male, but taller than she was. His armor was dirty, battered and stained in his own blood. He’d been shot at least three times she could see. His long brown hair flowed in uneven tatters and there was grit in his beard. Dirt and blood stained his dark face, and sweat had deposited salt at the collar of his uniform. This was no idle command-post officer. This man had been in the thick of the fighting, leading from the front. Was this really the best man for her to talk to?

Despite all his filth and disarray, the soldier before exuded a calm professionalism and a stoic aura of calm. His eyes centered on hers, not caring at all for her manner of dress. Respect emanated from his bearing.

“Jessa’tae Elani’tess,” he greeted her, bowing slightly, eyes closing in Goesan fashion. His voice was unblemished by Klingon translators, his accent slight to the point of being non-existent. “I am Commander Ron’jar, Son of Burt. I command the forces entrenched within your capitol.”

“Was it you who infiltrated and knocked out the shield generator?”

“It was my men who did so. I commanded the mission.”

“My compliments on containing the destruction of your attacks. Your efforts did not go unnoticed.”
Ron’jar answered only with a silent nod. He stood waiting. Elani found her voice failing her now that she needed it most. Finally she managed up a low murmur. “I have come to parley on behalf of my people. For all of Goesa’vaina.”

“Imperial terms of Cessation of Hostilities are standard and not subject to parley or conditions.”

At least they didn’t call it something like Articles of Surrender, Elani found herself thinking. Why it really mattered she couldn’t fathom. “What do they entail?” Was all she could offer.

“All military forces on your world would immediately lay down their arms and report for temporary internment till complete control and garrison of the planet is established. Said forces are then placed in reserve status to act as police at the discretion of the planetary governor. Some forces may be specially trained and used as ancillary to Klingon Qas Dev marines.

“All civil commerce will be placed under control of the Governor and its resources are organized and dispersed as needed. Imperial laws will be posted and adhered to; penalties for breach of Imperial Subject laws are…severe. For the most part, other than Imperial taxation, life will go on for your people as it always has. Providing your people do not resist Imperial Governorship.”

“And if some resist?”

“Resistance is futile. It is, however, expected. How it is handled is dependent upon the severity, circumstance and the wishes of the Governor.”

“And who would be…Governor? You?”

“Certainly not.”

Elani’tess moved as directed to the data pad which detailed the terms and conditions of her world’s surrender. She wondered over the future and how the occupation of her world would mar its culture and the lives of its people. She wondered if Goesa’vaina would ever again know its own freedom…









In orbit,
IKS Tom’par’a




Admiral Tonara steamed with pent rage as he read the after action report rendered by Commander Ron’jar. The insufferable Klingon whelp! How had he dared! And then to admit this shame!

“Gaaaah!” The Rihansu admiral could not contain his ire. It burst out from his as he stalked Tor’s office. His steely hand slammed down on the General’s blood oak desk. “How dare that Ver’uul!”
Tor watched the other steadily. He had found Ron’jar’s decision to use S’tall in his landing force quite amusing. Tonara seemed to be taking it quite badly, however. Tonara turned on the wizened old Klingon.

“Commander Ron’jar is a murderer!”

Tor gestured palm-up at the pad in the Romulan’s hand.

“The report states she was fatally hit by Goesan weapon fire. Ballistic repeaters the Qas DevwI report. Your own surgeons have confirmed the report. She was killed by them.”

“He could have transported her to my waiting ships when the shield fell! He shot her in the face as she lay there dying!”

“Klingon procedure of euthanisation are well known---“

Tonara jabbed a slim finger at the General, his face green with blood-rushed rage. “She should not have even been there!” Turning away from Tor, whose tolerance was wearing thin, the Admiral spoke to himself. “S’tall was under Commander Jaeih’s direct command, she will be informed!”

“No retribution will be enacted on Commander Ron’jar for any action he took, or for anything you believe he did. Ron’jar’s service was exemplary in this action. The city would still be a warzone right now, if not for his planning. Or a smoking crater.”

“Reducing it to a crater would have been my first choice, General.” Tonara shot back.

“Craters are not productive assets to the Empire, Admiral. There is much to be gained on Goesa’vaina. The Goesan people have much to offer, even if they must be guarded for the next few hundred years.” Tor eased himself out of his carved bone chair. “I have other plans for Commander Ron’jar which you may find nearly as amusing as having him killed. Plans he will not enjoy at all.”
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Commander Ron’jar allowed his face to darken as he absorbed the General’s words. This was not the worst that could happen. He wasn’t being relieved of command, killed or imprisoned. Nothing so bad as all that. Most might consider this a good thing. It wasn’t a punishment…

At least not officially.

But what he was being ordered to do was nearly as good as imprisonment. It would tie him to a world far from Qo’noS and everything else for decades to come. Possibly forever…

“Respectfully, General… I am no governor… I am no politician.”

“No, certainly not, Commander,” Tor agreed. At least they were alone in the General’s office for this meeting. Ron’jar could not have endured the Romulan admiral’s presence during this disgrace. “But your familiarity with the Goesan culture puts you in a good place to be able to govern these people effectively and profitably. The Alliance cannot have a rebellion on the planet affecting our plans for the system. We have invested too much in this operation. Goesa’vaina must be controlled as swiftly as possible. You have demonstrated the capacity to do so. If you can’t get them to mind, you have the command capacity to make them. The decision is final and the orders have been rendered to your ship. The garrison is yours… Governor Ron’jar.”

END
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #97 on: October 12, 2005, 02:57:50 am »
Bloody hell. That's a nice twist in the end! Nice hints before too.

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“Intercepted Starfleet transmission relayed by General Tor. He confers it to you, stating you know these people better than he.”
Ron’jar’s brow arched at such an admission. Tor proved at times why he was a high-ranking General and commander of an entire sector. It seemed his relationship with Tor would be less strained than La’ra’s…


well... no. LOL

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and very effective... :D

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Wow nearly forgot the most important part: GIMME MORE :D

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #98 on: October 12, 2005, 08:26:37 am »
Somehow, everytime I hear the title 'Governor', I picture Ron'jar pitching his weight loss book like our own Guv.

"Get healthy! Now!"  ordered the swarthy Klingon.

The story?  Oh...right...

...you know I like it.  Want more details, ask me in person. ;D
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #99 on: October 12, 2005, 08:24:08 pm »
Thoughts are brewing on story 2. Coming up with new characters, etc.
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