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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #40 on: May 29, 2005, 11:25:18 pm »

So, I find two more parts and at once realise what you were wanting that first torp to do, and releived that it didn't get that far. Phew! That would have been an expanding ball of dust formerly holding the name USS Endeavour if that was the case! and well done on surprise tactic. That is a huge design flaw, if you can work close enough. What about all the one-way atmospheric forcefields within the shuttlebay though? We see at least one in The Motion Picture.



I thank you greatly. The cloud of dust idea was what Ron'jar was shooting for. As for the force fields, realize that shuttles do fly through them. I think those fields are likely only strong enough to retain atmosphere, not stop war-shot torpedoes.

And to the Reaper-man, its all just propaganda! We Klingons are QUITE ;Dbenevolent!
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #41 on: June 13, 2005, 09:10:47 pm »
Y'all want some more?


Chapter Eight
In orbit of Goesa’vaina,
IKS B’rel




The roaring noise of the scout’s engines filled the bridge as his lithe little ship ate up the remaining distance between her and the Goesa’kain. The bark of the cloak alarm nearly quelled the reports of Ron’jar’s First as he called off range to target. At last, the alarm halted and the lighting came to full power. Now came the gunner’s turn to light up the sky. Green bursts of brilliant, rapid-fire nadion energy flashed out at the glowing blue drives of the massive warship. With each firing, the B’rel’s hull reverberated with the noise and vibration of the weapon charging system.

The Goesa’kain’s aft shielding flared and shivered under the on going assault. It took barely six seconds to pound through to bare hull. The aft armor of the mighty ship began to shred into millions of sparkling bits, the expanse of now blackened metal superheating to a brilliant red. Another trio of shots from each battery blew the fantail armor away between the two huge sublight engines. The starboard driver sputtered, then faded to a cooler color. The Goesa’kain slued to the extreme right.
A volley of two photon torpedoes shot straight out as the disruptors quieted. Both struck the remaining impulse drive, imploding it upon itself and sending out a spiraling spray of glass-like induction material. Inertia carried the massive, and now ballistic, vessel forward as she tumbled into a slow spin. It did not take long for Goesa’vaina’s gravity to claim its own…

Ron’jar nodded with a silent, and barely visible smile as he watched the battleship’s glowing hull drop into the atmosphere of the planet below. He almost longed to linger over what he knew would be a truly stupendous antimatter explosion when the Goesan ship slammed into the sun-baked desert sands below. Gladly, there was not enough of a hydrogen concentration in the planet’s air to endanger a one-to-one annihilation ratio. Therefor the biosphere was in no danger of being ripped away. But the detonation of nearly a thousand metric tons of compressed deuterium in any form would be amazing. He would make a special effort later to inspect the crater…

“Reestablish cloak.” The commander barked down at Sub-lieutenant S’tall. The Romulan officer showed no sign of irritation at his tone toward her. He thought vaguely of hurling the occasional insult when he addressed her, but decided it would be counter productive. No need to distract her during battle. The alarm sounded and the lighting fell back to its former subdued level.

“First,” he growled to the XO, “center visual on the Whitehairs!”

Tor’nax jabbed a series of three tabs on his console and the forward viewer flickered to the image of the ongoing battle. The trio of aged cruisers had lured the trailing escorts into high polar orbit and had split into three separate paths. The Goesan escort ships had smartly remained together, trailing the lead ship and hammering her with their combined forward firepower. However, whilst they succeeded in pounding Kodell’s shields down as he feigned flight, they’d left their tails open for the remaining two to sweep back in on their rears. Even now, the left-most Goesan ship was death-rolling out of orbit in a trail of her own flaming guts. All three of the Whitehairs were dogging the final Goesan craft and separating it to its component molecules.

All was proceeding according to plan. Not the original, fleet-ordered plan, perhaps, but the outcome was better than what had been expected. All resistance above Goesa’vaina had been removed, and the Endeavour had not been able to deliver any significant number of reinforcements to the people below. Now to make his report to General Tor. And then, he’d wait.




Grand Assemblage Hall,
Goesa’vaina




“Reports are sketchy, My Lady.” Iram called out from the strategic operation center in the right corner of the control room. Elani held her face in check, maintaining complete control over the horror threatening to bring her to her knees. The first space war her people had ever faced, and it had to have happened during her reign! And such overwhelming forces! Her pallor turned whiter and whiter.

“I believe our escorts are losing their battle!” The Over Secretary finished, looking back at her with controlled fear in his eyes. The Jessa’tae found it impossible to hold the man’s gaze. Iram had been a seasoned veteran of the military before his current posting. And he was looking to her for guidance! Her eyes retreated to Coarus.

“What report from Goesa’kain?” She asked, imploring good news from the Prime. The bald soldier kept his expression impassive as he touched a control on the face of his surveillance panel. “This is the feed from Tactical Satellite 17, polar orbit.”

The image was of the northern curvature of her world. It showed the golden sands of the Paldan desert. It showed serene white clouds around the perimeter of the screen. In the center of the feed, it showed a blazing blossom of roiling flame, spreading slowly over kilometers, hundreds of kilometers, of populated lands...

“The Goesa’kain, my Jessa’tae.” I’rell said in a low, husky tone, confirming the worst. Even the unshakable Dashak Prime’s jaw was slack. Eight hundred Goesans had just perished, plus however many occupied the countryside the ‘kain had slammed into. Elani’tess’s back grew rigid. Her green eyes narrowed to angry slits. The Klingons dared.

“Dashak Prime, Assemble the entire Dashak Guard. We are going to the Trade Square. Our command will be led from there as with our forefathers.” The Jessa’tae was already on the move for the chamber entrance. Behind her, the Over Secretary shot up from his seat.

“My Jessa’tae! You must remain here, in the command room! This chamber is reinforced—“
Elani turned and speared him with her sharpest gaze. “I will not hide within a hardened bunker as my people fight an die about the capitol building. You will remain here to coordinate our communications, but myself and the Guard are going to lead from the field.”

Secretary Iram stood taken aback. This was not what he’d expected from a woman so young. His own granddaughter was older than Elani’tess. Yet this woman was leading her men out to command a desperate battle, from the front line, with no battle experience of her own. The former soldier watched her turn back for the door, unable to formulate any response.

Elani’tess stepped past the closed weapons locker, barely sparing it a single glance. Her hand fell upon the phaser tucked into her travelling robe’s pocket. She paused, and I’rell found himself watching her movements intently as she looked back at the closed metal locker. Her brow furrowed as she considered. Then, taking out the detached palm unit from her pocket, the queen returned and opened the case. From within she withdrew the butt piece to the pistol and reinstalled the palm unit to the larger device and also took a holster to fit the weapon. Holster and pistol she hung upon the gossamer belt of her gown. Again, her face was engraved with the look of concentration. Next, she drew out a gleaming, new phaser rifle.

I’rell smiled as his queen slung the rifle awkwardly about her right shoulder and headed back for the door. The Prime’s pride in his young ruler was beyond description.





The Trade Square,
Jessa’man’a City,
Goesa’vaina




Lieutenant Alfred Jackson shook his head with distaste as the tall, slim Goesan soldier told his men and he of the fate of his base ship. Endeavour had been crippled, all but destroyed by a Klingon warship. Now they were alone down here, on a foreign planet, light years from nearest aid. The giant human took a deep, satisfying breath of the oppressive, hot air.

This was what he lived for! Unbeatable odds. Desperate situations which allowed him to shine in his duties. He was a born hero. And occasionally, a modest one.

Jackson nodded to the accented soldier, who immediately turned on a heel and ran away on his incredibly long, legs. My but these people were tall! Taller than he, and that was a feat. Alfred was an enormous man, a few inches shy of seven feet in height. Bands of thick muscle coursed over his body beneath pale flesh. Golden hair stood in spiked glory an exact centimeter tall upon his squareish head. Crisp blue eyes surveyed his men.

Only about half of Alfred’s security contingent of 112 had made it down from the ship. The fifty- four that were here were well armed, and they had the support of one shuttlecraft which was just now arriving. He smiled a grim smile as he thought of what that shuttle was packing. When the Klingons arrived planetside, he would have a few surprises for them.

Alfred spun on a heel and faced his nearest subordinate. Ensign Jo Ricci stood at immediate attention under the scrutiny of his commander, rifle held at parade-rest. Jackson maintained the grin. The lieutenant liked the shorthaired kid. He was good in a firefight, and had a penchant for nuclear demolition.

“Ricci! Organize the shuttle crew and off load their ordnance. I want a tactical map of the entire area that will be under the city deflector shield in five mikes. Also, see to it that field water dispensers are set up and running. We can’t have our troops dropping from exhaustion before we even go to battle.”

“Aye, sir!”

“Any medics make it down here?”

“Negative, sir!”

“Very well, carry on.”

Jackson watched the boy turn and trot away toward the grounded shuttle. Yes, with men such as he, they might just win the day. Jackson spread himself around among his men for the next few minutes, assisting them in setting up semi-portable deflector generators and field generators. He inspected armor and saw to it that all weaponry was in full operational readiness. The sand and the heat seemed to be having no immediate adverse affects on his gear. This was good.

As his men got into the groove of readying their defenses, Jackson took a moment to study the tactical map Ricci had had brought to him. This city was an ancient one, with sprawling mazes of criss-crossing streets running in every imaginable direction. This would make organizing his men a nightmare, but also meant that attacking this place would be near to impossible. He did not envy the Klingons.

“Security officer!”

Jackson quirked an eyebrow and turned slowly toward the loud feminine voice. A single, slight picture of a woman was leading a procession of Goesan soldiers his direction. She wore a slim, form-fitting gown with a thick traveling garment thrown back over her narrow shoulders. A Starfleet-issue rifle was held in her tiny hands, in a manner showing near complete unfamiliarity with the weapon. Jackson resisted the urge to crack a smirk at the Goesan queen. At least she was actually out here with her men, out on the battlefield. Most rulers and planetary officials would be well hidden and well guarded in a protected bunker with a handy escape route planned for them. But this Jessa’tae was brave enough to come out here and give her all and risk her own life. He couldn’t help but be impressed.

Not to mention aroused…

As she drew to a halt before him, with an enormous, bald soldier close behind, the Jessa’tae squinted at the rank pins painted on his dark skirmish armor. “Lieutenant?”

“Yes, ma’am. Lieutenant Alfred Jackson, chief of security.”

Elani’tess pursed her full lips at the sound of the pride over flowing from that one sentence. “I see, Lieutenant. Are your men very close to being ready?”

“Indeed, ma’am. We’re deploying three units of photon mortar men within the inner defense circle, my officers are dispersing among your own nearby units in groups of four. We’re setting up an inner defense ring of shield generators to protect the command area and our artillery.”

Elani nodded, her emerald eyes wide. The tall man behind her nodded as well, a more solid expression of understanding on his rugged face. This man, obviously a leader, also bore a phaser rifle like to Jackson’s. His manner was reserved and well practiced. He knew how to handle himself.
“Very well, Lieutenant. Is there anything you require to help you integrate what you’ve brought into our defense plan?” The queen asked.

“Yes. I need access to the highest ground possible to mount a Type-4 phaser cannon. The weapon has a fifty-two kilometer range within atmosphere and if we can get the tallest vantage possible, the field of fire we’ll be able to cover would be devastating.”

Elani stood silent for a moment, and Jackson began to wonder if the woman was really up to the task of running this show. Finally, though, she looked up to the soldier beside her. “Prime Coarus, would you agree that the Alabaster Library would field the greatest vantage?”

Coarus nodded, stern eyes boring into the human.

“The library of the High Temple. But the library has the more level roof with fewer obstructions. Yes, the library would do.”

Elani’tess looked back to the Starfleet man. “Coordinate with Dashak Prime Coarus in all emplacement matters, Lieutenant. He stands as my military aid in this trial. He will be the one to get things done.”

With trained respect, the Dashak Prime bowed at the compliment, and Alfred found himself bowing as well. This soldier’s mannerisms were not just drilled. He made such offerings out of genuine respect for his lady, and did so as though he could imagine no other way. Jackson decided that he liked this man.

Elani’tess centered her eyes on the lieutenant suddenly then, her expression questing.

“Lieutenant Jackson, in your experience, what will the Klingons do? What will their exact actions against our defense be?”

Jackson gave her a satisfied smile. She was indeed wise.

“I depends upon whether they intend to take your civilization intact, my lady. If not, then all our preparations will be useless. They’ll bombard the cities and any military asset from orbit and never set foot on these sands until everything is wiped out.” Jackson paused, watching the blood drain from the Jessa’tae’s face. “But if that were the case, our friends in orbit would have already started the operation. They’ve shown by their attack on my ship that they’re impetuous. Likely it’s a new commander eager to make a name for himself in Imperial service.

“Given that, their first objective will be to take the capitol. To do so, they’ll have to take out the city’s shield generator so they can beam in enough troops to overwhelm your military. To accomplish this, they’ll either strike from low orbit to try and batter the shield down and try to hit the generator as precisely as possible, or they’ll send in a strike team to eliminate it.”

“How could they get a strike team in?” The queen asked, “There are no breaches in the system. Do they have a method of beaming men through?”

“Not that we presently know of, ma’am. But there are ways to disrupt shielding on a highly local scale. Precision disruptor fire followed by a transporter beam. It’s very dangerous and a timing nightmare, but possible. It’s been done.”

“Which do you believe more likely?”

Alfred narrowed his eyes as a hot, sandy wind blew through the narrow streets. He looked about the ancient columns stretching out across the square. He glanced over the robust architecture and the carven, stone statues staring out from nearly every corner and nook. The uneven, rock paved streets rolled between walkways and buildings, over hills and through natural valleys of hard baked earth. The soldiers within view were of the hardy sort. They were well drilled. Their appearance showed this without much scrutiny. Any battle here would be a pitched one. A strategic work of art. And the Klingons would not be able to resist a hands-on duel with these people.

The Starfleet officer looked back to the planet’s ruler.

“They’ll send in a ground team ma’am. I don’t know how they plan to do it, but they’re going to try and spare your city unnecessary damage. They’re strike team will be fast, it’ll be efficient. They’ll be elite. We’ll have to be very vigilant to catch it.
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Hope y'all were able to remain awake. Not as much action in this bit, but I'm gearing up. Just finished this tonight, and I barely editted it. Hope it's barable.

Let the mud fly... :D
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #42 on: June 15, 2005, 03:08:55 am »
MUD?! No, no mud. Flowers... maybe. If you post the next one soon. ;)
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #43 on: June 15, 2005, 09:39:07 am »
Ok, I have a few nits to pick. 8 lightyears away and you somehow think it would take three days? More like 3 minutes.  Secondly, when the bodyguard is trying to give the Queen her weapon, the word is insist, not persist. "My lady, I must insist."
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #44 on: June 15, 2005, 03:48:12 pm »
This is for CaptJosh:

Firstly, you could have been friendlier, as that comment comes off as rude to me. A newbie who doesn't introduce himself launching straight into a nitpick and not even saying whether or not he liked the story? That's definitely bad form.

Secondly, at warp eight (which in the TOS timeframe is 512c) travelling 8 light years takes 5.7 days. Even at the TNG defined value of 1,024c (which is the system our Klinks use here) those 8 lightyears would still take 2.85 days. So, Ronjar is well within his rights of approximation in his statement.

Thirdly, you don't seem to have an idea of the protocols of class. A soldier, no matter how highly placed in the government, would never say "I insist" to their leader. Who is he to force his will on his ultimate superior? He has to try and persuade her by asking again, so, indeed, he must persist.
Grammically speaking and bereft of context, you are correct. In this case, you are wrong, and Ronjar is again right.

So, CaptJosh, are you enjoying Ronjar's story? I certainly am, even though he is writing more in the FASA universe than the SFB one. I find it to be a well-paced tale, sufficiently exciting and all that.

What do you think?
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #45 on: June 15, 2005, 07:31:11 pm »
Oops. Didn't mean to come off snappish. Unfortunately, since spelling and grammar are rather pet peeves of mine, I tend to snap off even a friendly criticism without thought to tone. As for the other attempt at constructive criticism, it had the misfortune to get lumped in with that snapped off thing about the grammar. I apologize.


As for your assumption, I'm hardly a newbie. I just haven't posted here before. I happen to do some writing of my own, though the one story I have been writing on and off for years is rather at an impasse. I put too much of myself in the main character, who is supposed to be married, and since I'm not married yet, I just can't get myself to write the wife character. Helluva way to have writer's block, huh? Guess that'll teach me to write too much of myself into a character again. ::grimaces wryly::

In regard to my own treknological whoopsie, I guess I've gotten too used to the TNG era scale after years of not watching original Trek. This is doubly sad as TOS is my favorite. :(

I never said it wasn't enjoyable. Unfortunately, I never said it was either. DOH!
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« Reply #46 on: June 16, 2005, 06:13:48 pm »
Good to see you're an okay bloke, Josh. I have a couple of nitpicks for your reply, though. *grin*

My assumption is valid, as I did mean what you pointed out. You're a newbie to this forum, and in the case of putting out writing for public consumption, that's all that matters here. :-)

Your TNG Treknological assumption is wrong too, Josh. Like I said, at TNG Warp 8 it takes just under 3 days like Ronjar said.

And since speeling and g'mar are your pet peeves, you should look to your own post here:

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I'm teasing you, Josh. Just so as you know. :-) You should put out your own story here, we could help you with your story, if you like. Whatever you decide, stick around and read the other stories. Another author is always welcome here!
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #47 on: June 16, 2005, 06:48:48 pm »
Damnit! Now I KNOW I looked over that post for typos. How the HELL did I miss those. Gah! I think I need to trade my eyes and fingers in on newer models. It's getting to the point where I may have to start using the spell checker. ::shudder::

BTW, I've corrected the typos.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #48 on: June 16, 2005, 07:23:30 pm »
Definitely post your stuff.  The more around here who write, the merrier.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #49 on: June 17, 2005, 10:30:15 pm »
Ok, I have a few nits to pick. 8 lightyears away and you somehow think it would take three days? More like 3 minutes.  Secondly, when the bodyguard is trying to give the Queen her weapon, the word is insist, not persist. "My lady, I must insist."


Hmmm...

I could really care less about about travel times. If you wish to know, I did the figures using the old scale, but didn't actually sit down with a pen and paper and get the exact numbers. If you'd like, just figure in for navigational hazzards. I think I was close enough. I was looking over the Trek map of the galaxy that came out just after Enterprise debuted.

As far as grammar... Writers attempt to use correct grammar. People do not. People commonly use double negatives, slang and just generally make a mess of the English language. And J was quite correct. You certainly don't insist your boss at work do a damn thing, why would you dare with a queen?

I like bad reviews as much as good ones. Not many seem to poke holes in my stuff. What you wrote didn't rankle me too much. The above was just my comments about the points mentioned.

Glad you like my story. I've tried to keep it moving at a good pace, which has required alot of editing.

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #50 on: June 17, 2005, 11:14:09 pm »
Hey everyone! Great work Ron'jar, this story has the makings to be one of your best yet. Like commander La'ra I too am getting a thrill from this story. I know you have caught some flack on some of the tech issues, all I got to say to that is that you can use all the technobabble you want and not have a good story. Good writing and a vivid imaganation are what really count and you have both my friend. Keep up the good work. ;D

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #51 on: June 20, 2005, 11:42:47 pm »
I realized I missed a few things when I was thinking the speed vs distance, anyway. For some reason my brain was thinking about Warp 9 and above. Particularly in reference to the Enterprise E making it to Earth from the Romulan Neutral Zone in time to help fight the Borg Cube. But Picard ordered maximum warp. Figure something on the order of warp 9.98 on a Sovereign class starship, and that is a hell of a lot faster than warp 8 ever was. My apologies for my miscalculations.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #52 on: June 23, 2005, 10:09:19 pm »
I realized I missed a few things when I was thinking the speed vs distance, anyway. For some reason my brain was thinking about Warp 9 and above. Particularly in reference to the Enterprise E making it to Earth from the Romulan Neutral Zone in time to help fight the Borg Cube. But Picard ordered maximum warp. Figure something on the order of warp 9.98 on a Sovereign class starship, and that is a hell of a lot faster than warp 8 ever was. My apologies for my miscalculations.

Travel time is really unimportant to a storyteller...unless the storyteller hangs his story upon it. Nothing wrong with that, but travel time is a bit subjective to me.

According to the Soveriegn-Class cut-away poster I gave La'ra a few years ago, Ent-E maxed at 9.7... But it WAS just a poster. They had the weapons count about right, tho... Wish I still had my Bird of Prey poster... :(

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #53 on: June 24, 2005, 02:25:53 pm »
I would think that 9.7 would be a max cruising speed, as opposed to "punch it!" The Ent-D could cruise at 9.2, and had a rating for a few hours at 9.6 before burnouts and equipment failures would start to show up, with a capability for bursts of higher warp power for short times while risking equipment failures. The Ent-E, being much leaner and meaner would be able to do more because it has the next generation of warp engines, plus less mass, even though it's longer than its predecessor.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #54 on: June 24, 2005, 08:18:04 pm »
All this technobabble aside (thanks Jaeih...  ::) ), when are we getting the next installment of your story?
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #55 on: June 27, 2005, 09:53:38 am »
I need my fix  ;D

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #56 on: July 06, 2005, 09:09:07 pm »
Capt. Josh, I agree on the speed issue. I figure the E was much faster.

Life has been hectic! My wife and I and assorted friends tore down my old busted-ass house in 2 weeks and made ready for my new mobile home (the castles that dominate redneck life) to be brought in.  No one stops talking around here long enough for me to write, so till my new home is placed and has power, I am unable to write. Ask La'ra, he understands my plight.

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Offline Commander La'ra

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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #57 on: July 08, 2005, 06:45:41 pm »
Indeed I can.  I also have to say that one of the best gifts I've ever been given by a friend was when the Guv allowed me to pull down large sections of his house in a process that involved a Chevy Blazer and a long length of logging chain. ;D
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #58 on: July 19, 2005, 06:01:22 pm »
I'm now in my new home! This means I may soon have time to write!

Right now I'm doing a Trek comic, and it has taken up alot of my attention. I'm nearly half way done on it.

Anywho, I'm still around, soon I'll have more time and all will be well once again.
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Re: Goesa'vaina
« Reply #59 on: July 19, 2005, 09:15:26 pm »
Trek comic? URL, please.
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