I think the words were a bit more confusing, so I hope pictures would help:
(Edit: Just saving some space, so I'm removing pictures. Besides, Mani perfected it! At least for SFC3, to which I don't have...)You almost had it right. The phaser arrays circled in red shouldn't be there. You were close though, and a nice move, kitbashing the Galaxy-class Dreadnought (Galaxy-X) model with this in order to get the arrays right... Well, almost.
(Edit: Just saving some space, so I'm removing pictures.)Not as much an error, but to point out that the U.S.S. Venture in DS9 had this distinctive feature, and was a variant. It's a nice feature, but not truely needed. Maybe take those off or kitbash with the original engines on previous versions?
One last problem, the size:
(Edit: Just saving some space, so I'm removing pictures.)As you can see, version three (the one before the recent version that you worked on) was pretty small, and seemed just a little bigger than WZ's Constitution-class refit. That's real small. And the
most-recent version (version 4) is
smaller than the previous version (version 3). If you plan on resizing it correctly (preferably when comparing to WZ's work, like his beautiful Constitution-class), here's something to help:
(Edit: Just saving some space, so I'm removing pictures.)This is a comparision of the Galaxy-class to the Constitution-class (refit), a collage of
Ex Astris Scientia's Fleet Chart Picture. I had to kitbash the picture to make the comparison
much easier.
I just felt like helping out with the perfectioning of this Galaxy-class model we have in our hands, that's all. If it takes patience or if it doesn't work out though, that's alright. But it would be
very much appreciated if it is nearly-perfected. As I said, if such is in-progress, I'd like to help out in my own way.