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Chapter Six
« Reply #60 on: May 19, 2005, 06:28:59 am »
This isn't actually two updates.  I like what the short chapters have been doing to the tempo of the story, so I've been trying to stick to the format.  However, but the time I finished Chapter Six, I realized that it was way longer than any of the other bits, so I split it in two.

Hope you enjoy it.  Feedback, as always, is appreciated (and greatly anticipated).


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Chapter Six



"Ra'dok!" Leral shouted.

"I'm still...." The pilot's response dissolved into static.  Under Leral's feet, she could feel a slight rumble, the same constant tremor nearly any ship of any race experienced when travelling faster than light.  "....ating, can't stay here much longer."

"Disengage, now!"  She shouted.  The shuttle wasn't meant for warp.  Too fast, both it and Ra'dok would be gone.

"Hiv'laposh says they're foll...." More static.  "...not sure how fast it can go.  Want you to slow it down."

There was a violent surge of electronic noise, more than the sop'nagh's hull could cause.

"Disengage!"

The com channel died.  Leral blinked.  She lowered her visor, checked the systems.  The signal had been cut abruptly.  She hoped that meant Ra'dok had obeyed her.

"We've moving at least warp six."  Huk announced.  "Judging by the power output and the mass..."

"I need control."  Leral snapped. Huk stood for a half a moment, then nodded.

"I'm not sure I can translate the dialect.  If I can get deeper access, it'd be easier to figure out the programming language."

"Do what you have to."

"Languages."  K'tal growled.  "We do not need access to their systems.  The thing's brain is below our feet, and we have explosives."

Leral snapped her gaze toward the Marine.

"That would be incredibly dangerous." Meran cut in.  "We have no idea which section controls the warp drive."

K'tal rolled his eyes.  "So find out.  Use your little scanners and find the right part."

"If you can isolate the right section, I can be pretty discrete." Rinbar claimed.  He looked confident.

"You see?"  K'tal snapped.  "Scan so we can kill this thing and be on our way."

Meran opened his mouth to reply.

"I am in command."  Leral spoke evenly, and as quietly as she could manage.  She thought perhaps she was trying to imitate Ran'jar's iciness, or the quiet anger the Commander only displayed when he was truly incensed.  It was possible, she supposed, that the tone was her own.

"Pardon me, My Lord."  K'tal spat.  Leral's eyes narrowed.

"Mind your tounge, K'tal."

The Marine stood a little straighter, chest swelling, his next words already forming on his lips.

"Figure out the system."  Leral ordered.  She saw, out of the corner of her eye, that K'tal's fists clenched.  Huk glanced from her Lieutenant to the Marine, then turned to the console, preparing her next efforts.

"Scan the organics, Meran.  If we can't get access, we may have to use the explosives."

"Yes, Lieutenant.”

“Rinbar.”  She commanded.  “A word.”

She guided Rinbar away from her party.  K’tal moved to follow.  She stopped him with a look.  The Ensign was seething now.   She didn’t care.  Let him stew.

“Have you ever used explosives on organic material before?”  She asked the demolitionist.

The young Marine hesitated. 

“Not really.”

“So you have no real idea what kind of effect an explosion would have on the sop’nagh’s neural material.”

“Not yet.  I can figure it out, Lieutenant…Meran can tell me the consistency, the elasticity, things like that.  I can figure out what a few charges would do.”

“I meant more…”  She paused, searching for the right words.  “…the secondary effects. This thing has a brain, there’s more to consider than physical damage.”

Rinbar looked confused for a moment.

“You mean…like how a projectile can kill someone if it doesn’t get through their armor, sometimes.  Shock or pain or things like that.”

“Yes.”

“Then I don’t have any idea.  But if the sop’nagh…I don’t think setting off a charge in it’s brain would be…”   He stopped speaking and shrugged.

Leral nodded.  “Thank you.  Talk to Meran, figure out which section controls the warp drive.  Figure out what you can.  We may have to use your explosives if there’s no other option.  Plan carefully.”

“Yes, Lieutenant.”

She smiled at him.  She almost squeezed his shoulder, as La’ra might do.  She didn’t though.  Rinbar was young enough that a woman’s touch might knock his thoughts askew.  He stepped away, began speaking to Meran.  He appeared less confident than she’d usually seen him, and she realized that she had caused the change.  It couldn’t be helped; he had needed to know exactly what might be asked of him.  Nevertheless, she didn’t like the shift.

Rinbar continued to talk to Meran.  K’tal continued to seethe.  Huk continued to work on the console. 

There was little for her to do but wait.
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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Chapter Seven
« Reply #61 on: May 19, 2005, 06:38:30 am »
Chapter Seven



Barely ten minutes had passed, but Leral now understood why the Commander paced all the time. 

She looked back at her hours on the Hiv’laposh’s bridge, many of which had been spent watching La’ra march back and forth across the control center like a giant automaton.  In reflection, his most lengthy, most ardent spells of pacing where when he’d given every order he could, set specialists on whatever task was needed, and then was forced to stand and wait for the results of his decisions.  Pacing was a logical vent for such frustration, she decided.  She wasn’t indulging in it herself.  Instead, she habitually scanned the sop’nagh, or checked her comm circuits, or any little thing that would distract her.

K’tal, nearby, still seethed.  She realized that he was probably going through the same thing.  Worse, he’d had no orders to give.  His skills had not been needed.

She thought about speaking to him, but she’d noted the harsh glares he kept sending her and decided that such an effort wouldn’t be fruitful.

“We have a partial map of it’s brain functions, Lieutenant.”  Meran announced.

“Let me see.”  She ordered.  Meran offered his tricorder.  She took it.

"There's large areas..."

"...with no neural activity, yes, Lieutenant."  Meran frowned.  "I couldn't find what was wrong with them until I did a very intensive microbe scan.  The tissue in those areas is heavily infected."

"Infected?"

"Yes.  It picked up a simple disease somehow and it's spread enough that it's inhibiting functions."

Leral nodded.  They were fortunate the warp systems hadn't been affected or they might've met a spectacular demise.  Of course if things had degraded to that level, the sop'nagh would've probably destroyed itself long ago.

"The highest levels of activity are there..." Meran pointed at the tricorder's display.  "...and there.  Both have direct links to the warp system. If we have to use the explosive, that would be the best area.”

“There’s a problem with that, Lieutenant.”  Rinbar broke in.  She looked at him.

“What we assume is the main power feed runs through close to those areas.”

“Can you destroy the areas without affecting it?”

“I think so.  I’ll need to retool some of my shaped charges.  I…”   The demolition man paused.  “…as you said, I’ve never had to blow up organic material before.  I’ll be guessing about the yield needed and how much force might be transferred.”

“But you think you can do it?”

“Yes.”  He smiled, suddenly.  “I may have a little leeway.  The main power feed seems like it’s heavily reinforced.”

“Go ahead and prepare your explosives.  We may as well be prepared.”

“Yes, Lieutenant.” He stepped away, manhandling his pack off his back and opening it.  He didn’t seem to think about how close his teammates were when he began resetting three of his charges.  Logically, there was no chance of an accidental detonation – the detonators weren’t even in -- but Leral found herself resisting the urge to step away.

Meran glanced nervously at Rinbar, but said nothing.

“There’s…something else, Lieutenant.”  He said after a moment.  She prompted him to continue.

“It seems like the microbe responsible for the sop’nagh’s…illness is present throughout it’s entire brain structure.  The areas most affect just seem to be the origin points.”

“So eventually the whole thing will be nonfunctional?”

“Yes.  It’s occurred to me that we might be looking at the reason for most sop’nagh’s behavior.”

“Inhbiited brain functions?”  She queried.  “Wouldn’t it be unusual for the same disease to be present in all of them?”

“Not if whoever built it suffered continually from it, like the Terrans from their cold, or our brach.  And I think that’s the case.”

Leral realized suddenly that Meran had been holding back information, waiting to present the true selling point of his theory until the most dramatically appropriate moment.  It was a common habit among science officers, at least until impatient commanders tossed them into an agonizer booth.  She’d learned not to do it, but there’d been a couple of times on the Hiv’laposh when she’d indulged herself, feeding the Commander or the First tidbits until the real meal came along.  She had never done it in a crisis, but valued the times she allowed herself the indulgence.

She let Meran continue.

“I’ve found traces of some kind of chemical in the cell structure.  It’s a medicine of some kind…it directly counteracts the spread of the microbe.”

“So someone has been treating it?”

“Yes, Lieutenant, but the chemical seems a bit…stale…it’s old, I think.  The sop’nagh has not been treated in some time.  Judging by the readings, it may have been centuries.”

Leral pondered that.

“Whoever built them no longer maintains them.”  She theorized.  “Perhaps their builders are extinct.”

“It’s storing cargo, Lieutenant.  It has to be taking it somewhere.  If Huk gets into the computer, perhaps we can find out where.”

“If she doesn’t, we can extrapolate its course.”  She advised.

Meran smiled.  “Yes, I suppose that would work too.”

“I’ll check on her progress, though.”  Leral offered.  She stepped toward the console.

"Language is pretty complex, Lieutenant."  Huk declared.  "But I know what this thing is."

The younger scientist indicated the headset that had emerged.

"Neural interface, I think.  You put it on your head and you can manage the software mentally."

"How did you figure that out without the language?"

"Because of this." Huk said, and pressed a key.  A section of the control panel suddenly changed, displaying a crude humanoid figure affixing the headset to it's temples.  Short bits of unknown letters accompanying the diagram, with some instructional arrows to make things clearer.

"That text is in...something like basic computer code.  I think this is what Terrans call a 'user friendly' interface."

"Yes..." Leral frowned.  What sort of people had the sop'nagh's makers sent to maintain the thing.

"I was waiting for your permission to try it, Lieutenant."

Leral regarded her younger teammate.  "We have no idea if this could have any harmful effects."

Huk nodded.  "It seems to be the primary interface, Lieutenant.  I suspect if we want into the system, we'll have to use it."

Leral frowned more deeply.  Blowing up the sop'nagh's brain would be chancy, in her opinion.  A sudden loss of control could be catostrophic in more ways than she could imagine without an hour or so of spare time...especially given the proximity of the main power relay.  Rinbar seemed confident, and he knew his job...but explosions were unpredictable.  Leral did not like variables she could not account for.

"Are there any special instructions?"  She asked Huk.

"No, Lieutenant."

"All right.  Please stand back."  To her side she saw K'tal look up.  Whether the stunned expression on his face was amazement or contempt she couldn't discern.

"Lieutenant..."  Huk began.

"No."  Leral responded.  "My mission, my responsibility."

The younger woman blinked and looked disapproving, but she stepped back.  Leral took the headset and placed the padded ends on her temples.

There was a buzzing, a slight pain in her head.  Nothing else happened.  She waited.

Still nothing.  A thought occured.

"Meran."  She called out.  "Scan this device and tell me which section of the thing's brain it's connected to."

Meran complied.

"One of the decayed areas, Lieutenant."

She nodded.  The thing could not hear her.  She removed the headset.

"I think that leaves the explosives."  She muttered.  He stomach knotted.  She wasn't afraid of death, but there were so many ways...being crushed to jelly after an inertial compensator failing was not the way she wished to reach Sto'vo'kor.

"Actually, Lieutenant, I could cure it."  Meran announced.

Huk gazed at her fellow scientist incredulously.  K'tal glowered.  Rinbar's eyes widened.

"Explain." Leral ordered.

"Like I said, the disease is simple...it's very similar to Terran athlete's foot.  I could probably administer an invasive counter-agent.  I have something suitable in the medical kit."

The Lieutenant considered.  It'd probably take a lot of medicine to cleanse the sop'nagh's brain of it's malady, but then...

"Invasive counter-agent?"

"Yes.  We have several.  The microbe in the tissue is a fungus, and there's no beneficial organisms of that type present.  A fungal counter-agent would devour the disease, then destroy itself.  No guarantee the system would become functional, however."

Leral grinned.  Medicine was not her speciality, but she remembered something about such materials.  Klingon doctors had long been obsessed with the idea of sending their own hunters after their microscopic enemies rather than trying to drown them in chemicals as toxic to the patient as to the germ.  They'd found success a few decades back.

It could work, she decided.  There was a chance it could cause a failure as catastrophic as the one she feared from an explosion, but it seemed less absolute to her.  If the sop'nagh's brain functions survived the dose, but couldn't restore itself, they could still blast it to bits.

"Let's try it."  She ordered.

“Are you insane?” K’tal spat.

Leral turned towards the Marine.  He stood, his glower now a fully, unrestrained scowl, his hands at his sides in what Leral assumed was a defensive posture.

“No.”  She replied.  Her eyes were slits.

“You seek to heal this monstrosity?  Despite the danger we know it presents and when a simple block of plastic explosive would free us?”

“An explosion is irrevocable.  This has a better chance of  leaving us with another option.”

“No.”  He snarled.  “Your judgment is in question.  Only a fool would…”

“I am not a fool.”  She declared.  Huk and Meran had edged away from her, though they stood in positions of support.  Rinbar merely looked confused.  “And the order is final.”

“No.  It is not.”  His fingers slid toward his d’ktagh.  “I am the next in the chain of command.  It is my duty to…replace you if you become irrational.  Which you have.”

“I challenge you for leadership.”
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #62 on: May 19, 2005, 07:16:01 am »
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"That text is in...something like basic computer code.  I think this is what Terrans call a 'user friendly' interface."

LOL somebody like me did their job well then :D

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“I challenge you for leadership.”

While it is in itself not a bad concept, replacing leadership during a stress situation is more likely to do harm then not. Not a good descision imho.

The techibabble did not leap out so imho is credible. Sounds pretty logical also. Just don't over do. Like in the following part:

"Like I said, the disease is simple...it's very similar to Terran athlete's foot.  I could probably administer an invasive counter-agent.  I have something suitable in the medical kit."

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The Lieutenant considered.  It'd probably take a lot of medicine to cleanse the sop'nagh's brain of it's malady, but then...

"Invasive counter-agent?"

"Yes.  We have several.  The microbe in the tissue is a fungus, and there's no beneficial organisms of that type present.  A fungal counter-agent would devour the disease, then destroy itself.  No guarantee the system would become functional, however."

Leral grinned.  Medicine was not her speciality, but she remembered something about such materials.  Klingon doctors had long been obsessed with the idea of sending their own hunters after their microscopic enemies rather than trying to drown them in chemicals as toxic to the patient as to the germ.  They'd found success a few decades back.

It could work, she decided.  There was a chance it could cause a failure as catastrophic as the one she feared from an explosion, but it seemed less absolute to her.  If the sop'nagh's brain functions survived the dose, but couldn't restore itself, they could still blast it to bits.

Limited quantity of medicine limits the result... So no miracle cure and the thing is healty again. But I don't expect you'll overdo it.

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TOS is pretty much my blankspot, never seen much of it (though i'd like to). Best seasons of DS9 where the last imho so I recommend them. And the only good thing in VOY was the possibilty of a B/7 relationship. ENT lost me when they started on time travel. Though T'pol is a hottie... ;)
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #63 on: May 19, 2005, 08:25:10 am »
K'tal is stupid in the way only a 17-20 year old boy can be, so no, challenging Leral at that precise moment was probably not the best decision he's ever made. ;D

I was initially going to have the meds Meran is carrying eventually be able to cure the whole damn Astro Miner, based on the idea that the attacking microbes would breed rapidly and prey on any disease present until there was nothing left for them to eat.  Hence, even a small dose could eventually work wonders.  However, I got to thinking, and decided that anything growing that rapidly would place enormous stress on the thing you injected it into, and thus, decided to limit the effect.  Perhaps the invasive agent has been genetically altered so that it can only reproduce so many times, then once the food source (the disease) is gone, the 'friendly' killer microbes rapidly starve.  Meran's going to mention something about that in the next part, I think.

TOS is pretty awesome if you can get past the '60's fashion and effects.  In my opinion, it's better than any of it's predesessors...and if you haven't seen 'Day of the Dove', I strongly recommend it.  You could see the start of the 'honorable Klingon' there, but they still had that 'I'm the devious bad guy' edge.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #64 on: May 19, 2005, 09:53:04 am »
Poor Leral.  Now she has to decide whether to just kill the fool or if he might one day grow into something valuable enough to just beat the snot out of.  Man, using a bomb on it provokes interesting questions.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #65 on: May 19, 2005, 02:58:27 pm »
I DO love Leral.

And Larry darling, you never fail to gratify me with male stupidity, *sighs in pure bliss*

SMOOCH

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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #66 on: May 19, 2005, 07:46:49 pm »
Hey Larry, entertaining post, I'm certainly enjoying it.

Reaper is onto something there, though. I can see an increase in your technobabble content. There isn't much, but there is more. I think reading Jaeih's stories is rubbing off on you! *grin*

I like that Leral is discovering some of the motivations for La'ra'a actions, and that the little snot is a typical teenager. Thinks he knows everything but really knows very little. Blunt solutions are everything, and all that.

I also liked your description of Klingon anti-virus/disease medication. It strikes me as very Klingon.

Great stuff, keep it up!
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #67 on: May 19, 2005, 11:11:14 pm »
I must be a geeky science type, but I didn't feel there was an excess of technobabble.  If I had any complaint it was the overuse of comparison to Earth / Terran illnesses and so forth.  Once is okay.  More than that I'ld leave as Klingon:

"It's comparable to nokmoth: you just squirt an antifungal on your foot and it's taken care of.  I have something suitable in my med-kit."
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #68 on: May 20, 2005, 02:55:30 am »
I must be a geeky science type, but I didn't feel there was an excess of technobabble.

Grim was responding to a question I asked in a PM.  This one does have more than my typical story, largely because it's centering on the science officer, and I was wondering if it at least sounded plausible.

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If I had any complaint it was the overuse of comparison to Earth / Terran illnesses and so forth.  Once is okay.  More than that I'ld leave as Klingon:

"It's comparable to nokmoth: you just squirt an antifungal on your foot and it's taken care of.  I have something suitable in my med-kit."

You're right.  I wrote that part in a two-hour session and didn't catch the second comparison when I 'editted'.  I'll implement your suggestiong when I get a chance to sit down and play with it.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #69 on: May 24, 2005, 08:16:17 pm »
Tirok luv Leral!

Tirok bring Leral head of demon killed in her honor! ;)

Enjoying! Cant wait for my copy of the intact story so I can print it out and give it the real read it deserves.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #70 on: June 27, 2005, 09:52:29 am »
Hey La'ra is BUMP Time  ;D

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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #71 on: June 28, 2005, 02:15:00 am »
Workin' on it.:)
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« Reply #72 on: June 28, 2005, 12:53:37 pm »
Snickers@DND: If there is one straight answer in that bent little head of yours, you'd better start spillin' it pretty damn quick, or I'm gonna take a large, blunt object, roughly the size of Kallae AND his hat and shove it lengthwise up a crevice of your being so seldomly cleaned that even the denizens of the nine hells would not touch it with a 10-feet rusty pole

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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #73 on: June 28, 2005, 07:24:37 pm »
2nded & ditto
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #74 on: June 28, 2005, 09:48:21 pm »
What they said

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Chapter Eight
« Reply #75 on: August 01, 2005, 10:28:32 am »
Better late than never...


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Chapter Eight



Leral faced her challenger.  Her fingers flexed.

She didn’t know why K’tal was doing this.  She did wonder.  Was it because she was a woman?  Was he simply that bored and undisciplined enough to lash out at someone he disliked?  Did he think she was, in fact, irrational?

Was she irrational?  She reviewed her decision carefully.  She could see possible disadvantages, possible disasters, but she couldn’t see any flaws in her logic or how any other course of action was less dangerous.. That left K’tal, standing three meters in front of her, about to draw his d’ktagh.

She had options.  The Commander had several standing orders.  One indicated that any duels required his permission.  She could enforce that rule, but the idea left a bad taste in her mouth.  She would not hide behind someone else’s decisions.  It was also frowned upon to challenge a leader in a time of crisis.  That would be hiding behind custom, which was also unpalatable.

She could fight him, but she decided with thoughts so clear it surprised her that that was a bad idea.  K’tal was a Marine.  He trained to kill the enemy every day of his life.  She was a warrior, and had proven herself  in combat, but it wasn’t her primary area of expertise.  He was male.  He was probably stronger than her;  the disparity between male and female wasn’t as pronounced among Klingons as it was in some other species, but it existed.  Her speed advantage—she was fast enough to be sure she had one—would be mitigated by her environment suit.  Klingon officers were trained to be aggressive, but unlike some others, she did remember it was best to fight on her own terms or not at all.

Not fighting held disadvantages too.  Letting his challenge stand unanswered would not engender respect.  Respect was required to command Klingons. And either way, K’tal might challenge her later, but she would be expecting it, and could meet him in conditions more favorable to her.

She decided.

“Are you certain you wish to do this?”  She asked K’tal coolly, her eyes as narrow as she could make them.  She wished her gaze could be as icy as Ran’jar’s for she knew her own would not suffice.

K’tal snorted.  “I do not make idle challenges, woman.”

Leral drew her disruptor and shot him in the chest.

K'tal's environment suit took much of the blast's energy, but there was still enough of a charge to send him to the deck. His arms and legs thrashed wildly and foam bubbled from between his lips. Disruptors were formidable stunning weapons, but their effects were not pleasant.

She walked toward him, weapon still trained.  His convulsions made disarming him more difficult that she really wished, but after a moment or two his sidearm and d'ktagh were stuffed into her belt.  His rifle has been securely slung.  She took it.  It was set higher than stun.

"Huk."  Leral ordered.  The other woman took the rifle.  The expression on her face was...wary.

"If he does anything else mutinous, shoot him."

"Yes, Lieutenant."  Huk responded. Leral looked to Meran.

"How difficult will it be to get to the brain?"

"Not very...the deckplates are made for easy access."  He replied quietly.

"Let's pull one up then."



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The deckplate required a password for removal.  A disruptor provided a suitable substitute.

"Sorry."  Leral smiled at Rinbar.  He'd been standing by hopefully, holding a microcharge of explosive.

"Someday, Lieutenant."  He sighed.  Unlike Huk and Meran, he seemed quite jovial now.  Leral hoped her actions hadn't soured her rapport with her subordinates.

There was a loud clang as Meran wrestled the deckplate aside.  Below the flooring was a grey, obviously organic mass.  Bits of it were an ugly shade of purple and a thin coating of plastic protected it.

"Is that a symptom?"  Leral asked.

"Yes."  Meran confirmed.  "That's what color your toes turn if..."

"...if you get chu'thach."  She finished the sentence, smiling.

Meran chuckled.  It didn't sound forced. Leral hoped that was a good sign.

"This is a really light dosage for this much material."  Meran declared, leaving down and slicing the plastic open with his d'ktagh.  "If it works, it will not work fast."

Leral nodded.  Meran took his hypospray out, pressed the nozzle to the brain, and administered the medicine.

"They'll start to reproduce immediately."  He said.

Leral nodded again.  The microbes would feed on the infection, spread throughout the entire brain eventually, though that could take months.  Injecting the treatment into the affected area would mean the parts she needed would be cleansed first, but Meran had no idea how long that would take.

They waited.  She sat on the deck.  Meran followed suit.  Rinbar stayed on his feet, leaning against the wall and inventorying his explosives again.

Leral glanced down the corridor.  Huk was still covering K'tal, who still wasn't moving.

Minutes passed.  Perhaps half an hour.  Meran pulled out his tricorder.

"It's working."  He informed.

"How soon will..."

"The infection is cleared from the area the console was communicating with.  Whether it'll work now..."  He shrugged.

"We'll have to try it."  She stood.

"Is it working?"  Huk asked, cradling the rifle.

"The microbes are. Rinbar, watch K'tal."

"Yes, Lieutenant."  The demo man took the rifle from Huk.  Leral stepped toward the console.  She took the receptors and placed them on her forehead.

There was no pain, this time, though the buzz was still there.  Nothing else happened for a few moments, then displays began to spring up in front of her.  She laughed as the characters, at first in an undecipherable script, morphed into Klingon.

"I'm in."  She declared.

"You are?"  A voice asked.  Huk, but her voice sounded far away.

"I see displays.  You can't, can you?"

"No, Lieutenant."

Leral tried to nod.  It took far too much effort.  She realized it was difficult, but not impossible to move anything.  She wondered why speaking had felt normal.

She told herself it didn't matter.  She studied her displays.  Propulsion was the one she wanted.  She began to reach for it, out of sheer habit.  Her limbs were like jelly.  She chuckled again.  How was she supposed to use this thing?

She stared at the listing for propulsion.  Nothing happened.  She spoke the word 'propulsion'.  Stil nothing.  She growled.  She only wished to open the menu...

...the display shifted, outlining the status of engines and power systems or their sop'nagh equivilant.

Of course, She told herself. 

"We're moving at warp six."  She informed Huk.  "Record these coordinates.  If we extrapolate, perhaps we can find where these things come from."

"Yes, Lieutenant."  said the odd, faraway voice.

"The Hiv'laposh is following."  She also reported.  "All we'll have to do is stop."

To that end, she concentrated on the 'commands' menu.  It was a simple matter to tell the sop'nagh to stop.

There was an odd sound in her head.  Speech, she thought, though not in a language she recognized. She listened for a moment.  The sound did not return.

She concentrated again, telling the sop'nagh to slow to impulse.

The voice was louder this time.  Infinitely louder. 

Leral grabbed her temples and screamed.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #76 on: August 01, 2005, 12:54:57 pm »
Larry! Well it's been a while m8. Great to have you back!

On to the story:
I like Leral's decision. It was the best course of action available at that time. However, one small nit: I have a crappy memory but I think someone once said in canon that Klingon disrupters don't have a stun setting. Even more so I can distinctly remember a very very rotflmao story that was called something like "set disruptors to stun" or something like it. It was hilarious.

Could be propaganda of course.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #77 on: August 01, 2005, 12:59:11 pm »
Quote
However, one small nit: I have a crappy memory but I think someone once said in canon that Klingon disrupters don't have a stun setting. Even more so I can distinctly remember a very very rotflmao story that was called something like "set disruptors to stun" or something like it. It was hilarious.

I don't think that's ever been stated in canon, but I could be wrong.  I'm pretty sure it's a SFB thing.  If not...well, my Klingons do have stun settings.  How better to capture foes so that you can place them in the mind sifter? ;D

That story belong to Captain Krenn, btw, and yeah, it was damned funny.:)

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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #78 on: August 01, 2005, 11:24:59 pm »
I don't know about cannon, but if you like Diane Carey's work, disruptors have three stun settings, though one is only nominally a stun setting, as a person stunned with it will die slowly and painfully without swift treatment. This is mentioned in Battlestations. The other two, a light and a heavy stun are true stun settings, and like phaser stuns, at close range, heavy stun may possibly be lethal.
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Re: The Miners of the Stars
« Reply #79 on: August 02, 2005, 08:24:57 am »
Excellent continuation, La'ra! I really liked how Leral dealt with that little snot-nosed brat-with-a-gun, and the story itself is developing nicely.

Keep it up, and next time don't have us wait so long between chapters!
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