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Offline markyd

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Paris Class Finished
« on: October 09, 2004, 05:12:50 pm »


I think it needs windows along the rim of the hull but this is it as it appears on the schematic....

What do you guys reckon... thow some windows on.... or leave em off?
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2004, 05:32:52 pm »
Leave 'em off, for one it's a dedicated warship and two it's too small. Looks good but somehow the proportions look  abit off, maybe it's the perspective but everything looks a bit 'bulbous' and the saucer seems not wide enough across; espcecially on the front view. It's probably just the perspecitve. One thing I do notice that I know is off - the running lights should be red on the left and green on the right, that's a federation standard IIR. Other than those small gripes it's a very nice model. The textures are also good, remind me of Andurils' stuff (that's a complement).
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2004, 05:38:10 pm »
Yeah good points which I will rectify in the morning thanks....

I will squash the whole model down a little it does look a bit..... FAT rofl  :D
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #3 on: October 09, 2004, 05:44:37 pm »
Hmmm  I'm not going to pretend to know a lot about this particular design ..  but it does have clean lines. excellent texturing and it's well put togeather !!
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #4 on: October 09, 2004, 05:46:54 pm »
Thanks Buzz.... but I dont know what you mean by clean lines... ???
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #5 on: October 09, 2004, 06:23:23 pm »
Quote from: markyd on October 09, 2004, 05:46:54 pm
Thanks Buzz.... but I dont know what you mean by clean lines... ???
he means the the design flows well  ::)
 so got any Ideas on something to collaborate on???
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2004, 08:55:00 pm »
Quote from: Azel on October 09, 2004, 06:23:23 pm
Quote from: markyd on October 09, 2004, 05:46:54 pm
Thanks Buzz.... but I dont know what you mean by clean lines... ???
he means the the design flows well  ::)


YUP !!  That would be another way to put it !!
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #7 on: October 10, 2004, 12:36:57 am »
I like it!! ;D

Only thing I really noticed, is the primary is too thin from the top view; the rest looks good, so just "squash" that. ;D

Great texturing!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #8 on: October 10, 2004, 03:23:17 am »


Ok so I have done most of the points and this is how it looks now...

Thanks for you comments guys and your pointers... they are appreciated. ;D
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #9 on: October 10, 2004, 03:25:13 am »
Az.... I was thinking a Mirror Universe Rom / Klink Hybrid would be cool..... what do you reckon...
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #10 on: October 10, 2004, 06:31:49 am »
A superior looking job. Worthy of a place among the vessels of that era.

The only thing that looks odd is the bridge dome. Probably accurate to the art work but why is the darned thing so yellow? If it is translucent wouldn't it have a different appearance? Easily fixed by those of us who tweak our textures, though.
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #11 on: October 10, 2004, 07:08:25 am »
 ;D Its going to be a damn shame to see this blown up!

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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #12 on: October 10, 2004, 07:20:46 am »
Its gone... ive bloody lost it.... My computer just crashed... I was playin with it for two hours to try and sort it out but I had no alternative other than wiping the hard drive and starting over... ive lost the model but I still have the textures!! Sucks  >:(
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #13 on: October 10, 2004, 08:52:20 am »
Quote from: markyd on October 10, 2004, 07:20:46 am
Its gone... ive bloody lost it.... My computer just crashed... I was playin with it for two hours to try and sort it out but I had no alternative other than wiping the hard drive and starting over... ive lost the model but I still have the textures!! Sucks >:(

Gah!   And I was looking forward to getting that ship! 
Hope it's easier to make the second time around.
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #14 on: October 10, 2004, 09:36:54 am »
Yeah.... It will be but its on the backburner now... onto some new projects.. if anybody wants the textures I'll send them to you... they are of no use to me.. ;)
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #15 on: October 10, 2004, 03:52:38 pm »
Ok will do....  ;)
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Re: Paris Class Finished
« Reply #16 on: October 15, 2004, 04:39:16 am »
looks great
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