Wow - that's so much closer to my idea of Pre-TOS than Enterprise ever came... More like our technology than theirs. The Enterprise sucked - I liked the ship. But it looked much more advanced, and it contradicted itself, it looked like a 2360ish engineer had gone back to 2250ish and given a shipyard blueprints for a ship. It sucked.
Does the design come from Ex-Astris-Scientia? because I remember them having some similar designs.
Great work, keep it up!